Hey guys me, kaj, sunshine, and divya have written this fan-fic so far. I hope u guys like it. We'll continue soon
Part 1: by sunshine
a young girl with beutiful eyes, gr8 hair, pettie and simple anmed kripa lands at the mumbai station with her father. there she goes to stay with her father's friend to learn music. she is staying there and everyone is nice to her except for a few ppl. she meets a smart, debonair young man there who happens to be the son of her father's friend. his name is angad. he is passionate a born flirt. he also a rock star( i know the start is the same but had to keep the spirit of the show alive.).
they meet each other in the music academy. kripa is walkin in the corridor. angad is talkin to someone in the corridor and kripa is walkin her nose deep into books and a wlakman on her head. she doesnt see him and bangs into him. her books fall down and angad bends down to help her.
their eyes meet.............they keep on lookin..... at each other...
Part 2: by deepey
A: what the hell. Dekh kar chala karo. Can't u see through those fat ass glasses ur wearing.
K: oops sorry. I didn't mean too.
angad just brushes her off, yeah yeah whatever.
They both walk past eachother.
somebody else do it, i really have no energy left after I eat dinner. I'm feeling really lazy.
PART 3: by Kaj
Angad goes to the canteen in the academy to get himself coffee. He gets the coffee n turns around. He accidentally spills the coffee on the girl behind him in the queue. The girl is kripa. She is shocked n her top is stained with the coffee.
Angad:Damn i didnt see u there.
Kripa:Thanx for the shower (in a jokey kind of a way. not rude)
Angad:Hey its not my fault. Y were u so near to me in the queue
Kripa:Hello?! This is a queue. If i stand 5 metres away from u, someone else will push in. U know its ur fault but ur not gonna agree to it. N sorry, u dont even know the meaning of that word right? Instead of saying sorry ur blaming everything on me.
Angad:well u bumped into me in the morning too.
Kripa: Yes i know. It was my fault n i said sorry. Now its ur fault say sorry.
Angad:What?! Forget it!
Kripa:uff...theres no point waisting my time on u. Keep ur sorry to ur self n make sure ur ego isnt bigget than ur head or else u wont be able to walk through the door.
Saying that she leaves n looks at her leaving furiously. He is confused. He has never been spoken like that to by anyone. For the first time someone who is young has dominated him (thats what he feels like). Then he shakes his head thinking "Kaisi ladki hai uff". Then he spots this slim n sexy girl. so now he is busy chatting her up as usual.
Part :4 by deepey
Angad is chatting wid some girl while Kripa just looks at him angrily.
She leaves from there. She goes home and her mom says, "Kripa beta hurrry up and go get changed. Today ur dad's best friend and his family are coming over for dinner."
K: ok mom. I'll be right back.
In the evening Naina, Dilip, Angad, and Karthick come to their house.
Everybody is hugging and chatting while Angad is just sitting there being ignorant. he thinks "Kaha mom ne phasa diya."
Just then Kripa comes out with some juice for everybody, looking really pretty in a baby blue plain salwaar suit.
Angad is shocked seeing Kripa. Kripa also looks at him but doesn't say anything.
She hugs Naina and Dilip and simply says hi to Angad and Karthick.
(I'm making all the family members positive)
Then she goes back inside in her room.
Outside everybody is eating and enjoying thmselves while Angad just keeps looking at the door in which kripa went. He feels really uncomfortable.
Kripa's dad notices this and says, "R u ok beta. I know u must not be used to this. Being a famous rockstar and all."
A: no i'm ok uncle I just need some fresh air.
Kripa's dad: "ok why won't u go outside and have a walk. i'll ask Kripa to show u around."
He calls Kripa outside, "Kripa beta tum Angad ko apna ghar dekhao, garden, show him the paintigs that u made."
(By the way Kripa's family is pretty rich too)
Part-5 by Kaj
Then Kripa comes into the living the living room n doesnt look so please.
She looks at Angad n says "Chaliyen".
