'Time' AM FF - Pg 49 / 24 Oct - Ch 23

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-aweshome_moi-

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Posted: 17 years ago

#151

Originally posted by: psawyer
Oh gosh Sid, now you've just gone and broken Amina's heart! 😆 😆 No raita raaz? Not fair 😆 😆

Haan Vasu di..my heart's broken...look at this:💔😭😆

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-aweshome_moi-

@-aweshome_moi-

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Posted: 17 years ago

#152

Originally posted by: sidsk

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-aweshome_moi-

@-aweshome_moi-

Rocker

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Posted: 17 years ago

#153

Originally posted by: sidsk
Broken her heart,Im sure 😆😆 No raaz.But there will be a flahsback about it. 😉

Yipeeee😃...meri to jaan mein jaan aagaye....😆

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*lucky_karen*

@*lucky_karen*

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#154

that was my fav chapter so far sid...amazing!!..i luved it..the memories and flashback was used relli well..awesome job! 👏 👏 👏

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psawyer

@psawyer

Stunner

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Posted: 17 years ago

#155

Sid, when's the next update? 😳

Gosh, now I know what everyone else feels when they keep spamming my inbox with reqs to update Love... 😕 😆 😆

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sidsk

@sidsk

Sparkler

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Posted: 17 years ago

#156

Thnx Karen. 😳
Vas: Hopefully soon.A few things have come up coz of which Im hardly getting time to write.
And now I know how every1 feels when they arent able to update soon enough 😆 😆

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Anjali-K

@Anjali-K

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#157

That was amazing!
Please update soon 😊

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desi chic

@desi chic

Sparkler

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Posted: 17 years ago

#158

Its about Time don'tcha think... I know how uninspiring the current track is... but just imagine what it could be and hopefully will be😃😉 Aur phir mast'ich hoke likhne ka😃... And I'm scratching my head over the raita too... You better unfold the layers on that one Siddu😆... I know you said theres nothing... but kuch toh hoga na😳

Cheers,
dc

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desi chic

@desi chic

Sparkler

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Posted: 17 years ago

#159

Mohtarma,
Aap update karney ka kya lengi?... Aisa na ho... ke lene ke dene padh jaaye!😡😆... Geebz... itna wait!

Cheers,
dc

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sidsk

@sidsk

Sparkler

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Posted: 17 years ago

#160

Originally posted by: desi chic

Sid, I was wondering the same as Vasu... elephants playing ping-pong in the head... koi khatarnaq beemari lagti hai😳😆

The update... well main kya boloon... I just wanna kick myself for not sticking my danda out at you earlier! The emotional turmoil and the underlying fatal impulse threatening their outside composure... ...wow yaar.Love that sentence.(what a mouthful😕) very deeply felt! Your use of quotes is so apt... Makes you sound so intelligent......when we both know Im not.😆 😆 Not that I'm doubting you in the least😳 ....

Wicked stuff... simply wicked!! Yahan toh bandh hont aur aankhein kya baatein karti hain😳

I especially loved how she addressed him as "Mr.Mehra"... I could imagine the icy tone... not harsh, but icy nonetheless... and his expressions... priceless!

Thnx loads for the encouragment Neetu.Means a lot😳

👏👏👏 Continue asap!

Cheers,

dc

Originally posted by: *angel94*

That was amazing!
Please update soon 😊

Thnx alot!😊

Originally posted by: desi chic
Its about Time don'tcha think... I know how uninspiring the current track is...therein lies the whole problem! but just imagine what it could be and hopefully will be😃😉..............Aur phir mast'ich hoke likhne ka😃... ....yeah true.Hopefully it will be what we are thinking.😳 It has to be.And I'm scratching my head over the raita too... You better unfold the layers on that one Siddu😆... I know you said theres nothing... but kuch toh hoga na😳..............oh no! Tum bhi...ek Amina kam thi kya raita ke peeche😆....hmm seriously there was nothing behind it....but if u guys insist so much then......dekhinge😉

Originally posted by: desi chic
Mohtarma,
Aap update karney ka kya lengi?... Aisa na ho... ke lene ke dene padh jaaye!😡😆... Geebz... itna wait!

Cheers,
dc

Gustakhi maaf mohtarma.Shayad aapko apna danda nikaal ne ki zaruurat thi..........I seriously deserve that for taking so long to update.😭