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Posted: 17 years ago
*This Fan fiction is a stupid ameutuerish attempt by me…I suggest you guys read it with your eye closed 😆 .Its a small piece and yes guys I promise I wont continue this Torture... 😆 *





8 long years have passed.Things have pretty much changed but thankfully relationships are still the same….DK now live in mussoorie…with 5 kids!!(can you belive that? 😉 ).Kaajjal first had triplets all boys and before DPS could recover from the shock they had two cute girl twins.The family pretty much complete…...DPS had pretty much set up his own version of a radio city among other big plans In mussoorie.Kaajjal had continued with being an Rj till she had children who kept her busy round the clock…
Today was a lazy Sunday Morning..Kaajjal and dev were still in bed…but nothing would stop the kids from getting up who were up and about even before sun dawn….Something you would never see on a school day…
Dev was just snuggling up in bed and just getting cosy…..when he heard a huge crash…'m gonna kill them today' muttered dev…'kaajjal go and see….They dont let me sleep even on a Sunday'….kaajjal was too sleepy…she just cuddled up in dev's arms…'this is all your fault…you asked for kids'…...'yes for kids…not devils' retorted dev..' I hope whatever is broken is ours….I cant bear Mrs Sharma's bhajans early in the Morning and from tomorrow Im gonna lock them all up in their rooms ..…'
Kaajjal at once got up……She knew her dev and it was never good to allow him near the kids till his mood was fine..Coming to think of it was his mood was never fine..he still was as kahdoos as ever but well still lovable as ever..she gave him a quick kiss on the cheeks and quickly went downstairs to survey the damage..
'Ved …..krish…Rahul…kahon ho tum??' She went out into the garden and as usual saw that her neighbour's glasspane was broken for the 4th time in this week…Dev wouldn't be happy..He already had work tensions and she better keep him both out of the kids' way and Mrs.Sharma ji's as well…She was really glad NT mom was coming home today..She would really ask wether Dev was as naughty a kid in his childhood as their kids are…Not a moments peace in this house....She would go back to bed and pretend nothing happened…She still hadn't told dev about the headmaster's complaint at school…well by now she thought he should be used to the pranks but the headmaster seemed to take special pleasure in trying to Call Dev to school every time…Dev had blankly refused to meet him after the first meeting where he gave a not –so-impressive report and kaajjal was secretly glad dev never came again…
She was just turning to go back to bed when she heard the noise of some hushed footsteps…kaajjal went quickly went over and with one quick moment pulled them all out of their hiding by their ears…
'good..good morning Mom..'muttered all together giving their best smiles..
"Morning kharab karake kya good morning??"retorted kaajjal in a stern voice 'Aaj bhi ek aina tod diye…rahul maine tumse kahan than na…You know this weeks complaints are already pretty long..…Infact the milkman already wants to speak to dad about you generously taking his milk to feed all the dogs in town…'
'mama ….dont tell papa..'
'Of course….And I take all the scoldings…Do I??' said kaajjal
"Between whose glass did you break.What is the need to play cricket at 6 am in the dark??…Papa is sleeping and he's not in a great mood…I suggest you better have breakfast and go and play outside for a while…and for haeavan's sake stay out of trouble cause Im not shielding you pests this time..just don't turn up for a hour or so ..'
" we love you mom…' they said buttering her well..'theres another thing we forgot to tell…we tripped bunty on his bicyle yesterday ..So I guess sharma aunty is angry with us..Will you keep her away from pa ..papa too.."they asked innocently…
😉 " WHAT??" Kaajjal rolled her eyes…"You know what…Your dadi's coming today warna pata nahiin tum logon aaj kya haal hone waala hai…AB JAO…!'
Kaajjal went upstairs and checked on the girls…they were fast asleep…they weren't as naughty as the boys but like dev teased they talked twice the amount their mom did…and most of all the boys escapades used to come out from their mouths and a volcano used to erupt in the house…every Sunday morning…that it was a ritual these days…Kaajjal thanked her stars they were asleep…
She went back to her room to find dev half asleep…She herself was too sleepy and crawled back into bed.Soon dev's arms wrapped tightly around and caressed her cheek with his and he sleepily asked…"So,is our house in one piece??" " dev…..Nothing like that…they are fast asleep…the noise was from somewhere else" lied kaajjal"And you want me to belive that??" 'do you want tea…' said kaajjal quickly changing the topic." No…I have no plans to let you out of bed.." he turned her over and slowly started kissing her all over …on the face cheeks..'dev tumn bhi naa…I haven't even locked the door..' nuzzling her neck he told her 'Well you said the kids are still sleeping..' he continued kissing her warpping himself nicely around her till….his mobile rang….'Damn…' he said picking up the call"Your sasuma has great timing..hello…good morning Mom..yes..we will be there…No mom..kids too??..why don't you talk to your pyaari bahu..Only she knows what her kids are upto'!!he threw the phone to kaajjal with a face who had managed to free herself and get up..she caught it deftly and talked .Dev smothered himself under the pillow muttering something to the effect of 'women' and tried to go back to sleep.. while Kaajjal talked on the reciever " mamma…yes yes I will get them all along..they are not here..she quickly went out of the room..oh there no need for gifts..yes still naughty as ever driving dev crazy…and your son is no less mamma..we cant wait to have you over…we have lots to talk about..yes see you….bye mom"



