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Posted: 3 years ago

Part 2:- Shashank's Birthday!!!


It was in the evening 7 p.m when Shashank comes home!!!!


Shashank to himself:-" I had promised appu i shall be early today, but that netra's one reading went worng and it took so much of time!! Apurva is going to get angry like hell!! God save me!!!"


He comes home and finds the home to be quite silent than usual!!!


Shashank to himself:-" What's wrong why is to so silent today?? Inspite of my toofan being home, so much of silence it's unusual!!! She must be fine na, her health must be ok na, if yes then why so much of silence!!" ( Caring khaudus he is you know🙈🙈)


While Shashank was thinking himself sua aai sees him!!!


Sua aai:-" Are Shashank you are home!! We all were waiting for you only!! Chalo get fresh we shall have dinner together!!"


Shashank:-" Ok aai!!"


He goes to his room and sees apurva is not there also!!!


Shashank to himself:-" Where is this girl!! Waise toh was telling a lot in the morning i miss you and all, and now see i am back home she is not ready to show me her face also!!"


He changes and gets ready!!


Shashank to himself:-" May be she is actually very angry for me coming late so purposefully she is avoiding me!!! Oh god now I will have to manofy her!!! Chalo Shashank beta lag jao kaam pe!!!"


He comes down, everyone was settled and was waiting for him only to come!!! He comes down and sees apurva is yet missing, now he is tensed!!!


Mai:-" Chalo everyone has come, let's begin our dinner!!"


Shashank:-" Are but Mai, she is not yet here???"


Kuki:-" Who she??"


Nikhil:-" His wife!!!"

((Those who understand Marathi imagine that kelvan scene here, hee nahi ali ajun, kon tii...tii nahi hichi heee...that scene fits here perfectly 😂😂))


Shashank:-" Ya means apurva is not here yet???"


Sua aai:-" Are dint she tell you??"


Shashank:-" Tell me what??"


Sua aai:-" She is gone to her father's place for two days!!"


Shashank being shocked:-" what??? When?? And why??"


Panna kaku:-" Are what do you mean by why?? It's her father's place she can go anytime!!!"


Shashank:-" Are but why today??? And she won't be here tom also??"


Sua aai:-" No!!"


Shashank:-" but why did she go!!"


Mai:-" Are kaushik bhaisaab had come today, and he requested us to let appu go with him!!"


Shashank:-" And you all agreed, that to for two days, which means she won't be here tomorrow???"


Kuki:-" Why what's so special tomorrow?? Oh your birthday right???"


Sumi:-" Are but dada you toh don't like celebrating your birthday na, so what difference does that make she is not here!!"


Shashank in his mind:-" She might not even know it is my birthday, if she was here listening to you all she would have atleast wished me!!! I need her to know anyhow that it's my birthday tom!!"


Nikhil:-" Shashank, where are you lost??"


Shashank:-" But how come she went so instantly, she dint even inform me!!"


Kuki:-" She did take elders permission and then went!! You say you want her to be present here on your birthday!!!"


Shashank:-" I as it is don't celebrate my birthday, and it's good nly she is not here, varna she would have fought with me on my birthday as well!!!"


Everyone together:- Accha!!"


Shashank:-" What??? Forget it!! Aai give food i am very hungry!!!"


They all were having there dinner while Shashank was in his world only upset that apurva is not here!!!


Sumi:-" Aai, this bhaaji is superb it is spicy way to spicy but fir taste this is superb!!!"


Shashank pointing to his besides chair where generally appu sits speaks:-" Then Sisht you shouldn't be eating......!!!" He then realises that she is not there today!!!


Nikhil:-" Seems like someone is missing his wife a lot!!"


Shashank:-" Nothing like that nikhil rao, I meant apurva should not eat this!! She can't handle spicy food, but yet loves to eat a lot!!"


Mansi:-" Ya ya we understood bhauji that you missing appu!!!"


Shashank doesn't say anything but silently eats his food...his mood was off and hence he dint want to argue back!! He was actually missing his shisht!!!


After dinner the elders went to sleep whereas kukki gang was in the passage yet!!! That's when Shashank comes to them!!


Shashank:-" What today your gang has not formed their katta in our room!!"


Amey:-" Appu is not there na!!"


Prachi:-" Yaar i am missing appu!!"


Shashank:-" Then you shouldn't have let your friend go!!!"


Kuki:-" Are Shashank even she misses her family!!"


Shashank:-" Even this is her family!!"


Nikhil:-" So you miss her!!"


Shashank:-" Your tape is stuck at only one place kya nikhil rao!! No i dont miss her!!!"


Nikhil:-" barrrr!!!"


Shashank:-" If you guyz are missing her so much!! Call her talk to her!!!"


Kuki:-" He is right!!! Sumi call her!!"


Shashank:- "Video call her!!"


Everyone:-" What??"


Shashank:-" are i mean show her na that you guyz can have fun without her also!!"


Sumi:-" Dada but the fact is, we are so habituated to her na that we can't!!! And dont worry i was as it is going to video call her!!"


Sumi video calls appu, but makes sure that Shashank can't see her!!! Everyone talk to her one by one, making sure Shashank can't see or talk to her!!! Getting frustrated Shashank leaves to his room!!! Everyone have a big laugh at this and other side appu doesn't understand nly why they all are laughing as she was not aware about khaudus being there!!! Actually even she was trying to catch a glimpse of her khadus, but how can our kuki gang do injustice with anyone of them!! If they were not allowing Shashank to see appu then they made sure that appu also doesn't see Shashank!!! Fire toh was there on bith sides😂😂

Shashank changes into his night dress and comes to sleep, he by his usual practice gives the water bottle to appu to keep it on her side realising she is not there only today!!!


