Manan SS ( Time to return the revenge ) COMPLETED LAST PART 4B PG 7 - Page 4

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PART 4A

After sometime Cabir send Manik out of the room giving the excuse that mumma was asking about him and he should go and meet her... Manik who also want to be out from here for sometime immediately move from there to meet aunty... After he left ...

Cabir: Dhruv mere bhai zara idhar aa to ... ( Dhruv came to his side and Cabir start beating him playfully ... saale what a mess you have created here ... dhruv and also other were shock towards cabir attitude. )

Dhruv: Are thoda sa khana hi to gira hai isme maar kyu raha hai yr ?

Cabir: I m not talking about this mess... I m talking about the mess you have created in manik and nandini life ... ( everyone is eyeing him surprised except nandini .. she know what he is talking about...)

Dhruv : Mene kya kra hai ...

Aliya : Dhruv to itna sweet hai... he can't messup with his buddy and nandini life ... you are mistaken Cabir ... ( Dhruv passes a cute smile to Aliya)

Cabir : waah dekho kya pyaar hai ...

Mukti who can't digest the happening spoke ...wait , wait , wait , wait Pyaar ... ab ye kahan se aaya bich me ... And Cabir tu Aliya aur Dhruv ko dekh k aisa kyu bol rha hai ... Dhruv loves Nandini and Aliya loves Manik ...Ye kya confusion create kr rha hai yr ...

Cabir: Confusion mene nhi ye dhruv ne create kra hai ... Dhruv Aliya I guess shyd tum dono iska explaination de skte ho mukti ko ... nahi ( he said crossing his hands )

Dhruv : Me and Aliya is in love with eachother... and about nandini I just misunderstood our friendship to be love ... (Mukti was shock )

Cabir : teri isi misunderstanding k chakar me Nandini ka ro ro kr bura haal hai ... Kuki tere BEST BUDDY ne uska dil tod diya bcoz he got to know that you love her ... Usne ise ye keh kr apne se dur kr diya ke it was his mission to get nandini down on her knees ... ( and he narrate all the story to everyone from musicana night to yesterday night ... Nandini who was in tear listening and remembering all the moment start to move out from the room ... But Dhruv hold her hand and stop her from going ...)

Dhruv : I am sorry nandini meri bewakoofi ki wajah se aaj mera buddy and meri special friend dono hurt hai ... I m really very sorry ... and Manik ... I know jo usne tumhare sath kra wo sahi nahi tha but wo dil ka buran ahi trust me on that...

Aliya : Ye sab meri wajah se hi hua hai ... I m sorry Nandini ... Mai janti thi Manik is falling for you ... but to bring him back to me .. I only influence dhruv that he has started loving you ... and he should propose you as soon as possible ... I am so sorry Nandini please forgive me .. and Dhruv please forgive me ... ( Aliya was in tear and also ashamed of herself ... Dhruv was also angry on listening her words ... nandini notice this )

Nandini : Aliya and dhruv its not both of yours fault... situations hi aisi ho gyi ... and Dhruv please don't be angry on her ... please understand her na ... ( Dhruv calms down and embrance both nandini and Aliya ... )

Cabir : Tere maze hai yr do do ladkiya hai tere pass to ... ( he said pouting)

Mukti : Are mai hu na tere liye ... I love you .. hugs cabir... hum dono bhi hai yr .. we too love you said nandini and Aliya hug him too...

Mukti : And manik usko to me abhi ja kr siddha krti hu ... Bada mahan banne chala hai ... How can he break girl heart who always save her ...Manik no one can save you from me now ...(she stand up folding her shirt sleeves )

Cabir : Mukti ruk ja yr ... Manik ko siddha krenge na but FAB5 ke style mai yr ... aaj tk koi kaam humne siddha kra hai jo ab krenge ... He said it smiling evily ...

Mukti : Cabir it sounds interesting and fun ... kya plan bnaya hai tune ab jaldi bta de... ( they all gather in a circle and cabir explain the plan to everyone ... And all of them are impressed with the plan and get ready to execute it. )

Cabir: Dhruv hmare plan ko successful bnane ke liye you to hide ur relationship status for somtime from Manik...

