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Selina Singh

@Selina

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Posted: 19 years ago

#161

Originally posted by: Sandy_01

so true amma ji😆

OMG... thats the funniest thing everrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr!!!! 😆

Wow, that just made my day looser!!!

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waterlily_126

@waterlily_126

Inactive

Posted: 19 years ago

#162

Originally posted by: Selina

OMG... thats the funniest thing everrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr!!!! 😆

Wow, that just made my day looser!!!

wow..

evee..dii u r da est..

luv u re..

niva

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kithi

@iRUNshit

Inactive

Posted: 19 years ago

#163

Originally posted by: kripa_cutie

wow..

evee..dii u r da est..

luv u re..

niva

Nivaaaaaaaaa where have u been 4 so long......

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Selina Singh

@Selina

Inactive

Posted: 19 years ago

#164

slappppppppppppppppppppppppppp 😡

Evee.. you called this bad???

OMG... you need to be smacked!!!

Loved it yaar.. I totally loved it. You're Neha jr.!!!

You should seriously start your own fanfic!!

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soni595

@soni595

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 19 years ago

#165

Evee that was awesome...it was not boring at all...you should write some more...bravo!

Keep smiling...
Love
Soni

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soni595

@soni595

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+ 3

Posted: 19 years ago

#166

I will continue as soon as the next part is discussed by the alien heads!

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Xplicit_Desii

@Xplicit_Desii

Stunner

Posted: 19 years ago

#167

Amma ji. U r brilliant. I loved it. U r awesome 👏 👏 👏

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soni595

@soni595

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 19 years ago

#168

Evee knocks on Selu's door hesitantly, and wonders if Selu is awake or not, after a few shuffles….Selu opens the door, and Evee can see from Selu's clear wide open eyes and untangled hair…that she could not sleep.

As, soon as Selu sees Evee at the door. She pouts her face and turns away from Evee. Evee, knowing Selu's short hand anger, pulls her arm lightly and takes Selu to her pretty room, and plops down on her bed. Selu just crosses her legs and sits hugging a pink pillow…then she squints over at Evee's relaxed face, and a bout of anger surges through her, so she throws the pillow at Evee.

Selu: tum ithni shant se leti ho, jaise ke kuch hua hi nahi
Evee: huh? Kya hua?
Selu picks up another pillow, and chases Evee around the room,
Selu: meri shaam karaab karke poochti hai kya hua? Ter jaa…mai tumhe chorungi nahi
They pillow fight for a few minutes arguing, and tussling….until they are tired, and they both sit in the terrace, with moon light sparkling over them, and cool night breezes sailing past them.

Evee: Selu, mujhe batha hai, Abhi tum par bohoth shak karta tha, aur tumhe shabdo ki thezeeb se tumhe hurt karta raha…par ab who essa nahi hai…ab ussme ek badlav aya hai…
Selu: ussme badlav aye ya nahi…mujhe usse kya?
Evee: Selu apne dil ke samundar mai jaak kar dekho toh, tum abhi bhi usse pyar karti ho
Selu: nahi..mai…mai…mera uske saath ab koi bhi rishta nahi rakhna chahti

Evee forcefully turns Selu around, so that she can see Selu's eyes brimming with tears
Evee: rishta rakhna chahti nahi, yaa rishta rakhne se darti ho?
Selu (tears springing down her eyes) : bas….haan mai Abhi se uthna hi pyaar karti hoon…jithna pehle kiya karti thi…par ussne jo mujhe gaav diye hai…woh kabhi meet nahi sakte..

Preview: Evee tells Abhi how to pataofy selu, and then some romantic stirs between Abhi and Selu, and John and Evee, and Sandy and Angad

Keep smiling…
Love
Soni

Edited by soni595 - 19 years ago

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Selina Singh

@Selina

Inactive

Posted: 19 years ago

#169

lolzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz... that was sooo filmi!!! 😆
esp this part: Selu apne dil ke samundar mai jaak kar dekho toh 😆 😆 😆

Anyways.. it was maha awesome!! 👏 Loved it

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soni595

@soni595

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 19 years ago

#170

Originally posted by: Selina
lolzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz... that was sooo filmi!!! 😆
esp this part: Selu apne dil ke samundar mai jaak kar dekho toh 😆 😆 😆

Anyways.. it was maha awesome!! 👏 Loved it

lolzz...I thought it was soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo cheessyyyyyyyyyyyy😆 but i think it got the point acrosss, and you could imagine Evee and Selu like that😛

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