Regional version KKIS: all discussion here - Page 63

Originally posted by: aaniya305

Just read the third part, I have soo many things to say, so I will write down point wise.

1. The bike ride was a brilliant touch ❤❤, I totally want this to happen in the show, I think bike rides at night are most romantic

2. At first I was angry, as to why did you invite Netra to the party, but seeing jealous of the hug, I was like good going, I soo love to see a jealous Netra.

3. Shashank defending Apu's singing😍😍😍😍😍😍. Thank you soo much for including another one of my prompts. I totally enjoyed that.

4. At last I want to compliment your writing style, everyone seemed like their character, Shapu secretly missing each other but not ready to admit it, their chupke chupke milna and Shashank's monologue and Apu's innocent and enthusiastic behaviour, I can actually picture all the characters doing this, and that's why this story was soo much fun to read.

Lastly just keep writing dear, hopefully more Shapu stories, I will try to think of more prompts😜

Thank you so much dear...thank a ton!!! Hopefully i was able to give justice to your prompts!!

Bike rides at night at that to with your partner are something i always love...and hence thought of including here!!!

Same pinch....even i like seeing netra jelaous and more over i like it when Shashank gives it back to her....hence included that part....bcz I really want to see Shashank giving it back to netra and that to in front of appu and whole family!!! Let's see kab wish puri hoti ye dekhne k serial me!!!

Thank you for the wonderful compliment!!!

Do think of promts i really njoyed writing yesterday on these promts i am short of ideas....share ideas i shall try making a story!!!

Will be waiting for your next prompt 😜

Epi -148 (shashank's first gift for Appu ko 🤩)

A : Dada kaka mai war par ja rahi hu aap muze blessings dijiye

Kukki : kis ke sath karne wali ho tum war? Dushman Kon hai

A : Ye khadus aur kon. Ye hai mera sabse bada dushman

Kukki : Appu shashank tumhara dushman nahi hai... Jani dushman hai 🤣

S : ulti sidhi bate mat sikhao tum ise kukki. By the way muze late ho raha hai Mai jata hu 👋

A : khadus. Ruko wahi ruko ( hat pakadkar forcefully door se wapas hall me le aati hai khadus ko) Aaj office bad me, pehle war!!

S : ek minute tum mere sath aise misbehave nahi kar sakti, ye sahi tarika nahi hai

A : tum muze tarika mat sikhao khadus. Maine ek bar bola na, pehle war fir office that's set

Vithhu baba : Appu beta tumne ye kaisa avatar bana rakha hai

A : Vithhu baba, ye war avatar hai.aaj yaha war hone wali hai " Navres Vs Baykas" 😂(husband VS wife) aur ye khadus sare husbands ka representative hai.

Dada kaka : shashank beta isse pehle ki yaha panipat suru ho jaye, tum jao office

A : No, stop. Tum nahi ja sakte , pehle war..

Mai : Appu rehne do na ye Yudhh and all

A : OK. War cancel. Par is khadus ko atleast mere sath panja ladana padega. Arm wrestling samjhe.

Nahi to fir aap sab jaints accept kar lo ki hum ladies aapse superior hai

Ladies : Shabbas Appu

Kukki : shashank tum lado ,hum tumhare sath hai

Fir Arm wrestling compitition me all time khadus Jis tarah apni bayko ko pyar se dekh raha tha 😍

Wo almost jitne hi wala tha but Appu ke face par sad expressions dekhkar janbujkar har gaya sirf Appu ki khushi ke liye 👏s : chhoti chhoti bato me bhi kitni khushi milti hai ise( ye scene best hai)

Kukki : Are dekh kya rahe ho, har gaye ho tum. Nak kata di tumne hum sab ki. Congratulations Appu

S : Are ye kaisa dalbadlu insan hai.abhi mere side tha aur ab ise congrats kar raha hai . Ab mai chalta hu

A : ruko. Mera prize kaha hai

S : kaisa prize?

A : bakshis.. Bakshis!

Kukki : shadi ke bad Appu ka first festival hai. Shashank tum use gift do

S : ye sab muzse nahi hoga 👋 (institute chala jata hai)

then Appu babi aattya ki love story sunkar impress ho jati hai . Evening me shashank apne bedroom me laptop par kam kar raha hai.

A : (excited Appu bhagte hue aati hai) khadus.. Khadus. Suno na, muze chand chahiye.

