Fan fic (first love) - Page 6

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G: Kripa where were u for the whole day. It was really fun we went sight seeing.

K: nowhere I was just here.

G: oh r u ok?? U don't look that good.

K: yeah I'm fine.

G: Alright then lets go have dinner. Everybody's downstairs.

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Kripa is going downstairs for dinner. She is wearing the salwar kameez she was wearing before. her face is very pale coz she had been crying. she sees Angad sitting at a table but she tries to avoid him. She is downstairs n sees that there r only two tables left with seats. One table has Angad n the other has Shaan. Gehna runs to Shaan's table n sits down. Kripa hesitantly sits infront of Angad.

A:Hey kripa, kripa, naaraaz ho mujhse? Maine sorry kehdiya na.

Kripa isnt looking at him n isnt responding either

A:Main to sirf mazak kar raha tha. Kab serious hogaya, pata hi nahin chala

She still isnt responding

A:Kripa, please, kuch to bolo. Mujhse khafa matt ho please.

He holds her hand which is on the table. She moves her hand. He then gets up n goes on the stage

A:Ladies n gentlemen, may i have ur attention pls.

Now Kripa turns n looks at him speaking

A:I would like to sing a song for someone jo mujhse root gayi hai. Please bear with me. (in his mind he is thinking of a song that will make Kripa laugh)

Teri kurti sexy lagdi ve kurti sexy

Teri chunri sexy lagdi ve chunri sexy

Lagdi ve lagdi ve, lagdi ve lagdi ve

teri chunri sexy

Everyone is cheering n clapping for Angad while Kripa is crying as she feels disgusted. She gets up from the table n leaves. Angad goes after her

A:hey kya huya? Gaana acha nahin laga kya? Im sorry. Main to sirf mazak kar raha tha

He grabs Kripa's arm n she turns around n says angrily

K:Mazak? haan Angad. tumhare liye sab mazak hai. Jo tumne upar kiya mazak tha aur jo ab kiya woh bhi mazak hai. Tum to behek rahe the upar par tum use mazak ka naam de kar mukar jaate. Par mere liye ye mazak nahin hai. jabse main tumse milli hoon, maine tumhari har baat ko mazak maana hai. Par ab nahin. Serious hona seek lo Angad. Tumhare kaam ayenga.

Saying that she leaves to go to her room. A silent Angad is standing there thinking about what has just hit him. He has never been lectured like this in his life. N he hasnt ever taken anyone seriously in life either. But Kripa's words kept repeating in his ears. A tear drops from Angad's eye.

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A:hey kya huya? Gaana acha nahin laga kya? Im sorry. Main to sirf mazak kar raha tha

He grabs Kripa's arm n she turns around n says angrily

K:Mazak? haan Angad. tumhare liye sab mazak hai. Jo tumne upar kiya mazak tha aur jo ab kiya woh bhi mazak hai. Tum to behek rahe the upar par tum use mazak ka naam de kar mukar jaate. Par mere liye ye mazak nahin hai. jabse main tumse milli hoon, maine tumhari har baat ko mazak maana hai. Par ab nahin. Serious hona seek lo Angad. Tumhare kaam ayenga.

Saying that she leaves to go to her room. A silent Angad is standing there thinking about what has just hit him. He has never been lectured like this in his life. N he hasnt ever taken anyone seriously in life either. But Kripa's words kept repeating in his ears. A tear drops from Angad's eye.

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Kripa enters her room n falls on the bed crying. She is very upset of what had happened today. She is even worried n scared as Angad's room is next to hers. She thinks that he could do anything

Meanwhile Angad is in his room thinking of the mess that he has created. He really wants to make it up to her. But he doesnt know how too. he has never been into a situation like this

A:Main ab kya karoo? Mere saath ye pehle kabhi hua nahin. Nahin kisi ladki ne mujhe manaa kiya hai aur nahin main kabhi behek gaya. To phir aaj kya hua? Damn it man!!! I should try talking to her one last time. Par woh mujhe apne kamre mein aane nahin degi. i got an indea

He writea a note n slips it under Kripa's door n leaves, Kripa opens the note n reads it. It says:

Kripa, main jaanta hoon ki jo aaj maine kiya woh galat tha. Par mera yakeen karo ki maine tumhe hurt karne ki koshish nahin ki. Hum dono mille galti se, jagre galti se aur aaj ro rahe hai galti se. Main jaanta hoo ki tum mujhse milna nahin chahti. Aur agar main tumhe kisi akele jagah par bulaoo to tum nahin aaoge. isliye main tumhe coffee shop mein tumhara intezar karoonga. Please Kripa, aajao. Gunhegaar ko bhi doozra mauka milta hai. Please, mujhe apni galti sudharne ka mauka do. I'll be waiting for u. Please come soon.

Angad

Kripa reads the letter n thinks"ye kya mazak hai? Ab kya chahiye use? Dil dukha kar chain nahin mila?" But then she thinks again"Nahin, usne kuch jaan mooch kar nahin kiya. Aur usne mujhe hurt karne ki koshish bhi nahin ki. Woh itna bhi bura nahin hai" N then she thinks "nahin Kripa, woh bura hai. uski to aadat hai ladkiyon ke saath ye sab karta hai. Aur uski reputation bhi kharaab hai. Aur woh mini skirts, usne hi zavardasti tumhe pehene ke liye kaha tha." Kripa is in a mess n confused n says

K:Hey Bhagwaan, main kya karoo? Iska hal kaha se layoo?

Meanwhile Angad is in the coffee shop waiting 4 Kripa. He turns around to see Kripa looking at him. He smiles n gets up to walk toward her. She walks towards him too.

A:I'm glad ki tum aayi. Thanx. Baitho.

They sit down

K:Kaho, kya kehna hai tumhe?

Angad looks at her then starts to speak...

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