AM Tera Intezaar: pg61 fianle + note - Page 4

Aaaw Thankyou so much 👏 👏 👏
I really loved ur fanfic 😳
By the way i can reply 100 times if u want, to make ur fanfic longer.will wait 4 next part. 😛

like cute aleesha said ill reply a hundred times if u'll right longer parts and faster

recap - Adi adn mytheli have a little arguement and mytheli eats her food by Adi's hands and sleeps peacefully

Next morning
Janki goes to mytheli's room adn tries to open the door, but its locked.
janki: yeh door locked kyu hai? kahe mytheli...
janki quickly calls Adi and tells: Adi, mujhe darr lagraha hai what if Mytheli is trying to commit suicide? Her room door is not opening.
Adi: i'm right outside your house anyway, i'm comming.

Adi comes upstairs and Janki goes to call the ambulence. Adi bangs against the door and bursts in.

Adi knocks over mytheli and she falls on top of him. Both are on the bed with mytheli on top of Adi.

Her wet hair covered half of her face and strands swayed across Adi's face. Adi smiled and moved her hair behind her ears. Mytheli looked confused but she too smiled at Adi's guesture. a slow song playes in the background.

Dekha jo tumko to aaise kyu dil main hulchul hui
Tujh me aaise kya baath hai jo Mujhko aachi lagi
mujh ko aaise, tum dekho naa. hota hai kyu mann bekaraar
hmmmm hmmmmm laaaaa laaaaaa hmmm hmm
(the tune is bepanah pyaar hai aaja from Krishna cottage)

both just stare at eachother not knowing what to do. there is an awkawd silence and to break it....Janki comes rushing in.

Janki: mytheli, tum theek to ho?
mytheli looks confused: mujhe kya hua?
by now, Adi and mytheli got up and stood far apart.
Adi: tum to....suicide...???
M: kya? mai kyu....nothing happened to me and i was deffenitaly not thinking of commiting suicide.
JD: then why didn't you open the door when i was banging on it?
m: i was in the bathroom having a shower...sorry maam...i didn't realise you were banging. then i stood on this stool after i came out so i could reach my clothes and Adi suddenly opened the door and i fell on him.

Janki: oh...ok...umm...Adi, drop mytheli to college if she's feeling fine or else both of you take the day off.
Adi: YES!
Mytheli: NO!
ADi held mytheli's hand and guided her out...today we are going shopping...ok?
but before mytheli could answer, Adi said..quickly get dressed adn come...i'm waiting.

mytheli had no choice and dressed into this:

she looked really pretty. Adi just stood up when she came down the stairs

What was this funny feeling Adi had whenever he saw mytheli?
adi really wanted to understand why he liked her so much
he quickly dissmissed his thoughts and went out of the house with mytheli.

BOth sat in the car and drove off.
Adi: look mets...can i call you mets?
M: yeh sure
Adi: mets, you need to buy some new clothes so we are going shopping.
M: but i thought boys hated shopping
A: ya but not when they want a girl to be happy!
mytheli laughed at this and both went into the mall.

they went into various clothes shops
Adi insisted he buy loads of clothes for mytheli with his money but mytheli refused
Adi: look, u now live with Janki maam and she'll pay all ur expenses.
m: no, adi, thats rude
Adi shook his head and called Janki to tell her the situation

Adi gave the phone eo mytheli.
J: mytheli, jaldi se 15 dresses khareed ke lao. i don't want to hear anything. You are like my daughter adn i will spend all my money on you.
by the time you come back i want to see that you 15 dresses or else...
Mytheli understood and she and Adi continued shopping.
She bought loads of churidars and skirts:

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Adi was quite surprised that mytheli would buy skirts as such.
After shopping, mytheli and adi sat in a restaurant. Adi was telling mytheli about all his girlfriends adn how he flirts with them.
This just cracked mytheli up.
Adi:and you know once what happened mytheli, i managed to call 3 of my dates to the same restaurant at the same time and it was like hell. But knowing the "player" i am, i managed well and all 3 girls went home feeling on top of the world.
Mytheli: eww 🤢 😆 😆
Adi, why do you flirt with girls so much? i mean aren't you waiting for "the one?"
A: ha ha...no...i just dont have time to prance around waiting for 'the one'. So i just make do with all the other girls who are dieing to go out with me."
mytheli laughed.

What both of them hadent realized was that pranay and mallishka had been in the same restaurant as well. Mallishka had gone to the washroom leaving Pranay alone.
Pranay felt a vibe of jelously pass through him.
pranay: just look at her...how can she be laughing after so much happened.

Adi noticed Pranay and a wide cocky grin popped up on his face. He slowly held mytheli's hand and caressed it.
mytheli was shocked.: adi...what r u doing?
Adi: ssshhhh Pranay is looking.
mytheli was about to turn around but Adi stopped her.
M: Adi, i don't want anything to do with this man!
Adi: just be quite... he needs to see you are enjoying ur life too!
Mytheli looked a little confused but agreed. Adi kissed Mytheli's hand and grinned at her while she rolled her eyes

Pranay just got up when he saw Adi staring into mytheli's eyes and holding her hands.

