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Posted: 3 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: IAdoreYou


I am glad to hear that! I try to have either a picture edit or a VM to post along with my episode reviews. Makes people connect better! 😊

Thank you, thank you very much 💔

Is beautiful vm and brilliant episode review ke liye

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Posted: 3 years ago
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I am sound very odd....but i seriously don't know how to reserve a post or add a link....i am very bad at IF ka technology....kabhi samaj hi nahi aya forums🙈🙈


I shall post the story here...and at the end of the story shall include page nos. For reference!!

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Hahahaha saachme netra kahi bhi pauch sakti hai😂😂


Me bhi tumhare sath hi hu....even i hate when netra even stands besides Shashank!!!


In the OG version tinni was standing so close to babin while singing...it felt as if they are real couples singing duet....i so hated it!!! And seeing that now i hate netra more😂😂

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Your edits are really awesome!!! Matlab you choose the perfect pictures and the perfect songs....and plus that captions you add....so wonderful!!!❣️❣️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: niakush

I am sound very odd....but i seriously don't know how to reserve a post or add a link....i am very bad at IF ka technology....kabhi samaj hi nahi aya forums🙈🙈


I shall post the story here...and at the end of the story shall include page nos. For reference!!


You just have to make a series of comments. Say you are posting a story that you know will have four parts. Just make four comments in series and whenever you are done writing an update, edit those comments and paste your chapters. That way your story will be on one page and the parts, in a sequence.


Usually you are not supposed to be needing to do this as you caj have your thread for your every story but since we don't get a dedicated forum for Marathi shows, and this is not the TR forum - this seems like the only option.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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If you need a more convenient option, choose the new fanfiction section of IF. That is more or less like Wattpad.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: niakush

I am sound very odd....but i seriously don't know how to reserve a post or add a link....i am very bad at IF ka technology....kabhi samaj hi nahi aya forums🙈🙈


I shall post the story here...and at the end of the story shall include page nos. For reference!!

reserve as in you just make a post and then keep on editing it

i think there's a limit to the number of links you can have in a single post

so you need to have multiple posts

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Okk thanks for making me understand....that reserved options sounds cool...as i actually know how many chapters i can have!!!


Thanks for the explanation!!!!

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Cool thnx...that's a good solution!!!

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Posted: 3 years ago
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So friends....first of a thank you for that reserved wala solution that sounds cool...as i actually have a bit idea that how many parts will this story have....so i shall reserve the post and then edit it!!!


So part 5 of the story is here!! Basically for me....from here the actual fun in the story starts....till part 4 you can say it was built-up and getting into the story.....so let's begin!!!


Part 5:- Mission Togetherness!!!!


Everyone had changed and were resting in rooms...it was after sometime.... everyone received a message from amey to gather in shappu's room!!!


Kuki:-" what happened Mansi?? Why did you call this apatkali meeting??"


Apurva:-" Khadus!! (Nagging his elbow)...what Kali??"


Shashank:-" Apatkali....means urgent!!"


Amey:-" Telling telling wait.. let nikhil and sumi come!!"


Nikhil:-" We are here.... sorry we met babi attya in between so had to stop!!"


Shashank:-" Ok!! So Mansi Vahini what happened??"


Mansi:-" This deepali Tai....!!"


Amey stops in between:-" What Tai....after what she is doing she doesn't deserve this tai wala respect!!"


Shashank:-" No no amey dada...that's wrong she is elder to us!!! And our sanskaar's don't allow disrespecting elders!!"


Apurva:-" Moral teaching professor, reporting on duty!!"


Shashank:-" Like seriously...kuch bhi!!"


Kuki:-" barrr....let it be...Mansi continue!!"


Mansi:-" This deepali Tai is very chant (smart)!! She is using her cards very nicely!! She is convencing her daughter that her daughter should force bhaskar kaka to go back to America!! Now we all know and even she knows be it Bhaskar kaka, babi attya or anyone.... wouldn't be able say no to that little child for long!!!"


Sumi:- "How low will she fall.... using her daughter for all this!!"


Apurva:-" Bas enough!!! I am going to go and directly confront her now!!!"


Shashank stops her:-" Stop apurva!! We all understand she is doing wrong...but we can't confront her now...things will get complicated!!"


Apurva:-" We can handle that khadus!! You, kuki gang our elders all are very smart to handle these complications....but right now that deepali Tai is corrupting that little girls mindset!! (Softing her voice) She is a child khadus.... whatever she learns now, she sees now will remain with her life long!! Kids adapt things faster that elders!! In this ego war of elders that little mindset is affected....and once's these things get fitted in her mind...it will be difficult for her to come out of that phase!! It's very difficult to live with it khadus!!!Parents sepration band parents ego on each other affect a child the most!!" (Her voice was tearing, everyone knew she was saying all this from her experience and all felt bad for her!!)


