ff-Adi N Mets--tere liya-pt1

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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey guys im startin a new adi n mets ff even though im the kind who reads them

All my characters are coming out off kahaani har ghar ki there may be new charaters coming some time.

this ff will come from where the show is now with adi loving mets and her having no clue

adi like suiesh mehra will do anything 4 his love even if the love will not belong 2 him

tell me if u like the idea and if u guys will even read it or am i just wasting my time

-luv paige

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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey paige! seems like a gud idea.i think u shud start writing. 😃 .best of luck 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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of course i would read it paige! sounds like a very cool story and the fact that its a adi-mets ff makes it totally worth reading! please do continue!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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a MADI ff?!....bring it on! 😃
Edited by destinyz - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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its a great idea!! start off soon 😛 i m waiting!!! 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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OMG u have to rite dis FF jus cant wait to read it!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey paige.. a madi ff.. please do start it!! 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey everyone this is starting off my new ff from the episod where adi confesses his love 4 mets


Part 1

M: u did something didn't u, that's wrong adi
A: everything is fair in love and war

Mathali smiles at adi and leaves the room alone

A: mathali its war for u but for me its love, my love that's for you, if your
happy so am I

Adi followed mathali downstairs to watch the action that was gonna come from malishka's cooking. Adi stood beside mathali as everyone was being served the food

A: today malishka has made the food so dig in

Everyone looked fearfuly at the food infront of them

Vandi M: I forgot I have a fast today and so do you

she said talking to dadi

Sunddenly everyone was coming up with excuses right and left to avoid eating the food.

Batuknak:I'll try it

Batuknak took a bit, everyone watched him as he was some type of hero. His face looked like he had been punched straight in the gut

B: what the hell! Who the would eat this spicy food and who makes karaala by chopping it up like a cucumber.

Chotu: I like spicy food, give me some

Chotu grabbed a plate and started scarfing the food down, while parvati remembered what pallavi told her about not letting chotu eat spicy food. Parvati grabbed the plate and prany started clapping. He started to disrespect parvati infront of everyone. Adi turned beside of him and saw mathali buldging with rage at pranay, adi hated seeing mathali like this, it was all pranay's fault. Suddenly chotu slapped parvati, pranay began laughing. Parvati told pranay that now she would make chotu just to stand up against him and left to her room taking chotu with her as kamal followed her leaving pranay standing to worry about what parvati had said. Slowly everyone left leaving pranay, adi and mets. Adi quickly grabbed mets waist with his strong arms. Mets looked up at his face as he had his usualy smirk and looked toward pranay, mets understood and smiled at adi. Suddenly pranay turned around to see adi grabbing mets. Pranay's eyes glowed green with envy.

P: What is this?
A: What is what?
P: why r u holding her waist, let go of her
A: why should I, who is she of your?

Adi tightened his grip aroud mets waist. Mets just stood their grinning and leaned into adi putting a hand on adi's chest.
Adi quickly changed his glance to look at mets. He wished she would just stay like this, with him forever, but he knew that this was all to make pranay so he put his other arm around her as well.

P: how dare you? Are u shamless putting your hand aroud someone elses wife and u mets letting him do this, disgusting.
M: who's wife? Tell me who's wife ,and me and adi are just friends even if we are more than that, what do I have to be shameful about, your married arent you but not to mallishka the girl you live with. Don't be a hypocrit .

Pranay had nothing to say, he couldn't even say "mets's you're my wife" because he had lost all right to do that. Mets was furious and adi knew that heshould get mets and himself out of the room before something bad happened. He knew exactly what to do to get them out of the room and make pranay's state worse.

A: mets let's go to my room

Mathali right away understood what adi was trying to do so she went with the flow.

M: good idea that way we can be alone

Adi guided her to his room leaving pranay ready to kill adi and in a jealous rage.

ill continue soon
Edited by mrs.pulkit - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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👏 👏 omg!! its too gud..
plz continue soon 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hurray, anothe MADI ff... awesome start! Jealous Toad, now that's something!

Cheers,

dc

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