KaYu FF: Hit and Miss Part 20 Page 16 - Page 6

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: darshana23

Rupa not really... I m catching repeat telecast.. but I don't get time to be there... I have so many things running at my personal front so I really don't want myself to get stuck in forum activities again...


😊 Ok I must say Mehek is doing great on forum front. It's in first place on zee channel.
I just saw the repeat telecast Mehek proposal to Shaurya. 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Shibu i will be happy on a day when u will put more than awesome or nice reply on my FF😆
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Thanks all who are reading and liking my FF... Plz keep reading...
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Part 12

In the night, on dining hall everyone was having dinner. Raghu hinted Kali atleast tell everyone about her plan now. Kali gathered courage and looked at Yug. "I want to share one news with you all." Kali said and everyone looked at her. "Pavitra had got admission in school at another city" Kali told everyone. "What? She was supposed to get admission in Naina's school right? And I asked you yesterday you said that matter is resolved" Yug asked her in surprise tone. "Yes Yug actually nothing was working out there so I decided not to try for that school" Kali replied. "Kali, you could have informed me atleast. I would have tried for some other school in Mithila " Yug was upset. "May be she didnt feel important" Gauri said which upset Yug more. "Yug i tried a lot to get admission in any school from Mithila. But that didn't workout. Hence I only suggested this school" Raghu tried to defend Kali. "But school in another city? Traveling will be hectic for Pavitra." Leela asked. "Yes maa ji, travelling from here to school will be very difficult. That's why Kali had decided she and Pavitra will move to another city." Manjiri said and Yug dropped spoon from his hand. He was frozen for a moment. Really upset on Kali that she didn't bother to consult him once before taking such decision. He left the dining table angrily. Kali kept looking at Yug and knew he is hurt. She looked at Gauri then and stay quiet. "Are you out of your mind?" Leela shouted on Kali. "How could you take such decision? Have you think how Naina will react to this?" Leela asked her. "Maa she didnt had choice" Raghu tried to interfere. "You stay quiet. You knew about everything but you didn't bother to tell me or Yug about it" Leela fired Raghu. "Daadi it's Kaali's decision. Why are you scolding papa for this" Gauri asked. "Do whatever you want. I think we are no one to you. That's why you didnt bother to discuss with us before making such decision." Leela was upset on Kali too. Kali was trapped. Her decision backfired her in every means. Now she was worried how Naina will react.

Leela was in her room upset with Kali. "Daadi ji" Kali came there with glass of milk. "You left dining table without eating much food and your medicines is also going on. Please drink this milk" Kali said. "Don't show that you care for us when you actually not" Leela was hurt. "Tell me Kaali, have i not given you rights as Naina's mother? Have i not accepted your and Nandu relationship as I knew you did so much for Naina. Have I not supported you when Nandu left you stranded when you were carrying Pavitra? Did I ever differentiated between Pavitra and Naina? Then why did you make difference Kali. At this stage you are person Kali I can blindly trust in house. Didn't you feel once to discuss this matter with everyone in house before making such drastic step?" Leela's accusation put Kali in guilty mode. "I am sorry Daadi ji. I know I have hurt everyone with this decision. But i really wish I had choice. I would have opted for that. And believe me whatever I am doing is good for this family only" Kali tried to convince Leela. Kali held Leela's hand "Don't you want to see happy faces in your house? Don't you want to see Yug happy with his family?" Kali said and Leela was scared inside realizing whats going on in Kali's mind. "Daadi ji, nothing has changed between Yug and Gauri in all those years. Gauri is upset all the time because no one gives her rights which she deserves. And till the time I am in this house this won't happen. That's why I have taken this decision for everyone." Kali told her. "Do you really think Yug will accept Gauri if you move away from him?" Leela asked. "He has to Daadi ji and I think he will do it." Kali said. "And what about Naina?" Leela asked and Kali didnt had answer for this.

Yug was standing near window angrily. He was so much upset on Kali. More than fact that she decided to move to different city he was upset she didnt feel like telling him once. She didnt trust him not even as friend. Naina was busy in drawing. "Naina, sleep now. Tomorrow we have to get up early" Gauri said. "Why early? Its my school vacation. I can sleep late" Naina replied. "Don't you want to see off your Kali mumma?" Gauri said looking at Yug. Naina was puzzled. "See off? Kali mumma? Where is she going?" Naina asked Gauri. "Ohh which means she didnt tell you even. Very bad. She and Pavitra will be going to other city tomorrow morning. Permanently!!" Gauri's words rubbed Yug's wound and shocked Naina. Naina was not able to take it. She left drawing and run to Kali's room. Yug was afraid looking at Naina's reaction. "Gauri, is this way to break news on her?" Yug scolded Gauri. "I am atleast telling her. What do you have to say about Kali who hadnt inform Naina about it yet" Gauri asked Yug and Yug didn't had answer.

