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Posted: 3 years ago
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Thnx you everyone for liking part 5!!! Though some of you were very near to guessing what Shashank might regret....but chalo we shall have the answer finally!!!


Part 6:- Mission Togetherness!!


Shashank:-" there is one thing I regret the most!!!"


Netra was very happy finally he will accept it that he regrets marrying apurva!!! Otherside apurva was scared for his answer!!!


Shashank:-" There is one thing I regret in life (he looks at apruva..netra was happy now finally everything will fall in place) not trusting apurva may be many times!!! Be it during kuki's bank case, be it during her mom's sending gift incident or may be the recent drunken drama....i never trusted her and that's what I shall always regret!! She everytime just had pure intentions...it's me only who could not understand her intentions....and i regret not understanding her!! I am sorry apurva....i really am....for everytime I have not trusted you!!!"


Everyone out there were speachless by Shashank's pure confession including apurva....she was so happy that happy tears came in her eyes!!!


Kuki:-" So netra i hope you are satisfied by Shashank's answer!!"


Netra:-" No i am not!! I feel sir is lying!!"


Shashank:-" Excuse me!! I never lie!!"


Netra:-" Sir you always said...you regret marrying apurva...then how come your answer changed today!!"


Shashank:-" First and foremost netra i never said i regret marrying her!!! Ya i wouldn't deny i always doubted my decision of marrying her....but regret no i never did!! And netra when i always have had professional relations with you...Never shared anything about my personal life...then how can you be so judgemental about my life!!"


Netra:-" But you doubted your decision sir??"


Shashank:-" I don't deny that!! But if my family loves her so much there must be a reason....and i trusted my family and went with the flow!! Don't make up your own stories netra!!! I never regretted marrying her (directly looking into appu's eyes) and i Never will!!!"


Apurva's heart was fluttering with happiness.... nothing could take away that smile of hers today....she was that happy...and her smile automatically reflected in Shashank's face as well!!


The bottle was again spinned and this time it stopped on apurva!!


Apurva:-" I select truth!!"


Shashank:-" oh my goodness...apurva vartak kanitkar is scared of dare...are re re!!"


Apurva:-" i am not scared of anything!!! I select dare!!!"


Sua aai:-" I will give you dare!!! You have to tell two good and bad things about Shashank!!"


Apurva:-" What?? Sua aai...thoda concession!!! I will tell you 4 chalo 5 bad things about khadus....but skip the two good things na!!!"


Shashank:-" Why 5 write a complete book only na...on bad things about me!!"


Apurva:-" Nice idea....the new 400 book you have got me na...i shall write in that!! Actually even that will be less!!"


Shashank:-" I will get another 600 pgs for myself and write about you in it!! And yes even that will be less!!"


Amey:-" Shashank....wrote what good things or bad things??"


Shashank gives him a look!!


Apurva:-" Ofcourse good things dada....i dont have bad things....which khadus can write you see!!"


Shashank:-" Oh hello!! Miss. Overconfident!!"


Sumi:-" Are dada...there is a correction...it's Mrs. Now!!!"


Shashank:-"Barrrr....Mrs. overconfident!! I was talking about bad things only!!"


Apurva:-" Khadus you.......!!"


Before she could continue Mansi:-" Appu!! Leave all that dare is dare!!"


Apurva:-" first bad habit toh see this only ... continuosly he keeps on fighting with me!! Every now and then!!!"


Shashank:-" As if you don't!!"


Babi attya:-"Shashank finger on your lips!!"


Mai:-" Appu next!!"


Apurva:-"ok so first bad habit....he keeps fighting with me!! Second...(looking at him) he is very khadus....he never trust me!! Whatever i may do...he will never believe me!! (They share a eye lock...and with eyes Shashank says sorry to which appu turns her face away!!) And sua aai...one more bad habit...his anger...he is angry young man!! Gussa toh ise nak (nose) pe hota hai!!!"


Sumi:-" Ok...now three good things about him!!"


Apurva:-" Are why 3....it was two na???"


Sumi:-" you gave three bad habits na so now give three good also!!"


Apurva:-" Are no no...then do one thing that first thing he fights with me always...remove that one... already two good habits is difficult!!"


Mansi:-"So he does not fight with you always??"


Apurva:-" ya sometimes he is nice to me as well!!"


Shashank:-" Sometimes!!"


Apurva:-" Ok fine more than sometimes less than many times!!"😂😂


Sua aai:-" So two good habits!!"


Apurva:-" His Caring nature!! He never fails to take care of the ones in his life...be it family, friends, or even an enemy like me!! He cares for everyone including me...may be a bit more for me!!"


Prachi:-" Acha a bit more for you??"


Apurva:- "Ofcourse after all i am his favourite enemy!!Hai na khadus!!"


Shashank:- "Very favourite!!"


Everyone:-" Ohhhhhh"


Panna kaku:-" And second one??"


Apurva:-" He is very patient.... specifically with me!! No doubt he is angry young man....keeps yelling and instructing whole day...(directly looking into his eyes) but yet...i agree i am tantrum queen....and he handles all my tantrums patiently....means ofcourse he does complaint....but even after that he bears all my tantrums!!!"


Shashank had a broad smile listening to this...they both were sharing an eye lock after appu complimenting him!!!


The entire family:-" Ohhhhhhhhhh!!!!" That's when their eye lock breaks!!! They both were blushing hard!!


Shashank:-" Chalo continue let's spin the bottle!!"


This time the bottle finally stops on netra!!


Amey:-"So netra truth or dare??"


Netra:" i am not scared of anything!! Dare!!"


Apurva:-" I shall give you dare then!!"


Netra:-" Ohh then toh dare will be very simple....you shall give some childish dare only...just like you!!"


Apurva:-" Actually you are right netra Tai ..the dare is very simple!! You are just suppose to say 5 good things about your mom!!!"


Netra:-" What??"


Kuki:-" Appu, this is really a very simple dare!! Chalo netra complete it....it's very simple!!!"


Shashank:-" Yes netra come on...this is so simple!!"


Seeing everyone going against her....she had no option she had to say few good words about her mother....she definitely was not liking the game...rather say the trip!!


Shashank:-" Shisht....you did this so that Sarika attya could get some happiness na??"


Apurva:-" There is a saying khadus....juthi hi sahi ..tarifo me baat toh kuch zarur hoti hai!! May be she dint appreciate her from her heart....but what atti saw was her daughter appreciating her....and this will remain with atti for long!!"


Shashank:-" You really can do anything for atti na??"


She nods her head in approval, the next bottle was spinned and it stopped on deepali!!


Shashank:-" I shall ask question to Deepali tai!!"


Deepali:-"Sure why not!!"


The whole of kuki gang was waiting for his question.... evryone so wanted to know what is he going to ask!!


Shashank:-" So deepali Tai...where would you like staying after Bhaskar kaka's marriage....US or India??"


Amey:-" Ohh my goodness...this was a direct question!!"


Kuki:-" But will she answere??"


Nikhil:-" She will answer...but what will she answer??"


Deepali she knew she was in trouble...she couldn't say US...bcz that would have hurted bhaskar....and she dint want to say India!!"


Apurva:-" Are deepali Tai...what's taking you so long???"


Deepali:-" India!! I shall like to stay in India!!"


