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Posted: 18 years ago
#41
hey ur fanfic is wiked!!!!
its brill
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carry on the gud work!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Thankyou so much
This part was mind blowing.
will wait for the next part
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Posted: 18 years ago
#43
thanks...really enjoying the Adi-Mets story :) Keep up the good work :)
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Posted: 18 years ago
#44

Awwwwwwwwww what a beautiful update👏 Plz post the next part soon😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
#45
loved it!
twas great!
continue sooon!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#46
Can't wait for the next part because the Praney and Methili jori is making me ill 🤢 ....I just wish Ekta would read this and get our fav couple together!!! Damn Adi is fine!! 😉 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#47
Awesome part!
Aww... jaala/i toh phassa/i 😳
Now whose this kabab mein haddi... has to be that idiot Pranay! 😡

Cont ASAP.

Cheers,
dc
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Posted: 18 years ago
#48

thanks for all your lovely comments!

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Adi felt a strong hand on his shoulder. Him and mytheli both turned around...mytheli squealed with joy and hugged the person. We see the guy's eyes, his nose and lips then his whole face


Mytheli parted from him.
M: Arayn!!!
Ar:meetu!!
Adi: Meetu???
mytheli: oh sorry..Adi..this is my best-friend Aryan
Ad: Boyfriend?? Since when?? Pranay...
M: oh Adi... boyfriend---???he's my buddy!! not boyfriend!!Aryan is a sweet boy who happens to be my best friend
Ad: oh
Aryan: but i plan on being more than just a friend after i've seen how hot you look!!
Mytheli laughed and so did Aryan...but Adi did not find that ammusing!!
Adi and aryan shook hands
Adi: you've known mytheli since???
Aryan: since Primary school...i went to America during Secondary but we kept in touch.
Adi: ah!!
Adi: i'm also Mytheli's best-friend...adi said slowly
Aryan gave him a wierd look and Adi felt uncomfortable.
mytheli and aryan looked at eachother and burst out laughing.
Adi did not like this.

Aryan: oh meetu there is so much to catch-up with you.. come-i'll take you to my place.
Mytheli agreed adn without looking at Adi said: Adi tell janki maam that i'm at a friends place and my friend will drop me at the house at around 10

without waiting for Adi to reply both Aryan and mytheli left the club
Adi was enraged... how did he just come here and whisk mytheli away>??
Adi left the club too and went straight home. he had flashes of that night - when mytheli hugged him, and when he stroked mytheli's hair. Those memories brought a smile onto his face.

next morning

Adi went to Janki devi's house to pick up mytheli for college.
Ad: janki maam, where is mytheli?
J: oh, Aryan picked her up....
Adi: ya..ummm ok
J: they came back last night at around 10...he's such a nice boy isen't he?
Adi: yes...he said coldly
Janki could smell bitterness and jealousy in his voice, she smiled at that.

Adi left feeling even more enraged. He came to college and looked all over the place for mytheli. Finaly he went to the dance Studio where he least expected her to be...but he found her there. She was swinging in another man's arms. Adi could not tollerate this. He saw Aryan. Aryan was twirling her round...he didn't know mytheli liked dancing! And look at the clothes she was wearing!!! Adi's eyes poped out!

She was wearing a pink bow-strip halterneck top and skin tight jeans that came up to her knees.
Adi could not help thinking she was hot!! no no no no no..Adi broke away from his thought chain...look, he stabalized himself - she is just another girl and you are acting - you can't feel attracted towards her.
but Adi resided into thoughts of anger again: how could she swing in HIS arms??

Aryan was now holding mytheli's waste. NO!!! Adi felt rage gushing in. "only i can hold her likethat" Adi felt a strange grip of possesion over mythlei but he was helples - It didn't seem mytheli rejected to Aryan's touch....TOUCH!!!!

Adi's blood boiled. oN top of that mytheli was laughing!!!
Adi's curiosity took over and he stood outside the door with his ear pressed against it.
mytheli was laughing
Aryan too.
Aryan: you know..i never thought you'd turn out so beautiful! in school you wore two plats with hair oiled back - glasses and you were...podgy!!
Mytheli giggled and said: shut-up!!
Mytheli: you know.. your quite handsome as well!!
both laughed again

Aryan: your eyes are so beautiful - and your hair...its so thick and smooth. Adi saw Aryan push back mytheli's hair.
Mytheli still laughing: are you flirting with me???
Aryan: is it working??
Adi had had enough - he just waited to listen to mytheli's answer
my: it is...a little---

Adi could not take it anymore! he stormed out of the block and outside.
Aryan laughed and said: well---then my friend you have to do something for me...............................

i'll leave it on a cliff-hanger 😆 😆 and i might not update for a whole week 😆 😆 just jokin 😆 😆 next update will be tommorrow 😉

Edited by tsamhita - 17 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#49
Thanx 4 this part 👏
amazing. but yaar can't see the pics
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Posted: 18 years ago
#50
i'll post them again:
Aryan:


the dress mytheli wore:

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