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Posted: 17 years ago

LMAO!!!!!🤣
🤣🤣🤣
Ur one liners are just enough to crack me up and now this!!!!🤣

Too good Sharmii, too good 😆 !!!

Ur killing me here!!!! 🤣
🤣

~Mona 😛

Edited by mona18 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
🤣 🤣 🤣 Sharmiiiiii ohhhhhh I'm on the floor! you gonna kill us all girl!!!! Dev's kids are monsters man! And kaajjal lies to dev so as not to get all the remarks!!!🤣 Man I just loved it1 love it love it love it! thats a master piece! plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz I mean it plzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue it soon and ASAP! ohhhhhh girl you made my day!!! I really really love it! Actually I can't find any words I'll comment more later! I'm having a laughter attack right now!!!🤣
Its not just funny its really sweet and fabulous1
😳 Komal
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Posted: 17 years ago
Autumn your Karva Chauth part was just Outstanding 😳 ...Ufff I m still feeling the warmth of Dev's Touch on Kaajjal 😉 😳 😳 ...and Dev giving the pehla Niwala to Kaajjal is such a pleasant feeling 😳 ..Too good Autumn 👏 ...The way u wrote the entire part,I was actually visualizing the entire situation 😳


Sharmi u said u can't write FFs 😲 ..this was really hilarious 🤣 See I m still rolling on the floor 😆..My god Pehle Shaitaan Triplets 😆 😆 and then two cute talkative girls 😛 😛 ..Now we know why the population keeps on increasing in India 😉 😆 😆 your one liners were amazing Sharmi 😆 ...Really Enjoyed this DK special Sunday FF 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
Your guys are too much....Im am reading my own fan fic and believe me more than the fan fic I am laughing at the stupidty with which I wrote it...

You guys stop praising it so much or else I will torture you with more!! 😆 😆 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
Gosh sharmii, 5....five monsters. Gosh 3 mini-Devs and 2 mini-Kaajjals. LMAO, sharmii, i am still rolling. See girl I told you it would be great!!!! 🤣 Best one-liner was Dev's "Yes for kids...not devils.."🤣 God, now when are you going to continue? 🤣

Mwaa sharmii for making me laugh today 🤣 Wonder whats with this Mrs. Sharma? 🤣 Vaise whose looks have the triplets taken. I bet Rahul is Dev's spitting image?

Lmao sharmii, excellent👏
MasterKatara18 thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
It would be my pleasure if u could torture us more 😆 !!! Pls continue soon...I am waiting to be tortured!!!! 😆😆😆

~Mona😛
Patjhar thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
🤣 Do go ahead and torture us queen of wit. 👏 👏

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Sharmii

Your guys are too much....Im am reading my own fan fic and believe me more than the fan fic I am laughing at the stupidty with which I wrote it...

You guys stop praising it so much or else I will torture you with more!! 😆 😆 😉

actually sharmi it was really nice ........... 😆 i was imagining the scene so cute ..... 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago



Hai Ram how did I miss all of this?!??!? And no one told me!!! Anu, GREAT post!! Sharmi, A-ji, WONDERFUL IDEA!! THANK YOU!

Koi baat nahin ke I came late - I got all the wonderful treats all in one dose today! Needless to say DPS ka nasha pehle se kahin zyada chad gaya hai iss baar...😍

Ok, A-ji...time for you to prepare a special treat just for me...to help me cool down (or heat up some more) after your Karva Chauth "celebrations" 😳 😃...Thank you ji - in advance...

And Sharmi, HOW DARE YOU KEEP THIS FROM US FOR SO LONG! I DEMAND more of this hillarious masterpeice of yours!! FIVE DEVILS!!! Hey bhagwan! Well, DPS had it coming - didnt he?! 😆 Absolutely mindblowing dear, eagerly waiting for the next installment of DK and their Devils! 😳

Love,
Dev Ki Deewani,
~P

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