AlIeN GAnG FAn FIc - PArt TwO - Page 18

Originally posted by: soni595

lolzz...I thought it was soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo cheessyyyyyyyyyyyy😆 but i think it got the point acrosss, and you could imagine Evee and Selu like that😛

Thank God, you think so too!! 😆

Hi,

I just read and updated my self..amazing writing Evee and Soni..awesome....Continue naa..

Luv ya..

Ouma

wow soni u r gr8. It's so emotional 😭 😭 . I like pillow fight though 😃 😆 .
Loved it Soni

hehe awesome guys...very emotional...luv it!!

kithi

Selu is getting ready to meet Abhi. On other hand Abhi is also getting ready. Selu says goodbye to Evee and says that will talk to u later and wil tell u what happened. Selu and Abhi left their homes to restaurant. Abhi reaches first so he sits at the table

Abhi says to himself where is selu?

Abhi to Waiter: Can i have a cup of cold coffee?

Waiter: sure sir.

Selu comes in and sits down.

Abhi: how r u?

Selu: with little smile, I am fine. How r u?

Abhi: I am fine too.

Abhi:Would u like to drink anything?

Selu: A cup of cold coffee.

Selu and Abhi remember the old days when they used to drink cold cofee togehter.

Abhi: I love u a lot. I couldn't forget u.

Selu: pls staright come to the point. I am not here to listen to all this. Say whatever u wanna say, I have to go . I don't have much time.

Abhi: U have changed a lot.

Selu: Excuse me. is it me or u? U have changed a lot.

Abhi: Mujhe maloom hai ke maine bahut mistakes ki hai lekin main ab unka pachtyaaap[spelling wrong] kerna chata hu. Kya tum muhje ek moka bi nahi dongi?

Selu: the mistake u made was really big ur mere paas itna bada dil anhi hai ke main tumhe maaf ker saakoo.

Abhi: Listen to me once. maine jo kuch bi kya vo jaan booj ker nahi kiya tha. There wasa little misunderstanding.

Selu: tum itni badi galti ko ek choti si misunderstanding kehte ho?

Abhi: pls forgive me. main sachhe dil se tumse maafi mangta hu.

Selu: tumne mujh per itna bada iljaam lagya tha.

Abhi: main manta hu ke maine jo bi tum se kaha tha vo mujhe nahi kehna chahiye tha. Muje laga ke tum mujhe pyaar ki aand main dhoka de rahi ho.

Selu: tum aise kaise soch sakte the. Maine tumhe itna pyaar kiya aur uske badle main mujhe kya mila. Bewafaai, aanso, gam.

Abhi: mujhe laga ke tum Vibek Obrai se pyaar kerne lagi ho. Maine jo kuch dekha kya tum usse jutlaa sakti ho?

Selu: tumne to mujhe meri safaai dene ka ek moka bi nahi diya. Tumhe ne kaise soch liya ke main tumhare siva kisi aur se pyaar ker sakti hu. Mujhe meri safaai dene ka ek moka to diya hota tu aaj yeh misunderstanding hai kabi na hoti😭.

stay tuned to find out the whole story.

OMG... that was sooo good!! Wow Sandy aunty.. you're such a good writer!!! 👏

But.. the last part was damn funny.. i couldnt stop laughing!! 😆

Originally posted by: Selina

OMG... that was sooo good!! Wow Sandy aunty.. you're such a good writer!!! 👏

But.. the last part was damn funny.. i couldnt stop laughing!! 😆

main aunty kab se ban gayi losa. Thnaks and i know kafi emotional hai na. uffffff too filmi😆

Originally posted by: Evee

awesome job sandy my bachcha!!! that was great!!

oye selu.. u line marroing on vivek oberoi??? 😆 😆 😆

Nope, thats Soni's job!! 😉

Great job sandy, you write beautifully! 👏

Keep smiling...
Love
Soni

Originally posted by: soni595

Great job sandy, you write beautifully! 👏

Keep smiling...
Love
Soni

thnaks Soni.