Shashank:-" Wow!! That is the perfect decision you have taken deepali Tai!! This is the best for your daughter also!!" ( He gets up and goes near Ovi!!)


Shashank:-" Little kiddo!! Do you like this family??"


Ovi:-" Yes, i do!!"


Shashank:- "Whose your favourite??"


Ovi:-" Babi attya and apurva didi!!"


Shashank:-" Are wahh!! So if given a chance...would you like to stay with them always?? Babi attya will teach you nice nice things...your apurva didi will always play with you...teach you new new pranks...Mai, aai and panna kaku will make all your favourite dishes!! Sumi, prachi and Mansi Vahini can take you out for shopping!! Will be so much fun na...so will you like to stay like forever with all of us!!"


Ovi:-" You will also play with me na???"


Apurva:-" That's a bit difficult....but don't worry i fulfill his place!!"


Shashank:-" Ofcourse i shall play with you!!! Why not...so where will you like staying US or with all of us always??"


Ovi:-" With all of you always!!!"


Nikhil:-" Wohhh Shashank clean bowled deepali!!"


Sumi:-" Herein deepali won't even try to manipulate her daughter!!"


Shashank:-"See deepali Tai....your one decision made your daughter also so happy!! That's why I said you took an excellent decision!!"


Deepali was hell angry with what happened!! Her daughter was her only hope to go back to US and now Shashank very smartly without letting her know anything snatched that away from her....she was highly pissed off!!!


Now everyone understood what Shashank meant by either it will be good for us...or for her daughter!! Now deepali won't be able to manipulate ovi's mind!!! Shashank had promised appu that he won't let the little kiddo's mindset be affected and he fulfilled his promise!!!Shashank came and sat back at his place!!!


Apurva slowly in his ears:-" Khadus i shall tell you one secret!!"


Shashank:-" ya sure, why not!!"


Apurva:-" You are the best!!!"


Shashank was shocked at her words!!


Apurva:-" Whatever you did right now....you proved why you are scientist of the year....i am really proud of you!!!"


Shashank:-" seriously??"


Apurva:-" Yes!! Directly from my heart i am saying this!! You are the best and i am really very very proud of you!!"


Meanwhile the bottle was spinned and it stopped on amey!!


Amey:-" I am not scared of anything....dare!!!"


Dada kaka:-" I shall give you dare!!"


Mansi in his ears slowly:-" Now say you are not scared of anything??"


Dada kaka:-" After babi's marriage is over....you will for next 3 months continuslsy go to office...no leaves no concession Holiday nothing allowed!!"


Amey:-" Are but dada???"


Dada kaka:-" Next spin the bottle!!"


Kuki:-" Lag gayi teri!!"


Next bottle stops on kuki!!


Kuki:-" Truth!!"


Shashank teasing:-" Kuki gang leader is scared and taking truth...are re re!!"


Kuki:-" You shut up....truth!!"


Dada kaka:-" I will say about truth to vikas!!"


Kuki:-" Nakoo!!"


Dada kaka:-" For next 3 month in your office you will speak only truth...no lies allowed...main not even to your manger!!"


Amey:-" Lag gayi teri bhi!!"


Kuki:-" Are but this is dare...and i have opted for truth!!"


Dada kaka:-" So that's what I told you speaking truth...for next 3 months!!!Chalo next spin the bottle!!"


That's how the game continues having fun, teasing each other they were having a great time!!!


After the game was over, they all were having dinner together!!


Vitthu da:-" So whats the plan for tom??"


Deepali:-" Leta go to watch sunrise!! Bhaskar loves watching sunrises!!"


Babi:-" You yet like watching sunrises??"


Bhaskar:- "That was a habit we both had developed!!"


Apurva:-" Means???"


Kuki:-" Are means... sunrise was their meeting spot!! They both use to meet during sunrise....when they were in different different colleges na that time!!"


Everyone:-" Ohhhhh!!!"


Babi:-" Kukiiii!!!"


Nikhil:-" So let's recreate the memory for them....let's go for sunrise!!!"


Mansi:-" Deepali Tai....thank you for suggesting this!!"


Sua aai:-" Really deepali thank you....for reminding these two their old times!!"


Apurva:-" So sunrise tom...wow i am excited!! I have never seen sunrise!!"


Netra:-" Ofcourse....you generally wake up in the afternoon!! But apurva will you be able to join us tom??"


Apurva:-" Means??"


Netra:-" For sunrise you will have to wake up at 5 a m....and that is toh impossible for apurva vartak!!"


Sumi:-" Correction netra...apurva Shashank kanitkar!!! And you don't worry about her waking up ...she has her personal alaram to wake her up!!!"


Netra:-" Personal alarm???"


Prachi:-" Shashank dada!! Dada you will wake up appu na!!!"


Netra:- " Waking her up is not an easy task...even Shashank sir might miss watching sunrise with us!!"


Shashank:-" Don't worry netra...she is my wife...i absolutely know how to wake her up!! And without her forget just me...no one from here will go for an outing!!"


Netra:-" But then sir...just for that one person...our whole plan will be flop!!"


Kuki:-" Netra...she is appu...our appu and for all of us over here.... including Shashank...more than any plan appu is important!!"


Apurva:- "Are stop it....netra Tai ..don't worry khadus will wake me up...we will go for sunrise tom morning!!"


Saying this everyone retire for bed and kuki gang in shappu's room!!


Kuki:-" So whats the plan for tom!!"


Mansi:-"Jealousy!!"


Sumi:-" We have to make sure...babi attya and bahsakar kaka spend some quality....so that in Jealousy she will do something??"


Apurva:-" But what if she does anything to babi attya...like hurting her or anything??"


Shashank:-" You really think we will let anything happen to babi attya ... ofcourse not don't worry!!"


They all decide this plan and were off to sleep!!!


So guyz how was part 6??? Hopefully you have enjoyed this one as well!!!


Eagerly waiting for your comments!!!

Edited by niakush - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
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Hello friends,


I am back with the update!!


So initially i had written nothing about Shashank waking up appu in morning....but seeing everyone's interest in it...i have added it!!


Also aaniya....the kuki gang playing prank on netra is been added.... hopefully you will enjoy that as well!!


Part 6:- Mission Togetherness!!!


It was early morning 4 a.m when Shashank's alaram rang!!!! Switching off his alarm he sees his wife clinging to him and sleeping!!!


Shashank admiring his wife:-" you look so sweet and silent while sleeping....but when you wake up...you are just like toofan!! My toofan!!!" Smiling to himself, untangling himself from apuva he gets up!!!


Shashank to himself:-" Now how do I wake up this sleeping beauty??? Waking her up at 8 a.m is also a task... This is toh 4 a.m!!! Let's do one thing....let me first get ready....let her sleep for another 20 minutes!!!!" Saying this he goes and gets freshen up and then comes back to wake apurva up!!!

(Somebody refresh his memory about how the prince charming woke up sleeping beauty... Can't he just do that way.... ufff)!!!


Shashank to himself:-" Chalo Mr.Bhoot time for you to come into picture!!!!"


Shashank places apurva's phone near her ears....hides behind the bed and calls on her no. He himself answers the call and now apurva could hear everything!!!


Shashank with voice modulation:-" Apurva....apurva.....wake up!!"


