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Posted: 20 years ago
#21
Please yaar continue fast it's too good!!! Really addicting!!!
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Originally posted by: simplyconfused

it is just tooo good!!👏

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Posted: 20 years ago
#23

its a great story

thanks alot

please continue.......................

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Posted: 20 years ago
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nice job! i will cont one of the part too i just dont know how to cont rite now! 😆
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Part 14 -continued

They both go to sleep. While Kripa and gehna also change and go to sleep.

The next morning they all wake up, get ready and meet downstairs in the lobby. Gehna comes downstairs and goes straight to shaan, she hugs him. Angad who's looking at them thinks, "loosers, jaisi shakal hai waisey girlfriend😈" Angad introduces himself.

A: hey I'm Angad, shaan's roommate, u must be his girlfriend right.

G: yeah, hi. How r u.

S: Gehna, where's Kripa

Angad is listening very careful now.

G: I don't know yaar, I'm hella worried about her, when I woke up this morning she wasn't in the room. I looked everywhere. But she wasn't there.

Angad is really worried now. He thinks, "yeh ladki bilkul pagal hai. I should've never left her alone."

he starts looking around for her. While all the other students r getting in hte bus to go sight seeing. Angad checks in the bus but she isn't in there. So he gets out and looks for her. He searches the whole hotel but doesn't find her. In the end he goes in the back where there's a lil water fall. he sees kripa there sitting on a bench looking really relaxed. Watching the ducks in the lil pond. Angad is mesmerized by her innocence and beauty. but at the same time he gets really angry.

He runs to her and yells.

A: R u f****n crazy. you could've told somebody that u were gonna be here. i was looking everywhere for u like crazy and ur sitting here enjoying urself.

Kripa looks up and simply says, "who told u to look for me in the first place. Listen I'm not in the mood to hear ur backwaas this early in the morning. Please its soo peaceful here, ur bothering me."

angad who is really tired from running around holds his stomach and sits down next to her.

A: so this is what i get for being soo nice. First time in my life I thought I was doing the right thing in looking for u. you're so .....

K: so what

A: i don't know. I'm hella tired from running everywhere.

he puts his head on Kripa's shoulder and relaxes a bit.

Kripa looks at him but doesn't move. She lets him rest.

K: why were u looking for me in the first place.

A: Coz,............ oh shit. The bus has prolly left by now.

He grabs her hand and they run to the front of the hotel. the bus has already left.

A: see ehat u did now. My whole day is gonna be wasted, They're gonna come back at night and i'm gonna be stuck here wid u. Oh Angad this is exactly what u get for trying to be noce. Just great.

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Posted: 20 years ago
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lol.... but i htink krips is beeing kinda meen.. i eman poor anjad loook for her and also missed the bus since he was look for and she gosh sooo much atittude lol

anywyas

later

GOLDI2

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Posted: 20 years ago
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Originally posted by: goldi2

lol.... but i htink krips is beeing kinda meen.. i eman poor anjad loook for her and also missed the bus since he was look for and she gosh sooo much atittude lol

anywyas

later

GOLDI2



goldi, I love your comments on every fan-fic. You're so funny.
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Originally posted by: goldi2

lol.... but i htink krips is beeing kinda meen.. i eman poor anjad loook for her and also missed the bus since he was look for and she gosh sooo much atittude lol

anywyas

later

GOLDI2

i know goldi but I wanted to give angad the taste of his own medicine. 😈

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Posted: 20 years ago
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deppy wrote:

i know goldi but I wanted to give angad the taste of his own medicine. 😈

lol dont worry i was just jokin... but i guess ur way of revenge isnt badd i emna since u cant really go up and change the seriall why not just write it ur own way!!! lol

GOLDI2

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Posted: 20 years ago
#30

That was just great 👏

Pls continue...

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