They both start walking towards the Garden
Angad: Hum bahar kyun jaa rahein hai?
Kripa: Aap ne hi to kaha tha ki aap ko fresh air chahiye
Angad:Haan chahiye par mujhe tumhara ghar dekhna hai, tumhari paintings aur most importantly, tumhara bedroom.
Kripa isnt too pleased
Kripa:sorry par main kisi areh gaireh ko apna kamra nahin dikhati. Par kyun ki papa ne kaha hai to main tumhe dikhaoongi. BUT Dont touch anything in it. ok?
Angad:yeah ok whatever
They enter her bedroom n Angad feels like he is in paradise. He looks around him. He is mesmerised by her photos n paintings.
Angad: Nice pics yaar. U look much better in the photos.
Kripa:Thanx (sarcastically)
Kripa is feeling irritated n uncomfortable around him coz of what happened in the academy. But she still speaks to him politely as he is a guess in her house.
Kripa: Aap kuch peeyenge?
Angad: Yeah sure.
She goes downstairs to get him something to drink. Meanwhile Angad is roaming around her room touching her things. He spots her diary. He reads todays entry:
Uff...what a crap day. Pata nahin kiska chehra dekha tha maine ute samay. Academy ek batameez ladka milla. Kya naam hai uska..haan Angad the rockstar. Ghamandi. Sorry kehna nahin jaanta. Samajtha hoga ki har ladki usse inferior hai. I dont think so. hes dealt with the wrong girl. Agar woh aaj sorry kehta to shayad main uske baare mein ye sab nahin likthi par usne mera mood kharab kar diya. Sirf mood bhi nahin, t-shirt bhi.
Angad is amused by this. Kripa comes into the room n sees him with the diary. She puts the drink on the table n snatches the diary off him
Kripa:How dare u? Maine kaha tha na kisi bhi cheez ko haath mat lagana. To phir tumne mere diary ko kyun khola?
Angad:Agar private hai to samhaal kar rakna chahiye, table par nahin rakna chahiye. Waise Kripa, parne do naa. Mere itni taarif kiya hai apni diary mein. Main tumhari previous entries bhi parna chahti hoon
Angad is trying to get the diary off her but she is trying to run n holding it behind her.
Kripa:Angad no, go away.
She bangs onto the table n some pics of her fall. They r modelling type pics where she is wearing sexy outfits. Angad sees this n is impress n cant get his eyes off the pics.
Angad:Wow!!! Tum sexy bhi ho? Yummy!
Kripa:ANGAD!!!
Angad:arre sach hi to keh raha hoon. Tum modelling karti ho kya?
Kripa:Nahin woh mere cousins mere ghar ayethe aur hum ne aise hi, mazaak ke liye photos khinche. Pls give me my photos.
Kripa's mum: Kripa...Kripa, neeche aajao. Angad ko bhi boolao, khaana ready hai.
Kripa is tensed n saying:Ayi mum
She leaves her diary on the table n rushes down stairs. Angad puts the pics in the diary n tucks his diary in the back of his trousers. He pulls his shirt out to cover it. He goes downstairs to join them for dinner
Part 6 (combined) : by divya and deepey
all are downstairs kripa is little bit worried about what happened in her room actually she was getting little bit embarresed infront of angad coz he saw her pics with the sexyoutfits then shegoes back to her room and finds that her diary and the pics are missing then she knows that angad might have too them
then she comes downstairs gains some courage and asks angad
kripa--angad kya tumne meri diary le hai
angad--kya
kripa--(this time she asks him in loud voice )angad kya tumne meri diary aur mere photos lee hai
angad--nahi mein tumhari diary aur photos kyun longa
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Kripa runs downstairs and after a while Angad comes too. They all eat dinner. Angad is sitting next to Kripa.
A: Aunty the food is really good. I love the kheer that u made.
K's mom: actually beta Kripa made the kheer.
Angad looks at Kripa: oh.
After dinner they all leave, K's mom and Dad go too their room to sleep.