Seeing apurva not reacting he shakes her a bit and then again hides behind the bed and again calls her...seeing apurva not yet reacting...he pinches her hard and then again hides and calls her..... finally apurva reacts!!!


Apurva:-" Are khadus let me sleep na!!"


Shashank:-" Who khaudus??? I am Bhoot....the mathematician bhoot!!!"


Apurva:-" Are that bhoot is in kanitkar wada...we are here in a picnic....and Mr.bhoot you also njoy the picnic!!!" She says sleeping!!!


Shashank:-" Idiot girl... Don't you know bhoot can go anywhere???"


Apurva:-" Khadus told me that bhoot stays in kanitkar wada only....so you can't change your place of living go from here...trouble me when I come to kanitkar wada again now let me sleep!!"


Shashank to himself:-" Crazy girl she is...just because I told her bhoot stays in kanitkar wada....she believes that bhoot cannot come here!! My innocent appu what shall I do with you!!! Plan 1 failed....sorry wify....i dint want to do this....but no option left!!!"


Shashank goes and sleeps besides apurva and acts as if talking on call!!!


Shashank:- "Yes amey dada!! I have woken up and coming down!! Apurva is very sleepy she will not come with us...wait yet i will ask her!!"


He nags her to wake her up...and asks if she is joining in sleeping state she says no !!


Shashank:-" No she is saying no!!! Amey dada netra must be ready!!! I shall do one thing I will come down with her!!!"


Listening to this apurva immediately takes the phone!!!


Apurva:-" Amey dada i am coming and khaudus is also coming with me!!! You check out on netra Tai!! Are he disconnected!!!"


Shashank:-" He never called only???"


Apurva:-" You were teasing me???"


Shashank:-" It worked!!"


Apurva:-" Khadussss.....i dont won't to come only ....i am sleeping!!!"


Shashank:-" S you actually want me to go with netra!!!"


Again getting up apurva:-" Aaeeeee.....when did I say that??"


Shashank:-" But you not getting up na!!!"


Apurva stands up on the bed itself:-" See i am up!!"


Shashank smiling to himself:-" Now go and get changed!!"


Apurva:-" Kadhus kutla!!!" She curses him while going!!"


Shashank:-" Shisht kutli!!! I really don't understand why are you Jealous of netra....for the records you have no reasons to be Jealous of her anyways!!!"



It was early morning 5 a.m when everyone got ready and were gathering in the living room!! Almost everyone was there except apurva and Shashank!!!


Netra:-"I told you all because of this indiscipline girl the whole plan can get flop....see now because of her even Shashank sir is not down!!! Other wise Shashank sir is very punctual!!!"


Mansi:-" Netra it was decided to meet at 5 a.m???"


Netra:-" And it's already 5.10 a.m and your everyone's favourite princess is not yet here!!"


When netra was speaking all this....apurva and Shashank come from the kitchen arguing on something as usual!!


Kuki:- "Appu took chips and biscuits for all??"


Apurva:-" Yes kuki, the whole bag is ready!!"


Sumi:-" And the late comer netra is also here...chalo let's leave!! Ohh btw netra...apurva and Shashank dada were here since 4.45 a.n....it was you who we were waiting for and that too because apurva insisted us to wait....learn to be punctual from next time!!"


Shashank:-" Kuki....the two cars went ahead!!"


Kuki:-" Yes!! Chalo now we shall also leave!!!"


They all were getting into the bus!!


Apurva:-" Khadus i forgot my phone!!"


Shashank:-" Apurva!! Wait I shall go and get it!!"


Apurva:- "Are it's in the kitchen only i shall get it...you settle down!!"


Shashank:-" Come fast...but walk slow!!"


Nikhil:-" That's contradictory!!"


Shashank:-"Nikhil rao.....in apurva's case that's necessary!!"


Nikhil:-" unfortunately that's true as well!!" They share a laugh at the cost of apurva!!!


Meanwhile Shashank settled in his seat and waited for apurva...as soon as apurva came and was about to sit besides Shashank.....netra went and sat besides Shashank!!!


Apurva:-" Excuse me that's my seat!!"


Netra:-" Your name is not written anywhere!! Go and sit somewhere else!!"


Apurva:- "But i want to sit here only!! And my name not be written here...but he is my husband and i want to sit besides him!!!"


Netra:-" Why act like a typical husband wife...when this is just a contract between you two for 1 year!! Go and settle somewhere else!!"


Shashank and apurva had actually forgotten about this contract thing....and netra reminded both the same!! At netra's this comment they both just kept staring at each other until the bus started!!! They both were hurt at netra's this comment....and both dint knew why!!!


Apurva went and sat behind at the last seat!!! Shashank also became silent!!


Shashank to himself:-" What's wrong with me....i knew this fact right....why am I hurt?? Ofcourse i really don't what her to leave after a year....but what if she actually does??? Is she yet Willing to leave...or she has changed her mind??? Anyways whatever it is.... currently i want to move from here!!! I don't know if apurva will go after a year or not...but currently she is here...and i want to make the best use of this time with my Shisht!!! Wait my Shisht?? Is she???"


Apurva to herself:-" Why am i hurt at this one year contract thing told by netra Tai....that's the fact right??? Did i make a mistake by putting this condition?? I really don't want to leave such a wonderful family....and khadus am i mentally prepared to leave him after a year...what does khadus want....does he really want me to leave???"


When Shashank and apurva were in their own thoughts kuki gang was planning something!!!


Nikhil:-" Kuki....now this netra is going into my head....we need to do something!!!"


Meanwhile Shashank was also trying ways to leave from there...but since he was sitting on the window side he wasn't able to and netra was leaving no chance to stop him!!


Sumi:- "she definitely deserves a lesson!!"


Mansi:-" We need to get bhauji out from there!!"


Prachi:-" I will only see what to do!!" Prachi goes near Shashank!!


Prachi:-" Netra Tai....get up i want to sit besides dada!! I want to talk something important!!"


Netra:-" What's so important praju???"


Prachi:-" It's prachi!! Only my loved ones can call me praju!!! I have to discuss about my admission!!!"


Netra:-" we are on a trip prachi....you as it is are not going to take admission now.... discuss later on!!! And you need to sit besides Ovi as well!! Go prachi!!!"


Kuki:-" Bas now it's height!!! Amey prank no. 28!! Have you got the prop???"


Amey:-" Ofcourse kuki!! I knew this chameleon would be here...so i have got the lizard!!!"


Sumi:-" What chipkali???"


Amey shows a plastic chipkali to all of them!!!"


Prachi:-" Hahaha chipkali for chipkali!!!"


Kuki:- "Praju!!! Don't insult the chipkali!!!"


They all hi-fi each other!!!


Amey:-" Charlie....(to Mansi) go this is your job!!!"


Mansi goes and slowly places that plastic chipkali on netra's shoulder!!! Netra feels something near her shoulder and then sees it to be a chipkali....she yells being scared and immediately gets up from her place!! As soon as she gets up...the very next second Shashank gets up and goes and sits besides apurva!!! Meanwhile prachi had already taken that chipkali and had hidden it!!


Kuki:-" What happened netra??"


Netra:-" There is this lizard in this bus!!!"


Amey:- "What???"


Netra:-" Ya just now it was in my shoulder!!"


