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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 17

"So your punishment is you have to dance with me at Naina's dance class function" Yug replied and everyone stared at Yug. "Yug this is not possible" Kali again denied. "I don't know anything.You promised me and you have to do it" Yug said. "Kali agree for it. It's just small performance" Leela too supported. "Maa ji, but if she is not willing then why to force her" Manjiri was going to defensive mode. "Manji maa." Kali stopped Manjiri. "Ok Yug. I will perform with you. I had promised you so I keep it." Kali replied. Manjiri looked at her surprisingly. Naina Yug and Leela were happy. "But one thing I know Gauri wont like it." Kali told everyone. "Mumma, you don't worry I will tell Gauri mumma" Naina replied. "Ok. But if Gauri disapproves it i wont do it. I don't want any more drama at home" Kali made her stand clear. "Ok. I agree" Leela said. Even Yug agreed for it. Naina realized she need to handle it very carefully. Manjiri was bit upset on Kali.

In room, Kali was winding her stuff when Manjiri came inside. "Whats going on kali?" Manjiri asked Kali. "Nothing Manji ma, I am just winding stuff." Kali replied casually. "I am not asking about this. I am asking about situation between You and Yug" Manjiri replied and Kali looked at her surprisingly as she was unable to understand anything. "Do you want to get back to Yug?" Manjiri asked her straightforward. "Manji maa, how could you think about this even. You know my answer for this" Kali replied. "Then why do you agreed for dance performance with Yug?" Manjiri asked. "Manji ma I promised Yug that I will accept his punishment. I didn't want to set wrong example in front of Naina and Pavitra. If I don't keep my promise in front of them. It will be wrong learning for them. That's why I said yes. And about performing with Yug i know Gauri will never agree to it. So dont worry Manji ma" Kali assured from her end.

Manjiri was not peaceful. She didnt know why she saw something different in Kali. Kali was going friendly with Yug once again. She trusted Kali and her words. But she knew her daughter more. She was able to sense Kali's foot were slowly turning to Yug. She was more worried due to encounter with Nandu and Devri's demand. "Why Devri wants Pavitra to meet Nandu? There is nothing wrong in his demand. As Pavitra is Nandu's daughter. But Kali what about her?" Manjiri's questions were not ending. When she saw Devri standing near gate of the house. She was frightened. "No its just imagination" Manjiri thought and turned from window. But soon she realized it's not dream. Devri was really there. She rushed downstairs. "What are you doing here? How do you dare to come to this house?" Manjiri asked. "I told you, I can be anywhere. No one can stop me. But right now I just came to remind you about tomorrow's meeting." Devri said. "I will not bring Pavitra by any means" Manjiri replied firmly. "You have to. Tomorrow same time and same place we will be waiting for you and Pavitra" Devri replied and left. Manjiri was worried.

Yug was getting ready for office. "This Kali haven't sent by breakfast yet. I am starving here" Gauri was going panic. "She is not free like you. She must be busy" Yug replied. "I am also not sitting here by my wish. Doctor had advised me else I can do my work myself" Gauri replied back. "Gauri mumma, I have brought breakfast for you" Naina said coming in room with tray of breakfast. "Thank you Naina. You are taking so much care of your mumma" Gauri pampered Naina. "Gauri mumma, I want ask you something" Naina said. "As you won't be able to take me to dance class are you ok if kali mumma take me there. I really want to learn dance and do best as you do" Naina put Gauri on cloud nine. "Yeah that's absolutely fine" Gauri said. "And is it ok if kali mumma can wait till I practice and then come back home together. I want to be best dancer as you that's why" Naina asked. "Yeah thats fine. I have no issues." Gauri replied happily. Yug looked at Naina because what she was asking for is completely different from Kali asked for. "Papa let's go for breakfast" Naina said. Yug came out of room with Naina. "Naina this is not what your mumma had asked for" Yug said. "I know papa. But there is no other way" Naina said. "Naina come for breakfast" Kali called and both went down. "Gauri's breakfast" Kali was worried. "Mumma I have already given her in room" Naina said and kali proudly looked at Naina. "Mumma, i have asked Gauri mumma. And she doesn't have any problem with you dancing with papa" Naina said and Kali looked puzzled. Yug looked at Naina with wild surprise. He was trying to understand what is Naina upto. "Is it? I will check with her" Kali said and turned to go upstair. Naina was frightened. She knew her plan would fail. "Badi Daadi do something" Naina asked Leela. Yug looked at Leela this time. He got hint that something is cooking between Leela and Naina.
"Kali wait. I will also come with you to meet Gauri. After all she is my daughter in law and I should enquire about her health." Leela said and went with Kali. Yug looked at Naina who was trying to act as innocent.