Dhruv: Okay

Nandini : Guys I should leave now chachi ka message aaya hai ... she has to go somewhere and rishab akela nahi chod skte hai ghar par ... will meet you later.. bye.. and get well soon cabir...

FAB4 : bye ...

After her departure other four were talking and Manik came ... he saw Nandini missing but didn't ask about her... all four of them she his restlessness...

Cabir: Ye nandini ko bhi abhi hi ghar jana tha ... she was saying she is not feeling well ... Pata nhi achnak kya ho gya use ... abhi tk to thik thi ...

Manik becomes worried listening cabir ... finally he spoke urgently ... Wo thik to hai ... kya hua use ... everything is fine na... akele kyu jane diya use ... everyone was seeing him in aww expression suddenly he realises his restlessness and said calmly ... I mean agr uski tbyt khrb ho gyi to aage plan kaise execute hoga ... and Dhruv TUJHE ( first he point his finger towards himself than to him ) jana chahiye tha na use drop krne ...

Dhruv : Usne kaha wo khud se chali jayegi ... she don't need help ... to mene nahi roka use ...

Manik : Hmsha apni hi chalaegi ... kitni ziddi hai ye ladki .. kisi ki nhi sunti ye ...ahh she always make me crazy ... shyd kal meri rudness k karan jo wo royi thi usi se uski tbyt khrb hui hogi... damn it ( He said it under his breath ... but all of them listein and were smiling)

Mukti: Waise guys Manik ko ladki to ek dum uske takar ki mili hai ... She can really trouble him ... Oh I am so excited to see Manik expression when our plan will start ... She said it very slowly inaudible to Manik...

MAnik: Guys I think we should also leave .. Cabir ko rest krne dete hai ... and Dhruv tujhe nandini se puch lena chahiye hows she ...

All of them went to there home but manik goes to nandini's home to check if she is fine or not from outside only ... Cabir get a call .. the person said ... " will meet you tomorrow at 10'O clock morning Your place "

Cabir smiles and message mukti , Aliya , dhruv and nandini .. to be at his place at 10 morning...

NEXT DAY

Everyone gather at Cabir house along with the person except Nandini ... they all were laughing and remembering old memories .. the person is a mutual frnd of FAB5 ... he is KARAN

Intro : Karan is also a musician and a model too .. lives in Bombay only ... Handling his father music company along with his music passion .. cool guy with golden heart and down to earth ... He was on tour return today only ...

Nandini came ... Cabir saw her and say .. here comes our nandini the boxer ... karan turn around both nandini and karan saw eachother...

Karan : Nandu... ( in surprised way )

Nandini : Karan ... ( smiling widely )

Karan move fastly towards nandini and hug her and climb her and twirl her around ... Oh nandu what a pleasant surprise .. I was so missing you ... And tum to photo se jayda beautiful real me lg rhi ho ... Nandini was laughing and ask her to put her down ... I too miss you Karan ... I am too very surprise... thanks for the compliment but please put me down .. mujhe chakar aa jayenge ... no ways hottie .. tu itne time baad mujhe mili hai... I m not going to leave you soon... Karan please ... he put her down ... tum Mumbai kab ayi... Karan when we last talk mene tumhe btaya tha k me chacha chachi k sath Mumbai shift ho rhi hu .. and tumne kaha tha tum tour pr jaa rhe ho for 3 months and aa kr mujhse miloge ... remember... Oh sorry yr mai tumhe dekh kr bhul hi gya .. chacha chachi rishab amms sab kaise hai .. amms ka paisum khaye kitna tym ho gya yr ... but tum to bsc join krne wali thi na phir SPACE music academy me kaise aa gyi ... chill karan ek ek kr ke puchna yr... sab bohot ache hai .. rishab health has also improved a lots... amms abhi bhi bohot tasty paisum bnati hai and mene unse sikh bhi liya hai will definetly cook it for you ... Aur rhi SPACE join krne ki baat to mera dream to music hi tha ...amms ne mujhe smjhaya k mai apna dream follow krungi to appa Jayda khush honge ... and shyd aiyyappa bhi yahi chahte the to I got full schlorship in SPACE .. and here I am standing in front of you ...

While both of them were engrossed in there talk ... All the others are surprised with karan and nandini talks ...

