Under the Mistletoe Manan SS: Part 5 P.24 (Mar.14th)

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Anu

@RomComFan

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#161

This is great.. loved all of them working together to bring MANAN together... and of course Cabir and the way he mentioned Manik's feelings for her... terrific job! Can't wait for your next piece.😊

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Rashi Bhargava

@newmoon18

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#162

It was awsme yr

Perfect ending
I so loved it
U penned it perfectly

Love u
Keep smiling

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Nitz

@nits_viratholic

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#163

Awww...*major awww*

it was so efffin cute..

who would have thought that Manik's character can be something like this as well.. 😆

i could literally imagine their classroom *look look hawwa hawa* 😆😳

the way they were holding hands while watching movie..FAB 5 already knowing Manik is love with Nandu head over heels.. Cabbbiiirrr 😆

everything was just so perfect 👏

Love it!! ⭐️ (5 starts) 😆

P.S. - Just imagine how it would have turned out if you had wrote this on NR. 😛🤣

Edited by nits_viratholic - 10 years ago

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kresham

@kresham

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#164

So this was too dreamy n unpredictable

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Humairaa

@Humzy

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#165

wow awsm ending

loved it

very nicely written

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Zoya_09

@Zoya_09

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#166

Awww finally they kissed , what a perfect endin...simply amazin !
Wish it was longer , u write so beautifully...lookin 4ward to read more...all the best !!! 😊

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#167

woww Hinal this was such a cutee endingg

and dhruv was d mastermind behind this😲😳

lovedd ittt😊

Keep writing moreee🤗

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HeavenAngel

@HeavenAngel

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#168

Wow...so seriously amazing...but what is meant by mistletoe??..hehe😆

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@navk

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#169

Wow

This was so beautiful

Loved it

Kiss under the mistletoe

Aww tht was sooo damn good

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TheWhiteHole

@TheWhiteHole

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#170

beautiful.. Just beautiful

the way u ended it.. Under the mistletoe.. Just beautiful

please write more on manan.. Would love to read from u.. N thanks for the pm.
:) :)

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