Shashank to himself:-" Why am i missing her so much!! It's just one day she is not here, why is it affecting me so much??? But does she know it's my birthday tom!! No no definately not!! If she knew she would have definately done something and wouldn't have gone to her place!!! So she won't wish me tomorrow, why is her not wishing me affecting me so much!! Do i want her to wish me????"


Thinking all this Shashank tires to sleep but fails miserably!!!


Otherside same was the case with appu!!!


Appu had done a lot of work today!!! She had planned to whole party very nicely!!! She was hell tired but not sleepy!!! Rather say she was not able to sleep nly!! She was missing her khadus!!!


Appu to herself:-" Why do i miss him so much?? Why am I not able to sleep without him!! I have a new teddy with me, then why am I not able to yet sleep??? Why am I upset that i won't be the first one to wish him on his birthday, why do i want to be the first one to wish him!!!"


Thinking all this even she tries to sleep but is unable to sleep!!


It was already 11 p.m when they both were trying to sleep!!!



Part 3 that wi be be fu of appu and Shashank....and hopefully with some suprises!! That part will be posted at night!!!


Till then let me know how were these two parts!!

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Posted: 3 years ago

Epi 147 ( kitchen scene 😂)

Appu Prachu ka duppate ko as a safa head par bandh kar hat me belen lekar

A : Aaj Kanetkar house me, Kanetkar ladies ke rights ke liye war hone ja rahi hai

Mai : war matlab

Sua Aai : Yudhh

Babi aattya : par Appu hamara kisi ke sath koi jhagda hi nahi hai. Hamara koi enemy hi nahi hai

A : Hai enemies hai. Aaj kya hai?

Sua Aai : Holi

A : Aaj kya karte hai?

Sua Aai : puranpoli 😅

A : Sua Aai puranpoli karte hai I know that. Par Mai ne kya kaha ki aaj Holi ke din buri chijo par good.. A.. Aa..

Sua Aai : buri chijo par achhi chijo ki jeet hoti hai

A : yes wahi wahi!! Hame bhi same hi karna hai. Is ghar me hamare enemies hai ( suddenly shashank enters into the kitchen) Mera to ek sabse bada enemy hai is ghar me. Aur uska nam hai khadus Kanetkar 🤣( sab ladies hasne lagti hai)

Shashank be like- drama queen kahi ki

Babi aattya : Appu shashank husband hai na tumhara , usse aise bat mat karo bad manners.

A : yes he is my husband I agree. I agree means wo hai hi mera husband. But wo mera enemy bhi hai. Hamesha muzse jhagdta rehta hai, kabhi thik se bat nahi karta is liye he is my enemy.

Mai : Appu, sare sare husbands wives ke enemies hi hote hai 😂

A : isi liye hame Kanetkar ladies ke sanan manan ke liye..

Sab ladies : kis liye???

S : Samman ( respect) kehna chahti hai wo😆

A : right , that is that. Thanks enemy 😅 to Kanetkar ladies ke rights ke liye aaj yaha war hogi. Hame jitni chahiye utni lipsticks , dresses, sarees etc. Jab chahiye tab milni hi chahiye. To hamari mange puri karo, warna hamse war Karo🤣

S : ab muze tiffin to milne se raha, mai chalta hu muze late ho raha hai institute ke liye

A : stop stop khadus. Dekho khadus aaj pehle war, fir institute. Agar tumme himmat hai, to aao medan me. Girls follow me. Khadus tum bahar aao, fir dekhti hu tumhe.

Sua Aai : hame girls bol rahi hai 😅

Mai : shashank aaj tumhari khair nahi 🤣

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Posted: 3 years ago

Maine dono parts padhe superb hai🤗

1st part me s : Shisht miss me

2nd part s : where is my toofan

Dono stories mast hai 👍🏼

Tumhara each and every dialogue padkar muze scenes ke flashes aane lagte hai itna perfect likha hai tumne ❤️

Waiting for 3rd part and thank you very much for this 2 beautifully written parts

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: niakush

Hello friends,

So since I was having my day off today...i thought to do something productive and i wrote another story!!!

But the idea of this story is basically of aaniya (sorry i don't know your real name)!! So it was she who suggested me the ideas and based on her ideas here is the story!!!

This is going to be a three short story, hopefully i shall be uploading all the parts today itself!! But this story does not just have Shashank and apurva it has everyone!! The first two parts we have everyone and the last part is completely shappu!!!

So let me know how was the story...and aaniya let me know if i could stand on your expectations for your ideas!!!


Part 1:- Shashank's birthday!!!


This part is just for creating the base of the story!!!


It was almost 6 months to shashank and apurva's wedding!! They both use to yet fight on silly silly things, but now they had also grown fond of each other!!! They both had become each other's habit now!!! They both somewhere loved each other, but accepting the same was beyond their control...ego you see!!!😂


It was Sunday morning when kukki and amey had holiday but Shashank had working!!!


Shashank:-" Aai, is the food ready, I need to leave for work!! I am getting late!!"


Apurva:-" Khadus, one small doubt!!"


Shashank:-" i am getting very late, i am not in a mood to pick up another fight!! Let me go apurva!!!"


Apurva:- "Are but where I am wasting your time, i just have a small doubt!!! Can I ask??"


Shashank:-" if i say no you can't ask, yet you will ask only!!"


Apurva:-" Ya that is toh for sure!!"


Shashank:-" Go ahead!!"


Apurva:-" I just wanted to know your home address!!"


Everyone is shocked including Shashank!!


Kuki:-" Appu, you don't know the address for this house??"


Apurva:-" Ofcourse i know the address for this house, this is my house also now!!"


Mansi:-" Then why are you asking bhauji about the address??"