Sumi:-" ohhh then what...... are you scared of your best friend!! Netra the first rule of friendship don't be scared of your friends!! And now this lizard is toh your best friend!!same chipku!!!"


Seeing the kuki gang taunting her and Shashank had already left the place and sitting besides apurva....she understood that kuki gang played a prank with her!!!


Netra:-" I won't spare you all!!! Just wait and watch what I do!!!"


Nikhil:-" Ohhh definitely!! I toh have 4 eyes (he meant specs) i will toh watch it more clearly!!!!"


Shashank thanks the kuki gang!!


Shashank:-" So why is my express silent today???"


Apurva coming out of her thoughts:-" When did you come here???"


Shashank:-" When you were so engrossed in my thoughts!!!"


Apurva:-" Your thoughts....why would I be involved in your thoughts??"


Shashank:-" You know na apurva you can't lie....i know you were thinking about me!!!"


Apurva:-" Mr. Self obsessed i have other better things to do in life!!!"


Shashank:-" Like what???"


Apurva:- "Like .... (She starts thinking).... like....!!"


Shashank:-" I am listening!!!"


Apurva:-" Ha....like thinking how to bring deepali tai's reality in front of everyone!!!"


Shashank:-" Are you leave that to me....i shall handle that!!"


Apurva:-" And what shall I do!!"


Shashank:-"Do your favourite job!!! Dhingana....Masti... pranks and ofcourse keep smiling!!!"


Apurva:-" my smile is injurious for your assistant!!!"


Shashank:-" But it's a neccissity for me!!!"


They both share an eye lock and this!!!


Shashank:-" And i shall do anything to get it back!!"


Apurva:- "Means???"


Shashank smiles at her and then starts tickling her!!!


Apurva:-" Khadus stop!!!"


Shashank:-" First give me your smile and then I shall stop!!"


After a few minutes of tickling apurva finally starts laughing and that's what exactly Shashank wanted!!! The entire kuki gang was njoying this new side of Shashank!!! Seeing their closeness netra was highly jealous!!!


Netra:-" Laugh apurva....i will make sure by the end of the day you cry!!!"


After a lot of ticking apurva goes near kuki!!!


Apurva:-" Kuki....see na he is tickling me!!!"


Kuki:-" Shashank very bad....appu you also go and tickle him!!!"


Apurva:-" Let it be kuki....it helped me in diverting my mind!!"


Shashank smiled and this.... infact the whole kuki gang bcz they knew the reason behind Shashank's this behaviour!!!


Shashank to himself:-" What's wrong with me...why am I behaving like a kid with her??? Why does her smile matter to me so much??? What's happening Shashank kanitkar??? But whatever it is....i am somewhere njoying it!!"


Kuki:- "Ok guyz....since we have unwanted people here...come on whatsapp chatting we need to discuss something!!!"


The further conversation happens on messages!!!


Kuki:-" What is our next plan for deepali???"


Nikhil:- "As decided jealousy!!"


Mansi:-" But how are we going to make her jealous!!"


Shashank:-" Kuki....let's plan a date for babi attya and Bhaskar kaka!!"


Apurva:-" Khadus....how can we plan a date abhi....there is nothing romantic over here...no hotels...no music...how can we plan a date here!!"


Shashank:-"All this is fantasy apurva...real date doesn't require all this...it just requires two people and their feelings!!!"


Apurva:-" Seriously???"


Sumi:-" Dada you should actually take appu on a date to make her realise these things!!!"


Apurva:-" Khadus and will take me on a date.... impossible!!"


Shashank:-" Topic is being diverted...let's come to the main topic!!!"


Meanwhile Shashank messages apurva on personal:- "Nothing is impossible shisht!!!"


Apurva understanding his meaning:-" With boring people it is khadus???"


Shashank:-" Boring and me!!"


Apurva:- "I never said anything you assumed it!!"


Shashank:-" ok!!! Wait and watch!!"


Apurva:-"🧐🧐🧐🧐"


Back to group chatting!!!


Amey:-" So how shall we plan a date???"


Shashank:-" We shall see an isolated place over here....kuki you will get bhaskar kaka at that place....I will get babi attya there....apurva and sumi you shall get deepali Tai there...Mansi Vahini and nikhil rao you shall keep a watch on deepali Tai and amey dada you shall search a good place for the date there and one more thing we all completing our jobs will leave from there...too many people being there will create a doubt in deepali tai's mind!!"


All reply:-" Done!!"


Apurva:-" All the best guys for mission dhamaka!!!"


Message conversation ends!!!


Apurva:-" Khadus...what do you think will deepali Tai do???"


Shashank:- "I don't know apurva!!! She will try to separate babi attya and Bhaskar kaka!!"


Apurva:-" what if she succeeds???"


Shashank:-" We have to trust their love apurva!!"


Apurva:-" Is love this powerful???"


Shashank:-" More than love trust is!!! Trust has a lot of power apurva!!"


Apurva:-" So trust is very important for love??"


Shashank:-" Very!!" Shashank realised that she is thinking about their relation!!! He puts his hands on her shoulder and takes her in a side hug!!!


Shashank:-" But trust takes a lot of time to built apurva!!! It undergoes and lot of test...which sometimes we may fail...but that failure teaches us a lot and that's how our trust becomes more stronger!!"


Apurva:- "Khadus..... something simple plz!!"


Shashank:-" We both may have not trusted each other all the times...that was our test in which we failed...but that failure taught us a lesson and now I trust you a lot...that's how in any relationship trust builds its own indentity!!!"


Apurva smiles at his explanation and snuggles into him more!!!!


So that's all about this part!!


How was it guyz??? Awaiting your comments!!!

Edited by niakush - 3 years ago
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So friends, here is part 8!!! This part is basically filler part for the climax!!! This part is a bit over dramatic...bear with me for this part!!!


Part 8:- Mission Togetherness


All of the had reached the location!! It was a beautiful location....it was a riverside from where you could see sunrise!!!


Vittu da:-" Come here everyone...see the sun is just about to rise!!!"


Everyone gathers near vitthu da!!! The sun rises!!! That sight of sun rising was so beautiful to see....the sun had painted the sky into orangish colour......whereas the reflection of orange colour was Falling in the river!!! It was a worth seeing site!!


Sumi:-" This is so beautiful!!!"


Prachi:- "It's mesmerizing!!"


Dada kaka:-" It's not just beautiful and mesmerizing....it's symbolic as well!!!"


Apurva:- "Means???"


Dada kaka:-" When the sun rises....it takes away the darkness!! It is a symbol that darkness never stays for long....some or the other day you will find light to take away this darkness!!"


Apurva:-" Means like sua aai said in gudi padwa...all the bad things will one day end and we shall have good things in life!!"


Mai:- "Ofcourse it does tell us the same thing...but it also tells you that all these good things will happen only if you keep hope!! It mainly teaches us to keep hope!!! You should always hope that bad things will end....you should always be positive that ray of light will brighten your life as well!!"


Apurva:-" Wow sunrise is so symbolic!!"


Sua aai:-" Same way sunset is also symbolic!! Life is not just about always being happy ...there will be sadness in life as well...but it may not last long if you keep hope...light and dark both are part and parcel of life...and you should be able to live with both!!!"


