Inseparable lovers~manan/ff !! ch2 pt2 updt pg 5 - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow girl what u hv in ur mind. Prithvi is def int and looks like a very strong character.
Plz update jaldi se cnt wait to read more. Very interesting update soon. keep writing.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12
nice start continue soon its a different concelt love to c how it unfolds .. possible PM me😉👏👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
Woow it's interesting
pls continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
Thanks guys 4 your support . lt is my 1st try so l thought a new concept should b introduced l'll try to update d next chapter as soon as possible right now l have to study for exams and get good marks
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Honey thanks for the pm.and awesome start i can see it turning into a great story.so nynoika and nandini's bro knew eachother.sounds interesting.update soon and study hard.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: apardh_ba

wow girl what u hv in ur mind. Prithvi is def int and looks like a very strong character.
Plz update jaldi se cnt wait to read more. Very interesting update soon. keep writing.

thanks l knew that everybody will like it as it is diff. ya prithvi is an imp character nd soon a new character will b introduced
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
hello frnds ...thanks 4 ur amazing feedback so here l'll give u d part 1 of d chapter 2 hope u will like it
chapter2 (part 1)
Recap: prithvi surprised to see cabir
C: hey prithvi!!!" ...there's nyonika's cabin so l guess l'll take your leave now
Prithvi : fine cabir thanks by d way ( OK so u r running away just take ur time l'll wait . how long ... I need to talk to nyonika about this)
V will meet soon
Cabir's p.o.v = something is wrong with this guy his action and reaction are diff need to figure out y he is behaving so strange l have a doubt ls he actually nandini's brother or hospital mai change ho gaya that.
Cabir smiled on his own joke
But prithvi smirked on d same moment and thought Nai cabir hospital mai change nai hua abi ye baat batane ka ya kisike jaanne ka time nai aya.
P: patience u will soon come to know about d secret .
Cabir unaware that his thoughts had been read by this stranger or so called Nandini's brother
C: wt????
P: no...nothing
Behind music wing
Nandini saw manik
N: manik
M: yeah now again u r here to give me lectures about my deeds
N; manik just listen to me once. ...plz
M: y!!! I should listen to u ???? Tum kabi merit baat sunti ho ...
N: manik !!!! Point ye nai hai lts about fab 5 and ur career ...u can't stake their dreams 4 me !!! His manik ko main janti hu vote kabi aisa nai karega
M: Nandini vo khurana aisa Nazi kar sakta v could have apologize kuch bi khe dete as it is not ur fault
N:lts my fault that l was not able to complete my task BT tumne dekha na he was just accusing me coz of soha
Just think about fab5 and their future u was d one who left me in d 1st place coz of ur frnd and now u r putting dem in problem coz of me plz try n understand plzz manik
M: how ?/ l mean aisi lines lati kha se hu tum ...fine lf u want this than fine l'll go
Manik moves away BT Nandini hold his hand and they have a eye- lock
N:sorry manik
And she gives a kiss on his for head and they hugg each other tightly
On d other hand prithvi enters in d cabin
P: gud morning Mrs malhotra...
Nyonika unaware of d fact that who is standing in front of her shouts " how dare u to enter in my cabin without my permission"
P: chill nyonika!!!!!! Don't shout
Nyonika is shocked .
N: u here... After so many years (all d color fade away from her face)
P: hey calm down ... U look scared by d way
Nyonika is speechless.
Array u r looking like as white as ghost!!!!!
N: y ...yo...you ...r. ...her...
P: here ... Don't stammer as u r meeting a ghost


so guys dis was part 1 hope u will give me nice feedback . plz all d silent readers plz at least u can like my work there is so many views nd less replies plz tell me ur opinion den only l'll continue d next part . l'll b waiting 4 ur views thanks again 4 reading it.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awsome...continue soon...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Are u turning this story into supernatural. Amazing update. keep writing. update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: apardh_ba

Are u turning this story into supernatural. Amazing update. keep writing. update soon


Yeah it is going to b a supernatural series BT u will like it definitely 😆

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