Apurva:-" are vahini, i am not asking this house address!! I am asking his house address!!"


Shashank:-" I am 100% sure i am going to regret asking this, but what stupidity is going on in your mind!! This is my house only!!!"


Apurva:-" See where do people live the most??"


Nikhil:-" In their house!!"


Apurva:-" Exactly!! And where does this khadus live the most??"


Amey:- "In institute!!"


Apurva:-" then what is house address???"


Kuki:-" His institute address!!"


Shashank:-" I am done, i am going!!"


Apurva holds his elbow!!!


Apurva:-" Are act like a young man sometimes atleast!! Spend time with your family!!"


Shashank:-" And what shall I do waiting here!!! You guyz will tease me only!!"


Apurva:-" Are khadus wait na today, see everyone is home today, we shall have fun!! Wait na yaar khadus!!!"


Nikhil:-"As it is saale saahab it is sunday, it's holiday today!!"


Shashank:-" But i have a lot of work, i need to go!!"


Apurva:-" Khadus i am not Letting you go anywhere today!!"


Shashank:-" Why do you need me ha?? You need to have fun na and you have your gang with you why do you need me??"


Apurva says very cutely:-" Ofcourse, i have my gang and we will have fun!! But i need you also na, i miss you also na!!" She says unknowingly, yet holding his elbow!!!


Everyone gives a teasing smile to them, whereas Shashank looks shocked!!


Shashank:-" what??"


Apurva realises what she spoke:- "Are i mean, everyone is here!! Evryone will have family time, and you won't be there na, so i just said!!"


Shashank:- "Acha listen, i have big project i need to go!! But i promise i shall return early today and we all can have fun in the Evening!!"


Apurva:-" Promise!!"


Shashank:-" Pakka promise!! Now leave my hand let me go, so that i can go fast and come fast!!!"


Apurva:-" Ok!! Bye!!"


Shashank before leaving slowly in apurva's ears:-" Shisht!! Miss me!! Bye!!!"


Apurva blushes at this and says slowly:-" Khadus!!"


After sometime!!!


Prachi:-" Actually thank God Shashank dada left!!! Now we can easily plan!!"


Apurva:-" What plan??"


Prachi:- "Are for Shashank dada's birthday!!"


Apurva being shocked:- "What!!! It's khadus's birthday?? When??"


Everyone:-" On Monday i.e tomorrow!!"


Apurva:-" Are wahhh!!"


Mansi:-" And this year we need to plan very nicely!!"


Amey:-" Yes yes!!! Shashank always plans everyone's birthday very nicely!! Now we need to do this for him!!"


Apurva:-" Wait a second amey dada!! Khadus plans evryone's birthday party and that too nicely?? Is that even possible??"


Sua Aai:-" Are don't underestimate my son!! He is the best birthday party planner!!"


Kuki:-" Ya but only for his family ha!!!"


Mai:- "Really, he plans the best birthday's!! Last year praju's birthday remember!!"


Panna kaku:-" Ya!!! It was such a grand party!! No doubt in that appu!! For his family Shashank gives the best birthday party!!"


Apurva:-" You guyz have not yet seen my organization na, that is why you are praising khadus!!! Now wait and watch what I do for his birthday!!!"


Saying this apurva goes to her room!!! And comes back after almost 20 mins!!!


Sua aai:-" I don't know what is going to happen in Shashank's birthday this year!! What goes on in this girls head na, no one knows!!"


Vittal dada:-" Don't worry sua!! This year your son will have the best birthday!! Mark my words!!"


Sua aai:- "Even i know that he will have the best birthday this year!! But definitely with some problem!! After all planning is done by apurva Shashank kanitkar and that to for Shashank kanitkar!!!"


Sumi:-" Na na sua aai, not for Shashank kanitkar, it's for khadus!!"


Everyone laugh at this, meanwhile apurva comes back!!


Apurva:-" So i have planned everything!!!"


Sumi and pracchi together:-" In 20 mins!!"


Apurva:-" Ofcourse!!! But one thing in mind we have to keep!!"


Kuki:-" And what's that??"


Apurva:-" It's khadus birthday!!"


Nikhil:-" We all know that appu!!"


Apurva:-" Are nikhil dada!! It's not just khauds birthday, it is unfortunately smart and intelligent scientist of the year Shashank kanitkar's birthday!! Planning needs to be done carefully otherwise he will guess it easily!!"


Mai:-" She has a point!!"


Apurva:-" I always have a point!! Aae Mai tell this to khadus na!! He never believes only that i have a point!!"


Sarika attya:-" Ok ok we shall tell that to shashank later on!! First what is the plan??"


Apurva:-" First condition, no one will wish him on his birthday!! Sua aai and mai specifically you two!!"


All together:-" What??! But why??"


Sua aai:-" Are it's his birthday, we need to bless him!! We need to do his Pooja as well!!"


Apurva:-" Are so do na all this, but on Monday evening!!"


Vitthal dada:-" Like whole day we won't wish him, but why??"


Sumi:-" Dada will get upset on his birthday!!"


Apurva:-" Are sumi, don't you know what is said kya??"


Sumi:-" What is said??"


Apurva:-" that when you get things unexpectedly, those things bring you the biggest happiness!!! We shall not wish him since morning to give him a suprise in the Evening!!"


Prachi:-" What surprise??"


Apurva:-" We shall throw a suprise birthday party for khadus!!"


Kuki:-" Surprise birthday party wow brilliant idea!! Shashank would never imagine anything like this!!"


Amey:-" What wow kuki!! Where would the budget come from??"


Mai:-" Ha, this my husband would never approve for this party!!!"


Mansi:-" Every other time Shashank bhauji sponsers the party so we don't have any issue, but for his birthday what to do??"