Shashank:-" Calm yourself apurva (giving her water)!! I promise you we won't let that little girl be affected!! Trust me plz!!"


Apurva:-" I trust you!!"


Sumi and Mansi hug apurva....she calm's herself!!!


Shashank:-" Kuki!! What's the plan for today?? Like after going down what are we going to do??"


Kuki:-" Today toh we shall play some games and do something...not very sure yet!!"


Shashank:-" Can i decide the game??"


Amey:-" With all pleasure!!"


Apurva:-" Are no!! He will decide some quiz and all!! No no!! Who will use brains during picnic...no no!!"


Shashank:-" Acha, rest of the time you use your brains???"


Apurva:-" Khadus....you toh don't have only brains!!!"


Shashank:-" Oh ya, that's the very reason I am scientist of the year, right right!!"


Apurva:-" They were playing that ini mini ponkey....that's how you got selected!!"


Shashank:-" Playing what???"


Apurva:-" Leave it!!! It's out of your syllabus!!"


Shashank:- "Forget it!! So kuki...we shall play truth and dare!! I have something to ask to that deepali Tai!"


Nikhil:-" What??"


Mansi:-" And will she speak the truth!!"


Shashank:-" If she speaks the truth good for us...if she doesn't good for her daughter!!"


Amey:-" Means!!"


Shashank:- "That toh you shall come to know downstairs dada!! Chalo let's go!!"


Apurva:-" Are wait!! One important discussion left!!!"


Shashank:-" Now what??"


Apurva:-" We all are on a mission right?? Then this Mission should have a name right??"


Kuki:-" She has a point!!"


Shashank:-"like always baseless point!!"


Apurva:-" Khadusss...you!!"


Shashank:-" Ok!! So we can have the name as...mission bhandhafod!!"


Apurva:-" What fod??"


Shashank:-" Ohh sorry we can't keep such heavy names!! We have you also in the group!!"


Apurva:-" Yes!! The most important person!!"


Shashank:-" Ofcourse!! By all means!! So let's keep it mission dhamaka!! Better??"


Apurva:-" Much better!!" She smiles very cutely to which Shashank also smiles nodding his head in disbelief!!!


Mansi:-" Ek second ek second...if this is a mission and we all are agents...then even we need to have names...how will we communicate with each other in code language otherwise!!"


Shashank bangs his head in disbelief....it's not just his wife...he has a whole lot of crazy people in his life!!!


Amey:-" Point hai...so i will be tango....and detective Mansi will be Charlie!!!"


Sumi:-" I shall be alpha....and nikhil will be beta!!"


Kuki:-" I shall be gamma!!"


Nikhil:-" and you two will be Romeo Juliet!!"


Shashank:-" What nonsense!! Ofcourse not!! Think of some other name!!"


Apurva:-" Are but why I like juilet!!"


Sumi:-"And if she is juilet...you will only be Romeo na dada!!"


Apurva:-" but if he doesn't want to be Romeo then.....!!"


Shashank:-" You will call Krish your Romeo right!!!"


Apurva:-" I was going to say choose another name...but if that's what you want me to call Krish Romeo i don't mind!!" She said teasing him!!!


Shashank:-" Then i will also not call you my juilet!!"


Apurva:-" So whom will you call juilet!! That netra Tai!!"


Shashank teasing her:-" Why not I can call her!!!"


Apurva:-" What you will seriously call her your juilet??"


Shashank:-" That's what you want!!"


Apurva:-" You na do one thing...today in the game na...sit besides her only!! Don't sit next to me!!"


Shashank:-" Ok if that's what you want!! I don't mind!!"


Apurva:-" Hawww!! So you will seriously sit besides her!!"


Shashank:-" That's what you want!! And have I ever not done something which you want??"


Mansi:-" Ok bhauji....then now it's a challenge to you!! Today in the game you sit besides netra!!"


Kuki:-" Mansi!!!"


Mansi:-" But there is only one condition....you will have to sit besides her in the entire game!! Bolo will you accept the challenge??"


Apurva:-" Happily he will!!"


Nobody was understanding what Mansi was doing....but the entire gang trusted Mansi and supported her!!


Shashank:-" What stupid challenge and all vahini??"


Sumi:-" Scared of accepting the challenge dada!!"


Shashank hesitantly:-" Scared and me.... ofcourse not!!!"


Amey:-" So challenge accepted!!"


Shashank looking at appu closing his eyes hesitantly:-" Accepted!!"


As soon as he opens his eyes he sees disappointment in apurva's eyes.... immediately he regretted accepting the challenge!! But now challenge was accepted he had to win!!!


Apurva immediately goes down followed by Shashank!!


