Under the Mistletoe Manan SS: Part 5 P.24 (Mar.14th)

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piyu008

@piyu008

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Posted: 10 years ago

#151

loved it..loved it...i so knew they are going to kiss...

so its last part...

do write more dear..hoping to see more from you soon😃

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@Ribelle

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Posted: 10 years ago

#152

Hinal!!
This was a fantastic end to the story!!!!
Nothing disappointing at all!
I loved everything about it! Wish it were longer :))

YOU HAVE TO COME BACK WITH A STORY SOON! YOU HAVE TO !

With love.

Edited by Ribelle_IshRa - 10 years ago

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Tanvi

@manan58

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Posted: 10 years ago

#153

😉Aww.. This ws so fantastic.. I jst loved it yar

This is the bst ending.. Jst loved ur ss..

Pls come up wth ur beautiful writin once more soon.. PlzPlz😃😆

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aairahahmad

@aairahahmad

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Posted: 10 years ago

#154

dissapointed...

heck girl...its amazing...

do write another one...i will love to read it hinal..

your writing is beautiful...😊

with lots of love🤗

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appy111

@appy111

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Posted: 10 years ago

#155

Loved ur SS..sad that u had to finish it so soon... Would live some more... But then it was short and sweet... And loved hw good u r with ur words and ur thinking u knw wat u r goin to write and u r very punctual... Every Saturday ur post is always thr... Keep up ur good work and pls come up with a new concept and story...thank u so much

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ushmaaa

@ushmaaa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#156

Lovely and cute update...superb ending..

Feeling sad...as it ended.. Wanted more..

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Sana

@MaNanmatic_Sana

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Posted: 10 years ago

#157

Thanks for the perfect

Happy Ending aka New Beginning...

I am right now on my way to work... Thought to stay away from forum...

But could not stop to peep and I found you PM... Thanks

So your one was always worth reading... beautiful again...

😆

But I cannot stop crazy myself from some fun predictions😃

Answer please...

Does this Manik has some Monster Side😉?

Thankfully you did not spoil your story with that...

Bur in future... I predict she will find if it is there...

I would love a season 2 of the story...

And I'll keep HOPING for that like our star...😳

Keep writing girl...

SANA

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AAVANI

@vani86

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#158

Hinal...

awsome SS...especially part 5 was mind blowing...u penned so beautifully...really yaar its an amazing work...pls do write more stories like this .would love to read more from u.
thanks a lot for the pm dear...take care...

pls come back soon with another beautiful story...

with love
aavani