S : (shocked) ek minute, tum pehle baith jao. Ab batao kya chahiye tumhe

A : chand. Moon... Moon. Wo bhi abhi ke abhi lakar do ( why are you so cute Appu, why? 😍)

S : tumhari geography weak hai that I know. For your kind information, moon hamari galaxy ka ek part hai... ( OH God ye aur iske lectures😂)

A : ye sab muze bhi pata hai

S : fir bhi tum chand mang rahi ho?

A : ha, kyunki pyar me mangte hai ye sab. Chand, sitare and all

S : Mai koi premveer nahi hu, normal insan hu. Is liye mai de pau aisa kuch mango.

A : matlab tum muzse pyar hi nahi karte 😔

S : Apurva!! ab ye kya naya pagalpan hai tumhara.dene layak kuch mango mai de dunga

A : OK. To tum terrace se jump karo

S : Aur apna pair tudwa lu

A : Ye to best hai. Fir tum 24x7 ghar par hi rahoge. Institute nahi jaoge 🤗

S : Wah, kaisi ho na tum! Muze ghar par rokne ke liye tum mera pair todna chahti ho

A : Are karo na. Kuch to karo na tum. Something different, something crazy

S : Apurva, hum dono me ek crazy hai utna kafi hai. Agar Mai bhi crazy ban gaya to puri family ko mental hospital me shift hona padega 🤣aur ye sab faltu bate kon sikha raha hai tumhe?

A : that's not important. Tum ye sab mere liye karne wale ho ya nahi

S : Apurva ye sab movies me hota hai sirf, real life me nahi

A : Achha to Sua Aai, Mai, babi aattya sab jhuthe hai. Unhone hi bataya muze ki pyaar me pagalpan karna padta hai. Par tumhe to apne pair ki padi hai,tum pyaar hi nahi karte muze 😡 tum rehne do mere liye pagalpan karne wala koi aur dhundh lungi mai apne liye ( gusse me room se chali jati hai)

S : ( in his mind) kya hai ye ladki? Ye chahti hai ki mai iske pyaar me pagalpan karu, warna apne liye pagalpan karne wala koi aur dhundh legi . Ye khud pagal hai 😅

A : ( fir se bhagte hue wapas aa jati hai) Mai kya keh rahi thi khadus. Wo sab cancel.moon cancel. Stars I don't wanted. Terrace se jump karna sab cancel.

S : fir, ab kya karna padega muze?

A : tum ek kam karo... Actually rehne do. Tum rehne hi do ( mood swing) Mai jati hu

S : Apurva stop. Us drower me tumhare liye kuch hai

A : Kya hai

S : dekh lo jao jaldi.

Moon ki design wale beautiful earrings as a gift dekhkar Appu bahut jyada khush ho jati hai

A : Wow, isme to kitne sare chand hai☺

S : to ab apne liye koi aur dhundhogi kya pagalpan karne wala 🙈🙈

A : yes, agar tumne terrace se jump nahi mari mere liye to koi aur dhundna hi padega

S : Apurva ghar me kisi ko mat batana ki ye earrings maine di hai, warna muze tease karenge sab

A : OK ( both are smiling )

Originally posted by: niakush

Thank you for the update!!! Aaj waise bhi epsiode kab dekhne milega kya pata.... atleast update ne bata Diya kya hone wala hai!!!

Matlab kal khadus punishment dega and baadme shisht punishment dengi!!! Aur ye punishment punishment me hi dono romance bhi kar le thoda toh hum audience kush ho jaayenge bas😂😂

Apurva Vartak Kanetkar ko punishment dena khadus ke bas ki bat nahi hai 🤣

Wo bas gussa karega, isse jyada use kuch nahi aata. Punishment to hamari Appu degi use room se get out karke 😂

Romantic scenes to milenge promo me dekha na tumne 2nd Aliking 🙈

Best line was agar hum dono crazy ho gaye tog pure family ko mental hospital mein shift hona padega😂😂😂😂

I am soo waiting for him to actually act all crazy for Apu❤ tab maza aayega.

Apu ke demands bhi uski hi tarah cute hai pehle chand maanga aur phir earnings se khush ho gayi😂

Originally posted by: aaniya305

Best line was agar hum dono crazy ho gaye tog pure family ko mental hospital mein shift hona padega😂😂😂😂

I am soo waiting for him to actually act all crazy for Apu❤ tab maza aayega.

