Under the Mistletoe Manan SS: Part 5 P.24 (Mar.14th) - Page 15

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Posted: 10 years ago
Hinal 🤗
I loved this part too!!!
They are just so adorable! And This is progressing very well!
I hope you read my mind and give me what I want 😉 😆
Written amazingly well again!

Give us another update soon!!

And I hope you do find something to write about even after part 5 😃
Edited by Ribelle_IshRa - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely update 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
As usual, great update! Loved Manan's cute pillow fight and tickling and then Cabir's awkward interruption. Mananbir are such a great trio, love them together. Looking forward to the next part!!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: aminahin

Ok it is worth waiting loved it so much for some unknown reason i love dis pillow fight sooo much so thnx for bring it in de part amazing part cont soon


Awwh, thank you so much :D
I'm glad you enjoyed the part!
Next one is up and ready to go. Will post it as soon as I am done replying to all comments 😳

Originally posted by: manan58

Aww this ws soo awesome n cute

I jst love ur ss man.. Cont soon plz


Thank youu :D
Really happy that there's such a positive response to it!
Next part will be up shortly 😃

Originally posted by: LoveAngelsimmy

such a cute update yaar...
jst brought a smile while reading it...
pls pm me if possible wenevr u update..


Awwh, thank you so much!!
That really means a lot 😳

Originally posted by: navk

Aww

this is so Beautiful update
Loved it


Thank you so much 😃


Thank you!
Glad you liked it! 😳

Originally posted by: piyu008

aww pillow fight...loved it..

update soon😊


Thaanks!! :D
Next part will be up very soon!!
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Originally posted by: kresham

aww pillow fight n tickling...
great update...👏


Hey!
Thank you so much :D
Glad you liked that bit!
I had a huge smile imagining that


Thaank you!! 😳

Originally posted by: sosweetsumi

wow just simple wow

please continue soon
bye sumi


Awwh, thank you so much!!
Next part will be up very soon 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: aavani

amazing update sweety...loved it...😊
pillow fight...awww so cute...😉.
pls continue soon dear...😊
take care
thanks a lot for the pm...🤗


Awwh, that's so sweet
Thank you soo much 😃😃
Glad you liked it!!
And my pleasure for the pm 😳

Originally posted by: newmoon18

Lovely update

It was so cute yr

Manan pillow fighting
Awww so cute

Cabir alwz wrong time


Continue it

Love u
Keep smiling


Hey!
Thank you sooo much :D
Made me so happy to read that 😳

Hope you enjoy the next part just as much 😃

Originally posted by: Humzy

fab update

loved it
cont soon


Thank youuu 😃
Next part will be up very soon!

Originally posted by: whitelily

awesome update ⭐️


Thank you so muchhh :D

Originally posted by: aishu3003

Fabbb part👏

aww some cutee manan moments😳
loovveeedd ittt😳
continue soonish😊


Thank you soo muchh :D
😳
Really glad you liked the part!
Hopefully you love the end too! 😃
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Originally posted by: ..Amekha..

beautifully written . pls continue soon and thanks for the pm😃


Thank you soo much :D
Glad you liked it!!
And my pleasure for the PM 😳

Originally posted by: chair1992

Really good i love it Here, my lovely manan are so cute
PLEase pm me for the Updates

I am Loving this


Thank youu! 😃
Makes me happy to know that 😳
This SS will only have 1 more part, but I will PM you :)

Originally posted by: Monstuholic4evr

nice story so far

continue soon :)


Thank you soo much :D
Will be updating very soon!

Originally posted by: tanshita171

Pillow fight ws the best part! Lovely update.

Do continue whenever u can.. ur updates r worth the wait!


Hey!
Thank you soo much 😳😳
Glad you enjoyed it!
Will be posting the next part very soon!!

Originally posted by: Arshirox97

Beautiful update! Loved it!


Thaaank you 😃😃
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Originally posted by: Ribelle_IshRa

Hinal 🤗
I loved this part too!!!
They are just so adorable! And This is progressing very well!
I hope you read my mind and give me what I want 😉 😆
Written amazingly well again!

Give us another update soon!!

And I hope you do find something to write about even after part 5 😃


Heyy!
Thank you sooo much! Seriously!! 🤗
It's so encouraging to read such comments 😳
I hope you get what you want in the coming part 😉

Thank you once again!

Sadly, I will have to end the SS here.
But I will be back with a new concept hopefully soon 😳
I just don't want to stretch this concept too much so it's better that I end it here :)

Hope you like the next part just as much 😃😳


Thank youuu 😳

Originally posted by: nawshi

As usual, great update! Loved Manan's cute pillow fight and tickling and then Cabir's awkward interruption. Mananbir are such a great trio, love them together. Looking forward to the next part!!!!