Mukti : Ye dono to ek dusre ki history geography sab jante hai ... here we have call both of them to introduce them to each other... but in dono ko dekh kr to aisa lg rha h hume intro ki jarurat padegi ab ...

Cabir : like seriously in dono ko to kisi ka hosh hi nhi h apni hi baato me lge hue hai ... Agr Manik yahan hota na to pakka jal bhunj gaya hota ... and I guess hume hmara plan execute krne ka mauka hi nhi mil pata ...

Dhruv : Seriously yr mene bhi nandini and karan ko kbhi itna khush nhi dekha ... In dono ko dekh k koi nhi bol skta ye log sirf dost hai ...

Aliya: humare plan k liye to ye acha hi hai Na ... Manik is definitely going to fall for this I am sure...

Cabir : but abhi hume in dono ko inke land se bahar lana chahiye ...

Cabir : Nandini Karan earth calling guys ... hum bhi yahan hai shayad ...

Karan and Nandini stop there talk and say sorry guys...

Cabir : Tum dono ek dusre ko jante ho ?

Karan : Jante ... we are bestum best friend hai yr ... infact bachpan hum dono sath hai ... I met her after so many years .. but we Are in contact with each other always ... Mumbai shift hone se pehle and haan tum logo se bhi milne se pehle ... mai aur hottie I mean nandini friends hai .. our parents were also friends with each other from college days ... Hai ke nahi hottie ? ( he said it circling his hand around nandini's shoulder... Yup sexy ... nandini said it smiling ...

Dhruv : Nandini we never saw you so open and bold... we were in thought you are completely traditional and shy girl...

Karan : Nandini tradional bhi hai , simple bhi and at the same time she is bold also .. but not with everyone ... she is tigress guys ... pata hai in our childhood when with both were learning music from Amms .. I usually get late for the class and she used to beat me for that but baad me wo hi mujhe lesson revise krwati thi... She is an angel guys ... She is 21st centuary girl who also follow tradition ...

Cabir : Its true ... but the tigress has changed into boxer you know ...

Karan : as in ... ?

Cabir than narrate him whole story of her from her day 1 when she save shahid to the day he punched manik ... And from there to her heart break

Karan has now got angry and upset with FAB5 ...

Karan : what the hell guys ... how can you do this to nandini ... nandini kya tum kisi bhi ladki k sath aisa kaisa kr skte ho .. I mean seriously guys .. having fun is different and making fun of someone is different ... I mean like seriously ... how can you guys can make her cry ... For your enjoyment you all try to broke her ... You make her spot, you broke her father last memory , you almost force her to drink that shit which you all have made , you send goons for her , you all even push rishab in water just for your enjoyment ... I never in my dreams thought that you guys can really toture someone to this extend... And Manik he broke the most beautiful girl's heart And Nandini you call me ur best frnd na to tu mujhe ek baar bhi call nhi kr skti thi ... he walkout from the room

FAB5 was hanging there heads down in ashame ... Cabir try to stop Karan but can't , Nandini go after him saying I will bring him back...

Mukti : She is truly a golden hearts girl guys ... Hum logo ne itna bura kra uske sath and wo , wo yahan hmari madad kr rhi hai , and even she has forgiven us so easily ... we have to make it up for it guys... Manik ko use manana hi hoga guys...

I m so sry guys pata nahi kya kya likh rhi hu mai , jo man me aya wo likh diya , sry in advance if you all dnt like it , have a nice day...

please share views and critism welcome ...😊


Edited by sana_07 - 10 years ago
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So here is the last part guys ... hope you like it ... a special thanks to sumatra1234 for her VM .. enjoy reading...

PART 4B

Karan was very upset 😔 with listening to Nandini's whole story after she came to Mumbai. HE was upset with FAB5 because of their behavior , with Nandini because she didn't tell her about all her trouble and with himself also that he was not there with her best friend when she needed him the most . Nandini came from behind put her hand on his shoulder ... He turns around and hugs her.

Karan: I am so sorry nandini😭 ... jab tujhe meri jarurat thi me nhi tha tere pass, mai hota to tujhe ye sab nahi sahena padta , why didn't you call me nandu ... why didn't you call ...