Kali and Leela came to room. Gauri was resting. "Gauri how are you feeling now" Leela asked. "Still there is pain daadi ji" Gauri replied. "Take your medicines on time and get well soon" Leela's mind and words were not same. "Gauri if you need anything tell me" Kali said. "I can call servants if required" Gauri said angrily. "Gauri Naina told you about dance practice. You don't have any issue with that?" Kali asked her. "Why I would I?" Gauri asked. "See i know she is so understanding" Leela started praising Gauri. "But Daadi ji" Kali tried to interfere. "Ohh kaali don't you get it when I told you once. Do as Naina said. I can bear you to complete my daughter wish" Gauri said. Kali was so confused but Leela asked to her to go right now and let Gauri rest. Kali was surprised how did Gauri agree.

Kali came down in confused mode. "What did Gauri Mumma said?" Naina asked. "What she will say she had no issue with your demand. Now Yug and Kali start dance practice very hard." Leela said happily. Yug looked at Leela and Naina. Kali confusingly went to her kitchen for her work. Yug turned his direction to Leela and Naina. "Now will you both tell me what's going on between you" Yug asked them. "What between us? Nothing" Leela tried to escape. "Daadi, please dont enact. I am sure Gauri had not agreed for Kali and my dance together. And what Naina asked to Gauri is completely different thing." Yug said. "So tell me everything." Yug continued. "Ok papa, we will tell you but not here" Naina said.

Yug took Leela and Naina to garden. They revealed everything about what they are trying to do. "You both please stop it. If Kali comes to know about it. She will be upset." Yug said. "Yug, whatever we are doing for good for everyone. Don't you want to Kali to be back in your life" Leela asked. "I want Daadi. But i know it's very complicated matter now. If I keep forcing Kali I am afraid she will go away from me forever. Fearing same I am still staying with Gauri. I don't want Kali to take any drastic way which will take her away from my eyes." Yug said. "What do you think. She is not taking such drastic decision. Moving to other city with Pavitra was part of such decision." Leela said. "Yug she wants you to accept Gauri" Leela told him. "And you know that is not possible" Yug replied. "Yug then do something so that Kali can never think of going away from you. I have seen Kali who faught against everything to get her status as your wife. Who proved herself even when you were not trusting her. And if you want that kali back then you have to kill distance between you two which has cribbed all those years. You have to make that wish live in Kali which will force her to come back." Leela made Yug understand. "Yes papa, i also want to see both of you together" Naina said. "Please papa, help us. Without your support we can't do it" Naina requested Yug. Yug was in thinking mode.

Edited by darshana23 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#82
Awesome!
Please show Kali in a dress...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: __shibani__

Awesome!
Please show Kali in a dress...