Apu ke demands bhi uski hi tarah cute hai pehle chand maanga aur phir earnings se khush ho gayi😂

Appu chhoti si cute si bachhi hai

Sangat ka asar hota hai khadus bhi ek din crazy hoga Appu ke sath rehkar 😂

Fir puri family mental hospital me shift ho jaye to bhi gam nahi🤪

This was one of the cutest epsiodes!!!

Ek toh skhadus apni shisht ko jitne k liye haar jata hai!!! The expressions which chetan gave during that scene....stole my heart!!! Kitna innocently dekh raha that voh apni innocent bayko ko!!! And that line kitni choti choti baato me kush ho jati hai ye....hayyyeeee❣️❣️❣️

Appu is so so cute yaar....pyaar me ye sab karna hota hai....are baba tum dono pyaar me kab pade chalo pade toh bhaut phele ho but realise bhi toh Karo....fir Chand taare kya pura galaxy la dega tumhare liye...bas realise karo!!!

That me koi premveer nahi😂😂😂

Appu kitna cutely boli thi...yaar isme toh kitne Chand hai....and voh kitna cutely bolta use...abhi bhi tumhare liye koi isa pagal dhundne wali ho kya...and voh kitna mast and deti!!!!

And that last scene....ghar me plz kisiko mat batana me dyanada k expressions hayeee❣️❣️

Ek hi complaint that mera next scene me jab apurva ne Yale pehna tab ek scene de dete writers k appu asking kaisa lag raha hai ye earings and khadus appreciating it .. toh mazza aa jata!!!

Originally posted by: Chinmayi18

Apurva Vartak Kanetkar ko punishment dena khadus ke bas ki bat nahi hai 🤣

Wo bas gussa karega, isse jyada use kuch nahi aata. Punishment to hamari Appu degi use room se get out karke 😂

Romantic scenes to milenge promo me dekha na tumne 2nd Aliking 🙈

Muje lag raha hai kal punishment deneki try toh karega khadus!!!

And yes eagerly waiting for 2bd aliking😂😂

Originally posted by: niakush

This was one of the cutest epsiodes!!!

Ek toh skhadus apni shisht ko jitne k liye haar jata hai!!! The expressions which chetan gave during that scene....stole my heart!!! Kitna innocently dekh raha that voh apni innocent bayko ko!!! And that line kitni choti choti baato me kush ho jati hai ye....hayyyeeee❣️❣️❣️

Appu is so so cute yaar....pyaar me ye sab karna hota hai....are baba tum dono pyaar me kab pade chalo pade toh bhaut phele ho but realise bhi toh Karo....fir Chand taare kya pura galaxy la dega tumhare liye...bas realise karo!!!

That me koi premveer nahi😂😂😂

Appu kitna cutely boli thi...yaar isme toh kitne Chand hai....and voh kitna cutely bolta use...abhi bhi tumhare liye koi isa pagal dhundne wali ho kya...and voh kitna mast and deti!!!!

And that last scene....ghar me plz kisiko mat batana me dyanada k expressions hayeee❣️❣️

Ek hi complaint that mera next scene me jab apurva ne Yale pehna tab ek scene de dete writers k appu asking kaisa lag raha hai ye earings and khadus appreciating it .. toh mazza aa jata!!!

sahi kaha tumne khadus jab kabhi bhi premveer ban jayega future me tab puri galaxy bhi de dega apni Shisht ko😆

I really like Dyantan ki acting, both are brilliant actors 👍🏼

Muze bhi ye complaint hai but Appu un earrings me bahut pretty lag rahi thi 😍 Holi ki pooja ke time shappu perfect newly married couple lag rahe the

Originally posted by: niakush

Part 2:- Shashank's Birthday!!!

It was in the evening 7 p.m when Shashank comes home!!!!

Shashank to himself:-" I had promised appu i shall be early today, but that netra's one reading went worng and it took so much of time!! Apurva is going to get angry like hell!! God save me!!!"

He comes home and finds the home to be quite silent than usual!!!

Shashank to himself:-" What's wrong why is to so silent today?? Inspite of my toofan being home, so much of silence it's unusual!!! She must be fine na, her health must be ok na, if yes then why so much of silence!!" ( Caring khaudus he is you know🙈🙈)

While Shashank was thinking himself sua aai sees him!!!

Sua aai:-" Are Shashank you are home!! We all were waiting for you only!! Chalo get fresh we shall have dinner together!!"

Shashank:-" Ok aai!!"

He goes to his room and sees apurva is not there also!!!

Shashank to himself:-" Where is this girl!! Waise toh was telling a lot in the morning i miss you and all, and now see i am back home she is not ready to show me her face also!!"

