Inseparable lovers~manan/ff !! ch2 pt2 updt pg 5

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Posted: 10 years ago
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<font size="6">heya guys</font>
I m new in dis forum and u guys accepted me d very 1st day so its mine time 2 return u d favour
So enjoy a new ff on our beautifull Manan today I'll give u d intro
Inseparable lovers

The characters r d same BT I'll introduce some more characters ~
1. Prithvi Murthy(elder brother of nandu)
2. Mr. Shivnath Acharya(professor)

tomorrow i'll update d 1 chapter
Thanxs

guys dis is a supernatural romantic thriller
Hope u guys will love it Note: the story is going 2 b d same till d present track . My story will start from khurana scolding Nandinismall glimpse
D new morning is going 2 change d life of various people in d S.P.A.C.E academy. As usual nandini arrived first in d practice room and to her shock or a funny thing 2 say fab 5 are late .After waiting 4 half an hour Cabir manik and followed by them d other 3 also arrived.Nandini full on in her angry mode shouted on dem.
Nandini: u guys r late
Cabir: array nandini!! Y r u angry just take a chill pill yaar.
Nandini:dats not funny ! U guys need to b practicing here and u r just roaming here n dere v need 2 complete n album within d deadline
Manik : don't worry we will complete it . Now can v start d practice .
Nandini: yeah!!!
Cabir: wah!wah! Kya Baat hai Maine Katha 2 badhazm aur usne to Jo hukum !!! Dosti dikha di logo ne 😭
Now enters Mr. Khurana and says he d practice is going on?? Manik replied very well. To his dismay Mr. Khurana(gabbar)said well den l would like 2 hear u guys.
Den he leave by ordering dem 2perfom in 2 hrs .Fab5 and nandini were shocked hw 2 come out did situation WS their current problem. Den manik and nandini left d room.
In d corridor dey spot Mr. Khurana and try to stop him.
Mr k: wt happened?
M: vo Mr. K songs r r not ready,...
Mr k : wt nonsense u had wasted a full week instead of completing d songs?
N: no Mr. K l can explain plz just listen 2 me once plz
Mr. K: just shut up !! U had taken d charge of handling these ppl so it was completely your responsibility 2 monitor their work
M: don't talk 2 her like dis . lt was completely our fault
Mr. K: wt did u say ? Firstly she has not full filled her and ur advocating her now just bare d consequences. U know wt u r fired .
M: wt?
This was enough to awake d lion sleeping in d den .
M: u know wet just keep dis album wid u bcoz l m not doing it ?
N: manik no just listen 2 me once plz plz and Mr. Khurana l m really very sorry 4 his behavior
Khurana infuriatedly left d place
M:y did u ask my apology ?
N: calm down plz lt is very much imp. 4 fab 5 and u can't ruin dis 4 me .
M: BT?
In anger he left d place and soha smirks and says"dis is just a beginning"
Nandini felt she should follow manik BT suddenly in d way 2 catch up wid manik she tripped and was saved by a handsome hunk.
N: thanks as soon as she saw his face she was amazed to see d figure
N: bhai(prithvi)
guys it is enough 4 today . it is just a glimpse of d story i m sure u will definitely like d story plzz give ur reviews thanks again 4 reading it
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Posted: 10 years ago
#2
R u a Bengali???
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Guys I had updated d ff I know l was not able 2 give u guys more details BT as soon same d story will unfold u will understand it
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice plss continue soon... And keep updating regularly..m waiting fr ur update..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks l'll try 2 update d 1st chapter as soon as possible
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awsome...please continue soon...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Update soon.. This is vry short.. Pls give a long one .. Eagerly waitin fr the nxt one 😉 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: manan58

Update soon.. This is vry short.. Pls give a long one .. Eagerly waitin fr the nxt one 😉 😛


Sorry about DAT lt was just a glimpse 2 show d entry of prithvi he has a very imp. role 2 play 😊 😊 😊
Next time l'll update d full chapter 😆 😆 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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chapter 1
recap khurana scolding nandini and entry of prithvi
N:bhai what are you doing here
P:hey angel why are you in so hurry what's wrong
N:nothing! why you are here it's a surprise?
Nandini was really surprised to see him in front of her eyes. She wanna know y he is here after so many years after that accident he left for America then y now again so many questions and not even a single answer.
P; y u r not happy to see me after so many years
N: no bhai its just that l was not expecting u here after that acci...
Forget it !!! So what bring u here
P: nothing very imp. I just came here to visit u so if u r free shall v go home
Nandini agreed as she started to go with prithvi cabir called her . then she remembered about manik and thought to meet
Him
C: Nandini tumne manik ko dekha kya l was searching for him
N: no
Cabir saw prithvi standing along with Nandini . he asked Nandini who is he
N: oh sorry l forgot to introduce u guys cabir this is prithvi my brother and bhai he is cabir my friend
C: hi!! Nice to meet u
Prithvi was shocked to see cabir as his face reminded him someone
P: um...l .. aaa.. Hi!! (How could it b possible he just look alike kavish)
Angel l think v should leave now
N: a.. Bhai u go l'll b coming shortly
P: (rudely) why????
N; um!..actually l have a class l need to attend it
Prithvi composing himself said fine angel l'll wait. I have some work till then u will be free yeah
But angel can u ask ur friend that if he would like to show me this campus
N: but y??
P: actually l want to meet with Mrs. Nyonika Malhotra
N: but...
P: angel! Don't behave like an investigator
N: fine cabir will u
C: ya sure
P: thanks (now l can talk with him)
Nandini exit
P:so kavish a... I mean cabir u can treat me like your friend l m no serious sadu type guy
C: ya l see but suddenly l mean y u r saying all this and y u wanna meet nyonika ls it related to some business or...
P:ya nyonika 4 business and cool behaviour is to flatter u so that v can openly talk about
C: interesting... U seem to b more friendlier compare with Nandini
P: u can say so!!!
Cabir was not understanding the reason behind his extra friendly nature and guess something fishy
C: so friend tell me something about u n your profession
P:(nice... he is smart as kavish ,,
only he could assume this so fast that l m pretending so l was right) oh ya l m a businessman nd is here to sought somrthing
C:sought something (he is weird)

Precap: nyonika shocked to see prithvi and soha's evil plan

Guys plz give your feedback and reviews about d story so that l could understand wt u r expecting...


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks plz tell me your views so that l could write more effectively

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