Nandini broke the hug and said : It's okay karan .. itna bada bhi kuch nahi hua hai not compare to that night when I lost my parents and rishab voice ... yup musicana night was amongst the worst day of my life ... and maine tumhe phn islyie nahi kra kuki mujhe pta tha agr me phn krti to tu apna concert tour chod k aa jata and mai aisa nahi chahti thi ... and I m a tigress yr and boxer to I punched manic remember ... and ye log itne bure bhi nahi h .. infact we all are now friends... and jo manik ne mere sath kra wo usne apne dost k liye kra .. manti hu galt kra but hume use wahi to smjhna h right ?

Karan : Hmmm tu kahan music me chali gyi psychology pad leti yr ... ( they both laugh😆 ) but promise me next time tujhe jb bhi problem hogi u WILL call me ...

Nandini : Pakka nandini promise... ab chale sab wait kr rhe hai ...

Karan : Hmmm chalo ...

All others were worried inside ... They both came inside .. sensing the tension ...

Karan : Kya muh latka k baithe ho plan nahi bnana hai kal k liye ... Its Aliya birthday guys , manik ko bhi to sidha karna hai ... kitne kaam h aur tum log tympass kr rhe ho ... Guys just chill I m not angry with anyone now .. so please just forget it ...

All of them see towards nandini , she with her eyes assure them that everything is fine now...😊

All of them discuss the plan , as to how they should move away harshad from the party and how to make manik confess ( there plan is inaudible to us also ). All are so happy with the plan ...👏

All were chanting when they heard a voice and all of them MANIK ...

Cabir : Ise bhi abhi hi ana tha na ... NAndini tum and karan chup jao ... Tum room k dusre door k pass chup jao and than you can go out from the back door...

Nandini : but kyu ?

Cabir : Bas jaisa keh rha hu waisa kro it will be fun ...

Nandini and karan went and hide ... behind second door ...

Manik enter : hey cabir ... Seeing all other ... tum log kb aaye .. and mujhe kyu nhi btaya

Dhruv : woh to hum aise hi aa gye the abhi abhi aaye h bas .. tu kaise aa gya ...

Manik was fighting with his inner self about nandini and hence come to Cabir .. but he can't say in front of anyone so he said ... Bas aise hi Cabir ko dekhne aa gya ... while he was saying it not looking to anyone ... his eyes caught nandini's pink stole lying on the floor ... He was Shocked ..😲

Manik : Nandini aayi thi yahan .. picking up the scarf..❓

Everyone is first shock😲 but seeing scarf in his hand they got relived ...

Cabir : haan aayi thi na mujhse milne ...

Manik is lost in his world said : usne btaya nhi mujhe wo aane wali hai...

Mukti : You both don't have any relation na ... I mean tu uska FRIEND thodi h jo tujhe bta kr aayegi .. dhruv ko bta diya tha usne ...

Manik was fuming in anger but control it ...😡

Karan to nandini : bohot pyaar krta h wo tumse h na ?

Nandini : haan
Than they both left the place ...

In the room they all making manik jealous by joining nandini and dhruv name together ... Soon when manik found that his control level has reached its pick he went away from there ... Later on all other also left ... Next day is aliya b'day .

THE FINAL DAY

All are ready for the big day ... Navya was not going to come to the party as her mother came to Mumbai and she has to be with her mother... and Harshad he was in pune ... thanks to karan👏 ... He through his contact tell a associate music company of his company to call harshad to its pune office saying they are willing to launch NH3 ... and also to engage him whole day .. so he can't be in Mumbai that day ... And as everybody thought he went to pune postponing hi s plan to trap manik .. On the other hand manik was not aware of this thing ...

He went to Aliya's home, FAB5 and all the other guest were present there

MANIK DRESS


... He enter and move to his friends .. his eyes was searching for nandini but didn't find her .. he has not seen her STAR ⭐️from last 2 days nor he has listen her voice .. he was dying to see her ... to listen her ... all FAB5 are seeing his restlessness.