As soon as Pranay was out. Adi and mytheli burst out laughing.
Adi: o god...i've never seen such an expression before. He looked like a stuffed cow with foot and mouth disease

Adi and mytheli just continued laughing adn finished their lunch. Adi and Mets sat int he car and Adi drove her home. It was late afternoon now, and Adi and mets reached home. Mytheli got out of the car and hugged Adi.
m: thanks...i haven't had so much fun in eyons
Adi: well, now ur with me adn i'll make sure you have fun like this everyday.
Saying this Adi smiled and kissed mytheli's cheek and quickly got into the car and drove off.
mytheli just stood there shocked and holding her cheeks

(is this long enough?) 😆 😆

awsome.. 👏 👏 👏 ur fanfic is so cute 😳 😳 .. I was waiting for the update...continue soon

thanks...i'm writing another ff in the fanfics sections called DUS
its sbout
Prem-Mukti
Adi-Mets
Manthan-Nisha
Abhir-Bhoomi
Soham-Anjali
link -
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.aspTID=630947&TPN=1

Oh thankyou so much tsamhita
u r the best.... 👏
well my goal is to reply hundred times right and i will if u conntinue writing like this.
i just luved it. 😳

Bepanah pyar hai Aaja
Tera intzaar hai aaja
its for samhita's fanfic 😳 😳

Oh that's wonderful, thanks so much for the update, loved all the details, I could picture it all happening. Bravo 👏 👏 👏 Looking forward to the next update. And now I'm off to read your other fan fic, thanx for the link 😊

Hey your great..........
i jus loved ur fanfic.......
i think ekta shud take tips from u.........
i have some hope adi will get back to methili readin ur fanfic........ 😛

recap - Adi quickly kisses Mytheli and Drives off

THE BEGINING

Mytheli went inside and sat in her room...everything was going too fast she had barely felt the pain of Pranay and her dadu leaving...this was not good. HOw could Adi make her forget all her pains? she felt so different around him. To say.. even her friends made her laugh but there always used to be a sadness in her laughter. BUt with Adi she could be whoever and not bother. This was the begining of a new relation with Adi...

The phone rang. mytheli quickly picked up and said
M: Adi?
A: how did you know it was me?
M: umm... jus...n e way what did you call for?
A: ooooo so mera jaadooo chal gaya...
M: shut up!
Adi continued laughing but quickly came to the point.
A: dress-up, we're going to the disco.
M: what! i can't ...i...
Adi put the phone down before she could say anything else.

mytheli ranted through her cupboard and finaly found an outfit she could wear to the disco.

Adi waited down for her. As soon as she came to his sight. He stood up in awe....questions ran through his mind
how could mytheli look beautiful in everything she wore?
Why was she pulling him towards her?
what the hell was he on about?
Adi persuaded himself to think Mytheli was just his friend that he helped for his own reaseon

there was a deeper reason to why Adi helped mytheli not because her eyes were on a crying parade.
Adi thinking: she's just a girl i am using...there's nothing special about her
Adi thinking: Yes there is!!!
Adi thinking: NO
Adi: YES!!
Adi: NOOOO Adi yelled out.
Mytheli was taken aback by his shouts.
M: Adi...what happened?
Adi: nothing...come lets go.

both walked out but mytheli tripped on a rock and fell on Adi. He held her and both stared into each other's eyes.
Song plays: Bepanah pyaar hai aaja
sona sona lamha lamha
meri raahe tanha tanha
[COLOR=RED]Aakar mujhe tum tham lo
Manzil teri dekhe rasta
Mud ke zara ab dekh lo
Aisa milan phir ho na ho
Sab kuch mera tum hi to ho(/COLOR)

[COLOR=BLUE]Bapanah pyaar hai aaja
Tera intezaar hai aaja
O bapanah pyaar hai aaja
tera intezaar hai aaja(/COLOR)

The way Adi's strong hands wrapped round mytheli's waste sent chills down her spine. Her arms were wrapped round Adi's neck adn she could feel his muscular arms. SHe too couldnot help noticing how irresistable Adi looked that night..and day

Both snapped out of their trans and walked to the car.
the journey was silent and both did not speak to eachother. Finally Adi broke the ice
Adi: have you been to a disco before?
M:ya!!! with Pranay, bharat, pragati
Adi cut her through: so this is the first time you're going with a hot guy
mytheli rolled her eyes and laughed.
BOth got into the disco and danced to most of the songs.
mytheli had had enough and went to the bar. she ordered coke and began drinking it. she put her glass down and turned to look at Adi. her blood boiled. he was dancing with other girls...so closely. Adi held the gil's waste adn almost as if her were nibbling her ear.
mytheli could not take it anymore and lifted a glass without seeing what it was. She drank it...the whole glass adn her throat burned. she spat the drink out immediatly and tears gushed down her eyes. she quickly wiped them off when she saw Adi comming.
Adi: hey..trying something new...i see.
M: i didn't know...
A: that's not how you drink Taquila. you got the order all wrong.
M: well you practice the order while i dance.
She said rather rudely and went on the dance floor. A few guys were dancing round her and came closer to her. One of the guys held her waste and pulled her close.
It was now Adi's turn to feel jealous. How could she dance with someone else when he was there. Adi quickly got on the dance floor and pulled mytheli away. He then grabbed her waste and swayed to the music. Slowly mytheli's hands wrapped Adi's neck. both of them gazed at eachother. Mytheli went close to Adi adn touched her nose to his ear. Adi wrapped his hands round her tighter. he haden't expected anything as such from a girl like Mytheli but it felt different. Adi dismissed all his thoughts as being the effect of too much alcohol. but her had barely drunk anything. JUst a couple of Taquila shots.
Adi: your eyes are so beautiful...adn your hair is so thinck and dark.
Mytheli now thought Adi was completly drunk by the way he was showering comments on her.
M: Adi... are you alright?
A: yes...never better.
Mytheli felt like never letting go of Adi adn just holding him so tightly. She just reached for him and hugged him. He hugged her back. He felt his chin touch her hair. he ran his fingers down her hair and.....
and...........
Both of them were disturbed by a strong hand on Adi's shoulder.
Both turned around.....................................