Amey:-" I will sponsor!!! Let's do it!!"


Kuki:-" I shall also sponsor with you!!!"


Apurva:-" Are wait, let me speak!!! There is no need of any sponsor!! Dada kaka has approved the budget!!"


Everyone being shocked:-" What really!! Dada kaka approved the budget???"


Mai:-" That is not possible, how???"


Apurva:-" Mai, i was convencing dada kaka how can he not get convenced!!!"


Mai:-" When did you convence him??"


Apurva:-" Abhi when i went in!! I went to call him only!!!"


Kuki:-" Wah wah!!! You are great appu!!!"


Sua aai:-" But wait a second your suprise would fail!!"


Apurva:-" Are are but why??"


Sua aai:-" He knows that i and mai can never forget his birthday!! So not wishing him from morning that itself will create a doubt in his mind!!"


Mansi:-" Sua aai has a point!!"


Apurva:-" Are but if we wish him since morning, then what would be the surprise!!"


Panna kaku:-" Are the party would be the surprise na!!"


Apurva:- "No panna kaku!! That wishing exactly at the time of revealing surprise is so much fun!! He would be very very happy if we do that!!He must have waited for the whole day and then when he would see all this that surprise happiness is different only!!!"


Sumi:-" But if we don't wish him, he will definitely doubt on our plan!!"


Kuki:-" No he won't i have an idea!!"


Everyone:-" What??"


Kuki:-" We all will toh wish him only, it's only appu who won't wish him!!"


Apurva:-" means??"


Kuki:-" See like he would wait for everyone's wish, he would even wait for your wish!! Now you are toh his bayko he definitely would expect you to wish him!!!"


Apurva:-" But why would my wish affect him so much???"


Mansi:-" Acha appu tell me, when your relationship was not fixed last year, and it was your birthday!! You were angry on bhauji but when he wished you weren't you happy the most!!!Were you not waiting for his wish"


Apurva:-" Mansi Vahini what you are speaking, nothing like that!!"


Mansi:-" Let it be appu, we all know how happy you were after bhauji wished you, so same way he might also wait for your wish!!"


Kuki:-" And you won't wish him till the surprise party!! He will be very happy knowing you did all this!!!"


Apurva:-" This also sounds like a plan!! As it is it's scientist of the years birthday we need to act smart!! I agree with this!!"


Nikhil:-" Chalo finally she agreed!!"


Apurva:-" Are but wait!!! This means you all will wish him before me??"


Amey:-" why you wanted to wish him first kya???"


Apurva:-" Yes!!! Matlab no nothing like that!! But Mai will do Puja and all in morning, everyone will wish him and i won't that would also create a doubt in his mind!!!"


Sua aai:-" She has a point!!"


Apurva:-" And a solution also!!!"


Kuki:-" And what's that???"


Apurva:-" I will go to Baba's place today!! And Tom after khadus leaves for office i shall come back and plan everything and then wish him in evening!! What say??"


Everyone:-" Perfect!!"


Amey:-" This is the perfect plan!!!"


Apurva:-" Ok now i shall come back!!"


Mansi:-" But i yet have a doubt???"


Amey:-" Now what??"


Mansi:-" Will Shashank bhauji let apurva go??? We all know how much they are fond of each other!!!"


Sumi:-" I agree!! It's impossible that dada will let appu go to kaushik kaka's place!!!"


Sua aai:-" Are you all don't worry about that!! Appu wants to go means she will go by hook or by crook!!! Don't worry about that!!"


Kuki:-" Exactly!!! Appu k age kabhi Shashank k chali hai kya, jo aaj appu chalne dengi!! Impossible!!!"


Meanwhile apurva comes getting ready!!


Mai:-" Where are you going??"


Apurva;-" First for shopping tom party things and then at Baba's place??"


Kuki:-" Are but without meeting Shashank??"


Apurva:-" He has promised me to come early so he will come early!!! And what if he doesn't let me go then!! Whole plan ka tie tie fish ho jayega!! I am toh going abhi only!! It's khadus birthday, i dont want any mistakes!!!"


Kuki:-" you want to give him the best surprise don't you???"


They all start teasing apurva and here she blushes hard!!


Apurva:-" Chalo prachi and vahini, let's go birthday shopping!!"


Appu with Mansi and praju leaves for purchasing things and from there she goes directly to vartak's!!!!


So how was part 1...it was just a filler...part 2 is on its way!!!!

Just Awesome ...cant wait ....very much excited ....❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago

Oh my God, just read both the parts, I loved it soo much🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰

Thank you so much for fulfilling my wish❤❤

That part where Shashank whispered miss me to Apu, I was blushing just reading it😍

Eagerly waiting for the third part do upload soon☺

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Chinmayi18

Epi 147 ( kitchen scene 😂)

Appu Prachu ka duppate ko as a safa head par bandh kar hat me belen lekar

A : Aaj Kanetkar house me, Kanetkar ladies ke rights ke liye war hone ja rahi hai

Mai : war matlab

Sua Aai : Yudhh

Babi aattya : par Appu hamara kisi ke sath koi jhagda hi nahi hai. Hamara koi enemy hi nahi hai

A : Hai enemies hai. Aaj kya hai?

Sua Aai : Holi

A : Aaj kya karte hai?

Sua Aai : puranpoli 😅

A : Sua Aai puranpoli karte hai I know that. Par Mai ne kya kaha ki aaj Holi ke din buri chijo par good.. A.. Aa..

Sua Aai : buri chijo par achhi chijo ki jeet hoti hai

A : yes wahi wahi!! Hame bhi same hi karna hai. Is ghar me hamare enemies hai ( suddenly shashank enters into the kitchen) Mera to ek sabse bada enemy hai is ghar me. Aur uska nam hai khadus Kanetkar 🤣( sab ladies hasne lagti hai)

Shashank be like- drama queen kahi ki

Babi aattya : Appu shashank husband hai na tumhara , usse aise bat mat karo bad manners.

