KaYu FF: Hit and Miss Part 20 Page 16 - Page 8

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thanks all who are reading and liking my FF... Keep reading...next part is coming..
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Sorry for not able to post update daily... It might not be frequent in upcoming weeks.. but I will try to make it...
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Part 16
Gauri came home after shopping, not knowing happenings in home behind her back. When she returned Yug was at home playing with Naina and Pavitra. "Yug you did not go to office today?" Gauri asked. Naina and Yug looked at each other. Naina smiled funnily. Yug made excuse that Naina demanded to stay at home so she did. "Great you are at home. I have done so much shopping for our dance. We have to go in the evening along with Naina for dance practice. You remember right" Gauri said excitingly. Yug made face like culprit. One more time he did something in anger without thinking and it was about to hit him back. "Gauri i dont think I can make it" Yug said. Gauri was upset. "No Yug you should do it." Kali said coming there. "Gauri was so excited about it. She even had told Naina's friends that you are going to perform. You have to agree after all its for sake of your daughter. She will be happy to see her mummy and papa performing." Kali supported Gauri. Naina was not happy and even Leela. Yug had no choice. He didnt like the fact that Kali was pushing him towards Gauri. But it was his mistake that he agreed to Gauri's plan at first place.

Gauri was happily trying all costumes at home and showing it to Naina. "How does it look Nainu?" Gauri asked. "Nice" Naina replied. "You know I m so excited. Yug agreed for performance with me. We will rock it. " Gauri said praising herself in mirror. She was confident that she will bring Yug close to her. "You can't win Kali. I am Gauri Jha. No one can beat me. I always win." Gauri was going overconfident. "You are wrong Gauri Jha. You are dealing with Naina Chaudhary. I also see how do you win" Naina thought to herself and picked up oil bottle from dressing table. Gauri was too much engrossed with herself when Naina run downstairs with oil.

Yug was sitting quiet on swing in garden helding his head with his hands. "What happened papa" Pavitra asked. Yug pulled her closed and said "Nothing" . "Then why are you upset" Pavitra asked. "I know why he is" Kali said coming there. Yug looked at her. "Pavitra you go inside, play with Naina" Kali asked her. Pavitra rushed inside. Kali sat on swing next to Yug. "So afraid of dance?" Kali asked. "You know everything very well. I am sure Gauri is going to make prestige issue one more time" Yug said. "Why you always think negative Yug. Who knows something positive will come out of this" Kali said. "What positive thing?" Yug looked at her puzzled. "I mean who knows you will find your real soul partner while dancing" Kali said. Yug gave her sarcastic look as if she doesn't know what he wanted. "Yug you always tell me to give another chance to life. Isnt it applicable for Gauri as well. She also deserves another chance to prove herself. After all she is your wife. This could not be just co-incident that you both are going to perform together. May be ramji want to hint something to you which you are not able to see." Kali was trying to make Yug understand. Yug wanted to reply but they heard big scream of Gauri and rushed inside house.

Gauri almost trembled down from staircase and landed on floor. "Which idiot put oil on staircase" Gauri shouted holding her leg in pain. "Mumma it's didi" Pavitra innocently revealed. Everyone looked at Naina surprisingly. "I was taking bottle to oil my bicycle. But accidentally bottle fell down. I went to call servant to clean it but before that Gauri mumma fell down" Naina replied. "Naina you should have been more careful" Manjiri was sensing something wrong with Naina. "Now you dont start. She said its just mistake" Leela scolded Manjiri to cover up the matter. "Manji maa, we can talk about it later. First we need to aid Gauri" Kali said and picked her up. "I will call doctor" Yug replied. Kali and Manjiri slowly took Gauri upstair. Yug was calling doctor. Naina looked at Leela with victorious smile on face.

Everyone was in room and doctor was checking Gauri. "Her leg has twisted. You get x-ray done to check if it's hairline crack or not. Then we will decide to put plaster or not" Doctor told. "Plaster? Please No. I have dance performance planned with Yug." Gauri said. "Forget about dance Mrs. Gauri. You should not move even for next 3 weeks." Doctor informed. "Means I can't dance" Gauri asked. "No. You have to rest" Doctor advised her. Doctor gave her medicines and left for the day. "Sorry Gauri mumma. Because of me you won't perform." Naina said to Gauri. "It's ok Naina" Gauri pulled Naina to hug. Leela was surprisingly looking at antics of Naina. Naina blinked her eye and Leela understood Naina's one more move to come out clean of this mess.

In the night, on dining table everyone was there except Gauri. Kali came there. She handed over plate to servant and asked him to give it to Gauri in her room. "Naina stop playing with food and eat it" Kali said. Naina was still not eating. "What happened?" Leela asked Naina. "Badi Daadi, I am very much upset. Now Gauri mumma had fell down there will be no one to perform from my end. You know my all friends parents are performing" Naina said. "Whats big deal? Your parents will perform too. What if Gauri is not there; Kali will perform" Leela said and everyone looked at her in amusement. "No Daadi ji, this is not possible" Kali replied. "But mumma, whats the problem?" Naina asked. "Naina this is not important event. It's ok if someone from your end doesn't perform" Manjiri replied. "See no one loves me. Leave it. What will happen? My all friends will make fun of me. But why you all will bother for that" Naina went upset leaving dining table. "Whats your problem? You all become happy to make her upset. It's just small performance she was asking for" Leela fired them. Kali panicked. "I will get her" Yug said.

Yug came to Naina's room. "Naina, don't be stubborn. Come, let's have your dinner" Yug said. "No papa, I dont want to eat anything. If you and mumma agree to perform together then only i will eat food." Naina replied. Yug had big challenge in front of him. He knew convincing Kali is biggest task. "Come let's go. I know how to make your mumma agree for it." Yug said and took Naina downstairs.

Yug came down with Naina. "Kali now get ready for punishment you agreed for" Yug said. "Punishment?" Kali looked at him confused. "Remember, you promised me in the morning that whatever punishment i will give, you will agree for it." Yug said. "Yes. I remember. But whats about that now" Kali asked. "So your punishment is you have to dance with me at Naina's dance class function" Yug replied and everyone stared at Yug.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hai Darshu
Ha ha Gauri fell from stairs. And Naina did this.
And Yug fear to dance.
Umm it's so smart how Yug cornered Kali with her promise only so kayu will dance together. So nice.
U take ur time for updates.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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tengkyu darshu ...you owesome...you make me very...very...very...happy read this FF...please continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Beautiful...

Hai Darshu

Ha ha Gauri fell from stairs. And Naina did this.
And Yug fear to dance.
Umm it's so smart how Yug cornered Kali with her promise only so kayu will dance together. So nice.
U take ur time for updates.


Thanks for comments Rupa... that's the karma... Once Gauri used all tactics to get Yug using Naina ... And now her own daughter is giving back for her deeds... So justified...right.. 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: delha

tengkyu darshu ...you owesome...you make me very...very...very...happy read this FF...please continue soon


Thanks... Keep reading...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#78
Awesome!
KaYu dance, excited for it!
Can you show Kali going job hunting or participating in some reality show?
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: __shibani__

Awesome!
KaYu dance, excited for it!
Can you show Kali going job hunting or participating in some reality show?


Thank god... More than awesome some comments are there... Bored of having just pooja pooja in KT.. so thoda different ho jaaye... And I will see if ur demands cam fit in story i am writting...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thanks all who are reading and liking my FF

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