Kripa's still in the living room watching tv. When there's a knock on the door. Kripa hesitates a bit but still opens the door slowly and sees that its Angad.
K: tum, what r u doing here again
A: oh how sweet.
K: I know i am, but what r u doing here.
A: I left my wallet in ur room.
K: How can u leave ur wallet in my room. You didn't even take it out.
A: Yeah but it must have fell when I was chasingu, or someone might have stolen it.
K: oh tumhari soch bhi na. Fine come wid me.
She takes him to her room
She looks around and says "see it's not here"
A: How do I know that u didn't hide it somewhere.
K: Why would i hide it, i don't need ur money. I'm rich baby.
A: I'm still gonna check
He looks around, opens all her closets, throws all her stuff everywhere.
K: what the hell r u doing.
She grabs him by the arm and says, "get out of my room."
A: ok ok I wasn't planning on staying either.
K: hogayi apko tasali, did u find ur wallet.
A: no, but i'm sure u hid it somewhere.
K: ok then good luck trying to proove that. Bye now.
She pushes him out of her room and her house.
At the door she says sweetly, "bye I'll see u in the morning"
Angad leaves.
The next day at the academy. Angad is sitting in the canteen.
When an angry Kripa is walking to him. She grabs the coffee that he was drinking and yells, "I want my diary back right now."
A: hi kripa, good morning. How r u doing?
K: Shut up Angad mujhe meri diary wapas chahiye.
A: Diary what diary???
Part:7 by Kaj
Angad:arre naraaz kyun hote ho. Maine abhi tak 1st chapter nahin para hai.
Kripa: Angad, mujhe mere photos aur diary wapas chahiye.
Angad: Arre tum aise maang rahe ho jaise tum mujh par favour kar rahe ho. Thoda pyar se. politely.
Kripa: Angad, PLEASE give my things back. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE
Angad: Nahin
Kripa:Huh?
Angad:haan nahin. Im quite bored when i get bored. ur diary will entertain me. aur tumhare photos....ooooh sexy...mind blowing...gorgeous. Mujhe tumhare photos se pyar ho gaya hai (sarcastically).
Kripa:ANGAD!!! ( she calms down) Angad pls. Mere liye woh photos kuch khaas nahin. Agar tum chaho to tum unhe jalaa bhi sakte ho. Par pls meri diary wapas kar do. Woh sirf diary nahin, meri zindagi hai.
She is upset n leaves quietly leaving a confused Angad behind.
Angad is at home now n its the evening. He is lying on his bed n thinking about what Kripa had said. He goes to open n read the book but Kripa's words r still in his mind.
He decides to return it back to her.
Kripa is at home alone as her parents have gone out for a business party. She hears the door bell n goes to open the door,
Kripa: tum?
Angad:haan woh main tumhari diary lautaane ayaa hoon
He gives her the diary back
Angad:im sorry
Kripa: Kya? Kya kaha tumne? Kuch sunai nahin diya
Angad: Im...im sorry. Main shayad bahot bura hoon. logo ko tang karta hoon. par main tina bhi bura nahin hoon ki main kisiki zindagi cheen loo
Kripa is suprised at his words n says thanx
Angad:mujhe chalna chahiye
Kripa:ok
Angad:bye good night
Kripa:Good night
Kripa is so happy to have her diary back that she didnt care about the photos
Angad goes to his room n sees her pics on the table. He looks at them n thinks"mujhe Kripa ko ye lautaana chahiye"
Then he looks at the photos n says: Naa. These photos r irresistable. They r mine now.
Part 8: by deepey
He looks at the pics and thinks, "Damn she really is sexy. Why does she always hides herself behind thoose salwar kammez."
He then goes to sleep.
The next morning, he sees her at the academy reading a book.
He goes up to her and sits right next to her, she doesn't notice him. He says, "kripa" she still doesn't notice him. He gets mad and takes the book away. kripa yells, "Angad stop bothering me. i wanna read its really interesting."