A : yes he is my husband I agree. I agree means wo hai hi mera husband. But wo mera enemy bhi hai. Hamesha muzse jhagdta rehta hai, kabhi thik se bat nahi karta is liye he is my enemy.

Mai : Appu, sare sare husbands wives ke enemies hi hote hai 😂

A : isi liye hame Kanetkar ladies ke sanan manan ke liye..

Sab ladies : kis liye???

S : Samman ( respect) kehna chahti hai wo😆

A : right , that is that. Thanks enemy 😅 to Kanetkar ladies ke rights ke liye aaj yaha war hogi. Hame jitni chahiye utni lipsticks , dresses, sarees etc. Jab chahiye tab milni hi chahiye. To hamari mange puri karo, warna hamse war Karo🤣

S : ab muze tiffin to milne se raha, mai chalta hu muze late ho raha hai institute ke liye

A : stop stop khadus. Dekho khadus aaj pehle war, fir institute. Agar tumme himmat hai, to aao medan me. Girls follow me. Khadus tum bahar aao, fir dekhti hu tumhe.

Sua Aai : hame girls bol rahi hai 😅

Mai : shashank aaj tumhari khair nahi 🤣

This epi was soo lovely.

Jaan bhuj ke haar gaya khadus humara😍😍😍

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Originally posted by: aaniya305

This epi was soo lovely.

Jaan bhuj ke haar gaya khadus humara😍😍😍

You know what muze aisa laga tha ki Appu cheating karke by hook or crook jeet jayegi

But khadus Appu ki khushi ke liye janbujkar har jayega ye maine bilkul bhi expect nahi kiya tha

Hamara khadus soch ke pare hai 🤗

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Originally posted by: Chinmayi18

Epi 147 ( kitchen scene 😂)

Appu Prachu ka duppate ko as a safa head par bandh kar hat me belen lekar

A : Aaj Kanetkar house me, Kanetkar ladies ke rights ke liye war hone ja rahi hai

Mai : war matlab

Sua Aai : Yudhh

Babi aattya : par Appu hamara kisi ke sath koi jhagda hi nahi hai. Hamara koi enemy hi nahi hai

A : Hai enemies hai. Aaj kya hai?

Sua Aai : Holi

A : Aaj kya karte hai?

Sua Aai : puranpoli 😅

A : Sua Aai puranpoli karte hai I know that. Par Mai ne kya kaha ki aaj Holi ke din buri chijo par good.. A.. Aa..

Sua Aai : buri chijo par achhi chijo ki jeet hoti hai

A : yes wahi wahi!! Hame bhi same hi karna hai. Is ghar me hamare enemies hai ( suddenly shashank enters into the kitchen) Mera to ek sabse bada enemy hai is ghar me. Aur uska nam hai khadus Kanetkar 🤣( sab ladies hasne lagti hai)

Shashank be like- drama queen kahi ki

Babi aattya : Appu shashank husband hai na tumhara , usse aise bat mat karo bad manners.

A : yes he is my husband I agree. I agree means wo hai hi mera husband. But wo mera enemy bhi hai. Hamesha muzse jhagdta rehta hai, kabhi thik se bat nahi karta is liye he is my enemy.

Mai : Appu, sare sare husbands wives ke enemies hi hote hai 😂

A : isi liye hame Kanetkar ladies ke sanan manan ke liye..

Sab ladies : kis liye???

S : Samman ( respect) kehna chahti hai wo😆

A : right , that is that. Thanks enemy 😅 to Kanetkar ladies ke rights ke liye aaj yaha war hogi. Hame jitni chahiye utni lipsticks , dresses, sarees etc. Jab chahiye tab milni hi chahiye. To hamari mange puri karo, warna hamse war Karo🤣

S : ab muze tiffin to milne se raha, mai chalta hu muze late ho raha hai institute ke liye

A : stop stop khadus. Dekho khadus aaj pehle war, fir institute. Agar tumme himmat hai, to aao medan me. Girls follow me. Khadus tum bahar aao, fir dekhti hu tumhe.

Sua Aai : hame girls bol rahi hai 😅

Mai : shashank aaj tumhari khair nahi 🤣


@bold they were the funniest 😂😂


I really really found it very cute when appu says right, that is that thanks enemy!! Enemy bhi bolti hai and thank you bhi!!!


And the way Shashank so instantly understood his bayko only he understands her so well!!


This was also one of those cute episodes!! How he looses khudkse just to make her win!! He proved uski Jeet me hi meri Kushi hai and that line with cute expression kitne choti choti cheezo me khush ho jati hai yeh....hayeee❣️❣️


I definitely need to watch this episode today again!!! For that one last line😂😂

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Oh my God, just read both the parts, I loved it soo much🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰

Thank you so much for fulfilling my wish❤❤

That part where Shashank whispered miss me to Apu, I was blushing just reading it😍

Eagerly waiting for the third part do upload soon☺


Hopefully you will like the third part too...there are many things to blush in third part 🙈🙈

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Thank you for liking the first two part guyz!! Here is the third and final part!!!!


Part 3:-" Shashank's birthday!!"


They both were trying hard to sleep but both were missing each other very badly that they were unable to sleep!!!!


Shashank to himself:-" Shall i call her and inform her that it's my birthday tom??? No no how can I myself tell her this?? But why aren't anyone from the house telling her this???"


Apurva:-" Shall i call him and wish at 12 a.m???"


Shashank:-" After going to her place she dint even call me once, she doesn't miss me at all!! But then why do i want her to miss me???will she be able to sleep without teddy???"