Naina run to Kali's room. Kali was packing her and Pavitra's luggage. "Where are you going?" Naina questioned her angrily. "Naina see.." Kali tried to explain. "No.. i dont want to listen. You are going away from this house and you didn't tell me about it" Naina was upset on Kali. "Naina i wanted to tell but.." Kali tried to make her understand. "But what mumma? You are taking Pavitra with you as well but not me. I won't stay here either. I will also come with you." Naina was going mad. "Naina please understand. I can't take you with me" Kali was trying hard to explain her. But Naina was shaken inside. "You don't love me" Naina said finally and it broke Kali's heart. "Naina..." Kali was shocked to Naina's words. "Naina mumma loves you" Kali tried to pull Naina near but Naina pushed her. "Yes. You don't love me. You first denied to come to school. You asked me to stay with Gauri mumma and now you are leaving me" Naina said and Kali realized how her decisions had hurt Naina. "Naina.." kali tried to explain her. But Naina rushed to terrace crying. Kali was broken in room recollecting Naina's words.

Naina was sitting on swing crying, hurt due to Kali. Manjiri came there "Naina what are you doing here?" Manjiri asked. "Nothing" Naina replied. "If you are not able to sleep i can tell you one story" Manjiri said. "I don't want to listen" Naina replied. "If you find it boring then I will stop" Manjiri said to her. "Many years before there was princess just like you. She was happily staying with her mom queen and dad king. That king and queen love each other so much. And more than that they loved their princess. One day big daemon came and he kidnapped princess. Queen asked daemon to leave her daughter. That daemon put condition in front of queen that either she can choose king she loves or princess." Manjiri said. "Then whom she chose Manji maa" Naina asked curiously. "You tell me what do you think?" Manjiri asked Naina. By this time Naina realized it might be kali and her story. "Princess" Naina replied slowly. "Yes you are right. She chose her princess." Manjiri told Naina caring her. "Then queen faught with that daemon and killed him. After few days that queen was blessed with another cute baby like Pavitra. But that daemon came back and this time again princess was in danger. Now queen again had to make choice whether she should risk her new baby or she should save princess. But you know what? That queen loved her princess so much that she opted for princess again" Manjiri was trying to tell truth to Naina. " Manji ma whether that princess is me and that queen is my mumma?" Naina asked. Manjiri pulled her on lap. "You got it right. It's your story Naina. Your mumma had always loved you than anything else. She loves you most in this world. If she had everything in her hand she would not move a minute away from you. But there is no option for her. Pavitra is not getting admission in any school here. That's why it's important for her to go out of city and study. Do you want Pavitra go alone to new city and stay there? Manjiri asked and Naina was thoughtful.

Kali was crying in her room. Leela consoled her. "I told you its not easy for Naina to accept it" Leela said. Kali looked at Leela. Raghu came and asked Kali if her packing is done. "I am not going anywhere" Kali said. Leela and Raghu looked at Kali in surprise. "I can't go away from Naina. She is thinking that I don't love her. I can't see this feeling in her eyes" Kali said. "But what about Pavitra?" Raghu asked. "Papa you look out for some hostel I will keep Pavitra there" Kali said. "Kali hostel? She is too young for that." Raghu said. "I have to make my heart strong" Kali said and walked upto Pavitra. "Pavitra, mumma can't come with you. Your Naina di needs me here. You are my brave child right? You will manage alone." Kali said and Pavitra hugged her. Kali was worried how Pavitra will manage. "Mumma..." Kali heard Naina's voice and released hug. She looked at Naina who was standing their with Manjiri.


