Manan SS ( Time to return the revenge ) COMPLETED LAST PART 4B PG 7

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hi guys i am new here ( not exactly i am a silent reader of If ) but this show force me to write somthing , hope you guys like it ...

Time to Return the Revenge Nandini was sitting in college music room confused with Manik behaviour one time he said he take revenge and accomplished his mission and on other hand got worried for her. She was reminding the event happen yesterday and a while ago.

IN JUNGLE

Manik : What u thing , u r charming , beautiful , no one can resist you ...but you are highly mistaken Nandini Moorty.

Nandini was hurt with his rude outburst so as manik but didn't say anything . They didn't talk each other after that for long time and searches the way to go out from this jungle as they realised everyone is lost now. As it is getting dark they decided to found way in morning. Nandini again light the fire as she still remembers manik hates darkness and also its getting cold. Flooded with their emotion they came closer to each other and as she was going to kiss him he backed off and excuses his action saying he was doing just in case harshad is seeing them. Both of them knew that he is lieing . Seeing in his eyes she was sure he is hidding something from her , something very deep. But what and why she didn't know. The night pass silently later on .

In morning they found themselves in each other arms but didn't say a word and walk for finding the way .. suddenly she reminds that the jammer is still on she immediately off it and there phone networks starts working.

And as per harshad plan nadini got message from navya that she is with harshad and is safe and ask about her. Nandini message them that she is fine and will reach home herself . Manik through GPRS found way out and also inform Dhruv and Aliya about coming to highway .Dhruv and Aliya saw Navya and Harshad remove the cloth from silencer and went away a while ago so they stand near Manik's car . Nandini and manik came out of the jungle... Nandini saw dhruv and aliya smiling she notice something different between them but brushes the thought aside. They all went back to their home planning to meet after college at cabir's place .

A WHILE AGO IN COLLEGE

Nandini met harshad and navya and assure them that manik has fallen for their trap but Harshad want full confidence so he plan another encounter of manik and nandini . He plan to through a party for aliya's birthday which is coming after 2 days and invite all friends including FAB5 . He went away with navya for party preparation leaving Nandini who is also not willing to go with that jerk.

PRESENT

She plan to sooth her pain by playing music and sing her heart out but at the same time she got message from cabir to come to his place . She left her thought of music and move for cabir's home . She reached before anyone . She met cabir's mom greet her and ask about cabir she informed her that doctor is treating cabir she can wait here , nandini saw music room surrounded by greenery she asked her if she can wait there .. cabir mom happily allow her and told her to take care of cabir while she get medicine from outside . Seeing the room and its surrounding she can't stop herself from singing her heart out ... She start playing the keyboard and start singing , as she sing she remember each and every moment she spent with Manik , sometime she smile 😊sometime start crying 😭...

Pehle Kabhi Na Tune Mujhe Gum Diya
Fir Mujhe Kyu Tanha Kar Diya
Guzare The Jo Lamhe Pyaar Ke
Humesha Tujhe Apna Maan Ke
To Fir Tune Badli Kyu Ada
Ye Kyu Kiya

Kabhi Jo Badal Barse
Mai Dekhu Tujhe Aankhe Bhar Ke
Tu Lage Mujhe Pehli Barish Ki Dua
Tere Pehlu Me Reh Loon
Main Khud Ko Pagal Keh Loon
Tu Gam De Khushiyan Seh Loon Sathiyaa

Aaa Sathiyan
Sathiyan

Finishing the lines she start crying remembering their breakup night and yesterday night. Someone from nearby was listening to her song and was having tears in eyes as if feeling her pain in heart same as her ... It was CABIR . Now he was sure that like Manik she is also in love with him that's why she refuses Dhruv proposal . He was so angry on Manik for breaking her diamond like heart and making this angel cry.

Cabir : Nandini sahi hi kehti hai Manik You are really a Monster . How can you not see love in her eyes for you damn it. Agr me thik hota aur is bed se uth pata to seriously I would have punched you hard on your face ... Saare jahan ki chinta hai ise bs ek iski hi nhi jo iski chinta krti hai ... Manik Malhotra you are so dead man ... I won't spare you for this. Now wait and watch what will I do to you ... ( Smriking and something evil planning in his mind he said )
i hope you guys like it... if not no issues... critism is welcome... but please share your views ... if you like the subject than only i will continue ... have a nice day...😊

INDEX
Part 1 - PG 1
Part 2 - Pg 3
Part 3 - Pg 5
Part 4A - Pg 6
Last Part - Pg 7
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Posted: 10 years ago
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yaar 2 gud do cont/..😊
Nyways welcome did is ur 1st post naa?
have fun wid d IF family dear/...😉








Edited by mi_cheeky_me... - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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😊 awsome...pls continue...😊

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Posted: 10 years ago
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yup its my first post ... kya kru got so addicted to this show ... likhne par majboor kr hi diya isne 😆
and thanks for liking it ... 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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sounds interesting...pliz do continue n pliz pm me if possible:)
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Amazing start!!!!! Cabir!!!! Love u Man!!!
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update soon. its very nice. plz cont soon.
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nice shot
nd i soo want cabir to see tears in nandhu's eyes...
continue soon want to see cabirs plan😆
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Nice one plz continue it soon:)
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really nice,,,,,,,, plz do continue,,,,

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