'Haqeeqat': MADI ff,p.30(utd 10/05) END - Page 24

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Posted: 17 years ago
oyu know what DC, this is the best fic i have ever read!...this is the best ending anyone could have asked for...just brilliant!!!
i am speechless now...all i hope is that i can improve to at least half your standards...brilliant! mind blowing! 😳 😳
i need better emoticons to describe what i feel! 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
i seriosly dont have enough words to discribe da wongerful endin of ur 'HAQEEQAT' ff 😲 (my mouth has droped open) 😆 but atlest uv got 1 done.gud luck wid da new fanfic - i will read it 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
you are a really talented writter
you gave written each scene so beautyfully
you make each moment so deep
its like ur living the scene
anyway its just mindblowing
and ur way of writing is wonderfull
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Posted: 17 years ago
wow dc dat was extremely fabulous i loved it!!
u wrote dis ff beautifully each things was purely detailed very well done 👏 👏 👏 u brought all those emotions to alive without saying anything u described everything wow !!!!!
im gonna miss dis ff 😭
awesum wrk!!!!
😳
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: sidsk

I think words like "beautiful" "well written" etc are not gonna do justice to this chapter.........................Simply beyond words 👏 👏 and i truly mean that 😳 If only we could see this actually happening
Loved the whole chapter... a few of my favs were:
"Praney tumhaare khayal bun raha hoga…Usse kya pata… tum toh meri soch ban chuki ho…"....

"Maithali… jaanti ho, tumhaare aane se pehle… Vikram-Aditya Mehra sab taraf chayah tah… Aur aaj dekho… Wohe tum mein hi… kahin gum gaya…"
the whole sequence whern he comes into her room,putting her jewelry, Maithili state of mind that time..................all very beautifully written
n the whole last scene: simply wonderful 👏 👏
Very beautiful ending 😳 ...................though m kinda sad tht it ended 😆 But all geared up for ur next fic 😃

Siddu, Siddu, Siddu meri jaan... You flatter me! I really don't have words. Sachi, I'm not that good... But I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you so much for the support always! Now madamji, before I pull my danda on you... you better start banging on them keys for a wonderful MADI adventure!😳 *mwuaah* Oh btw, the lines... haha... I thought you'd say "filmi"😆

Cheers,

dc

Edited by desi chic - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Pretz

Hey

Dat was beautiful!!!!!!
I loved ur detail on the wedding outfit.
And especially how ADI puts the jewels on METS 😳 😳
Wat a great ending & THANK YOU for letting us into ur fantastic imagination!!!!!!!!!!!!!
It has been most enjoyable and yes I will definitely be keepin in touch with ur new FF 😃 😃 😃

Overall on the FF...all i can say is 👏

Cheers
Preetz

Pretz,

I'm deeply humbled by your comments and really don't have words to express my appreciation. Thanks so much for your time and effort, you certainly have high tolerance😆😳 Hope to see you in the next round😉

Cheers,

dc

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Robin_M

speechless...
what can i say that will do justice to your ff? well my tears speak for themself! i cant believe you girl! brilliant!
even tho im sad its over, i feel a odd sense of completion and bliss. wonderfully crafted words, and just a beautiful story. gosh how i wish this could happen in the show! i just loved your portrayal of adi and mets characters!
you had me hooked start to finished, every part leaving an impact on me! and the ending was just perfect! you have done an amazing job! good job hun 👏
now i will eagerly wait for you to continue your other ff, i already know its gonna kick but! haha now im gonna go re-read this ff!
thanks for sharing your rambling with us, hope you continue to do so for a long time!

Robin,

Haila girl... your precious tears and for my rambles?? 🤗🤗 Thank you!! You're too sweet for words... About the "completion" factor, I'm glad you felt a closure to it... but as we know it, its hard to round these stories off as they are an actual continuation of the characters lives, if you know what I mean. Nonetheless, thank you for your insight! You've been a big encouragement and I love and appreciate the comments! Will continue the other one sometime this week hopefully. Fingers crossed!😳 Hahaha!!! Me and my ramblings... bheja fry is what I have😆

Cheers,

dc

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: tsamhita

oyu know what DC, this is the best fic i have ever read!...this is the best ending anyone could have asked for...just brilliant!!!
i am speechless now...all i hope is that i can improve to at least half your standards...brilliant! mind blowing! 😳 😳
i need better emoticons to describe what i feel! 👏

Sam!!

*hand on heart*... *speechless and bows humbly* 😳 Oye, ye tareef ke phul band kar, I'm gonna melt😆 Lolz. You're hillarious... Nah, I'm just a rambler and you've got a blessed imagination girl. One can notice that immediately with your writings, you're fabulous in your own way... Stay yourself, fun and sweet. Meri ramblings par aogi na, toh theatre mein sab sote huey milenge!😳 Thanks so much.

Cheers,

dc

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: catafly

i seriosly dont have enough words to discribe da wongerful endin of ur 'HAQEEQAT' ff 😲 (my mouth has droped open) 😆 but atlest uv got 1 done.gud luck wid da new fanfic - i will read it 😊

Catafly,

Thank you so much... muh band karlo, makhi chali jaayegi😆 jk!😳 Yep, one done and another ready for a run... eek!!... *sighs* You are too kind. 😊

Cheers,

dc

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: aisha1

you are a really talented writter
you gave written each scene so beautyfully
you make each moment so deep
its like ur living the scene
anyway its just mindblowing
and ur way of writing is wonderfull

Hi Aisha,

You must be one of the "silent lurkers", thanks for the comments... They are very sweet and encouraging. Hope to see you around!😛

Cheers,

dc

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