'Haqeeqat': MADI ff,p.30(utd 10/05) END - Page 25

Originally posted by: angelic shaz

wow dc dat was extremely fabulous i loved it!!
u wrote dis ff beautifully each things was purely detailed very well done 👏 👏 👏 u brought all those emotions to alive without saying anything u described everything wow !!!!!
im gonna miss dis ff 😭
awesum wrk!!!!
😳

Shaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaz!!

Hehe... Funny girl, its only the beginning right? MADI Zindabad!😃 Roh mat, 🤗 I will cherish your words... Thanks so much. Will see you in the next round?

Cheers,

dc

Originally posted by: desi chic

Shaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaz!!

Hehe... Funny girl, its only the beginning right? MADI Zindabad!😃 Roh mat, 🤗 I will cherish your words... Thanks so much. Will see you in the next round?

Cheers,

dc

yh u r rite its jus da beginning 😃

😆 yh see u in da next round 😳

@ Shaz... MADI Zindabad!!... whose playing the next round? 😆jk!

Cheers,
dc

Originally posted by: Miss English

Thanks

Thank you for the time!😳

Cheers,

dc

DC 😡 😡 badi chupa rustam nikli!!!
when are you updating ur other ff...marriage by concent?? 😆 jokes! 😆 😆 no pressure from me...don worry, take ur time...but not too long 😉 😆 😆

hai rabba!! 😆 😆 don't worry! i have coursework to hand in as well! 😳 take ur time! 😳

Great ff. Am sad that it has ended.

Originally posted by: luxs

Great ff. Am sad that it has ended.

How sweet😳 Frankly, I am a little too... I always wonder how you guys tolerate this😆 Thank you for the time!

Cheers,

dc

PHENOMENAL, PHENOMENAL WORK!!!


As promised, as soon as I was done, I rushed here to finish your FF.

And WOW......, I am blown away by the brilliance of your work! I haven't read too many stories, but out of what I've read, you are easily the best writer on this site. Outstanding!

Not one but every chapter, every chapter, was a crystal clear visualization! It was just a mirage of breath-taking imagery. Often, I feel stumped and wish I had a camera in my hand as opposed to a pen..and sigh thinking how much easier that would be. But real talent is when the pen feels like a camera and the words like a movie unfolding before your eyes. And that is what reflects in your writing. Fantastic!

The ending was just so.....natural....so subtle...it was beautiful!! The delicate intricacy of the words woven together is so subtly complex, that its almost deceivingly simple, and that is the quality I really admire in your writing the most. Because even though it is deceivingly simple, it is so very hard to achieve.


I am still speechless, so the words aren't quite flowing too well, but after exam madness is over, I thoroughly look forward to reading your next story, with great expectations. You have set high standards, and raised the bar in this forum! Congratulations and really that was stellar!