Manan SS ( Time to return the revenge ) COMPLETED LAST PART 4B PG 7 - Page 5

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you can't
be my friend because you are my
FIREFLY ... u are my light manik .. you
are my love .

These lines I really want nandini to say to manik. If she is his star then he is her firefly. Marvelous, I just dnt want it to end. The whole ss is intoxicating. So much love. Really loved it keep writing

Originally posted by: nicky13

Wow beautiful and perfect ending... Loved it :) they r together now ... Love Nandini's words when she was kissing Manik loved it totally... Bit sad kionki a beautiful story has ended but happy for the happy ending:) thanks for giving us a story like this ... Plz write more stuff on Manan... Thanks

Thankyou very much Nicky13 ... 😊
When I updated last 2 parts i didn''t get much response ... and i thaught i m nt worth writing ... was till not very convenced about response when i update last part ... but reading your comment .. now i will write down my imagnation in words for sure .. thankyou ...

Originally posted by: RomComFan

Lovely story, lovely ending. Please do write more for the forum when you can.👍🏼

Thankyou for liking it ... i will definitly write more stuff on manan ... whenever i can ... 😊

Originally posted by: apardh_ba

you can't
be my friend because you are my
FIREFLY ... u are my light manik .. you
are my love .

These lines I really want nandini to say to manik. If she is his star then he is her firefly. Marvelous, I just dnt want it to end. The whole ss is intoxicating. So much love. Really loved it keep writing

Thankyou dear... I too want nandini to say this words to manik ... I too don't want to end it ... first it was TS than it became SS and if i didn't control to end it , it has surely become a FF ... 😉😆
I will surely write more in future ...

Originally posted by: -Xpress-

Awesome story

Thankyou ...😊

Originally posted by: topsy003

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loved the SS... thanks a lot.. read all the parts at once.

the last part was awesome ☺️☺️

please do continue writing.. would love to read them.. u write very nicely.

Thankyou ... 😳 i would surly write more ... and you too read it ... 😆

Originally posted by: appy111

Amazing do write sum mr

Thankyou .. i will write mr ... 😊

Originally posted by: sumatra1234

Finally I find free time, i read your story ... great ... I hope you'll soon something else to write ..

Thankyou .. you made time for reading it ... i will write soon .. and u again have to help me with VM next time also 😆😉