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Posted: 18 years ago
#21
go adi!!! this praney actually deserved worse...

nice ff.. gud job...
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Posted: 18 years ago
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WoW..this is so exciting 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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recap - Adi stands in front of mytheli like a shield protecting her from Pranay

Adi is about to lift his hand on pranay again but mytheli stops him
m:nahin adi, pranay iss layak nahin hai ke tum usse touch karo. chalo...

adi points his finger at Pranay and says: if you touch her again...you'll have me to answer to

Adi and mytheli go to Janki's house.
Mytheli is in a bedroom crying. Janki tries to comfort her, so does adi. Janki goes out to get some food for mytheli. Adi and mytheli are siting on the bed.
mytheli cries more and Adi feels ssoo bad. He automatically embraces her and mytheli willingly rests her head on his chest. he slowly pats her head and mytheli calms down. Janki sees this from outside

Janki smiles at seeing Adi adn mytheli together. She enters the room with food
j: chalo chalo...abb khana khalo...eat your food.
mytheli refuses: im not hungry
adi: comeon mytheli, eat some food
mytheli: no adi..i said i'm not hungry,,just leave me alone
Adi gets hurt and Janki leaves
Adi is about to go but mytheli holds his hand
m: sorry Adi, i didn't mean to.
Adi: its ok, now eat!!
mytheli is still stubborn and says no
Adi: fine! untill you don't eat...even i wont eat!
mytheli: fine!

Adi sits on the couch in the room and mytheli on the bed.
the clock strikes 10...then 11...then 12...
mytheli wakes up from her sleep while thinking about adi
M thinking: adi must have eaten his food and gone home.

but when she turned on the light she saw adi sitting on the couch sleeping

due to the bright light Adi wakes up to see mytheli worried
Adi: kya hua mytheli?
m: you're still here? haven't you eaten?
adi: no...
mytheli goes downstairs and brings a plate of food upstairs...
eat Adi! because of me, you don't need to sacrifice anything!
Adi: no...
m: yes..
adi: no
mets: yes... oh for god's sake eat!!
adi: not untill you eat
mytheli gets irritated and sits on the couch next to him: fine!
she eats a spoonfull of rice. now you eat
Adi: huh...i can't believe you...1 spoonful is your dinner!
Adi takes another spoonfull of rice and eaats himself,....then pics up another and heads it towards mytheli's mouth. mytheli hesitantly eats it.
Adi and mytheli finish the plate of food by sharing it. Adi finaly leaves mytheli's room and mytheli sleeps peacefully

i'm sorry this part is short compared to my other 2 parts but i need more replies for me to write longer parts and for me to update quicker
SORRY!! but pls reply 😳 😳
Edited by tsamhita - 17 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hi tsamhita, I am new to this forum... I read ur ff.. Its really awsome.. pls update soon and longer parts pls... I am waiting.. 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#25
Hey, that's great, please update soon, waiting for the next part 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#26
i read ur fanfic. its awesome and totally realistic. plz cont
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Posted: 18 years ago
#27
i read ur fanfic. its awesome and totally realistic. plz cont
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Awwwwwwwww this is so not fair u know😡 Ur writing such a nice fanfic but the part is SOOO short This part waz soooooooooo cute but newayz would it count if I reaply like 15 times after every part so u make the next part longer?😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
#29
lol
thaks all of you
i'll write the next part this evening - london time
promise 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awww that was great 👏 👏
continue soon
-Nisha ❤️

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