kaisayepyarhai-UNFAITHFUL PAR -47 pg 31 - Page 6

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Posted: 18 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: rimsibani


thats a nice name, i hav a niece whose name is ishita!!! i m 18 n stay in ind




cool can i add you on as a friend?
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Posted: 18 years ago
#52
OMG dat was awwwwsooommew, i loved it.plz plz plz continue soon. can't wait , is kripa b in hospital, i can't wait to know what dadi say to kripa. it took me back to the days of kyph
keep it up 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: xobrown sugaox




cool can i add you on as a friend?



yes hun.....i wud lub 2 b yer fren....😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: amneet89

OMG dat was awwwwsooommew, i loved it.plz plz plz continue soon. can't wait , is kripa b in hospital, i can't wait to know what dadi say to kripa. it took me back to the days of kyph
keep it up 👏




thanx hunz....😳.....i wil post da next part 2day
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey dear i just read all parts its mindblowing 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#56
i m sorry 4 not writin yesterday guyz.....nw within an hour i will post more 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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#14


The next day dadi called up kripa but their was a hullaboo going on at her place. Mishty picked up the phone and brought kripa on line.
D-dadi, K-kripa
D-hello, kripa?
K-jee dadi.
D-mere ghar aa jao, abhi.
And that's it, she kept the fone down.
Angad was still sleeping but dadi had woken him up and told him to sleep in the bedroom. She herself was waiting in the drawing room for kripa. Atlast after half an hour, kripa came. She was looking very miserableand her left arm was bandaged (we know y….)
"Aao kripa", dadi called out to her. She was sitting on the sofs. Her eyes were full of hate, wchich kripa did not miss.
"Congratulations", she said sarcastically, but kripa was surprised, she thot that atleast she would understand,
"Dadi aap bhi?", she was hurt.
"Kripa, tumne aisa kyun kiya?"
"Dadi", she said looking at nothing and lost, "hum kabhi kuch nahi karte. Kismet humse karati hai."
"Pahelian mat bujhao. Kya chahiye, sidhe sidhe baat karo." Dadi was rude to kripa. [obviously]
"Dadi, plz mujhe samajhne ki koshish kijiye."
"kya samjhoon kripa? Haan? Kya samjhoon? Mera pota kal raat ko aake mujhe kehta hai, 'kill me', toh main kya sumjhoon?" she said a lil above talking and a lil below yelling.
"Kya? Angad? Kya hua use? Owh theek toh hai na?" she was shocked.
"who tumhare liye", she paused, "mar gaya."
"Nahi dadi, nahi aisa mat kahiye. Plz" she started crying.
"Haan kripa, kal tumne mere angad ko maar diya. Ab jo angad tumhe milega who tumse itni nafrat karega, ki tumhaare aas paas jitna bhi pyaar hoga, who use nasht kar dega." She said satisfied.
Kripa snorted and said, "dadi, main bhi zinda hoon. Ab who jo chahta hai who kar sakta hai."
Now dadi noticed that even kripa was not looking better than angad and then she noticed her ahnd, but still wanted to believe it was her mistake and so she said,
"bekar ka drama karna band kardo kripa—"
"Bas kijiye dadi. Bas." Kripa interrupted and then she told the whole story to her and in the end, burst out crying.
"Ab bataiye dadi, kya galti hai meree?"
Dadi was horrified and was sorry that she spoke so rudely to kripa and thot, 'he bhagwan inke saath tu ye kya kar raha ahi? Kyun khel raha hai inki zindagi ke saath?'
"kripa, beta, mujhe maaf kardo. Maine job hi tumhe kaha, usse yeh pata chalta hai ki maine sirf apne pot eke bare mein socha, tumhare bare mein nahi. I m sorry.' She got up and hugged her.
"Nahi dadi, please ab aap aise mat kahiye. Aap bas angad ko sambhaliye. Kismet yahan tak laayi hai, toh aage bhi jayegi."
She wiped her tears and continued,
"Dadi ab main chalti hoon, ghar pe sab mujhe dhoond rahe honge." And then she left.



sorry 4 writin so lil...i willa dd up soo 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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#15


