Manan SS ( Time to return the revenge ) COMPLETED LAST PART 4B PG 7 - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
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This is going well!👏

Hope you continue soon!😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Sry guys it has to be third and last part of the TS But do to time issue i am updating part 3 but its not the last part... Part 4 will definetly be its last part... have a nice day ... 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice os yar
Pls update the nxt part soon...!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Its ok we will wait for the fourth part. Now update the third part asap.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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PART 3

"Nandini , nandini , nandini " Cabir was calling her shouting her name at top of his voice... She came running .

Nandini : Kya hua Cabir ? Tum thik ho ? Kuch chahiye ... she asked him worried.

Cabir : Are mujhe bhook lg rhi hai .. Chuhe pet me drums bja rhe h yr ... Kitni der se wait kr rha hu me...

Nandini : CABIRRR... mai dar gyi k pata nhi tumhe kya ho gya... Its hardly 5 mins I left for Kitchen and you are shouting like a kid.

Cabir : Haan to kya kru akele to 5 min bhi 5 hours lg rhe hai ... He said it annoyingly

Nandini : ok fine ... ek kaam krte hai ... I will help you in walking and hum log kitchen me chalte hai tum wahan baith jana ... thik hai ?

Cabir : Perfect ... Chalo

They were in kitchen now.. laughing and pulling each other legs ... and haan khana to ban hi rha hai .. as per Cabir demand .. use pasta and all nhi khana hai ... he want something spicy and indian .. so nandini was cooking pav-bhaji for them . Suddenly msg appear in cabir phone and he inform her that FAB5 will be here after half an hour as KHuranna has call them to his office.

Cabir mom was seeing this standing at kitchen door ... she was happy with this girl.. now she is sure that other than FAB5 cabir has got someone with whom he can be himself ... She was happy for him... she came inside kitchen... and talk to her and told that like FAB5 she is also her child now .. and she can come to her and call her whenever she want...Nandini hug her and a tear escape from her eyes as she is missing her mom right now... Giving her blessing his mom left the kitchen ...

After like half an hour cabir spoke ...

Cabir : Can we move to room .. I m tired of sitting here ... and bhook bhi zor ki lg rhi hai Nandini help him and serve him and went away to serve aunty also ...

Cabir was going to have its first bite suddenly STOPPP... shout Fab5 standing at his room door.

Mukti : Cabir tu kya kha rha hai ?

Aliya : And that to without us ... very bad

Dhruv : Haan yr aunty k hath ka khana wo bhi akele akele ...

Manik : ( Snatching the bite from and eating it himself ) wow it taste so yummy yr ... sahi me aunty k hath me jaadu hai...

All four of them start eating not allowing Cabir to eat ...

Cabir : Guys ye mere liye bna hai mujhe to khaane do ...

All four of them said in union NO WAYS Cabir...

Cabir : Had hai yr mai yahan bed pr pada hu kuch kr nhi paa rha hu aur tum log mujhe khane bhi nhi de rhe ho ... Mere haal puchne k bajaye sab khane me lge ho .. how mean ... And for ur kind information ye mumma ne nahi bnaya hai ...

Mukti : to kisne bnaya hai .. its so tasty man ... ( enjoying the food she said )

Cabir : Aj ek nayi chef ne banaya hai mere liye ye ... specially on my demand .. sab k liye nhi bnati wo ... mene kaha to isliye usne tum logo k liye bhi banaya ... ( cabir said it proudly )

Manik : Whoevere she is , she is brilliant cook yr ... Itna yummy banaya hai ... I want to kiss the person hand jisne bhi banaya hai ... And please tell her yr mere liye bna diya kre wo aisi dishes ...nyonika k ghar me kuch acha bnta nhi hai... its yummy ... ( cabir was smiling evily... he was imaging manik expression when he will come to know who has cook this ... And saw nandini coming with serving trolly having dish )

Cabir : haan haan kyu nhi ... here she is with dish for all of you ... Nandini Manik want to kiss your hand .. he loved the food which you have cooked...

Nandini stop in her track ... manik chokes while eating when he listen cabir statement ... Cabir was giggling silently seeing manik expression and also nandini who is blushing a bit .. and manik was giving him deadly glare .. as if saying dude u r dead .. pehle nhi bta skta tha k ye nandini bnaya hai ... all other were also shock seeing nandini and cabir bond and also about his statement ...

Cabir : Sab aise kyu dekh rhe ho yr mai aur nandini are friends now... H na nandini ? Aur mene usse request kra to she cook for me ... (Nandini nod in positive )

Mukti : Its really yummy like seriously yummy nandini ... I was thinking jb tumhe bully krte the tab tumse cook bhi krwana chahiye ... ( she said while eating ) ... And sorry for past yr .. and agr tum Cabir and dhruv dono ki dost ho to .. can we be also frnd if u r ok with it... she said it stretching her hand towards her... she whole heartedly accept it and they both hug each other... Thoda aur milega bohot bhuk lag rhi hai yr... (she ask her with pleading look )

Nandini : Ofcourse milega ... why are you asking she serve her in different plate.

Cabir : Nandini first give it too me mere liye bana hai aur mujhe hi khane ko nhi mila hai ab tk .. in kamino k krn... glaring at everyone he said ...

Dhruv : You are really a good cook nandini ...

Aliya : haan dhruv sahi keh rha hai ... u r a good cook .. can you be my frnd too ... ( she said it seeing nandini and then dhruv )

Nandini and cabir both saw them and passes smile to each other .. as if they now had got the confirmation that there analysis is right ...

Nandini : Thankyou guys and yes Aliya we can be frnds ... Mai purani yaadein bhula chuki ( glaring at manik she said ... telling her through eyes that I have forgotten you too manik Malhotra )

Cabir: Manik tu kuch nhi bolega ... abhi to itna bol rha tha ... Nandini Manik ko bhi to do...

Manik: (taking plate from nandini's hand ) its good .. I like it .. thank you ( ab tujhe kya btau Cabir k kya soch rha hu and kya bolna chahta hu me use... I still want to kiss her hand ... wanna eat the dish from her hands only... wanna hold her hand for lifetime... But nahi kr skta ... bcoz Dhruv loves her ... and woh mere sath khush nhi reh payegi ... Dhruv always makes her smile ... he was thinking all this seeing nandini who was busy chanting with other FAB4 )

While having there munching .. nandini told harshad plan of Aliya birthday to everyone ... and they also plan there next step... whereas cabir was also planning his different plan for manik in his mind...

Plz let me know hows it ... critism also welcom whole heartedly ... enjoy reading

Edited by sana_07 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#26
Gr8.. Hw poor manik wanted to kiss Nandu's hand.. Lol haha
Keep it up
Waiting fr the nxt update
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Posted: 10 years ago
#27
i was laughing throughout..
I HOPE it happens in the serial i mean funny scenes btw Cabini😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28
😊awsome update ...awww poor manik!!!!!!!!

continue soon yaar...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29
Oh great bonding between Cabir n Nandini... Manik wants to kiss Nandini's hand and love the way Cabir was teasing Manik... Totally loved it dear ... Update soon:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30
nice concept
lets see what happens next

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