The elders explain the meaning very beautifully!!! All of them were watching the sunrise in peace!!!


Apurva:-" Khadus...can I ask you a question??"


Shashank was feeling so peaceful he just replied hmmmmm!!


Apurva:-" As Mai said we shouldn't loose hope....our family got us married with lot of hope!!! There was a time when we both hated each other!!"


Shashank:-" Was a time??? So now what's the status....do you like me now??"


Apurva looking into his eyes:-" I don't know....but yes i dont hate you now!! What about you??"


Shashank:-" I never hated you Apurva....it's just i never liked you!! But now may be i do!!!"


Apurva:-" So khadus....will our families hope win anyday???"


Shashank:-" I don't know apurva!! Ya but i also have a hope that some day...this sun will get light for us as well and shine the brightest for us that day....but individually or together that's for time to decide!!!"


Apurva in her mind:- "Can i hope for together...or do i want to hope for together???!!"


Shashank in his mind:- " May be i want it to be together!!"


Having this conversation....apurva hold Shashank's elbow rests her head on his shoulder...and they both together watch the sunrise in hope!!!


(Writer's POV:- sunrise is the most surreal thing!! Most peaceful thing....which helps you to clear your minds!!!)


Shashank removes his phone and tries to capture the sunset!!!


Apruva:-" Are...what's wrong!!! Khadus and taking photos today???"


Shashank:- "This is so surreal, this is so peaceful, so beautiful!!! Just felt like capturing it!!"


She was yet holding his elbow!!!


Shashank:-" Apurva!! Look here!!!" Saying this he takes a selfie of both of them!!!


Apurva:-"Have you left my khadus in the room itself today!!! This is someone who is acting so sweet!! Clicking pictures and all!!!"


Shashank:-" I don't know apurva....just felt like capturing us together!!"


Apurva:-" You know right this is our first ever selfie!!"


Shashank:- "I dint take a selfie apurva...i just captured the moment which i felt like capturing!!"


Apurva:-" Do send me the picture!!!"


Shashank:-" Anything else madam!!"


Apurva:-" No!!" Saying this she just rest her head again on Shashank's shoulder!!!


This entire scene was witnessed by netra....she dint understand what was happening rather say she dint want to understand....but Jealousy was clearly reflecting on her face and this Jealousy was seen by someone!!!


Meanwhile amey messages on their group!!


Amey:-" on the right side you come half km ahead there is a lane....enter that lane....there is a small bridge sort of thing...that's our place...where our targets need to reach!!!"


Shashank replies:-" Kuki, you take the first lead make Bhaskar kaka reach that location first!!"


But kuki was so busy talking to vittu da that he dint see his phone only!!!


Shashank to apurva:-" why is kuki not seeing his phone!!!"


Apurva:-" Chill khadus....why to fear when apurva vartak kanitkar is here!!!"


Shashank:-" Matlab problem is on its way!!"


Apurva:-" What??? Leave it....when i ask you something just keep doing what you generally do!!"


Shashank:-" What i keep doing??"


Apurva:-" Argue with me simple!!!"


Shashank was clueless what was coming and other side apurva was in full detective mode!!!


Apurva shouts:-" gamma (this was kuki's code name....kuki gets alert at this) khadus....i heard someone saying that this phone passes a lot of gamma radiation!! Is it true???"


Shashank sees kuki checking his phone and then it recalls him about code names:- "I so knew you know nothing!!"


Apurva:-" Hello i know everything....do you even know what gamma radiations are!!"


Shashank:-" There is nothing called gamma radiations apurva.... forget it All this is beyond your understanding!!!"


Apurva and Shashank were kind of arguing when netra jumps in!!!


Netra:-" Sir, what would a B.a fail know about radiations...i am toh surprised she knows the word radiation!!!"


Shashank bangs his head with his hand listening to netra.... whatever apurva said was just to give a hint to kuki to check his phone...he was so irritated by netra's interference...that he holds apurva's hand leaves from there!!!! And netra stands there in shock!!!! That's when someone meets netra!!


Meanwhile kuki had read the message and had put his plan in action he was taking Bhaskar to that place!!!


Shashank:-" Apurva.....smart work!!! Must say brilliant idea!!"


Apurva:-" Thank you Romeo!! But one doubt and i need your help!!"


Shashank:-" Romeo is always there for Juilet's help!!"


Apurva:-" Mr. Romeo we have a hurdle....Ovi won't leave her mom how will we take deepali Tai to our target???"


Shashank:-" Do one thing....Ovi is very fond of you!! You go and play with her and then after some time...tell prachi to take care of her and then leave for our mission!!"


Apruva:-" Ok Romeo!! Juilet reporting on duty!! I shall go near Ovi!!"


Shashank:-" Juilet!!! All the best....and plz don't over do things ...take care of yourself as well!!"


Apurva:-" You are saying as if i am going to fight any war!!!"


Shashank:-" With you anything can happen!!"


Apurva:-" Uffff.... khadus!!!" She leaves Making Shashank smile!!!!


Kuki makes a group call!!!


All pick up and kuki just says one dailouge:-" Romeo need to take over....action!!"


Bhaskar:-" Whose call it is...and Romeo???"


Kuki:-" Are nothing Bhaskar....a friend is enacting in a play na....so he just called and told his dailouge!! That's it!!!"


Bhaskar:-" But where are we going???"


Kuki:- "Bhasakr i misunderstood you for a long time...we were good friends before whatever happened....just felt like having a morning tea with my old friend!!! Can't you forgive me and just come with me for tea???"


Bhaskar:-" I have forgiven you long time back kuki!! Chalo today you will pay my tea bill...chalo!!!"


Meanwhile Shashank gets babi attya also and they start towards their destination!!!


When they were half way....again a group call is recieved...and Shashank had to take that call!!! Apurva had made the group call!!


Apurva:-" khadusssss!!!"


Amey:-" Romeo Romeo..... juilet agents we are remember!???"


Apurva:-" Ha that only!!! We should have given someone else this job.... Romeo is very slow....!!"


Shashank was with babi attya he couldn't even react !!!


Mansi:-" Are juilet....Romeo is not alone!!"


Apurva:-" These detective jobs na...we shouldn't give it to my romeo!!! He is very bad at all this!!!"


Shashank very slowly:-" I shall see you later on juilet.... currently take over!! Alpha and juilet take over!!!" Finally he disconnects the call saying this!!!!


Sumi and apurva go near deepali...and start talking!!


Sumi:-" Appu did you hear.... bhaskar kaka has taken babi atya on a date!! Like old times they are gone to see sunrise together!!!"


Apurva:-" Seriously!!! Aeee sumi let's go na...we shall also go!!"


Sumi:-" Are it's their date!!!"


Apurva:- "So what...we shall watch it from far na...i have never known how dates look like ...plz na sumi!!"


Sumi:-" actually even i want to see....chalo let's go!!"


They both start moving followed by Deepali!!


Deepali to herself:-" I really need to see what is Bhaskar upto!!!"


Meanwhile Shashank had reached the location!!! Bhaskar and babi attya saw each other!!!


Bhaskar:-" So kuki... This was your plan na???"


Kuki:-" You can thank me later on Bhaskar!!"


Babi attya holding shashank's ears:-" Now you also are a part of this kuki gang kya???"