At 11 am Angad woke up and for a second did noremember anything, like where he was, why was he upset. But it din take him more than a few seconds to figure it all out. He got up closed his eyes and thot for a moment, opened his eyes and thot, 'now I am much better.'
He freshened up and went down to the breakfast table, where dadi was sitting. He looked very tired and worn out.
"Dadi", he greeted.
"Aao angad, baitho." She applied butter on a toast for him and he ate it.
"Ab kaisa feel kar rahe ho?"
"theek hoon dadi" he said biting into his toast.
"sorry dadi, maine kal aapko aake disturb kiya. Maine aapko tang toh nahi kiya?"
"angad?", she said sharpely, "dadi ko sorry bolta hai. Amarungi main." She said. She studied him carefully while he ate his toast. She noticed there was a difference in him. He sounded different.
"kya hau dadi? Aise kya dekh rahe ho?"
"dekh rahi hoon, tu kitna badla hua lag raha hai." And then it struck him. Her prediction was right. He was ready with all his might to take his revenge from kripa. 'oh my god.' She thot.
"'dadi, ab main na sab kuch theek kar doonga. Sab ko apni apni jagah dikha dunga." He said slyly and sneered, "dadi", he looked towards his toast below and continued, "main jaanta hoon ki u know what I ma going to do." He said matter of factly.
"Agar tu yeh jaanta hai, toh yeh bhi janta hoga ki I don't approve of it."
"Haan dadi." He said while applying butter on his second toast.
"Angad, aaj yahan kripa aayi thi." But he did not show any feeling and dadi thot, 'this is dangerous'.
"toh" he asked. He knew he was being rude but also knew that she wud side for her. "main jaanta hun dadi, ab aap kahengi ki kripa sahi hai aur main galat." He laughed in a silly way.
"Good. Angad dhyaan se suno." She became serious. "tum kripa se koi badla nahi loge. Who bahut stress mien hai. Aur agar tum upar se aisa karoge toh wo bimaar pad jayegi." He started to speak but she interrupted, "Tum usse pyaar karte the, ho aur rahoge. To fir tum use dukhi kaise dekh sakte ho?"
"Jaise who mujhe dekh sakti hai." His answer was straight short and their was no reply to it.
"kripa yeh sab majboori mein kar rahi hai."
"Kaisi majboori dadi?" he knew now dadi is definitely on kripas side.
"Who yeh sab mishty ke liye kar rahi hia. Yeh tum jaante ho fir kyun pooch rahe ho?"
"Toh theek hai na dadi. Main bhi ab jo karunga, majboori mein karunga, main who sab apne liye karunga."
"Angad try to make sense out of it." She kind of pleaded.
"nahi dadi. Yeh meri aur kripa ki ladayee hai. Please aap isme mat aaiye." He said this and got ready to leave. As he got to the door, she said,
"Kripa sahi hai, aur main sahi ke saath hoon." He turned and said,
"Aur main apne saath hoon."
Dadi knew what it meant. It meant, war is declared.


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Posted: 18 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: tava

greta part continue soon 😊



tahnx tava...hun u know u gonna becum a senior member soon....
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Posted: 18 years ago
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#16


Angad reached home, took a bath, freshened up and called josh.
J:hello. Hi angad.
A:hey, hi josh. Sale congratulations.
J:chalo der se hi sahi, yaad toh aaya.
A:achcha, tu kya kar raha ahi?
J:kuch nahi…bhua bas taiyyari kar rahi hain. Abhi aadhe ghante mein who kripa ke ghar shagun dene nikal jaayengi. Angad felt a shot of rage.
A;haan, toh tu toh nahi jaayega naa. He said regaining his coolness.
J;obviously. Apna shagun main thode leke jaunga. Duffer. Achcha tu idhar aaja.
A;obviously. Waise ek baat bolun? Tu na zaraa apne peeche dekh. Josh turned and saw that angad waz standing there.
J:tub hi na angad. Josh smiled and hugged him.
A:chori chori shaadi kaunkar raha hai? Bataya kyun nahi/
J: Ab yeh sab chhod, cha lab mere saath meree shaadi ke kapde khareed.

They went off and did the shopping.


[ guyz I m not going into the details of shagun mehandi and engagement. So just imagine they happened😆😆😆. But just make a mental note, that during these three ceremonies kripa saw josh and angad having fun and wondered why he wasn't showing any emotion. He dint create any hindrance to hre marriage. Infact he looked as if he enjoyed it very much. And now this is what is troubling her.]


I m sorry I m ritin lil parts…..i m havin ma exams so I may not be able 2 write as often as I do….but hey more cumin up in 20 minutes…


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