Shashank was thinking all this when he receives a video call from apurva!!!! And a bright smile appears on his face!! He picks it up immediately in the second ring!!!


Shashank:-" Wahh so you finally remembered you have a husband and he even has a phone where you can call and inform about your whereabouts!!!"


Apurva:-" Listen khadus i had informed the elders at our place!!"


Shashank:-" But you dint inform me!! I am your husband!!"


Apurva:-" So you are going to fight with me only na, i should not have called you in the first place only!! Let it be i shall disconnect the call!!!"


Shashank:-" Appu appu, listen!! Acha sorry let's not fight!!! So why have you called??"


Apurva:- "Wohhh Wohhh!!"


Shashank:- "Wohh Wohh what apurva??"


Apurva:-" I am not able to sleep???"


Shashank:-" Acha so only when you want to sleep you remember me na, otherwise toh whom am I no one right???" He says getting a bit angry!!!


Apurva:-" Acha as if you miss me a lot, you toh never miss me!! When I go you toh njoy your freedom??"


Shashank:-" And what do you do, you toh always leave me and go!!?"


Apurva:-" Acha i leave you, i alway want you to be with me, it's you only who doesn't like my company!!! That is the only reason I was missing you so badly in that trip that we played prank to get you there!!! But what happened later on let's not talk about it, and you say i leave you!!! I so wanted you to come for that picnic!!"


Saying this crying she disconnects the call!!!

Shashank toh himself:-" Such a mado i am!!I am missing her and that's why I made her cry!!! Why do i always make her cry???"


Otherside appu cries as she was missing her khadus!!! After around 20mins khadus calls her back!!!


Shashank:-" Shishit!!!"


Appu:-" Now why have you called??? I toh don't miss you na, i toh dont care for you na???"


Shashank:-" But i miss you na, and i also care for you!!"


Appu stops crying at this and was shocked to hear his words!! Shashank has never officially accepted any feelings!!!


Appu:-" What??"


Shashank:-" Come into your balcony??"


Apurva:-" Why??"


Shashank:-" Atleast sometimes listen to me shisht, come na!!"


She comes to the balcony and looks down, Shashank was standing down waving a hi to her!!!


Apurva:-" Khadus what are you doing here at this time???"


Shashank:-" My wife was crying!! And you know na, my wife doesn't look beautiful when she cries, i dont like it when she cries!!"


Apurva:-" But it's you only who makes your wife cry!!!"


Shashank:-" And it's me only who cheers her up as well!!! I was feeling like wanting to have an ice cream, and i was bored going alone, so i thought let's ask you if you want to join!!! And yes, i have brought the bike too!!"


Apurva:-" Bike!! You know na, i love bike rides!!!"


Shashank:-" And why do you think I have brought bike for??"


Apurva:-" What??"


Shashank:- "No are you coming or....!!"


Apurva:-" Are i am coming na!!!"


Shashank:-" Acha shisht, don't waste time in changing clothes!!"


Apurva:-" Are but i am in night suite!!"


Shashank:-" You are coming with me only na, it's fine!! Come soon!!"


Apurva immediately comes down!!!


Shashank:-" What about....???"


Before he could continue apurva replied:-" i have messaged baba and attya that i am out with you and i will return home soon!!"


Shashank:-" How did you know I would ask this???"


Apurva:-" My moral science teacher would!!!"


Shashank:-" Acha, i am your moral.....!!"


Before he could complete apurva -" Are khadus you have got the bike, let's just go!! I shall listen to all your morals values tom, abhi let's go!!!"


Shashank nods his not being surprised at all on her excitement!! He knew she loves bike rides and so he got bike today, to lit her mood up!! And even though she dint knew but he wanted to spend time with her on his birthday or may be his heart wanted, his ego denyed!!!


Shashank:-" Hold me properly, we shall go in speed!!"


Apurva checks his head, if he is fine or not!!!


Shashank:-" What??"


Apurva:-" Where is my khadus ha??"


Shashank:-" Then who is this in front of you!!"


Apurva:- "This is someone else!!! First you come to meet me, you get bike along, you taking me out and above all you will drive in speed!!! Not bad ha!! Mera asar ho raha hai tumpe thoda thoda!!!"


Shashank slowly:-" thoda pura hi pagal hogaya hu!!"


Apurva:-" You Said something???"


Shashank:-" are just hold me tight, lets go!!"


Apurva holds him from his shoulders and then they drive in speed!!!


Apurva:-" khadus where are we going???"


Shashank:-" Don't know just randomly roaming!!!"


Apurva:-" You know what khadus today's day is very special!!!"


Shashank thinks she remembers his birthday:-" Finally!!"


Apurva teasing him:-" What finally!!"


Shashank:-" Why is today's day special!!"


Apurva:-" Are 8th wonder has happened!! Khadus kanitkar has taken this shisht kanitkar out....that to on bike the day has to be special!!"


Shashank:-" Acha that is why the day is special!!!"


Apurva:-" Ya, what else did you think!!"


Shashank:-" No nothing!! Ofcourse it's 8th wonder day is special!!!"


Apurva sees a cake shop there (ab ye mat puchna kaha se aa gayi cake shop waha...writers liberty hai voh😂😂)


Apurva:-" Then let's celebrate!! See there is a cake shop!!! Khadus let's go na, i so want to eat the cake!!! Plz na khauds plz plz pretty plz!!!" She thought convencing her khadus won't be that easy so she takes extra efforts to make him agree!!!


But where did she knew her khadus himself wanted to celebrate this day!!! He immediately parks the bike near the cake shop!!!


They order two pastries!!!! It was around 12.15 when they ordered pastries!!!


