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prati_25

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Posted: 10 years ago

#41

It's beautiful..😳

Loved it !!

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nicky13

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Posted: 10 years ago

#42

very sweet and really very beautiful :)

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warda

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Posted: 10 years ago

#43

Hey!

So, honestly I really don't know where to start from.

Your OS was literally on point.

It was the most perfect thing I have read in the longest time.

It is very beautifully laid out. I loved every piece of information provided on his OS like seriously.

I mean from him laying on her lap, them randomly talking about their first meeting and offcourse the kiss.

The way fireflies came in the picture it was all just love. I mean what could be better than that.

I loved how you explained each and every scene because It was extremely easy for me to imagine each and every scene you listed. I mean it was just plain love.

I love reading and writing and this was by far one of the most amazing piece I have read on IF.

So thank - you for that. I will definitly check all your other OS and FF's out because I think I am in love with your writing style and you offcourse.

I think I am going to go back and read this again and then come back and comment again. That's how much I loved it. Call me crazy but if you are good you are good!

SO, don't be surprised if you see like five comments from the same person because that will jsut mean that I read your OS 5 times and was not able to stop myself from commenting.

I loved it.

I am so exciting to read all the other work done bt you.

YAAAYS!

Lots of love,

Warda😳

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prishika

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Posted: 10 years ago

#44

I really think that something like this should be a scene in the show.

I'm guessing there might be a conversation about fireflies, maybe when they confess or after. Because they always start talking about fireflies (he notices that they make her happy; he knows she has a reason behind loving them; he wanted to give them to her on new years; he made pretend fireflies from the sparkles). These events all hint at fireflies playing a role somewhere around or after their confession (A girl can hope!! lol)

Loved the OS!!!! <3

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Chocomaniac

@Chocomaniac

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Posted: 10 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: Forever19
Superb dear..loved it!😊

thank u dear 😳

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Chocomaniac

@Chocomaniac

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Posted: 10 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: RomComFan
This is so wonderful... thank you so much for the PM!

They definitely need to have these conversations soon (attacks, first meeting, fireflies & NYE gift) and i hope the CVs don't take too long.

Love this, well done.

Their understanding of each other is one of the best thing about them... but so glad to see Manik is over the Miss-Kiss syndrome finally!😉

Thank u dear 😳 And ya 😆 in my OS Manik never misses a kiss 🤣 i make sure he doesn't ..So that syndrome is cured 😉

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Chocomaniac

@Chocomaniac

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Posted: 10 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: sana.1990
wao this was amazing i really want this scene in the show where she tells hiim about those fireflies 😳😳 thanks for the pm ... 😛😉

thank u dear..Ya i wish to see it too

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Chocomaniac

@Chocomaniac

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Posted: 10 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: sweety2585
It's beautiful..😳
Loved it !!

Thank u 😳😊

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Chocomaniac

@Chocomaniac

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Posted: 10 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: nicky13
very sweet and really very beautiful :)

Thank u dear 😃 A special thanks for always reading my OS and commenting on them 😳 that too without any pm

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Chocomaniac

@Chocomaniac

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Posted: 10 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: wardahere
Hey!

So, honestly I really don't know where to start from.

Your OS was literally on point.

It was the most perfect thing I have read in the longest time.

It is very beautifully laid out. I loved every piece of information provided on his OS like seriously.

I mean from him laying on her lap, them randomly talking about their first meeting and offcourse the kiss.

The way fireflies came in the picture it was all just love. I mean what could be better than that.

I loved how you explained each and every scene because It was extremely easy for me to imagine each and every scene you listed. I mean it was just plain love.

I love reading and writing and this was by far one of the most amazing piece I have read on IF.

So thank - you for that. I will definitly check all your other OS and FF's out because I think I am in love with your writing style and you offcourse.

I think I am going to go back and read this again and then come back and comment again. That's how much I loved it. Call me crazy but if you are good you are good!

SO, don't be surprised if you see like five comments from the same person because that will jsut mean that I read your OS 5 times and was not able to stop myself from commenting.

I loved it.

I am so exciting to read all the other work done bt you.

YAAAYS!

Lots of love,

Warda😳

I think this is one of the longest comment ive ever got 🤗 thank u sweety ! And ya i have this biggg goofy smile on my face 😃 after reading ur sweet comment.Glad to know u loved it 😳 do read my other OS and let me know what you think 🤗

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