Thanks Shibu... I will surely try to show her that way...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#84
Hi i'm silent reader of ur ff
I loved the way ur story is heading😛

Update soon😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: Niha1999

Hi i'm silent reader of ur ff

I loved the way ur story is heading😛

Update soon😛


Awww... thank you ... Comments from member who are silent reader really boost energy to keep writting .. 😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thanks everyone who is reading and liking my FF...keep reading...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Sorry i am posting to move to next page
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 18
Manjiri was still in deep thinking.. with each passing moment she was restless. She didnt wish to take Pavitra to meet Nandu but if she doesnt then she knew Devri will land in house. "No i need to stop him" Manjiri thought. "Manji maa, I will be taking Naina to dance class in the evening. Yug will also join there. I am surprised how did Gauri agreed for it." Kali was talking to Manjiri but Manjiri was lost in her thoughts. "Manji maa, what happened?" Kali asked. "Hmmm... Kali i was thinking to take Pavitra in garden today evening." Manjiri said. "Ok Manji maa. But why are you so worried. Is there anything wrong?" Kali asked. "Nothing Kali. Everything is fine. Everything will be fine." Manjiri said and Kali looked at her puzzled.

Yug was waiting near dance class for Kali and Naina. He remembered moment where he agreed to help Naina and Daadi. But he was afraid of Kali's reaction. "If Kali comes to know about my intentions she will be upset more" Yug was thinking. Just then Kali arrived with Naina. Kali was too all apprehensive. It was not easy for her. "Mumma papa, my dance class is at ground floor. And you have to go at first floor." Naina said and left them alone. Yug and Kali stood their for a moment hesitant to make move first. "Let's Go" Yug said. Kali and Yug headed towards first floor through stairs.

Nandu and Devri arrived in garden. "Bhaiya, why we are here today again?" Nandu asked. "Nothing Nandu. I was getting bored sitting at home so thought of having fresh air" Devri said looking around for Manjiri. Manjiri arrived there with Pavitra and Devri looked at her determiningly. "Nandu I am thirsty. Please get me glass of water" Devri said. "I will Just bring brother" Nandu left without noticing Manjiri there. Devri came to her. "Thanks for coming Manjiri ji" Devri said. "You know very well. I am not here for you. Why did you ask me to bring Pavitra over here?" Manjiri asked. Devri tried to caress Pavitra but Manjiri didnt allow him. "Pavitra you go and play" Manjiri told her. "Don't think that I will fall for your game. I have brought Pavitra here just because I don't want your presence in my daughters life. Don't ever dare to think about coming back." Manjiri warned him. "Who I am to decide. Its all God's wish" Devri said. "God's name doesn't sound good from devil like you" Manjiri replied Devri. Manjiri was so engrossed while talking to Devri that she didn't realize, Pavitra climbed the ladder and was about to have a fall. "Mumma" Pavitra shouted loudly and Manjiri looked at her in shock. Before she could rush to save Pavitra, Pavitra lost her balance and was about to fall down. However Nandu came in Nick time and saved her. "Are you ok?" Nandu asked Pavitra. Pavitra nodded. Manjiri was hell shocked with Nandu and Pavitra's one more meet today. She hide herself quickly behind trees so Nandu couldn't see her. "Where is your mumma?" Nandu asked her. Pavitra tried looking for Manjiri but she was nowhere. Manjiri wished to go near Pavitra at this moment. But fear of Nandu knowing about Pavitra's truth crossed her mind. She stood their behind tree. Devri got immense satisfaction looking Manjiri this way. Devri purposefully went near Nandu. "Nandu , who is she?" Devri asked. "Don't know Bhaiyya, we are waiting for her mother only" Nandu said. "Wait isn't she same girl to whom you saved that day?" Devri said. "Yeah. She is the same girl. How careless her mom is who had left her kid alone." Nandu said and Devri smiled inside. "Yes you are right her mom should be very much careless. But never mind we will wait till the time her mom comes." Devri said and purposefully sat with them. Manjiri stood their helplessly waiting for Nandu and Devri to go. Devri didnt allow Nandu to move away from Pavitra. Pavitra and Nandu were bonding together and Manjiri was watching it.

Kali and Yug arrived at first floor. "Yes" choreographer asked. "Yug Chaudhary. Naina's father" Yug introduced himself "And she is Kali" Yug introduced Kali. "Ahh Welcome Mr and Mrs. Yug Chaudhary" choreographer said and welcomed them inside. Kali and Yug were going awkward with each moment. "Change your costume sir, we will start practice jn few minutes" Choreographer told them.

