'Time' AM FF - Pg 49 / 24 Oct - Ch 23

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maplez13

@maplez13

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Posted: 17 years ago

#131

Dude! Too good man! Loved the changing between the scenes. And loved the way you flashbacked their first meeting, what Mets was thinking was hilarious!! 😆 Liked Adi's attitude in this part and the lil glimpse of his ghussa...😉
Thanks for the longer part. Now I order u to keep them this long missy! 😆 😉 Cont. soon. 😃

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Pretz

@Pretz

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Posted: 17 years ago

#132

Hey

Great part there!!!
U portray their confusion really well 👏 👏
And I loved the flashback seen and ur interpretation of it....It brought bak a lot of memories 😉 😉

Cheers
Pretz

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shazeena

@angelic shaz

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Posted: 17 years ago

#133

wow awesum!!!! 👏 👏 👏
jus luved how they met and how adi reacted different which mets wasnt excepting and how u told the flashback wow really good😃
cnt wait 4 more
continue soon 😃

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marcia

@mbenjamin

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Posted: 17 years ago

#134

looooved dis part 😳 ......wht is adi so confused about??? wht duz she really not kno??? ...its killin me 😃 ...lol...j/k i'm fine..really anxious to kno how da story unfolds tho...adi was sooo sexy in dis chapter 😳 angry n all dat..soo cute 😳 😃 ..lol...but great part...esp. loved the fact tht it was long 😉 ...do continue soon 😳

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Robin

@Robin_M

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Posted: 17 years ago

#135

sid that was soooooooooooooooooo good! the update was dripping with tension! very powerful! i have so many different scenerios running in my head right now about what adi said. She had said you dont owe me a life debt, and then adi thinking how could she not know, she has to know! whats that about?!?! well im going to wait paitently and let you tell the story! flashback was awsome, really reminded me of the old adi and mets...you know, before ekta screwed them over! well i loved your update, look forward to the next part!

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Queen of the Damned

@darkness_123

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Posted: 17 years ago

#136

Her rebel cry echoed the valleys, "MORE!!!!!!!!!!!! I WANT MOREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!" she screamed...

Tee Hee. 😆

Greaaat work Sid. Been checking up on this page almost everyday to see if you continued... It was worth the wait. But pleeeaseee, don't make us wait this much for the next one, okie??? 😛

Luurrrrve <3,
Nimmi 😊

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72968

Hibernated

Posted: 17 years ago

#137

lovely part sid!!! 👏 😳 love the way adi smirks 😳 and how he didn't want to give up and leave...hmmm some heck of a past for both of them 😳 😛 😉
update soon 😳

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sidsk

@sidsk

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Posted: 17 years ago

#138

Originally posted by: puremagic
My dear, you are just going from strength to strength. You are so talented and you have such a way with your words!
There is such a natural flow to the story, its all unfolding so beautifully. I am really looking forward to seeing how it all develops! Wonderful, wonderful writing as usual!

Bloody perfect,he thought to himself,a mild anger beginning inside him.
But still,he allowed a small smirk to play on his face.Anyone else would have missed it but she did not.Her chin rose slightly and she looked away.
The smirk on his face grew into a grin briefly before falling away.

So delicately written, and so perfectly capturing the small nuances off their personality's. Well done! I throughly enjoyed that bit and I felt a smile tugging at my own lips as I read on.

I look forward to reading more! Beautiful! 😊

Wow......Thank alot puremagic.Your words have me very humbled.Thnx alot for the encouragement.😳....But seriously Im not talented at all. Its you guys who have beautiful minds😳

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sidsk

@sidsk

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Posted: 17 years ago

#139

Originally posted by: ~*~A~*~

OMG!Such a long chapter...will read it ASAP(fursat mein 😉 )..and will edit my post,Sid... 😃

**Edited**

Excellent chapter,sid..😳..loved the flashbak of their first meetin..(reminded me of the old days😍)...Loved Adi's attitude.... and tht ''sweeper'' part was too funny...😆.....Thnx alot Amina!😉

Plz,cont.soon...(i'm still wondering abt the raaz behind the raita😆)....Tum aur tumhara raita😆 Im telling you girl,you're obsessed with raita....There is no raaz behind the raita.😆