'Time' AM FF - Pg 49 / 24 Oct - Ch 23 - Page 15

Originally posted by: Pretz

Hey

Great part there!!!
U portray their confusion really well 👏 👏
And I loved the flashback seen and ur interpretation of it....It brought bak a lot of memories 😉 😉

Cheers
Pretz

Thnx Pretz!😳....Ya those were such good days,werent they?

Originally posted by: angelic shaz

wow awesum!!!! 👏 👏 👏
jus luved how they met and how adi reacted different which mets wasnt excepting and how u told the flashback wow really good😃
cnt wait 4 more
continue soon 😃

Thnx alot Shaz😉

Originally posted by: mbenjamin

looooved dis part 😳 ......wht is adi so confused about??? wht duz she really not kno??? ...its killin me 😃 ...lol...j/k i'm fine..really anxious to kno how da story unfolds tho...adi was sooo sexy in dis chapter 😳 angry n all dat..soo cute 😳 😃 ..lol...but great part...esp. loved the fact tht it was long 😉 ...do continue soon 😳

Thnx!😳 Will continue soon.

Originally posted by: psawyer

I wonder what it would feel like to have elephants playing ping-pong in my head🤣 🤣🤣 ..........😆😆 Long back I had heard that phrase somehwere and I had filed it away for future reference.....And I used it here.😆

I love the "feral" nature of this update 😳 😆 😆 absolutely and undoubtedly my favourite part of the whole ff so far 😍 😍 so alive with...desire and sexuality and ferocity - I love it, Sid 😍 the last exchange between AM reminded me of Lizzy & Darcy : the formal yet somehow uninhibited nature of their language, words spoken and words left silent 😍 ..................Thnx alot for the encouragement yaar! 😳😳 I hate it that AM have become so meek in the show....and so I guess subconsciously I'm making them a little more fierce....specially Adi.😉

More, please 😳 😆

Originally posted by: maplez13

Dude! Too good man! Loved the changing between the scenes. And loved the way you flashbacked their first meeting, what Mets was thinking was hilarious!! 😆 .............lol you know initially I hadnt planned on writing that.But it came to me suddenly when I was writing this chapter.I really enjoyed writing it coz it one of my fav AM scenes.😳 Liked Adi's attitude in this part and the lil glimpse of his ghussa...😉 ..... thnx Heet!😳
Thanks for the longer part. Now I order u to keep them this long missy! 😆 Oho!Ordering me now are you?😆 Will defo try to do that. 😉 Cont. soon. 😃

Originally posted by: Robin_M

sid that was soooooooooooooooooo good! the update was dripping with tension! very powerful! thnx😳 i have so many different scenerios running in my head right now about what adi said. She had said you dont owe me a life debt, and then adi thinking how could she not know, she has to know! whats that about?!?! well im going to wait paitently and let you tell the story!......... 😆 You will have to have a lil patience since its gonna take time b4 all that is revealed.😉flashback was awsome, really reminded me of the old adi and mets.................I miss the old AM so much! ...you know, before ekta screwed them over! well i loved your update, look forward to the next part!....................Thnx alot Robin.Glad you liked it.😳

Originally posted by: darkness_123

Her rebel cry echoed the valleys, "MORE!!!!!!!!!!!! I WANT MOREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!" she screamed... lol😆😆

And the answer to her rebel cry echoed back "COMINGGGG SSOOOONNN" 😆😆😆


Tee Hee. 😆

Greaaat work Sid. Been checking up on this page almost everyday to see if you continued... It was worth the wait. But pleeeaseee, don't make us wait this much for the next one, okie??? 😛 .........Aww thnx so much Nimmi!😳 Hopefully the next update will be much sooner.

Luurrrrve <3,
Nimmi 😊

Originally posted by: tsamhita

lovely part sid!!! 👏 😳 love the way adi smirks 😳 and how he didn't want to give up and leave...hmmm some heck of a past for both of them 😳 😛 😉
update soon 😳

Thnx alot Sam!😉 Will continue soon.

Sid, I was wondering the same as Vasu... elephants playing ping-pong in the head... koi khatarnaq beemari lagti hai😳😆

The update... well main kya boloon... I just wanna kick myself for not sticking my danda out at you earlier! The emotional turmoil and the underlying fatal impulse threatening their outside composure... (what a mouthful😕) very deeply felt! Your use of quotes is so apt... Makes you sound so intelligent😆 Not that I'm doubting you in the least😳

Wicked stuff... simply wicked!! Yahan toh bandh hont aur aankhein kya baatein karti hain😳

I especially loved how she addressed him as "Mr.Mehra"... I could imagine the icy tone... not harsh, but icy nonetheless... and his expressions... priceless!

👏👏👏 Continue asap!

Cheers,

dc

Originally posted by: tsamhita

^^ raita ke peeche raaz "hona hi chahiye!!" full Leela bhabi style 😉 😆 😆