Manik : Where is harshad guys.. dikh nhi raha hai ( he asked hoping she is with him and navya may be)

Aliya : Bhai went to pune kuch urgent kaam h bol rhe the .. and navya to uske harshadji k bina aayegi nahi ... ( she didn't mention about nandini intentionally )

Manik : Aur nandini ... I guess ab to wohh bhi nahi aayegi .. harshad ka plan jo change ho gya hai ( he was sad🤔 )

Aliya : Nahi ... nandini aayegi na she is our FRIEND now .. I mean tumhari nahi hai ... But hum sab ki to hai ... H na dhruv... ( and dhruv smile )

Manik was happy 😊that she is coming but at the same time jealous .. that his girl name is again getting combined with Dhruv ...😡

He move to get himself a drink as he was in need to cool himself down ... Everybody got the message that Nandini and Karan is about to enter the party ... Manik came there with his drink ...

Mukti : ye Karan kahan reh gaya yr ab tk nhi aya ...

Manik : Karan ...😲 ?? who kb wapas aaya ... ???

Cabir : Kal hi aaya hai ghar bhi aya tha mere tere aane se pehle ...

Manik : tune btaya nhi mujhe ... and wo mila bhi nhi mujhse .. strange😕

Cabir : Sry yr btana bhul gaya tha ...

Mukti: Are but wo h kahan usne kaha tha woh kisi apni someone special ko lane wala hai .. HIS ONLY HOTTIE ... and he said he is going to propose her today ( She said stressing the last words ... )

Manik : aa jayega yr .. lets see who is his special someone...

Manik is standing opposite to Cabir facing his back towards the entrance... Than comes the Nandini with Karan ... all see Karan first ...

Mukti : Here he comes ...

Cabir seeing Nandini lost his balance from Dhruv's shoulder and said : O teri , she is really hot man 😎... he was really in awe situation and also others... Seeing there faces he also turn around and was shocked and surprised both seeing the two people in front of him ... 😲

KARAN


NANDINI


They both are wearing the same dress shown in pics...

Cabir : She is looking hot ... pehle pta hota .. and I was not gay .. Dhruv tere se pehle mai he nandini ko propose kr deta ... 😎

Dhruv : SHE IS BEAUTIFUL , CHARMING AND IRRESSITIBLE yr ... ( he purposely stress on that words ... )

Manik reminds his word when in jungle he said that she is mistaken if she think that she is beautiful , charming and irresistible ...

Manik : This girl she is gone death of me one day ... Aahhh she has power to make me crazy ... And moreover sabko meri hi nandu kyu pasand aati h yr ... duniya me ladkiyan khtm ho gyi h kya.😡.. jo sb k sb meri hi nandini k piche pade hai ... But she is looking stunning 😊... He said it smiling ..

FAB5 listen his words because he was thinking he saying it silently but not he is saying it a loud... All were smiling ...😊

Dhruv : Buddy tune kuch kaha kya ?

Manik : Kya .. kya kaha tune ... Nahi mene to kuch nhi kaha... ( he again saw both of them when he notice karan hands were on her waist and she is comfortable with it ... Manik was fuming but control it😡 )

They both came near FAB5

Karan : Happy birthday Aliya ... and meet and hug everyone...

Karan : Hey guys meet my HOTTIE .. I mean my special friend Nandini ...

Nandini : Don't call me that in front of everyone please SEXY ... And by the way they all are my friends but not MANIK he is not my FRIEND ... she said glaring at him ... we are in same institute .. tu bhul gya ... she said it punching him on his arm ...

Karan : sry yr nandu ... He said it side hugging her ...😊

Manik was already in restless condition and now listening to nandini and karan conversation and there bonding he was now fuming in anger😡 ... He was continuously looking at nandini but she was not looking at him for once ...

All were talking to each other , other than Manik he was just starring at his STAR ⭐️... Nandini was all while talking and laughing with Karan and FAB5 .. karan was telling them about his and nandini's friendship and how much fun they had during there childhood ...

Guys its tym to cut the cake I guess .. Dhruv said

Aliya cut the cake and feed everyone ... A piece of cake stuck on nandini's cheek .. manik hint her before she could wipe Karan did it for her she smile and Manik again fumes...😡

Aliya : Karan it's a long time we hear your voice ... please sing something na ...