Otherside at around 12 kuki gang had reached Shashank's room only to find him missing!! They concluded that he must be with appu...bcz Shashank not being home on the said time only means one thing he is with appu, so they dint even call him and let the couple be in privacy!!!!


Apurva:-" So khadus since you made my night this special, here first bite goes to you!!!" She makes him eat the cake!!


Apurva in mind:-" Happy birthday khadus!! Wishing you all the success in life!!!"


Shashank in mind, i wish this was my birthday cake and you were the first one to wish me!!! But alas it's just I WISH!!!


Shashank also makes her eat the cake!!!


Apurva again makes him eat the cake and in flow she speaks:-" May you keep smiling like this all your life!!"


Shashank becomes surprised:-" Wait what did you say!! Were you wishing me??"


Apurva realising what she spoke:-" I was wishing for you!! My atti says when you are celebrating something by eating cake na, you should ask a wish for yourself!!! So since you made my night special i asked a wish for you!!!"


Shashank agreeing to her words and being disappointed:-Ohh ok ok!!!"


Apurva:-" Khadus let's take a selfie!!"


She goes and stands in front of Shashank, and pouts whereas Shashank was looking at her lovingly and there is a click!!!


Shashank:-" Chalo now let's go home and try to sleep!!"


Apurva:-" Ok, let's go!!"


They again settle on their bikes, this time appu holds Shashank's stomach and hugs him from back!!! Shashank was surprised but he was on cloud nine!!!


Apurva:-" Khadus thank you!! This was my best drive!!"


Shashank in his mind:-" And this was my best start to my birthday!!!"


Shashank:-" Shisht!! You will be back na Tom???"


Apurva dint want to tease him more:-" Yes for sure!!! I can't have sleepless nights everyday without my teddy!!"


Shashank smiles brightly at this!!!


Leaving apurva to her place he drives off to his place!!! And after that they both slept in peace!!! But shashank was yet upset as apurva dint wish him!!


Next day early morning everyone wishes Shashank, he tries to vidoe call apurva so that she can see all this and it might click her it's his birthday today....but apurva being apurva she acts as if she is yet sleeping 😂 tired of his attempts to let apurva know it's his birthday, he angrily leaves for institute!!!


After he reaches institute, there also netra had decorated his cabin and brought a cake and everything!! He again video calls apurva from institute, but this time apurva was in kanitkar wada she couldn't pick up the video call, so she calls back the normal call!!!


Apurva:-" Yes khadus????"


Shashank:-" Are pick up the video call na???" He wanted to show her the decorations so it would click her it's his birthday today!!


Apurva:-" Are i am out with baba, i can't pick up video call now!!! You tell what is so Urgent??"


Shashank:-" Only if it is urgent i can call you kya??"


Apurva:-" Without that you won't even receive my call, calling me is all together a different story😂"


Shashank:-" Forget it!!! I don't want to talk to you only!! Good bye!!!" He keeps the call in anger!!!


Shashank's assistant (shrikant):-" Sir, then what did vahini gift???"


Netra:-" Are she must toh have gifted something very costly, Rich daughters spoiled kid she is!!! She doesn't understand simple things that more than costly things simple guestures matters, right na sir???"


Shashank:-"What my wife gifted me is none of your concern netra!!! That's our personal thing, we will see to it!! And for your kind information, what she gifted is not important but knowingly or unknowingly she has given me happiness and that's what matters for me more!!!"


Netra fumes in anger and leaves!!!


Shashank to himself:-" Meri wife muje wish kar de wahi bhaut hoga!!"


Otherside apurva had taken the charge and fully decorated the kanitkar wada!!!


It was around 5 p.m when Shashank receives a call from sua aai!!!


Sua aai:-" Shashank baccha!! I had come to this west side ka mandir to pray for you on behalf of your birthday, now i am not getting any auto from here, this is near your office can you pick me up plz???"


Shashank:-" ofcourse aai why not!! As it is i have come on bike today!!"


Saying this Shashank leaves!!!


Srikant to tanmayee and netra:-" Chalo let's leave!!"


Netra:-" Where??"


Srikant:-" Shahsank sir's mom had called and told me that they have arranged a surprise party for sir and we are invited!! We need to be fast and reach before sir reaches chalo let's leave!!!"


All three of them leave for Shahsank's house!!!!


Otherside Shashank picks up sua aai and reaches home around 6.30!!!


As soon as Shashank reaches home, he removes his shoes at the entrance he finds happy birthday written with rose petals!!!! He smiles seeing that!!!


Sua aai:-" So surprised??"


Shashank:-" Appu did all this na???"


Sua aai:-"What do you think!! Let's go inside many things are waiting for you!!!"


As soon as he steps inside, amey and nikhil burst that birthday blast, and all the sprakles fall on Shashank!!!!


When he enters inside more, prachi comes and takes his bag, he sees shrikant, netra and tanmayee there...he was surprised that even they were invited!!!


As he moves ahead, he sees a white curtain there and a board on which it was written take the remote and press the switch on button!!! As soon as he does that, a video starts playing in the start of the vidoe all his childhood pictures and everything were there, after that each family member had wished him with a special message!! Shashank was in tears by now!! At the end of the video there was a pic of Shashank and appu the selfie which she took yesterday night....but there was no message of her!!!


Before even Shashank could ask why was her message not there in the vidoe, he hears her voice!!! But couldn't see her!!


Apurva:-" My message was not there in the vidoe because I am the only person left to wish you in person!!! These all are big time cheaters i told them not to wish you before the surprise party but instead they convenced me only to keep the surprise as surprise!! So khadus kanitkar....wait wait sorry Shashank kanitkar, nako let it be khadus only if i call you shashank na, that wish would look fake!!!"


Everyone laughs at this!!!!