Shashank:-" Anything for your happiness attya!! Kuki let's leave!!!"


Babi attya blushes at this and kuki and Shashank start leaving!!!


Shashank:-" Oh hello kuki....where are you going???"


Kuki:-" back!! It was decided na that we shall complete our jobs and return back...bcz if too many people are here....deepali might doubt us!!!"


Shashank:-" Yo but hold on for sometime!! Sumi and apurva must be coming with Deepali....if she sees us...she will understand....let them come and then we shall go!!!"


Kuki:-" You are scientist for a reason ha....smart!!" They hide themselves!!!


Sumi and apurva reach...followed by Deepali and she followed by Mansi and nikhil!!!!


Mansi:-" Nikhil rao!!! Record deepali tai's reaction!! It might help us!!!"


On the other side...deepali sees bhaskar and babi attya holding hands....and being romantic!! She was highly jealous!!!


While all this was happening....deepali recieves a call and she immediately leaves that place!!!


The entire gang was there as soon as deepali leaves they all gather together....move a bit aside.... giving Bhaskar kaka and babi attya some space!!!


Apurva:-" Yaar....such a solid plan got flopped...whose call was that!!!"


Shashank:-" we need to find out whose call was that??"


Nikhil:-" How will that help us??"


Shashank:-" See it was obvious she was jealous of these two....what was more important than these two?? She could have easily spoiled their date by interfering, why dint she do that?? Why did she leave?? I feel she is taking advice from someone....we need to find out who is that person!! Bcz we can't confront deepali Tai .. we can definitely confront that person on call???"


Kuki:-" Makes sense!!!"


Mansi:-" but how will we reach till her phone!!"


Nikhil:-" That toh we will easily reach the way we reached appu's phone to call Shashank from institute!!"


Nikhil said in a flow...but they all went to the flashback of that scene and did have a small laughter session with our Romeo and Juliet blushing all way😂😂


Nikhil:-" But the main problem is how will we know her password!!"


Sumi:-" Are Ovi might be k knowing!!"


Kuki:-" Excellent!! So appu ..you take out the password from Ovi ...and we shall get the phone!!!"


They all March back with this new mission!!!


Apurva goes near Ovi:-" hi Ovi!!!"


Ovi:-" Hi didi!!!"


Apurva:-" Ovi....i am getting very bored....let's play a game!!"


Ovi:-" Ok what shall we play???"


Apurva:-" Let's play secrets!!"


Ovi:-"How do we play that??"


Apurva:-" I will ask you a secret question you have to answer that and same goes with you...you can ask me any question!!"


Ovi:-" Ok!!"


Apurva:-" So i shall start!! What's your secret wish??"


Ovi:-" To meet cindrella!!"


Shashank was nearby as this game idea was suggested by Shashank only so apurva had asked him to be near by!!!


Shashank to himself:- "You already sitting in front of one!! Wait what did i just call apurva a princess??? Why?? But she is a princess...there is not doubt in that!!! My princess!!"


Ovi:-" Your fav Disney Princess??"


Apurva:-" snow white!!"


Like this the game continues!!!


Apurva:-" So next secret question....Your phone password?? Oh sorry you don't have a phone!!"


Ovi:-" But mummy has na....and it's my birthday!!"


Apurva:-"What's your birthdate???"


Ovi:- "2nd March 2016!!!"


Apurva:-" Are wahhh!!!"


Like this appu gets the password from Ovi!! But other side even after lot of attempts the gang was not able to take deepali Tai's phone!!!


Dada kaka:-" Chalo let's go for breakfast!! We get mast misal here!!"


Everyone has their breakfast!!!


Shashank:-" Apurva....you have hardly eatten anything.... complete this fast!!"


Apurva:-" Khadus this is very spicy!!"


Shashank:- "Its misal apurva....it is ought to be spicy!!"


Apurva:-" I can't eat this!!! Bye i am going!!"


Saying this she just leaves the place and roams around near the river!!! That's when she heard someone talking!!!


Deepali:-"Thank god you called, i toh dint knew only these people had made a plan!!!"


Netra:-" All this is that apurva's doing!!"


Deepali:-" Exactly!! She definitely had heard me that day and that's the reason now they are trying to gather some proofs against me!!"


Netra:-" I am there to help you but you need to be careful!!!" Before she could continue further....she sees apurva there!! Even apruva sees her!!!


Apurva:-" So netra Tai!! You were the one who called deepali Tai!! And deepali Tai what are you doing??? Bhaskar kaka respects you why are you playing games and spoiling a pure relationship!!! If you have feelings for bhaskar kaka gonand admit it!!"


Deepali:-" That's your misconception i do not have feelings for him!!!"


Apurva:-"Then why are you trying to stop this marriage???"


Netra:-" A stupid girl like you won't understand that!!"


Apurva:-" you are no one to interfere!!! So just shut up!! This is our family matter!!!"


Netra:-" And you really think Shashank sir would trust you with his family matters???"


Apurva:-" You don't worry about me, but he definitely does not trust you with his matters!!!"


Netra:-" Hereon he will!!"


They were standing on a bridge near the river, netra acts as if she has fallen from the bridge into the river...the river wasn't deep but netra acts as she doesn't know swimming!!!


Immediately everyone reaches there and Shashank goes and saves netra!!! Apurva was just standing and witnessing everything...she was blank what was happening!!!


Sarika attya:-" How did this happen netra??? How did you fall??"


Netra:-" Nothing aai leave it na!!!" She signals deepali!!!


Deepali:-" This is all because of apurva!!!"


Apurva was shocked listening to this!! She dint knew how to react!!!


Deepali:-" i dont know what happened netra and apurva were having an argument!! And in that argument only apurva bymistake hurted netra's leg which made netra loose her balance and she fell in the river!!"


Everyone was shocked to listen to this!!!


Sarika:-" Appu!!! How could you hurt netra???"


Deepali:-" No it was by mistake!!! Apurva dint do anything intentionally!!!"


Sarika:-"But what was the need to even argue!!! If anything would have happened to netra then!!!"


Apurva was hurt by sarika attya's words!! Tears had formed in her eyes!!!


Shashank out of concern:-" Netra!!! You are not hurt anywhere right???"


Since Shashank had saved her, clinging to him more:-" Yes sir i can't walk!! I guess i have hurted my leg!!"


Apurva was seeing all this and was hurt badly....one side her attya dint trust her and shouted on her second side she felt even Shashank dint trust her, crying she left the place Making netra happy!!! Netra was right when she said that, by the end of the trip she will make apurva cry?? But had she actually succeeded??? Did Shashank not trust her????


So friends...this is just a filler part!!! Let me know how was it!!!



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So here is the final part of the story!!! Hopefully you all will like the climax the same way you have liked the story!!


Final chapter:- Mission Togetherness!!!


Since netra and Shashank were wet, they all returned back to farmhouse!!! Apurva did not return in bus, she returned in the car with Mai and dada kaka!!! She was very upset!!!


They returned to the farmhouse and all went to their rooms!!! Apurva was sitting near the window when Shashank changed and came to her!!!


Shashank:-" Apurva???"


She dint respond!! Shashank shaking her from her shoulders!!!


Shashank:-" Apurva???"


She wipes her tears:-" Chalo start!!"