Angad stands up and holds his arm high, the book in his hand. He says, "shorty, if u can reach it it's urs."
Kripa jumps up and down like a lil kid. Angad laughs and says, "oye monkey. go back to ur zoo."
Kripa gets mad and stands on the table she gets it from him.
K: "Angad why r u bothering me today, what happened to all ur sexy girls here. Don't tell me that u've been wid all of em already."
Angad smiles at her and says, "na, I'm bored of em now."
K: ur justttttttt
A: just what ha
K: just disgusting.
She gets up and walks to her class. Angad follows her.
K: why r u following me.
A: coz ur leading
K: Angad (she wines like a lil kid) please let me read my book in peace na.
A: nope, what is soo interesting about the book anywayz.
K: Its really good. the girl in it falls for this bad boy, who hurts her alot, but then in the end he realizes that he loves her.
A: That's all bull-shit. this pyaar vyaar. Anyways u already know the ending so why r u reading it.
K: coz I want too. ok now stop interviewing me.
Part 9: (combined) by Kaj and deepey
The next day Kripa goes to the academy n is searching for Angad. He sees him in the queue in the canteen she goes behind him.
Kripa:Hi Angad
Angad turns around to see who it is n ends up spilling coffee on her top again
Angad:Oh Sh**
Kripa:kya humari mulaaqat har roz aise hi hogi kya?
Angad: N this time its not my fault so dont expect an apology from me
saying that he walks off n starts talking to this girl. Kripa comes next to him
Kripa:Angad...Angad, I wanna say something
Angad:yeah..1 minute, busy right now.
Kripa:Angad pls
The girl walks away as she had to go somewhere
Angad:Kripa,look what uve done. Mera time barbaad kar diya.
Kripa:Main yahan tumse thanx kehne ke liye aayithi. Tumne meri diary lautayi.
Angad:Bas kehdiya?Mood off hogaya
Kripa:tum aise behave kyun kar rahe ho? Mere saath baat karne mein sharam aati hai?
Angad: aur nahin to kya. Aur yeh kya kapre paine hue ho. Bilkool ladkon ki tarha.
Kripa:Ye track suit hai. Whats wrong in it?
Angad:tum mini skirts kyun nahin pehenti?
Kripa:mini skirts? woh bhi academy mein? tumhara dimaag kharab hai
Angad:u will look sexy n much better than now. U will look hot... gorgeous, pretty, irresistable
Kripa:bas bas. Say no more. Chi ur disgusting
Angad:wrong. Im a man. aur har aadmi ke dimaag mein yehi chalta hai. Get used to it hunny.
Kripa:uff ye ladka bhi
she walks off angrily
Angad who is watching her walk:Uff ye ladki bhi
She runs away, but Angad just doesn't leave her alone he runs after her.
K: what is it now.
A: nothing, I'm bored Kripa, its really fun talking to u.
k: well ur a boring person
A: awww ur so sweet
K: Angad please na.
A: ok meri ma, I'm leaving. Here sit wid ur book.
K: Thanku, for letting me read my book
A: ur welcome and when u two get married don't forget to invite me.
K: ok I won't
A: bye
K: ok bye, go now.
He goes away, thinking "this gurl is crazy."
They both go to class.
(I'm changing the story a bit. Angad isn't a rockstar but still rich. Kripa and angad take the same classes at the academy.)
Angad goes in and sees kripa, he goes to her and says, "u know what Kripa I never noticed u before. But now where ever I go ur there."
k: ummm maybe thats coz the classes just started two days ago.
A: ha that could be the reason
K: just shut up.
The teacher comes in and tells them that there is gonna be a field trip to Delhi. Anyrbody who's interested can sign up.
Part 10: by kaj
ok i'll mix mine n deepey's story together. Kripa is in the classroom sitting nxt to Angad after they met in the canteen. The teacher is announcing the field trip to delhi.
Angad:so u wanna go?
Kripa:Where?
Angad:to hell, where do u think?
