MaNan FF World Vs Me Chapter 14(A) &14(B) updated pg 43 - Page 14

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Posted: 10 years ago
loved it...especially d end part was amazing..
update soon😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awww... they are so cute! ☺️

Very well written! 👏 👏 ❤️
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amazing update!!!
you capture every details so well..Loved it..😳😳
do continue soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely update. manan first dance. wow. amazing. cont soon.

Thanks for d pm.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely. I read them all just now! Amazing story, different and I love it! If possible please PM me! Do carry on soon!
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Posted: 10 years ago
So beautifully written...light smooth serene. ...absolutely wonderful...I am seriously a huge fan of ur writing. ...hats off. ...
Loved the party. ...loving the way he characters are portrayed. ...😊
Please continue. ...now waiting to see how the story goes forward. ...😊😊
Thanks for the update and for the pm
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party sequence was amazing...loved it...manan awww...so cute...
pls continue soon...
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What a lovely story , read all chapters in one go...plz do continue, thanks ! 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
I hated Sunday since i have been addicted to kyy..but it is your story Nikku which always makes my sunday..it is a regular thing to wait for weekend or sunday to get your update..and a boring sunday without kyy becomes meaningful for me just because of you...so first of all thank you so much from thebottom of my heart..🤗
Now coming to your update,the best thing about your story is it's realistic touch..i loved to know something more about Manik and his feelings and this time he open up and expressed a little bit.. as he always hides his emotions and feelings,this party served the purpose..i am happy once again that you make the dance sequence realistic unlike any show where all of a sudden the couples start dancing like proffessional dancers..and this is the beauty of the story and hence is so dear to my heart...❤️
Secondly,your presentation of story-- awesome 👏 your description of the party hall and the decoration was amaging..it feels as if i myself were present in the hall...

i liked the update a lot..it has everything..yet as a loyal fan and reader,i have to say this,i don't know why but i feel something is missing...me too shocked by my own verdict but i have to say the truth...let me read again...hope i find what i am missing...😉

overall as always,thank you so much for the update and pm..now am waiting for the next Sunday...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Aliyagogoi

I hated Sunday since i have been addicted to kyy..but it is your story Nikku which always makes my sunday..it is a regular thing to wait for weekend or sunday to get your update..and a boring sunday without kyy becomes meaningful for me just because of you...so first of all thank you so much from thebottom of my heart..🤗
Now coming to your update,the best thing about your story is it's realistic touch..i loved to know something more about Manik and his feelings and this time he open up and expressed a little bit.. as he always hides his emotions and feelings,this party served the purpose..i am happy once again that you make the dance sequence realistic unlike any show where all of a sudden the couples start dancing like proffessional dancers..and this is the beauty of the story and hence is so dear to my heart...❤️
Secondly,your presentation of story-- awesome 👏 your description of the party hall and the decoration was amaging..it feels as if i myself were present in the hall...

i liked the update a lot..it has everything..yet as a loyal fan and reader,i have to say this,i don't know why but i feel something is missing...me too shocked by my own verdict but i have to say the truth...let me read again...hope i find what i am missing...😉

overall as always,thank you so much for the update and pm..now am waiting for the next Sunday...

Hey Aliya!!!!I'm really happy that you mentioned what you found lacking.I knew that something was missing in this chapter.I racked my brain for hours to come up but then I posted it leaving on the readers to point what they think is missing .So thank you so much for mentioning it.I'll push myself harder and try to come with a better update next time.

I think I am flattered to know how much you love the story.😛
I wanted to keep the story as much real as possible when I started writing it.I am happy,this realistic touch is received well.I so much want to give faster updates but am not able to give much time to writing.

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