'Is Pal' Short Story, Part 4B(Last), pg.11 - Page 2

Originally posted by: maplez13

You can't leave it there!!!! Ah man! When did u say u were put the second part up? Please put it up soon. Please. 😆
I'll write more when I have more time. But that was just.........wow. Hopefully I'll have more words tonight. 😆
Great first part. The 'meeting' was described so well, very intense. 😆 👏 I loved Mets' flashback, the part after he puts the dupatta back on her....this part:
'His thumb endearingly caressed her lower lip for a fleeting moment, while his fingers brushed lightly against her cheek… pushing back a few errant strands of hair that had unbeknownst to her, fallen across her face… "Main hoon na…", he whispered assuring. Her heart fluttered with unknown reason as she stared questioningly into his charcoal eyes…' 😍
I got butterflies after that man!! 😆 Btw, it was not a drag at all, I loved every bit of it! 😃 😉

Heet right? Aye haye yaar... glad you enjoyed😃 Lol, 😆 next part won't come until next week as I have a lot to do this week and weekend with school. I swear, the profz gang up and plan it so everything is due together! Sowie😳 Haila... more to say? Can't wait to read your thoughts!😉... Can you imagine him, with that half-smile saying something like that... **faints**... 😍😆 Thanks so much!

Cheers,

dc

Originally posted by: queenpersephone

It's absolutely lovely! I loved the title of the fic and I loved reading it. I loved
the way you've detailed Adi's feelings.I absolutely loved the last paragraph, I
could feel his emotions, you've described the moment so beautifully. I could
actually feel the noise fade away.....super really! I wish I could read the next
part right away 😊 I'm really looking forward to it! 😊

Queenie ji! Wow... I'm excited you showed up since I love your works... Arre wah, you are too kind... I'm glad you enjoyed my ramblings😳😆 I wish I could post for you right away, but majboori... The "moment" was hard to capture I admit, I didn't really know how I should do it... and then it just happened... at least it worked in someway?😕😆 Thank you!!

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dc

Originally posted by: Robin_M

girl you are just way too good at this!!!!! evrytime you blow me away with your words! seriously, your words are so deep and meaningful! i just get lost in your writting! sooooooo happy to read something by you, doesnt matter to me how many unfinished ones you have out there, as long as you give us something to stir our imaginations with!
beautiful story, and as usual, very differnt! hes a doctor!!? wow thats soooo hot! awww but hes a cold and troubled doc!
so mets had a son who died? and adi couldnt save him? if im right, then wow! its really interesting! just loved it! cant wait for the concluding part!

Robin!🤗... 😆 good? good at what?... boring ppl to death!😆😉... seriously dude, you're nutz!! but all in the good😉 I told ya, I write... you add depth to it with your imagination and perception... You guys make me sit on the moon!😃😆 *bows humbly*... lol, I thought ppl would be at my back for not updating the other two😳 lets not mention them then... *ahem*... Yep, he's a doc... I know eh? A doc with a past... 😍... Yaar, kitney sawal poochti ho tum... pata chal jaaeyga... aage aage😉 Thanks!

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dc

Originally posted by: sidsk

wow,wow,WOW!!! Neetu-ji like always I dont have adequeate words.
And Adi is a doctor! Never imagined that 😍
As Robin said one can really get lost in your writing.Really love your style of description. 😳
And really its doesnt matter how many unfinished ones you have coz you keep giving us something new every few days.
Brilliant job yaar!👏👏😳

Siddu ji!!!... Shukriya, mehrbaani, dhanwaad, thank you, gracias... aur... thank you😆... This no-words thing don't suit ya...😆😉... You know, I really hadn't imagined in that form ever either... until, well I came across this random idea!😃😆 But he sounds sensual na?😳 Oh gosh!😆... Mutual appreciation yaar, I luv your work deeply... mind-blowing... and on that auspicious note, care for a nice update😃... Waise, I have read your one shot... yet to comment... but know this, you have quite the eye for things... !!

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dc

Originally posted by: angelic shaz

omggg wat can i say ur awesumm 👏 👏
i was glued to dat i didnt realise it was dat long 😆 they way u describe things are jus awesum!!!
aww i cnt wait 4 more
continue soon 😃

Shaz... What can I say? You're amazing yourself!... Lol, thanks yaar... I truly am not!😉 I try... and thanks for the assurance that I am actually making some sense?😕😆

Cheers,

dc

Originally posted by: koolaries4

amazing.. plz do cont.. dont leave it there.. cnt wait 2 read adi mets bcmg 1..

Thank you😊... Sorry, no choice!😳

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dc

Originally posted by: *angel94*

Awesome! 👏
The description of things was just brlliant. 😊
Wow It's hard to imagine Adi as a Doctor 😆
Can't wait 4 the next part
Please update soon...😊

Hi Angel94,

Thank you... I am making sense eh?!😆 I know... I was kinda iffy at first, but then I'm like... He's Vikram Aditya Mehra dude, he can do anything😉

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dc

Originally posted by: *angel94*

Sorry for the doubble post 😳

No worries!

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dc

Originally posted by: tsamhita

girl how do you do it? Do... what? Sab tumhaari imagination ka jaadu hai dah'lin😃
i loved this part 😛 👏 brilliant!!! the way you described their meeting was soo....hai! 😳 Hai hai... aag toh nahin lagee?😆
i loved it! Thanku😳
and bless! adi's become cold hearted and so distant to the person he used to be...i wonder what happened...although i do kind of know... You do eh?... Maybe you should continue then?😊
and suyeash and him sharing the same fate 😭 😭 i really felt for the both of them 😭 😆 Ha! Someone mentioned it... I always think of the Mehra men alike... I feel for them both too But dont' worry... I'll think of something!
but seriously! great part!! *bows humbl*
eagerly awaiting for you to update ur other ffs 😳 *lol*...

Cheers,

dc