Edited by darshana23 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Ok Darshu ..
Is story me demon kaun hai. Devri or Gauri. .?
So Naina again stops Kali from leaving ?
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Thanks who all are reading and liking my FF... 1500 Views on FF makes me happy... Next part i am posting soon..
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Part 13

"Mumma" Naina said and Kali looked at her. Naina came near Kali and wiped her tears. "Mumma I m sorry. You go with Pavitra. Her school is important. And you should be with her to take care of her. I will manage without you." Naina said. Kali kissed Naina's hand with much affection and cares her face. "But promise me you will keep visiting me" Naina asked. "Naina I will miss you. I am leaving my heart here Naina" Kali said and hugged her. Pavitra came and hugged them too. All were emotional looking at bond between them.
Naina came to Yug's room. Yug was still seating upset on sofa. "Naina come. I will tell you nice story today" Gauri said. "Can I sleep with my mumma and Pavitra today?" Naina asked. Gauri looked at Yug and was confused what to answer. "hmmm.." Yug gave affirmation. "Thank you papa" Naina said and hugged him. Yug hugged her back. Naina was upset that her wish to see Kali and Yug together is never going to be fulfilled. "Just last day Kali. Now Yug and Naina will be mine" Gauri was happy inside.

Next morning, Yug got ready early and left the house. He didn't wish to see Kali leaving. He came to garden and Pavitra was sitting there upset. Yug saw her and came near her and sat next to her. "So all set to go" Yug asked Pavitra. "I don't want to go" Pavitra said. "Can't I stay here with you all?" Pavitra asked. Yug didn't say anything. He put his hand on her head, got up and left in his car. Kali watched them from window. She saw Yug going away and thought its their destiny.

Everyone came down to bid Audie to Kali and Pavitra. For everyone emotional moment it was. Kali hugged Naina tightly and asked her not to trouble anyone. She put kiss on her forehead. Naina and Pavitra too hugged each other. Naina too asked Pavitra not to trouble Kali. "Where is Yug?" Leela asked. "He left early today" Gauri informed. Leela and Naina looked at each other. "Yug is still upset with me. But its better. The more he goes away from me; he will get more close to Gauri" Kali thought. "Let's go Kali we are getting late." Raghu said. Raghu acquired seat next to driver. Kali made Pavitra seat in car and was about to shut the door. But someone came and stopped Kali from Kali from closing the door. He was none other than Yug.

Yug silently removed Kali's hand from door lock and opened the door. Kali was looking at him surprisingly. He took Pavitra out of car and made her stand. He bent down on knees and held Pavitra by her shoulder. "Do you want to go away from here?" He asked Pavitra. Pavitra nodded negatively. "Naina come here" he called Naina to her. "Do you want to stay away from your sister and mumma?" Yug asked Naina. "No" Naina too said. Yug looked at Kali and she really felt guilty this time. "No one can separate you two from each other. You will always stay together" Yug assured. "But papa, Pavitra's school?" Naina questioned. Yug smiled and pulled out paper from his coat. "Pavitra is definitely going to school. But to your school" Yug said and got up. Everyone looked at him surprisingly. He turned to Kali and gave her letter. "Pavitra's admission is done at Naina's school." Yug said and Kali gave surprised look. "Don't worry she had got admission there with your name only." Yug said more and Kali was definitely felt guilty all the way. "Yeh..." Naina screamed. "Papa that means pavitra and mumma not going anywhere." Naina asked. Yug smiled and said yes to her. "Let's go Pavitra. We will play together" Naina said and both girls run together inside. "Yug but how did you manage this?" Manjiri asked. "Pishi ma if anything is done with good purpose. Then god shows way" Yug said. Everyone was happy. "Everything is sorted out that is more important" Leela said happily. "Yug.. ." Kali wanted to thank Yug but he was still angry on her.

In afternoon, Naina and Leela were sitting on swing discussing about their plan once again. Leela told her whole story about why Kali is keeping Naina with Gauri and Yug. "Ohh so mumma thinks I will bring Yug and Gauri mumma close? But why so." Naina asked. Leela avoided real answer. "Who can make your mumma understand? She feels she is responsible for problems between Gauri and Yug. She is snatching Yug from Gauri." Leela told her. "But that is wrong no?? It's Gauri mumma who had taken everything from my mumma." Naina said. "Yes. But its difficult to make Kali see that " Leela said. "And now for us problem is big. Yug is angry on Kali. And he won't come back normal till the time Kali apologies. And I know Kali she won't do that" Leela continued. Naina and Leela looked at each other as they had even bigger problem in front of them.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Again just awesome 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I ❤️ it...please continue the story soon 😊
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Originally posted by: delha


I ❤️ it...please continue the story soon 😊


Thanks I will continue soon...

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