Apurva:-" So khadus kanitkar wishing you a very very happy birthday!! May you get all the success in life!! May all your dreams come true!! May you keep smiling!! And may you fight with me more and yes may you stop calling me shisht!!"


Shashank loudly speaks:-" That is never happening shisht!!! Now plz come out shisht wish me in person!!!"


Apurva comes in front of him and immediately hugs him, he also was so emotional that he also hugs her back!!!


Apurva in his ears:-" Happy birthday my dear khadus!!"


Shashank:-" Thank you my Shisht!!!" He was yet in tears!!!!


Everyone then wishes Shashank!!! His office team also comes to wish him!!! Netra was highly jealous of all that was happening!! The tight hug which shappu shared was unbearable for netra!!!!


Shashank:-" So you all also knew about appu's this plan??"


Srikant:-" Yes sir!!"


Netra:-" No sir, i never knew about any of these things!!! Your wife actually dint invite me!!"


Srikant:-" She dint call up anyone!! It was sir's mother that called me up and told me to inform everyone else as well!!"


Netra:-" Ya but we weren't informed about this grand celebration!! Otherwise we would have come prepared that way!! Now a rich spoilt brat would organinze a party then it has to be high class only na!!!"


Apurva:-"This was meant to be a surprise netra Tai!!! Now you see you aren't very smart in keeping surprises and since I was organizing the party i had taken all the care of not letting khadus even have 1% doubt in our plan ...and not informing you in advacne was the need to keep this as a surprise!!!"


Netra:-" Listen you!!"


Apurva:-" Khadus!!! Dada kaka has video called come we need to talk to him!!"


Saying this apurva takes Shashank and leaves!!!


After sometime...apurva comes in the centre of the house and announces!!!


Apurva:-" Khadus i know you love three things in life first is your family, second is your institute and third is music!!! For family you had the family wishes video, for institute you have your colleagues over here to celebrate the day with you, now is left music, so today I apurva khadus kanitkar has decided to dedicate you a song!! So Mr. Khadus i will sing a song for you today!!i have been practicing since yesterday!!"


Everyone:-" What no!!" They all know appu's singing abilities!!!


But shashank:-" Shisht sing fast i am waiting to listen!!"


Kuki comes near Shashank and says:-" have you gone mad!! You know her singing abilities na....yaar our ear drums will burst!!"


Shashank;-" See her excitement kuki!!! And waise bhi kuki after all this...i can bear her song for today atleast and so can you all!!"


Kuki:-" Wahhhh do Dil m rahe hai....magr khullam khulla😂😂!!"


Shashank:-" kukki yaar!!"


Apurva starts singing and she sings very badly but what surprised Shashank was the song...though she was singing with no Sur ya taal but the wordings she selected touched Shashank's heart...not just his heart but everyone there were surprised by her selection of song!!


Ek aasmaan ke hain hum do sitare ke

Ke takraate hain toot’te hain bechare

Mujhe tumse par yeh kehna hai


Chakke jo do sath chlte hain thode to

Ghisne ragadne mein chhilte hain thode

Par yoon hi to kat’te hain kachche kinaare


Yeh dil jo dhala teri aadt mein

Shaamil kiya hai ibaadat mein

Thodi khuda se bhi maafi ho

Mere liye tum kaafi ho


Mere liye tum kaafi ho

Mere liye tum kaafi ho

Mere liye tum kaafi ho


Before apurva could continue netra shouts!!


Netra:-" Are stop!!! No body would even give you change for such bad singing!!! How horrible do you sing re!!! Mannerless girl don't you know that what horrible singer you are....where Shashank sir sings so melodiously and look at you not even a bathroom singer you are!!! You are no match to shashank sir ..it just that forcibly this......!!!"


Tears had formed in apurva's eyes by now, and this was not bearable by Shashank!!!


Before netra could continue further Shashank stops her:-" Stop!!! Stop speaking rubbish netra!!! Who are you to judge her singing...do you know how to sing??? No naz then stop judging her you are no one to tell MY WIFE anything!!!! You only said in the morning na netra that more than expensive gifts guestures matter...this is her guestures for me!!! A wife's guestures for her husband and there is no need of any third person to interfere between me and my my wife!!! She may not have sung in Sur and taal, but she yet sung beautifully bcz the wordings were from her heart which touched my heart!!! So netra if you think also of spoiling this party then you better leave!!!"


Apurva was about to leave, but Shahsank stops her!!!


Shashank:-" let this world think what they want to think, the song was for me and it touched my heart!! (He wipes her tears) and now this song is by me to you!! Only you!!!"


He sits on his knees and asks for her hand, he then starts singing along with dancing with her!!!


Song:- Kaise hua tu itna zaroori!!!! (And dance you can imagine valentine's day dance)


The day ended with a good note now everyone was tired and had retired to their rooms!!!


Apurva:-" Chalo now let's sleep, i am very tired!!! Yesterday night also couldn't sleep well!!"


Shashank:-" Why???"


Apurva:-" I dint have my teddy na!!!"


Shashank:-"Acha!!! Then why did you go!!"


Apurva:-" If i wouldn't have gone, how would this surprise be possible!!"


He takes her into the hug, (the way the generally sleep)


Shashank:-" Appu, this was one of the best birthday's i have had!! Thank you for everything!!!"


Apurva:-"You liked it na??? Now give me my return gift!!"


Shashank:-" What do you want??"


Apurva:-" Always call me appu, the way you just called!! Listening to appu from your mouth feels good!!"


Shashank:-" Good night appu!!"


Apurva:- "Good night khadus and remove your specs!!"


Shashank:-" Shisht!! My Shisht!"


He hugs her more tight and the sleep peacefully!!!


So finally the final chapter is here!!


So guyz how was it???

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