Nikhil:-" Mansi Vahini!! What was all this??"


Mansi:-" How much ever i have known bhauji na...he will never sit besides netra!! Let's see how much does our appu affect bhauji!!"


Amey:-" Smart Charlie smart!!"


They all go down....and after lot of arguments it was decided that they all will play truth and dare...elders were first disagreeing to play....but finally they agreed!!!


Everyone had settled themselves in a circle...kuki gang was waiting to see what Shashank does!!! Even apurva was having a bit hope that he will sit besides her!!!


Amey:-" I am telling you Mansi.... Shashank's ego is way to much...just to win the challenge he will sit besides netra!!"


Mansi:-"Where there is love na, ego doesn't have any place!! And bhauji loves appu a lot!! I trust him and i am sure i shall win this challenge!!"


Amey:-" Hopefully it happens that way only!! If not...appu will be upset a lot!!!"


Shashank on the otherside was confused what shall he do.....he looked at apurva and decide to go and sit besides her!!


Netra:-" Sir come na sit here!!!"


Mansi:-" Yes bhauji sit down settle soon!!"


Mansi gives him a you can't do this look...and that was it shashank sat besides netra...making netra happy to the core...but upsetting apurva at the same time!! Shashank gave Mansi see i won wala look....and Mansi was yet confident about her win!!!


Prachi:-" Mai has made aam pana...i shall get it for everyone!!"


Apurva in a breaking voice:-" I shall help you!!" A single drop of tear comes from her eyes....which went unnoticed by everyone except Shashank!!!


Apurva goes and helps prachi!!! That was it for Shashank he can bear anything but a tear from his bayko's eyes...no not at all!! He hasn't given anyone the right to make his wife cry including himself!! Forgetting the challenge forgetting everything he gets up from there!!!


Netra:-" Sir, where are you going!!!"


Shashank:-" I need to use the washroom!!"


Apurva comes and settles in her place...the very next second Shashank comes and sits besides her!!! Apurva was shocked seeing him there!!! But she was very happy as well!!


Apurva:-" What are you doing here??"


Shashank:-"Sitting for playing the game what else!!"


Apurva:-" But why here!! Go and sit beside netra Tai na??"


Shashank:-" Na i dont feel like!!"


Apurva:-" Yo will loose the challenge!! And Shashank kanitkar doesn't like loosing!! Remember!!"


Shashank:-" But if i go and sit besides her...i will loose the most precious thing!!"


Apurva looks at him asking what???


Shashank:-" Your smile!! And this Shashank kanitkar is not that Rich enough to loose such a precious thing!! I can't afford loosing it!!!"


Apurva starts blushing at this!!!


Mansi:-" Bhauji!! What do I feel is you should.....!!"


Shashank:-" It's ok Vahini!!! You will be rewarded with your treat!!"


Babi attya:-" Treat for what??"


Shashank:-" Are babi attya leave it na!! You know na i am kuki gangs fav target always!!"


Sumi:-" Na na dada!! This time we dint make you the target!!! You yourself choose to be the target!!"


Apurva starts laughing at this... making Shashank stare at her!!! Apurva sees this and brings Shashank out if his la la land!!


Apurva:-" Let's begin the game!!!"


Nikhil spins the bottle and the first one stops at sumi!!


Sumi:-" What Nikhil?? You spin the bottle and me only??"


Kuki:-" So sumi truth ya dare!!!"


Nikhil:-" Are she is my wife ..dare go for it sumi!!"


Apurva:-" I will give dare to sumi!!"


Shashank:-" Don't give something childish!"


Apurva:-" Shut up khadus!! So sumi...today infront of everyone you will have to tell i love you to dada!!"


Sumi trying to act smart:-" To Shashank dada na....i love you Shashank dada!!"


Apurva:-" Are aae...sumi no cheating!! Why will I call this khadus dada!!"


Shashank immediately:-" Ohh hello excuse me!! Never do that in your dreams also plz!


Kuki:- Why Shashank why not??"


Shashank:-" Areee....kuki!!! I am her husband!! Plz shisht never call me dada!!"


Everyone laugh at Shashank's state!!


Apurva:-" Ofcourse not!! Not your dada sumi, my dada nikhil dada!!"


Nikhil:-" Are wahhh meri behna....i love you for this!!"


Sumi:-" No na appu!! Plz!!"


Kuki:-" sumi dare is dare!!"


Nikhil:-" Are sumi say it come on!!"


Sumi:- I.....i love you nikhil!!" And she hides her face in Mansi's arms!!!"


Nikhil:-" wah wah!!" He whisels!!


Next bottle is spinned and it stops on sua aai!!


Panna kaku:-" I will ask question to sua vahini!! Vahini one of your incomplete wish!!"


