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Posted: 18 years ago
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on her wedding day, kripa is getting ready in her room. [and trust me she is looking a beauty. She was wearing a beautiful lahenga, imagine this on her:


she had the chunni on her head….wat say sint she looking beautiful?]
mishty comes in and becomes senti and says,
"will u miss me kripa?"
"of course I wil", she says half crying, "tumhe nahi yaad karungi toh aur kise yaad karungi?"
"Mujhe", [our dude enters.] It was angad. Kripa was shocked and was worried that he may say smething infront of mishty. Angad looked at her from top to bottom. She took his breath away. He saw each and every accessory she was wearing but missed the hollowness in her eyes.
"Of course, tumhe kaise bhuul sakti hoon." She looked at him guiltily.
"Arre angad aao na. " mishty called him in, "she is looking so pretty na?"
"yaa, achcha mishty, tumhe neeche surya uncle bula rahe hain."
She leaves from there and now angad and kripa are the only ones present in the room. Kripa turns her back to him.
"Kripa" she was happy to hear him call her. In the past one week they ahd not spoken even a single word to each other. She had expected him to understand her but he had not even bothered about her. She was very angry with him but then she remembered that she no longer had that right.
"kripa", he called her again, but she didn't move, "tumne jo mere saath kiya, use main bhulne wala toh nahi hoon, par haan jo hamara relation tha", he smirked at the word relation and kripa closed her eyes as she was hurt at wat he was saying, "usko consider karke main tumhe ek advice dena chahta hoon. Tum na jitni koshish kar sakti ho apni shaadi ko bachaane ki, karna, kyunki , ab tumhe aur tumhari shaadi ko mujhse koi nahi bacha sakta."
"angad please meri baat suno", she wanted to tell him many things, but they dint get a chance to talk, and now it seened impossible.
"Nahin kripa", he interrupted and came in front of her to afce her, "tum meri baat suno, aur kaan khol ker suno. Meri zindagi ka sirf ek maksad hai, tumhaari barbaadi. Tumne mujhse who chheen liya jo mere liye sabse zyada maine rakhta tha. But its ok." He said, his tone changed to rock solid, "its ok now. Aaj main who angad nahi hoon jo tumhe dekh kar khush ho jaata tah. Aaj main who angad hoon, jo tumhari soorat choddo tumhari shakal se bhi nafrat karat hai." Saying this he left the room.

All this time kripa listened and cried. He was not even ready to listen her. 'kaash ki angad mujhe samajhne ki zaraa see bh koshish karta. Main jaanti hoon ab wo wahi karega jo usne kaha hai. Lekin shaya main yehi deserve karti hoon.' She thot to herself and cried.

Then gayatri came. Since kripa was crying she thot it was because she was getting married. She went upto her and touched her chin and said,
"aaj meri beti kitni khoobsoorat lag rahi hai." And a tear fell from her eye. But kripa just cried. She didn't want to say anything to nayone. She knew that her life would now become a living hell. And then the time came for kripa to leave. Gayatri said,
"Kripa beta chalo." She wiped hers and kripas tears.

Kipa got up and gayatri, mishty and many others brought her down the stairs to the mandap and the song played:

Soni Banno Chan Si Chamke
Mathe Uthe Jhumkar Dame
Palka Uth Diya Ne Thum Thum Ke
Main Vari Vari Java
Soni Banno Chan Si Chamke
Mathe Uthe Jhumkar Dame
Palka Uth Diya Ne Thum Thum Ke
Main Vari Vari Java

Tu Vekh Tai Lai Aj Raj Ke
Apne Sariyan Nu
Cheti Apne Nahi Mil De
Ja Banno Pave Khushiyan Te Dil Dariyan Tu
Pave Armaan Sab Dil De
Tu Vekh Tai Lai Aj Raj Ke
Apne Sariyan Nu
Cheti Apne Nahi Mil De
Ja Banno Pave Khushiyan Te Dil Dariyan Tu
Pave Armaan Sab Dil De




When josh looked up at her he was stunned as she took away his breath. His dream ahd come true. Kripa and josh sat down on the mandap.
And the marriage happened.
btw josh was wearing this:




rimsibani thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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guyz i m not going 2 continue any more......luk i m not getting any replies. i m having my exams but still i m writing 4 u....plz if u want me to continue do reply.....this topic has more than 1000 views but only 86replies... 😭
its upsetting especially wen i m putting in so much effort....even i wanna con but then theres no point con wen u ppl r not interested. this is not fair to me.

so do reply.... 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey dont get upset.....ur fanfic is very good..and interestin...trust me...i want u 2 cont this story...but after ur exams...because ur exams r more important...ok...plz cont...
one request..plz angad ki shadi mishty se mat hote hue dikhana...plz
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Posted: 18 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: diya_snow

hey dont get upset.....ur fanfic is very good..and interestin...trust me...i want u 2 cont this story...but after ur exams...because ur exams r more important...ok...plz cont...
one request..plz angad ki shadi mishty se mat hote hue dikhana...plz




diya exams r nt a prob...i hav written the matter nd i juz have to type it...but then it doen look like its worth the effort to do this cuz only a few r interested in replyin.....look at the no. of views and i m surprised that ppl r reading it but still not replying.....now its very discouraging😭

if u want i can pm the written matter to u but i don think that i will post ma story here again.....i m disheartened hun😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: diya_snow

All the best 4 ur exams...



thanx hun😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#66
guyz i m not continuing until i dont get atleast 120 replies.
i am sorry 4 this, but i dun think it will effect ny1 except a few
i m really sorry 😭
but it is hardly worth d effort

if u think it is rude, then plz try 2 understand me....i m sorry bt i m sry i guess this is the only solution.
Edited by rimsibani - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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im really waiting eargelyn 4 ur f u stopes ur f f a veryyyyyyyy ............ scene that every 1 wana know wat happend next an plzzzzzzzzz con soioon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey ur fics marvellous dont stop it i guess i have read it so late thats why am commenting late well its also on thf fan fic section
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Posted: 18 years ago
#69
hi its too good pl conti soon 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#70
heyy im a new member of india-forum, n i thought that your story was really good... im a big KYPH n Iqbal fan... buh i think ur really good. continue writinn.. lol 😃

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