Shashank:-" What start??"


Apurva:-" You will also want to shout on me like atti na...that i did wrong to your favourite assistant!! I shouldn't have fought with her.... because of me she fell in that river....!!"


She was about to continue when Shashank places his finger on her lips!!!


Shashank:-" I do want to know what happened there!!! But before that let me tell you i really don't believe that you hurted netra physically in any sense!! I know my Shisht....she can be childish...she can shout...she can fight....but hurting anyone...not possible!!! And even if she has hurt anyone by mistake....she would be the one to help that person first and would ask sorry from that person 10 times for hurting unintentionally!!! And since you dint once say sorry to netra, i know you did nothing!!!"


Apurva:-" You really beleive me, that i dint do anything???" She asks with a lot of hope!!


Shashank:-" I have my full faith on you!!!"


Apurva hugs him immediately and he also takes her in his embrace!!! He knew she needed this assurance currently!!! After she stops crying.... Shashank asks her what happened at the river side!!! Apurva tells him everything what deepali and netra were discussing and then her confrontation and netra falling herself!!


Apurva:-" Khadus....i have no proofs for all this....but this is true!! Beleive me khadus!!!"


When they were discussing kuki gang enters their room!!


Kuki:-" Shashank you won't believe who is helping deepali!!"


Kuki gang had finally succeeded in taking deepali tai's phone!!!


Shashank:-" Netra!!!"


Amey:-" How do you know???"


Shappu share everything with the gang!!!


Sumi:-" How low will this netra fall???"


Mansi:-" Bhauji you need to confront this netra???"


Apurva:-" Leave her Mansi Vahini!! You all trusted me that is only enough!! She knew the impulsive me will tell everything to khadus....and she thought khadus would never believe me and that shall create ba fight between us!!! But since khadus has believed me, her plan has already flopped!! We need to focus on deepli Tai!!!"


Shashank:-" Apurva is right!!! Netra we can handle, but currently deeplai Tai needs a reality check!!"


Nikhil:-" But how do we give her that!!"


Shashank:-" By confronting her!!"


Kuki:-" And who will confront her??"


Shashank:-" Apurva!!! She knows all the reality, so it can't be anyone better than apurva!!"


Sumi:-" Appu will you be able to do this!!"


Shashank:-" Trust me sumi!! I have my full confidence in her!!!"


Apurva was shocked but at the same time so happy listening to this!!! Her khadus trusted her....what else she needed!!!


Apurva:-" I shall do it!!"


Shashank:-" Listen everyone, we all will be on terrace!! Nikhil rao you shall be recording their conversation!! Apurva you confront her if needed i shall join you!!"


Apurva:-" Ok let's go then!!"


Kuki:-" Wait!! Mansi and amey....you will keep netra busy!!! She should not know about this terrace plan!!! Me nikhil sumi Shashank and apurva will be on terrace!!"


All together:- "Done!!"


Apurva and deepali reach terrace, the others were already there and Shashank was waiting near the door, that if needed he shall enter!!!


Deepali:-" So what did you want to talk to me about!!! Ohh wait you are here to blackmail me that if i dont stop then you will tell all this to everyone???"


Apurva:-" No!!! I know no one will beleive me and after today netra tai's that fake incident, no one will ever beleive me with something this big!!!"


Deepali:-" Wow!! Then why are we here??"


Apurva:-" why are you doing all this deepali Tai???"


Deepali:-" It is none of your concern!!"


Apurva:-" It is my concern!! My babi attya is involved in this!!! You love Bhaskar kaka don't you??"


Deepali:- " No i dont love him!!"


Apurva:-" Yes you do!!"


Deepali:-" No i dont!!"


Apurva instigates her....seeing the situation becoming very loud Shashank had no option but to enter, otherwise someone from downstairs would have come up!!


Shashank:-" What's happening here??? Your volumes are coming till downstairs!!"


Apurva:-" Answer deepali Tai!!"


She looks at Shashank and then at appu!!! Shashank understands deepali thought Shashank knew nothing!!!


Shashank:-" I am her husband deepali Tai!!! You really think she will hide such a thing from me??"


Deepali:-" Don't beleive her she is talking non sense!!"


Shashank:-" If i am her husband, she is also my wife!! And i know my wife better to know when she is talking non sense!! Say it deepali Tai, you love Bhaskar kaka na!! Wait you don't actually love him you are obsessed with him, are you not???"


Shashank comes and stands with apurva!!! Deepali does not reply to this!!


Apurva:-" So you are actually obsessed with bhaskar kaka!! And that's the reason you hate babi attya this much???"


Deepali:-" I, Bhaskar and Ovi were living a great life in US, till Bhaskar decided to come and tell vidhya everything!!! And now they both want to get married!!! What about me and Ovi???"


Apurva -" Bhaskar kaka has yet told that he will take your responsibility...and Ovi toh his daughter only!!! Then what's the problem!!"


Deeplai:-" Your babi attya in our small Little world, she will enter!!"


Shashank:-" Which small Little world deeplai Tai!!! That world, on which it was babi attya's right always!! That world which that fatal accident stole it from her!! That world which was her and bhasakar kaka's dream always, that world which they both have been waiting to live since years??? Which world deepali Tai???"


Apurva:-" We understand your insecurities deepali Tai!! We understand why you want to separate these two....but tell me Deepali tai is seprating them easier?? If it was easy, this could have happened long back, when they were not even in touch!!!"


Shashank:- "They truely love each other!! They are like Radha Krishna, they don't expect things in love, they just know to love!! Even distance couldn't reduce their love, you think any of your tricks would do???"


Apurva:-" If Bhaskar kaka has decided to come back after so many years which clearly means he has been badly wanting babi attya!! You may do something and take Bhaskar kaka to US, but let me tell you deepali Tai, this time the soul of bhaskar kaka will be left here only!! And a simple body cannot give happiness to anyone!! You are currently his best friend, you will loose even on that and moreover you will loose out the father to your child!! Think about that child deepali Tai!! Ovi is already going through a lot accepting this and then Bhaskar kaka's behaviour will affect her more!!!"


They both were confronting deepali and were giving a realty check to deepali, which she may be knew from before but yet she needed someone to make her realise these things and shappu did a great job at this!!


Shashank:-" We have all this recorded, but don't worry we won't show it to anyone!! Because it's you who has to let go your obsession and accept the fact that neither babi attya nor you are an extra person!! You guyz own a special place in bhaskar kaka's heart!! And he won't back out from his responsibilities ever!!! The person who is been your back bone....give him his happiness back deeplai Tai!!! And then only you shall get your peace back!!"


Apurva:-" And may be when your daughter grows up, she will be really proud of her mother rather than being ashamed of what you are doing now!! It's upto you...what you want to be the role model for your daughter or the villian for bhaskar kaka and babi attya's happiness!!!"


Saying this the entire gang leaves from there, keeping deepali in her thoughts!!!


Deepali wasn't wrong, it was just her insecurities that were making her do wrong things!! May be she actually dint love bhasakar, bcz if she did she would have the courage to let him go, the way babi attya could let him go years ago!! Love makes you strong and she was becoming weak, that's when she realised Shashank was right Bhaskar was her obsession and not love and she needed to over come it!!!