Sua aai:-" Waise toh all my wishes have been completed, there is just one wish but i dont know if i can complete now!! Dada i always wanted to learn driving a car!!"


Apurva:-" Are such a simple wish!! Sua aai i will teach you car!!"


Shashank:-" No no ..there is no need!! Aai we will put you into driving classes!!"


Apurva:-" Are but why I am there na!!"


Shashank:-" No no i can't risk two precious things of mine for this!!"


Everyone were shocked including apurva and together they shout :-" What??"


Shashank realises what he spoke!!


Kuki:-" Two precious things ha!!"


To divert the topic Shashank:-" Ya!! My aai and the car!!"


Apura:-" Seriously khadus!!"


Shahsank:-" What you were expecting some other ans kya???"


Apurva:-" Let anything happen to me na...why will you be affected!! You will be toh happy...you will be able to get.....!"(she was going to continue netra Tai here) but before she could continue Shashank stopped her by putting his palm on her mouth!!


Shashank:-" You always speak wrong things at the wrong time na!! (He says loudly)!!"


She looks at netra and realises what she was about to say!!! Before leaving apurva Shashank takes a chance and slowly in her ears says :-" Two precious things....my aai and my wife!!" And then leaves his hand...make apurva blush hard!!


Babi attya:-" Appu what did Shashank say???"


Shashank diverts the topic:-" spin the bottle amey dada.... i shall spin it wait!!"


Shashank spins the bottle and it stops at Sarika attya!!


Netra:- " I shall ask question to aai!!"


Sarika attya:-" Are wahhh!! I would love to answer!!"


Netra:-" Whom do you love more...me or apurva??And plz don't give any diplomatic answers!!!"


Everyone were stunned at her question!!!


Shashank:-" Netra this is not even a question!! She loves you both equally!!"


Since the time they were on this trip or netra was back...Sarika attya was loving netra a bit more than apurva....or apurva felt that way because apurva wasn't habituated to share their love for her...these changes had affected apurva....even though Sarika attya wasn't doing anything intentionally but it was just a natural reaction from her side of having her daughter after years!! But apurva had taken all this very sportingly, she understood her attya's feelings!!


Apurva:-" Can i answer this question on behalf of atti!!!"


Netra:-" sure!!"


Apurva:-" You can't differente the love of a mother for her two kids!! A mother loves her every kid equally....and so it's difficult to answer this!! You may not have lived with Sarika attya for you entire life...but she yet has never stopped loving you...and i always lived with atti so obviously she has never ever stopped loving me also!!"


Netra:-" Apurva!! I said earlier only i dont want any diplomatic answers!!!"


Apurva:-" Let me compete netra Tai ..atti loves both of us equally only....there is just one difference....she loves you 9 months more than she loves me!!!! This is the only difference in her love...the 9 month difference.... otherwise she loves both of us equally only!!!"


Everyone were just staring at apurva for the answer she gave!!


Apurva nagging Shashank's elbow:-" Khadus....did i speak anything wrong?? Why is everyone starting at me???"


Shashank out of no where directly looking into her eyes:-" Apurva!! I am proud of you!! I really am!!"


Apurva was shocked by her words...he has never said her anything like this!!!


Shashank:-" Netra i hope you have got your answer now!!!"


Everyone clapped for apurva's answer!!! Netra was fully burning in jealousy....one she dint get the answer she wanted... secondly everyone were praising apurva including Shashank!!!


Next bottle was spinned and it stopped at Shashank!!!


Netra:-" I will ask Shashank sir one question!!"


Mansi:-" Netra you just now asked...let others also have the chance!!"


Netra:-" But the rule said...who ever raises their hand first will ask ....so i shall ask!!"


Shashank:-" Ok fine go ahead netra!! I was as it is going to select truth ..so ask!!"


Netra:-" What is that one thing you regret the most in life!!"


Mai:-" You need to change your questions netra!! Our Shashank takes all his decisions with calm mind and by calculating all the possibilities... So him regretting his decision is not possible!!!"


Netra:-" But Mai, it can happen na...that others have taken a decision for him and he must have been forced at accept that decision and now he regrets that decision!!!"


Evryone understood about what she was talking!! Apurva knew the reality but listening to this even she was hurt!!!


Sua aai:-" Shashank does what his heart says him do!!! He never regrets any of his decisions!!"


Shashank:-" there is one thing I regret the most!!!"


Netra was very happy finally he will accept it that he regrets marrying apurva!!! Otherside apurva was scared for his answer!!!


So part 5 ends here???


What do you all thing what shall Shashank answer....what does he regret the most!! I feel you all wi be able to guess it correctly!!!


So how was the update eagerly waiting for your comments on this one!!!!

Edited by niakush - 3 years ago

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