Karan : Okay but a need a partner to ... he said forwarding his hand towards nandini ... Will you ??😊😉

Nandini : Ofcourse ... ( Manik again fumes 😡) ( gusse ka dam kbhi bhi futne ko taiyar hai ab to😆😆😆 )

Karan with guitar start singing the song ... Along with Nandini ... Nandini while singing her part was remembering each and every moment she spend with manik... which was matching with the lyrics of the song .. whereas Manik was imaging himself in place of Karan also remmebring his nandu's antics and was smiling😊

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vy8hhF_ofpw&feature=youtu.be

Please see the video ... VM credit to sumatra1234...

Ik teekhi teehki si uff karari si ladki
Mere dil mein dil mein ek beejli jaise hai kadki
Thodi behkte hui Thodi chehekti hui gumsum sahemti hui
Kaise jal bechati hai pagli

Ik teekha teekha sa ladkhadata sa ladka

Mere dil dil mein ek shola jaisa bhadka

Ik teekha teekha sa ladkhadata sa ladka

Mere dil dil mein woh shole jaisa bhadka

Kabhi hickita hua kabhi khulke gata hua

Baatein banata hua phirbhi humko woh bhata hai pagla

Hosh le ke ud gaya

Uski Kaise hai jadugari
Dekhti hi reh gai
Mein to khadi ki khadi

Chatpati chulbuli uski baatein sharat bhari

Per peeche pad jaane ki aadat badi hai buri
Thodi behkte hui Thodi chahekti hui yuhi fudakti hui
Kaise jal bechati hai pagli

Ik teekhi teehki si uff karari si ladki

Mere dil mein dil mein ek beejli jaise hai kadki

Voda ki shot mein ek choti si mirchi hari

Ek mushibat hai jo sar pe humari padi
Are hum to aise hain hum to aise hain bhaiya

Pub mein leke jata hai

per Pene na deta hai jo
Fully tully hoke phir
Humko bachata hai jo

Pau to zaameen pe hain

Per khwaabon mein udta hai jo
Dadi ke beech mein dimple chupata hai woh
Thodi behkte hui Thodi chehekti hui gumsum sahemti hui
Kaise jal bechati hai pagli

Ik teekhi teehki si uff karari si ladki

Uski dil mein dil mein ek beejli jaise hai kadki
Ik teekha teekha sa ladkhadata sa ladka
Uske dil dil mein ek shola jaisa bhadka

When the song finish everyone clap for them 👏... than only Manik came out from his Nandiniland ...

Nandini : Karan .. I heard you sing after such a long time ... I like your music, I like to sing with you again , I must say I m impressed with your music ... ( manik and nandini both remember the classroom incident when manic was singing and she enter... they both look to each other .. )

Karan : Thanks nandini .. u too was awesome as always ... and he kisses her hand ... ( Manik is full of rage now ... 😡 ) ( gusse k dam me crack aa gya h 😆😆)

Cabir to manik : They look like a couple ... nahi ... kya bonding h yr dono ki .. bachpan k dost hai ... and nandini to waise bhi dhruv ko mana kr chuki hai ... I guess shayad isliye hi usne mana kra hoga ... They look perfect ...

Dhruv : I too think same cabir ... Karan to aaj use propose bhi krne wala h...

Manik : NAHI ... ( Now manik was completely out of control😡 finally dam fut hi gaya 👏🥳 ) all turn towards him

Cabir: Kya hua manik ... tu aise chilaya kyu ... ??

Manik : kuch nahi ... Nandini mujhe tumse baat krni hai abhi

Nandini : I don't want to talk to you ... And she turns ...

MAnik grab her hand ... I said I wanna talk to you and I want to talk to you now ... ( he shout very angrily😡 ) Nandini protest but he grab her and move away from there ...

After they left ...

Aliya: Guys kuch jayda to nahi ho gya ...

Mukti : Yup guys MAnik is looking very angry ...kahi confess krane aur jealous feel krane k chakar me .. as nandini say .. humne manik the monster ko to nahi jaga diya ... I m really worried and scared for her ...

Dhruv : Me too ... jb manik gusse me hota h to use sambhalna bohot mushkil hai ... I guys humne sote hue sher ko jaga diya hai ...

Cabir : Don't worry guys nandini hi use sambhal skti hai ... she will handle him ..