The day though started with a good note, but don't go well for everyone!! It was 4 p.m and everyone were down for tea!!! Today there was a bit of silence and why wouldn't it be, their enthu package was silent today!!!


Dada kaka:-" So whats the plan for today!!!"


Deepali:-" shall I tell??"


Mai:-" Ofcourse!!"


Deepali:-" Leta decide the theme for bhasakar and Vidya's wedding!!!"


The entire kuki gang was surprised at this!!


Bhaskar:-" It's very soon to decide that deepali!!"


Deepali:-" No it's not that soon!! Are come on bhaskar...it's been ages i have had any Indian wedding i know nothing about it, if we don't start now how will I prepare everything??"


Sua aai:-" Don't worry we all will help!!"


Deepali:-" That toh you have to only!! I don't understand these rituals and i want the wedding to be the best one!! Our daughter will be attending the first Indian wedding, she needs to understand these rituals!! Vidya tai....you will explain her all the rituals na??"


Babi attya:-" ofcourse!! With pleasure!!"


All the elders were happy seeing deepali's this side, but only it was the younger clan who understood the reason behind her change!! She thanked Shashank and apurva with her eyes and they reciprocated it!!!


Shashank:-" So whats the plan for today?? What shall we do???"


Kuki:-" Apurva will decide!! What shall we do appu??"


Shashank:-" Let it be kuki, shisht will decide something very childish!! She can't decide good games!!"


Bas this was the trigger point for apurva:-" Khadusssss..... childish games na...wait i will show you!!"


She takes a stick from there and starts running behind Shashank...they start playing tom and jerry!!! Netra had acted in the morning that she was hurt on her leg when appu had pushed her in the river!!


Shashank and apurva were running like kids in the entire house with apurva trying to catch Shashank, and he running from her her!! The entire family was happy witnessing the scene in front of them!! Their so regular and disciplined Shashank was having so much fun was a sight to watch for them!!


While running Shashank comes near netra and acts as if he is going to fall!!! Netra immediately gets up from her chair and goes to save Shashank...that's when Shashank shifts his postion and netra falls straight on her face!!! He then gets up and goes near netra!!!


Shashank;-" Netra are you fine!!"


Netra:-" Yes sir!!"


Shashank:-" Here give me your hand get up!!"


She feeling happy gives her hand to shashank and stands up!! As soon as she stands up Shashank immediately leaves her hand!!


Shashank:" I see netra!! Your leg now seems pretty fine!! Morning to you had a bad fall because of apurva and you were not able to even move!! Now you ran so fast....wow such a fast recovery???"


Netra realises what mistake she made!!!


Netra:- "Ya sir my leg is very much fine now!!"


Kuki:-" so fine that now you can run, 10 minutes before toh you couldn't even walk!!"


Sua aai:-" You really thought netra that we all beleived you in the morning!!"


Mai:-" We all were silent only because you are sarika attya's daughter and she would have been hurt!!"


Dada kaka:-" Our appu is someone who would save lives...even of a stranger!!"


Panna kaku:-" And you really wanted us to beleive that she could hurt her own sister!!"


Babi attya:-" That is something she wouldn't even do in dreams!!"


Vitthu da:-" And even if it was by mistake...our appu wouldn't shy to apologise!!!"


Kuki:-" she makes mistakes!! Infact a lot of mistakes!!"


Amey-" But she immediately even apologises!!!"


Mansi:-" You may be highly educated and may have earned degrees!!"


Sumi:-" But our appu has won people!!"


Prachi:-" And these people love her from her heart!!"


Nikhil:-" she may not be matured!!! She may be irresponsible!! But yet she is everyone's favourite!!!"


Apurva was so emotional listening to everyone!! Her entire family was standing by her side!! They all loved her so so much!! She had tears in her eyes!!!


Shashank goes near apurva holds her hand:-" And this is Apurva Shashank kanitkar for you netra!!! These are her people netra including me!! They all love her to the core and for her happiness everyone would stand by her!!! And here on netra, any evil has to first cross me to reach her!!! We all knew you lied, you may hate her that's your personal choice, but do not try to harm her or her self respect, i am standing in between never forget that!!!"


Shashank makes apurva face him and wipes her tears, apurva was so full of emotions that she just hugs him and he also without fearing of the teasing session embraces her!!!


And that brings and end to my this story as well!!


So how was the story??? Did you guyz like it?? How was the climax???


Eagerly waiting for your comments!!!

Edited by niakush - 3 years ago
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#35

Originally posted by: niakush

Hahahaha saachme netra kahi bhi pauch sakti hai😂😂


Me bhi tumhare sath hi hu....even i hate when netra even stands besides Shashank!!!


In the OG version tinni was standing so close to babin while singing...it felt as if they are real couples singing duet....i so hated it!!! And seeing that now i hate netra more😂😂

Netra ke case me hum dono ek team hai matlab 😆

Yes, dono ne achha duet gaya tha ek sath perfect couple jaise dikh rahe the 😭

But ye scene TR me nahi chahiye never ever 😡

Tinni ki comparison me Netra jyada irritating hai, jab bhi muh kholti hai mere kan dukhne lagte hai aur dimag kharab ho jata hai 🤢

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Part 5 is ❤️

Shappu Romeo and Juliet 😳

Appu's answer to Netra is best ( Wah kya imagination power hai tumhare pas hats off to you 👍🏼)

I think Appu ke bare me starting me judgemental hona is bat ke liye shashank ko regret feel hota hoga ( but I know tumhara actual answer bestest hoga )

Thank you dear 🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago
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yes, prolly inviting Netra everywhere

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Chinmayi18

Netra ke case me hum dono ek team hai matlab 😆

Yes, dono ne achha duet gaya tha ek sath perfect couple jaise dikh rahe the 😭

But ye scene TR me nahi chahiye never ever 😡

Tinni ki comparison me Netra jyada irritating hai, jab bhi muh kholti hai mere kan dukhne lagte hai aur dimag kharab ho jata hai 🤢


Muje dialogue samaj nahi ati bengali version k so tinni k baate bhi samaj nahi ati😂😂 isliye waise hi muje netra irritating lagti😂😂


Actually muje TR me voh singing scene nahi chaiye yaar

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Chinmayi18

Part 5 is ❤️

Shappu Romeo and Juliet 😳

Appu's answer to Netra is best ( Wah kya imagination power hai tumhare pas hats off to you 👍🏼)

I think Appu ke bare me starting me judgemental hona is bat ke liye shashank ko regret feel hota hoga ( but I know tumhara actual answer bestest hoga )

Thank you dear 🤗


Are thank you mat bolo baar baar...we are friends remember 🥰🥰


Appu best hi hai...❣️❣️


Let's see... judgemental k liye hi tha kya nahi ...next update me samaj jayega....but you are close 🤔🤔


Thanks for liking it❣️❣️

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Oh my God thank you so much for sharing this ❤️

I am not insta so can you please share your vms here

This was another song that haven't heard in a while, oh god just loved it especially when Shahshank slipped and they had that cute eye lock❤️ an uspe ohho ohho ka background was so prefect👍🏼

Can I give a small request, you can completely ignore it, but like if you make any vm in the future can you please use raata lambeyan or rait jara se, I know thoda overused hai but kind of my fav right now 😅

You can just ignore this if you want

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