16+ MaNan Drabble : Besties 24/01 *Part 12 - Page 6

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Posted: 10 years ago
#51
Oh my god. Just read the whole thing. Please PM meee! 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
#52
sweet one..
I wonder what Nandu will say..
I hope she says yes only..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#53
I just read all the 6 parts at once ...
n i was like awww... though m not a girly girl *according to my friends*
but seriously... i so loved it...
i can never imagine nyonika to be this much sweet and kind...

n for our baby girl she was sooo cute...

while reading all this i cud imagine how manik and nandu lived together all d time , sleeping in same bed, cuddling n everything...
in short i just loved it...
so pls continue soon dear... n dis time a longer update...
pls pls pretty pls... 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#54


[Thank you so much for reading my story and enjoying it. I would like to let everyone know that i dont send out pm for this story and i am sorry about it]

Besties

Part 9


Manik opened his bedside drawer and picked up the photo frame. He was facing the back of the frame. Very slowly he turned it around to have a look at it. The photograph was taken during Nandini's last birthday. Her face was full of chocolate cream and she was desperately rubbing it on his face, because he was the one to rub the entire cake on her pretty, little, chubby face.

"Sigh. I miss you baby girl. I miss you so much", he let out a pained sound. Very slowly he touched the picture with his fingertip right on her cheeks then very slowly he caressed it as if caressing it for real. He remembered how she fed him the cake.

She pushed his cheek to hollow out his lip and then dragged her nose full of cream along his lips. It was the sexiest thing one has ever done to him. For that moment he was shocked and speechless. He felt uneasy sensations at places that he never meant to feel. Yet he couldn't help himself for feeling those forbidden desire.

"Eww baby girl you are feeding your nosy along with that cake". Nandini straddles him putting her legs on both the sides and almost put her nose into his mouth.

"Ouch. You J**k" she straightened up and rubbed her nose. "you bit my nose you stupid".

"oopse sorry I thought it was a piece of cake" and he smirked naughtily. And then burst out laughing.

She started hitting him hard on his chest when he flipped her on the floor to reverse their position. He was on top and straddling her how.

"No Manik...No please" she knew what was coming because she saw him gather his saliva in his mouth. "eww no please you cant do that...not today". She kept in whimpering underneath him. But she knew that she was fighting a lost battle. He pushed her cheeks to pout her lips and the dropped a big drop of saliva on her lips.

She pinched her eyes rightly screwing up her enter face moving it sideways. She knew if she opened her mouth that spit will go directly in her mouth.

Manik's evil laughter echoed in the entire apartment. "Happy Birthday babygirl. Now it's my time to have the cake properly".

He angled his face so that his mouth, touch her cheeks this time. He savored the entire cream directly from there.

He gathered the picture close to his face then kissed directly on the frame right on the top of nandini's lips. When he retreated the frame, he could see his lips mark on it.

Next

Part Eight

Edited by -Koeli_Appy- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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manik is missing his girl so much. update soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#56

EDITED...

so who came here first MOI...

so people get a side for now... *no offense*

coming to the post...

shd i just start by saying...

m a lil confused ryt now...

cz i find it cute d way dey celebrated nandini's last bday like feeding dat cake to manik thru her nose n den manik bitting her nose...

or shd i give dat ewWw wala reaction for wat manik did in return...

i mean like seriously who does dat...

still i was grinning all d time ... 😆

so thnku for dis lovely post

one thing m sure of dat he is really missing her a lot... n d way he kissed dat picture i cud actually imagine dat n it looked just perfect *sigh*


n dear this time also it was too short ... try and write a longer one next tym...

LOved ur work... continue soon...


Edited by manan_flab - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#57
You know I love this drabble , right?
Adorable as usual...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#58
OK so I read all the parts in a go...I wish they were longer though. This is fab...and so different...amazing it is. This dependency and want...gosh it is beautiful.

Do update soon...I will be waiting for it.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#59
Manik! Sigh! How much is he missing Nandu!
Plz update soon!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#60
Awww..so cute updates..love their friendship!!

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