He changes and gets ready!!

Shashank to himself:-" May be she is actually very angry for me coming late so purposefully she is avoiding me!!! Oh god now I will have to manofy her!!! Chalo Shashank beta lag jao kaam pe!!!"

He comes down, everyone was settled and was waiting for him only to come!!! He comes down and sees apurva is yet missing, now he is tensed!!!

Mai:-" Chalo everyone has come, let's begin our dinner!!"

Shashank:-" Are but Mai, she is not yet here???"

Kuki:-" Who she??"

Nikhil:-" His wife!!!"

((Those who understand Marathi imagine that kelvan scene here, hee nahi ali ajun, kon tii...tii nahi hichi heee...that scene fits here perfectly 😂😂))

Shashank:-" Ya means apurva is not here yet???"

Sua aai:-" Are dint she tell you??"

Shashank:-" Tell me what??"

Sua aai:-" She is gone to her father's place for two days!!"

Shashank being shocked:-" what??? When?? And why??"

Panna kaku:-" Are what do you mean by why?? It's her father's place she can go anytime!!!"

Shashank:-" Are but why today??? And she won't be here tom also??"

Sua aai:-" No!!"

Shashank:-" but why did she go!!"

Mai:-" Are kaushik bhaisaab had come today, and he requested us to let appu go with him!!"

Shashank:-" And you all agreed, that to for two days, which means she won't be here tomorrow???"

Kuki:-" Why what's so special tomorrow?? Oh your birthday right???"

Sumi:-" Are but dada you toh don't like celebrating your birthday na, so what difference does that make she is not here!!"

Shashank in his mind:-" She might not even know it is my birthday, if she was here listening to you all she would have atleast wished me!!! I need her to know anyhow that it's my birthday tom!!"

Nikhil:-" Shashank, where are you lost??"

Shashank:-" But how come she went so instantly, she dint even inform me!!"

Kuki:-" She did take elders permission and then went!! You say you want her to be present here on your birthday!!!"

Shashank:-" I as it is don't celebrate my birthday, and it's good nly she is not here, varna she would have fought with me on my birthday as well!!!"

Everyone together:- Accha!!"

Shashank:-" What??? Forget it!! Aai give food i am very hungry!!!"

They all were having there dinner while Shashank was in his world only upset that apurva is not here!!!

Sumi:-" Aai, this bhaaji is superb it is spicy way to spicy but fir taste this is superb!!!"

Shashank pointing to his besides chair where generally appu sits speaks:-" Then Sisht you shouldn't be eating......!!!" He then realises that she is not there today!!!

Nikhil:-" Seems like someone is missing his wife a lot!!"

Shashank:-" Nothing like that nikhil rao, I meant apurva should not eat this!! She can't handle spicy food, but yet loves to eat a lot!!"

Mansi:-" Ya ya we understood bhauji that you missing appu!!!"

Shashank doesn't say anything but silently eats his food...his mood was off and hence he dint want to argue back!! He was actually missing his shisht!!!

After dinner the elders went to sleep whereas kukki gang was in the passage yet!!! That's when Shashank comes to them!!

Shashank:-" What today your gang has not formed their katta in our room!!"

Amey:-" Appu is not there na!!"

Prachi:-" Yaar i am missing appu!!"

Shashank:-" Then you shouldn't have let your friend go!!!"

Kuki:-" Are Shashank even she misses her family!!"

Shashank:-" Even this is her family!!"

Nikhil:-" So you miss her!!"

Shashank:-" Your tape is stuck at only one place kya nikhil rao!! No i dont miss her!!!"

Nikhil:-" barrrr!!!"

Shashank:-" If you guyz are missing her so much!! Call her talk to her!!!"

Kuki:-" He is right!!! Sumi call her!!"

Shashank:- "Video call her!!"

Everyone:-" What??"

Shashank:-" are i mean show her na that you guyz can have fun without her also!!"

Sumi:-" Dada but the fact is, we are so habituated to her na that we can't!!! And dont worry i was as it is going to video call her!!"

Sumi video calls appu, but makes sure that Shashank can't see her!!! Everyone talk to her one by one, making sure Shashank can't see or talk to her!!! Getting frustrated Shashank leaves to his room!!! Everyone have a big laugh at this and other side appu doesn't understand nly why they all are laughing as she was not aware about khaudus being there!!! Actually even she was trying to catch a glimpse of her khadus, but how can our kuki gang do injustice with anyone of them!! If they were not allowing Shashank to see appu then they made sure that appu also doesn't see Shashank!!! Fire toh was there on bith sides😂😂

Shashank changes into his night dress and comes to sleep, he by his usual practice gives the water bottle to appu to keep it on her side realising she is not there only today!!!