Kripa:naa im quite happy here. But i think u should go
Angad:main delhi ki baat kar raha hoon
Kripa:i dunno. Shayad
Angad:Shayad ka kya matlab?
Kripa:maybe. Main delhi jaa kar kya karoongi.
Angad:masti karenge aur kya
Kripa:Tum bhi jaa rahe ho?
Angad:haan
Kripa:to phir main nahin jaaongi
Angad:kyun? Mere saath sharam aati hai kya?
Kripa:aur nahin to kya? tum sirf gandi baatein karte ho. Sharam to ayegi hi naa?
Angad:hey come on Kripa, be a sport. Chalo na.
Kripa:ok ok, sochoongi. Khush
Angad:
Angad:aur haan, packing karte waqt, salwar kameez nikaal kar, mini skirts or dresses pack karna. U'll look hot...gorgeous, sexy...irresistable.
Kripa:ANGAD!!! Ur so sick. Leave me alone
She walks off again n Angad is thinking "ye ladki bhi naa, bilkul pagal hai. Uff"
Part 11: by deepey
A: looks after her thiining god this gurl is crazy.
That night Kripa is home alone when the phone rings.
K: hello
hello
K: umm who's this
tumhari maut
K: what, who's this
suna hai, that ur parents are out on a business trip and ur home alone.
K: what who's this
She runs to the door and locks it.
K: hello, hello.
The person hangs up.
kripa is hella scared. She checks the house and thinks I should call somebody.
Just then the door bell rings, kripa is hella scred she goes to the door and slowly opens it. Somebody goes BOOM.
Kripa gets hella scared but its just Angad, he's laughing like crazy at the door and kripa is shaking. She starts hitting him, and yelling: "Angad, u stupid, pagal, duffer, u know u scared me to death."
angad comes inside still laughing and closes the door, "aww poor baby got scared."
Kripa hits him again. "I swear what if i had gotten a heart atteack or something."
A: don't worry, I won't let u die that easily. I still have to torture u.
kripa hits him Again and says " god angad the pjone call really scared me."
A: what phone call, i din't call u
K (gets scared): what if u didn't call me than who was it.
Angad looks at her face and laughs again.
Kripa hits him again, "oh so it was u"
A: god yaar i think u broke some of my bones. Ouch stop hitting me.
K: waisey what r u doing here.
A: nothing, I came to ask if ur going to the field trip. Have u decided yet.
K: No, i stll have to ask my parents
A: why, ur old enough. You can make ur own decisions
K: yeah but still
Part 12: by kaj
A: hey im sure they wont mind u going.
K:I know. Lekin main nahin jaana chahti.
A:Kyun?
K:Meri marzi. Ab tum jaa sakte ho. Tumhe sharam nahin aati. Itni raat ko ek ladki ke ghar aate hue.
A:sharam waram, what is that? mujhe sharam nahin aati. Hey Kripa, jab tak tum jaane ke liye haan nahin ke dete main jaaonga nahin
K:Kya???tum yahin rahoge?
A:Ofcourse
K:to phir raho, mujhe kya
Angad gets irritated n naughty at the same time. he goes behind Kripa n lifts her up n swings her. She is screaming
K:ANGAD!!! Chodo chodo.
Angad lyes her down on the sofa n lifts her top n tickles her tummy. She is kicking her legs in the air n laughing non stop
K:Angad stop it pls pls. aaargh pls
A:nahin, jab tak tum haan nahin keh dete main nahin rukoonga.
K:ok ok. Yes. main jaaongi
He stops n covers her tummy. He is sitting on the floor while she sits on the sofa. They look at each other n laugh. Kripa gets a magazine from the table n roles it up n hits him with it. SHe chases him round the house. Then he finally goes out the house runnig while she is catching up
A:Bye Kripa see u 2moro. Meet u at college n be early coz we r all gonna leave for dehli at 8 am.
He says that drives off. She is looking at him driving away n smiling to herself thinking "Pagal. Shaitaan"
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