Karan : Don't worry yr .. tigress h wo ... and wo bhi manik se kum nahi hai wo smbhal legi just chill yr ... Tiger and Tigress are on mission ... He winks 😉... Chalo have some dance guys ... kya boring lg rhi h party...🥳

Manik was grabbing her to the upstair room ...

Nandini : Manik chodo mujhe ... mujhe tumse koi baat nahi krni hai ... manic leave me ... she was trying hard to get out of his grip ...

Manik : just shut up nandini ... maine tumse pucha nahi hai ... And I am not leaving you this time

Nandini : yahi to problem hai .. tum kbhi janna hi nahi chahte what I want ,🤢 ...

Manik and nandini came to the room ... he lock the room and pinned her to the nearby wall ...

Manik : what the hell you were doing downstair ...😡

Nandini : nothing just enjoying the party with my FRIENDS ... whats the big deal in it... ( she said casually )

Manik : Ahh I am not asking about that ... I am asking what were you doing there with Karan ... He saying you hottie you saying him sexy , Singing with him , praising him , laughing with him like anything , and you are even so comfortable when he kissed you on your hand , even seeing you infect cabir was saying you both look like a couple ... even Karan is going to propose you today ... u dumb... 😡 Do you even think Dhruv ko kaisa lg raha hoga tumhe karan k sath dekh kr ( he said it hiding his condition and using dhruv name )... u r so engrossed in him k tumhe kisi ka bhi hosh nahi hai ...

NAndini now get fumes 😡as still he is taking dhruv's name here g8 ...😡

Nandini : Manik Karan mera best friend hai infact he is special to me ... We are together from childhood ... And I like to sing with him ... aur mujhe uska gaana acha lga to mene use praise kra, and about the kiss ... He can ... we have special bond ... And about dhruv he and me are just good friend and unlike you he understand me ... and agr use bura lg rha hota to WOH mujhse ye sab puchta tum nahi ... and about cabir saying .. he can be right ... me and karan are best friend ... I understand him , he understand me , he make me smile , I am comfortable with him , my amms also likes him , he is a musician like me , who meri baat smjhta hai ... use meri fikr bhi hai ... woh mujhe kisi aur k liye nahi chod skta... we make a good couple ... If he proposes me I m definitely going to say yes ... And...

Manik press his lips against her lips and start kissing her vigorously😡 .. she was resisting it but he was not going to stop and bite her lips .. slowly she lost it and start responding him ... she was also kissing him vigorously 😡... there kiss was full of anger and frustration ..

Manik : you are not going to say him yes , u got it ... He said between the kiss

he was pulling her more and more closer if possible and she was pulling his hair too ... this time she was not managing to cool him down .. but she want that he should pour his heart out... she can't bear his rudeness anymore... When they were lack of oxygen they apart ...

Manik : This is the only way to shut your mouth ...

Nandini : I will say him yes if he propose me ... u got it😡 ... and How dare you Manik Malhotra , u said ur friend love me ryt... than how can u kiss a girl whom your friend loves ... Haan , say , bolo na , chup kyu ho , bolte kyu nahi ... she said it beating him and pushing him ... Kuch to bolo manik ... say na ... It is my life u can't control me u got it , its my wish to whomsoever I will be with , why you have to come in between , why you bring me here and asking me questions , why can't you leave me alone...

Manik : Because I love you u , you dumb girl ... I love you more than anything in my life ... I can't leave you alone , I can't see you with anyone else do you get it now... He said her pulling her towards him...😡

Nandini : No manik you don't , aisa hota to tum mujhe us din who sab nahi kehte , because dhruv said he loves me tumne mujhe chod diya ... I am toy to you .. jb dil kra pass bula liya , jb dil chaha khudse dur kr diya ... jb dil kra phir se haq jatane chale aaye ... how could you manik ... You don't even think of me once and you are saying you love me ... G8 ... .. she was all tear up now and sit on the bed ...😭

Manik sit in front of her on ground holding her hands... he was also in tears now 😭

Manik : I am sorry nandini ... I thought u will be happy with dhruv , u like him , he makes you smile , unlike me he never hurt you he is just perfect for you .. that's why ..