Shashank to himself:-" Why am i missing her so much!! It's just one day she is not here, why is it affecting me so much??? But does she know it's my birthday tom!! No no definately not!! If she knew she would have definately done something and wouldn't have gone to her place!!! So she won't wish me tomorrow, why is her not wishing me affecting me so much!! Do i want her to wish me????"

Thinking all this Shashank tires to sleep but fails miserably!!!

Otherside same was the case with appu!!!

Appu had done a lot of work today!!! She had planned to whole party very nicely!!! She was hell tired but not sleepy!!! Rather say she was not able to sleep nly!! She was missing her khadus!!!

Appu to herself:-" Why do i miss him so much?? Why am I not able to sleep without him!! I have a new teddy with me, then why am I not able to yet sleep??? Why am I upset that i won't be the first one to wish him on his birthday, why do i want to be the first one to wish him!!!"

Thinking all this even she tries to sleep but is unable to sleep!!

It was already 11 p.m when they both were trying to sleep!!!

Part 3 that wi be be fu of appu and Shashank....and hopefully with some suprises!! That part will be posted at night!!!

Till then let me know how were these two parts!!

Awesome write up ..❤️...

giving screen space to all the characters makes it more interesting to read ....

Very much excited for next part ❤️...

Originally posted by: Chinmayi18

Epi 147 ( kitchen scene 😂)

Appu Prachu ka duppate ko as a safa head par bandh kar hat me belen lekar

A : Aaj Kanetkar house me, Kanetkar ladies ke rights ke liye war hone ja rahi hai

Mai : war matlab

Sua Aai : Yudhh

Babi aattya : par Appu hamara kisi ke sath koi jhagda hi nahi hai. Hamara koi enemy hi nahi hai

A : Hai enemies hai. Aaj kya hai?

Sua Aai : Holi

A : Aaj kya karte hai?

Sua Aai : puranpoli 😅

A : Sua Aai puranpoli karte hai I know that. Par Mai ne kya kaha ki aaj Holi ke din buri chijo par good.. A.. Aa..

Sua Aai : buri chijo par achhi chijo ki jeet hoti hai

A : yes wahi wahi!! Hame bhi same hi karna hai. Is ghar me hamare enemies hai ( suddenly shashank enters into the kitchen) Mera to ek sabse bada enemy hai is ghar me. Aur uska nam hai khadus Kanetkar 🤣( sab ladies hasne lagti hai)

Shashank be like- drama queen kahi ki

Babi aattya : Appu shashank husband hai na tumhara , usse aise bat mat karo bad manners.

A : yes he is my husband I agree. I agree means wo hai hi mera husband. But wo mera enemy bhi hai. Hamesha muzse jhagdta rehta hai, kabhi thik se bat nahi karta is liye he is my enemy.

Mai : Appu, sare sare husbands wives ke enemies hi hote hai 😂

A : isi liye hame Kanetkar ladies ke sanan manan ke liye..

Sab ladies : kis liye???

S : Samman ( respect) kehna chahti hai wo😆

A : right , that is that. Thanks enemy 😅 to Kanetkar ladies ke rights ke liye aaj yaha war hogi. Hame jitni chahiye utni lipsticks , dresses, sarees etc. Jab chahiye tab milni hi chahiye. To hamari mange puri karo, warna hamse war Karo🤣

S : ab muze tiffin to milne se raha, mai chalta hu muze late ho raha hai institute ke liye

A : stop stop khadus. Dekho khadus aaj pehle war, fir institute. Agar tumme himmat hai, to aao medan me. Girls follow me. Khadus tum bahar aao, fir dekhti hu tumhe.

Sua Aai : hame girls bol rahi hai 😅

Mai : shashank aaj tumhari khair nahi 🤣

I had fun watching that epi ..

Appu looking soo cute with that safa ...

I adore her Marathi spelling mistakes ..so cute and someone keep correcting her full on entertainment ...

She gets along with all the members except Khadus Kanetkar...

His entry in the kitchen at the right time ..it's like shaitan ka naam liya aur shaitan haazir ....

And Girls Follow Me ...was sooo cute ...

Thanks for the WU ..makes me watch it again ..❤️