Hey!
Thank you sooo much :D
I love them too, so had to include Cabir moments in here as well
Glad you enjoyed that scene 😃

Originally posted by: manan58

When will u update??


I'm done replying to all comments so I'll be posting it as soon as I finish the formatting :)
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Posted: 10 years ago

~~ Under the Mistletoe ~~

Part Five

The room was completely lit with Christmas lights, and had snowflakes hanging from the ceiling to further add to the winter wonderland ambience. I took a few steps in, only to smell the sweet scent of hot cocoa filling the room, with a bowl of marshmallows beside the kettle which was the source of the delight.

This had to be the best way to spend Christmas Eve. I turned around to smile at Manik, only to find him waving his hand through his hair.

I shot him a questioning look, to which he just looked away.

Well that's odd. What is he up to now?

But I stopped thinking about that as I saw Abhi in the room as well.

"Hey Abhi!! How are you?"

And lost in our conversation, I hadn't realized how everyone else had left the room, leaving Abhi and I there. I looked around, as Abhi voiced out my thoughts. "I wonder where these guys went!"

Aiyyappa, where did Manik disappear to? It's almost Christmas too! Shouldn't he be here?

"Nandini, I'm going to check the common room. Maybe they went there?" and he left in search of them. But as soon as Abhi went out the door, I heard a few swift footsteps behind me and the sound of a door shutting close.

I turned around in a rush, only to find myself bumping into his chest yet once again.

"What are you doing Manik?" I looked him, trying to understand what was going on.

And it was then that I heard the others counting down outside in the lobby.

"Ten... Nine..."

"Okay what's going on Manik?"

But instead of giving a response, all he did was take my hands in his and kissed them. I stood rooted there, unaware of how to react.

"Six... Five..."

"Manik," I managed to speak. I knew he heard me, but he still didn't respond. He just pulled me closer to him, now wrapping his arms at my waist.

I stood there, anticipating something I didn't even know. I could hear Cabir continuing the countdown, whereas Alya and Mukti just squealed in excitement.

"ONE!!!!" They all screamed in unison. "LOOK UP!"

I looked up immediately, trying to figure out what was going on. I looked at it, and back to Manik; a blush immediately creeping up to my face upon realization. He had a coy smile on his face as well.

So this was what they were planning.

"Kiss her Manik!!!!!" Cabir screamed outside, but he also winced - Mukti had probably punched him.

Manik looked into my eyes, probably to figure out if I was comfortable. But not wanting to waste any more time, I wrapped my arms around his neck and tiptoed to his height as I leaned in to kiss him.

"Are you guys kissing or nottt?! Don't make me come in there!" Cabir commented. We kept kissing, but I felt his one hand pry away and knock the door loudly. They all cheered outside, as he wrapped his arm against my waist again. I smiled against his lips. This really was the best Christmas ever.

I pulled away, "Merry Christmas Manik," I whispered to him. "Merry Christmas Nandini," he replied, kissing me once again.

He opened the door to let the others in as I bit my lips to stop the huge smile that wouldn't leave my face.

"You opened the door this early? I thought..." But Manik punched him in the gut before he could continue. "Cabir, stop teasing them!" Abhi said as he laughed at how embarrassed I looked.

"So whose idea was this?" Manik asked them as he pointed to the mistletoe.

And shockingly enough, it turned out that Dhruv was the mastermind behind this.

"I knew Nandini was going to be alone, so I thought why not finally get these guys together? I mean I was tired of hearing Manik talk endlessly about how one day he will propose Nandini," he spoke.

I was surprised to hear that, and turned to look at Manik. He wasn't looking in my direction, probably hiding his face. But oh my god. Aiyyappa. Is he actually... Blushing???

I looked down and hid my face with my hair, as I smiled to myself. Abhi pushed me towards Manik, and as always, he was there to hold me. I hugged him hard, as the others cheered behind us.

"Manik, Nandini... Just because we put the mistletoe to get you guys to kiss doesn't mean you keep going there for the rest of the night okay?" I pulled a fake angry face to Cabir as I punched him too. "Kya yaar, aaj sab mujhe hi kyun mar rahe hai?" he wittingly commented.

"Thank you so much guys," I said to them all. "You all have made this Christmas so memorable for me and... Manik," I added. I went to hug Manik once again. The others also joined in for a group hug as we celebrated a new beginning for many relationships.




- End of Part 5


So this is it guys. This is the final part of the SS.

I hope you are not disappointed by the ending.

Do let me know how you found the story :)

Any feedback/comment/criticism is always welcome!

I will try to come back with another story, but till then.

Adios Amigos 😳


Take care!!

Lots of love,

Hinal 🤗

Edited by basket_101 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
What a lovely SS! amazing it was...
thanku Hinal! pls write more stories..

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