'Is Pal' Short Story, Part 4B(Last), pg.11

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Posted: 17 years ago

#31

hay!!!! dc jaan!!! you updated!!!!! 😃 love the update!!!.........

ADI-Mets together in ur flashback!!! with kids!!! are they their own kids 😳 😛

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Robin

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Posted: 17 years ago

#32

ok just read it and WOW!
almost forgot how good you were at this!!!! thanks for reminding me again why i love your fanfics!!!!!!!!!
beautifully written, the descriptions were awsome! their first encounter was really intense! but filled with so much emotion! this part had such a natural flow to it! i just loved it! no words!
i loved the song you used (which one is it?) the lyrics went very nice with the scene!
there was one line that stood out to me in paticular, when parvati was giving her blessings to adi, you wrote "just as though the drops of water descend from the clouds, releasing them from pressure… he felt the hand pour down on him… Pent up rain…"
wow, what a beautiful way of wording it! i really love your use of words! your really toooo good yaar!
so mets had 2 kids?!?! but was adi the dad?!?!
i hope you dont take as long as updating the last part hun, im really dying to know the rest of the story! and hope you have time to update your other ffs too!
so glad you updates, it was awsome! continue soon please!

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Anjali-K

@Anjali-K

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Posted: 17 years ago

#33

Yay!!!You updated!! 😊
I just love ur FF its wonderful and beautifully written specially the description. 😊
Ooooh so Mets kids!! Who was their dad though?
Loved the song Meri Kahaani it totally went with situation.

Please update the last part soon. 😊

Anjali 😊

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mishael

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Posted: 17 years ago

#34

how amazing was tht?? 😛...lol...i'm sooo glad u updated 😃 ..it's been like wht over a month since we saw AM 😡
....so now getting to this part ...well... as always it was jus tooo good...n OMG mets has kids...who's da father...adi???...now i wanna kno who da father is 😕 anxiously waiting for the next part 😃 😳

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shazeena

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Posted: 17 years ago

#35

omgg wow wat can i say dat was totally awesum!!!
👏 👏 👏
u finally updated afta ages wich was gr8 i dunt y weneva u write i get very speechless 😆 but i must say wat emotions u portrayed in this update i felt like i was in sum different world because ur writing just flowed so well 😆 and the way u used the song was very effective wich i liked alot
wow
cnt wait 4 more
continue soon 😃

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desi chic

@desi chic

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Posted: 17 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: mtbenjamin
drag??? 😕 ur kidding....not a single part...i loooved it...every bit 😆 😆 😳 ...n Adi's a doctor...for sum reason ever since i started to watch DMG i've been wanting jatin to play a doctor...dun ask me why 😕 😆 😆 .... lmao😆 I've never seen the show, but have heard much, especially about "Dr. Armaan"😳 I know eh, I thought it was kinda different to have him as a Doc. I mean, I wasn't sure, but then I'm like , "yeah he can"😉 Glad it worked on your creativeness😊but seriously....tht was amazing..u r soo talented...i'm not even much of a reader but i was hooked right from da first sentence 😛 Haila... Lol, what did you eat before stepping into the post?😆...adi's charecter kinda reminded me of House(dunno if u watch tht sho) except tht he's a lot quieter.. OMG! Lol, I love House!! Everyone hates him, but I love his bindaas attitude. He's a jerk with some sort of strange magnetic aura😆 His stubborness, perhaps. Lol. Tell you the truth, I think House did kinda step into my thoughts at some point through this.😆.he's still so adorable tho...n i love the kinda relationship mets n shruthi share...i wish they'd have shown more off dat in da sho as well I know. Thank you! Actually, my thoughts are the same. I had wanted a more stronger relationship btw these two which we didn't really get to catch onscreen, so I tried to fit it here....but really really amazing first part...can't wait for the second part..n looking forward to reading the next part of pardesi as well 😃 Thank you kindly!😃

Cheers,
dc

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desi chic

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Posted: 17 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: Caesie
great Job 👏.
Keep it up 👍🏼

Thanks Caesie!😊

Cheers,
dc

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desi chic

@desi chic

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Posted: 17 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: ange94
Drag?? No way! Its Amazing the way u described every single thing and specially their emotions it was just brilliant!!
👏 👏
Ooooh and looks like Adi's a doc! 😆

Love the way u showed kinda relationship mets n shruti share. 😊

Can't wait for the second part
Please update ASAP.

Natasha 😊

Natasha,
Thanks yaar! Lol... I thought some ppl might think so as there wasn't much of AM there, but glad you enjoyed. Yep, Adi is a doc😆 What a doc eh? 😍😆

Cheers,
dc

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desi chic

@desi chic

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Posted: 17 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: koolaries4
omg... amazing.. u just gotta continue asap.. i check ur ff before reading the serial's update.. gosh..lol..

Koolaries4,
Thank you so much for the words! Lol... Yeah, I'm typing now, I'm not sure when it will be up, but will definately try and make it quick! Thanks for reading and commenting, much appreciated. As for the show, deaaaaaaraama yaar!😆

Cheers,
dc

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desi chic

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Posted: 17 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: tsamhita
hay!!!! dc jaan!!! you updated!!!!! 😃 love the update!!!.........

ADI-Mets together in ur flashback!!! with kids!!! are they their own kids 😳 😛

Sami,
I updated... And I think its about time you did too na? *ahem*... Lol, thanks! Kids? I think I got some weird message going on here... There is only one "kid" and he is Maithali's... and Adi's... I suppose... You'll find out in the next part...

Cheers,
dc

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