Fan fic (first love) - Page 4

too good u guys are doing brilliant job keep posting ur conclusion its too good i really enjoy reading them

ok let me continue

part 15 continued

sorry its too short but this is what i can write

kripa also is little bit upset coz she also wanted to go for the site seeing and somehow upset coz just because of her angad has also missed it

then both look at each other and say at the same time"ABHHHH"

angad says--kripa tum kaho

kripa--nahi angad tumkaho

angad--kripa ladies first tum kaho

kripa--ok let me tell abh hum kya karenge

angad--kya karenge matlab tumne mera pura din to barbat kardiya abh koi kami baki hai kya

kripa-- little bit angry but was feeling sorry and was feeling bad also

angad notices it tand tells--arre kripa mein to mazak kar raha tha accha hi huwa waise bhi mujhe us boing sight seeing pe nahi janatha(he just lies to her )

now some1 please continue it

👏 Really good divya. Please continue if u can.

I'm waiting for Kaj.

Kaj where r u??? I don't have time right now to continue. coz I'm writing my other fan-fic. I'll try to continue when I'm done wid that.

Luv ya raman

ok let me continue

well then they both plan how to spent the entire day then there is a person walking he calls that person and asks

angad- to the person--is there any place to watch near by

other person--yes ofcourse there is a very beautiful and romantic place nearly every honeymoon couples goes there

and then the person explains the place and goes

angad to kripa-- to chale?

kripa--kya tumhara dimak to kaam kar raha hai na tum ne suna nahi honeymoon, romantic

angad--to kya huwa yaar par usne bautiful to kaha tha na aur tumhe beautiful jage kitni pasand hai

kripa--woh to hai par

angad--are yeh par baar chhoro aur chalo

well this is it now i cant continue anymore my fingers are paining

👏👏 Really good Divya.

I'l try to continue as soon as possible.

that was really good diviy!!!!

some please continue ahed and fast

GOLDI2

hello some one please do continue

where are u all deepey, kaj

I'll write the next part, just gimme a lil bit of time pleaseee.

ok i give u alittle bit of time please do continue

angad--to kya huwa yaar par usne bautiful to kaha tha na aur tumhe beautiful jage kitni pasand hai

kripa--woh to hai par

angad--are yeh par baar chhoro aur chalo

I'll continue from here

K: ok fine, but how the hell r we gonna get there, I'll tell u one thing, I'm not walking there.

A: Ok maharani ji. Here I'll pick u up.

He tries to pick her up, but she moves back

K: stop it angad.

Angad laughs: yaar its not that far, he said its at the end of this road. Comeon lets go it'll be fun. Something adventerous.

K: ha ha ha, adventerous. Apni shakal dekhi hai. I'm not used to walking.

A: ok fine then u stay here and I'll go by myself.

He starts walking after a while Kripa also runs after him.

K: oye ruko, ok fine I'll go wid u.

A: ab ayi na line pe.

The walk to the place.

When they enter, Kripa feels like she's in heaven. Everything around her is beautiful. But she sees that the place is filled with couples. She's a bit embarrased. Angad notices this so he tells her. "Look kripa there's also a casino here, u wanna go."

K: yeah lets go.

They go in ther and win some money.

When coming out. Angad says, "Kripa ur pretty lucky for me."

K: I know, ain't I.

A: ok don't get over excited.

K: Now what, where should we go.

A: There's a mall across the street, lets go we have to spend this money now na. And I'll buy u some nice outfits. Some sexyyy ones.

Kripa hits him: noooo

A: ok fine, but come wid me atleast.

they both go to the mall.

I'll continue later.

luv ya raman😛