Nandu and Pavitra kept playing with each other for long. "Bhaiyya it's quiet late now. We will be late reaching home. And her mom is still not there" Nandu said. "I will do one thing Nandu. I will leave her near security. Her mom might have kept some message there" Devri said and took Pavitra with him. He took Pavitra near Manjiri. "Manji ma, where were you? I was looking for you." Pavitra complained. "I met my friend here and was talking to her" Manjiri made excuse. "Let's go home Pavitra. We are getting late." Manjiri said and turned to leave. "One moment Manjiri ji" Devri stopped her. "Tomorrow same time..same place" Devri told her. Manjiri looked at him in disbelief as she never wished to come again.

Yug came out changing his suit. Kali was still in her salwar suit. "Ok we will start. It's romantic number for you. As its first day we will learn some basic steps. Tomorrow onwards we will make it extensive." Choreographer said. Yug was nervous and so was Kali. Choreographer asked them to stand close. Kali and Yug moved closer. "Sir mam little more close please" Choreagrapher said. Kali was apprehensive but Yug has to go little bold. He moved more close to Kali. Kali's heart started racing fast. To hide her feelings she kept looking down. "Mam now keep your hand on Sir's shoulder. And hold another hand like this." Choreographer demonsrated them with his assistant. Kali still looking down kept her hand on Yug's shoulder. Yug was gazing at her. Slowly she gave her another hand in Yug's hand. And not wasting moment Yug made his grip tight hinting her he wants to hold it forever. "Sir now keep your hand here and make hold tight" Choreographer showed them holding his hand on his assistant waist. Yug slowly put his another hand on her waist. Kali could not hold this moment. She felt like first drop of rain fell on soil which was facing draught for years. She closed her eyes. Next Yug slid his hand from one side of waist to another and made his grip firm. Kali kept controlling her emotions on his touch. She was getting back to old days. But he realized same when her grip on his shoulder went more tight. "Now mam and sir you have to bend like this..." Choreographer showed them next step. Still holding his hand on her waist they both bent down. This time Kali looked at him. It was same face in front of her eyes whom she loved since her childhood. She was going that little girl again who fell in love with that dimple boy. Yug's eyes were fixed on her. Without even blinking eyes he pulled her back. They both were trying to find that love which was still residing somewhere deep down in their hearts. Choreographer kept showing them moves to make and they did same. There was moment when he pulled her in his arms. There was moment she held him. There was moment when he slid his hands from her shoulder to finger tips and lifted her. There was moment when he wrapped his arms around near her belly and shower his love. There was a moment where she leaned herself on him and tried to rest her on his chest. Everything was so instructed but still not. Their inner turmoil could only say how much difficult it was still being easy. It was not easy to live that past burrying present. But it was not easy to leave that past for present.

Their dance practice ended and Kali was too fragile at the end. "Mumma how was dance was practice" Naina asked. "Let's go home urgently" that could only Kali replied. Naina didnt understand anything. But Yug did. He didn't question her today. Rather silently drove his car as fast as he can to home. As soon as car stopped near house, Kali didnt waste a moment. She rushed to her room and locked herself in bathroom. "Papa what happened?" Naina asked. Yug didn't answer as this answer was not meant for Naina to understand. Kali in hurry opened tap of cold water shower and put herself down. That was the only way she could kill all those desires. She stood trying to be rock, but her heart was not leaving her so easily. All those moments with Yug during dance practice was rolling in front of her eyes. She wished to stop it all but it didn't. "Whats wrong with me. Why I can't get rid of it" Kali thought to herself. Kali shut the shower tap and came outside complete drench. But her heart made her complete weak when she saw Yug standing in front of her.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome update😛
Love ur ff than the show...

Missing kayu very much in the show😭
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Niha1999

Awesome update😛

Love ur ff than the show...

Missing kayu very much in the show😭


Thanks for reading... Yes even I also miss KaYu.. that's why this FF

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