Nandini : Who are you to decide who will be perfect for me , I like him but I never love him , I smile to him just as a friend , navya also make me smile .. to mujhe usse bhi pyar hona chahiye , now a days cabir make me smile to mujhe usse bhi pyaar hona chahiye ... mukti , aliya , shahid , watchman dada .. wo log bhi mujhe smile krate hai to mujhe sabse pyaar kr lena chahiye hai na ? ... she shed tears... 😭

Manik cup her face and touch his forehead with her ...

Manik : I am sorry ... I love you .. I really do ... I will never hurt you again ...

Nandini : I won't forgive you I told you before if u hurt me again I won't forgive you .. I hate you💔

Manik: I love you ...❤️

Nandini : I hate you..💔

Manik : I love you ...❤️

Nandini : I hate you💔

Manik: I love you ...❤️

Nandini : I hate you💔 .. I hate you 💔... I hate you💔 ... I .. i... I love you ❤️ dont you dare me leave me again 😡... i will kill you next time Manik Malhotra ( she said him pulling him by his collar )

They both fell on the bed .. and this time nandini kiss him ... there kiss was soft and full of love 😳... it has apology , love , forgiveness ... It was a kiss of love ... when they were lack of oxygen .. he left her lips but didn't not her skin .. he kiss his nape and ask ... I m your friend , you like my music only h na ? ... Nadini say no ... Manik hearing his answer leave her and sit on the bed ...

Manik: Karan is your friend h na , and all other FAB5 ... u like his music ... u like to sing with him again h na ? I am not perfect for you ... But karan is h na ???

Nandini also sit on the bed ... she now know his fear of losing her due to his bad childhood experience she turn him towards her ... manik was looking down ...

Nandini : I don't like your music because I love ❤️your music ... she said kissing his forehead, I like to sing with him but I love ❤️to sing for you for my life .. and she kiss his eyes , He make me smile😊 ... but he don't make me blush😳 .. she kiss hi s cheek ... I am comfortable with him when he call me hottie and kiss me on my hands but I love ❤️when you call me and hugs me completely making me yours it always feel special and I feel secure with you .. she kiss his other cheek... He is special friend of mine and You can't be my friend Manik .. this time manik lift his face and see her ... yes u heard it right .. you can't be my friend because you are my FIREFLY ... u are my light manik .. you are my love ❤️... and this time she peck him on his lips ... and hug him.. manik immediately hugs her back ... they hugs as if there is no tomorrow.. to tum ab to karan ko haan nahi bologi na if he proposes you ... he ask her innocently ... she chuckles😆.. of course not because I love you❤️ and manik I want my monster manik back not this ... it doesn't suit you personality u know 😆... She said breaking the hug... She stand up while manic was still sitting on bed..

Nandini : waise manik ... karan mujhe propose krne bhi nahi wala hai 😆.. he is already engaged with someone ... also dhruv and aliya are couple now ... Yesterday I left my scarf in cabir's room intentionally ... 😉

Manik first didn't get 😕what nandini was trying to say but later 😲... SHIT u all plot against me ... this was all just a plan... Nandini you are gone now😈 ... you purposely made me jealous ... he said coming closer to her .. she ran away ... they both are running in the room ... yes we did it ... infact our guide was cabir because my monster manic has become masiha manik na that's why... She said while running ... finally he caught her and pins her to the wall ... so you wearing this looking hot and sexy and charming and adorable at the same time is also included in his plan hmmm ... 😈

Nandini : Nope ... this is my wish ... it was my olan ... this the little revenge for making me cry and saying me that I am not charming nor irresistible ... she said it naughtily😈

Manik : Aisa kya ... well than I take my words back ... And if my saying this will bring you to me in this avatar I would definitely say it again ... and now its time to return your revenge sweetheart and they again kiss eachother...

THE END ...

Finally I completed my story ... Please share your views ... critism welcome... happy reading ... have a nice day ... 😊

Edited by sana_07 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow beautiful and perfect ending... Loved it :) they r together now ... Love Nandini's words when she was kissing Manik loved it totally... Bit sad kionki a beautiful story has ended but happy for the happy ending:) thanks for giving us a story like this ... Plz write more stuff on Manan... Thanks
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39
Lovely story, lovely ending. Please do write more for the forum when you can.👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Reminds me of armaan and riddhima

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