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Posted: 17 years ago

Friends...Autumn and Jyothi have decided to give the bhootnis a Weekend Treat(Saturday-Sunday) every week in the DK dream Cafe 😛 ..So based on the Proceedings in the original serial,we will make some similar situations imagining our original DK in it 😳 😳

So here it goes😛

This Weekend Jyothi and Autumn have decided to Invite Dev and Kaajjal to our Dream Cafe for their Karva Chauth Celebration 😉 😛 😛

So here comes the Evergreen golden Couple Dev and Kaajjal 😳

Jyothi:Suswagatham,welcome to our Cafe 😛 😛

Dev and Kaajjal:Thanks dear 😳


Kaajjal:Devvvv What r U doing damn it 😉


Dev:Can't u see damn it,I m drinking the specially prepared Bournvita by Nupur Chef for Some Extra Tann ki shakti 😉 😆 😛


Kaajjal:This is not at all fair Dev 😭 ...today is Karva Chauth,and I m fasting just for your lambi umar 😳 ...and u r drinking Bournvita in front of me 😭


Dev:Oh I m so sorry Kaajjal 😳 ...I was actually gathering energy for our Tabela night after the karva chauth celebrations 😉 😳 ...but fine I will get that bournvita out of my body right now 😡 😆 ...u see even I m fasting from morning 😳


Kaajjal:Ohhhhh even u r fasting 😳 😳 ...I din't knew that 😛 😛 ...chalo then one bourvita won't do any harm 😃 ..chalta hai 😉 😳

Jyothi:So now if the Bournvita matter is resolved ,shall we proceed with the Karva Chauth Celebrations 😛 😛


Dev:Sure Jyothi 😛

(The Karva Chauth Celebration then starts in full swing with Kaajjal and Dev proceeding to the Cafe Terrace and waiting for the Chand to come out 😳 )


Kaajjal:Dev Darling,Yeh Chaand Kab niklega 😳 😳


Dev:Jaan thoda intezaar karo,the chand will come out soon 😳


Kaajjal:Gannu Bhaiyya please kuch karo,let the chaand come out soon,I m hungry 😳 😳

Autumn:Yeah look here Chaand Nikal Gaya 😛 😛

(Dev and Kaajjal then move towards the direction of the Moon and Kaajjal starts doing the Karva Chauth Puja,she sees the moon with the help of the Channi and then sees the face of her dev through the Channi 😳 and just when Dev is about give her a sip of Water ,Kaajjal faints 😕 😳 )


Dev:Kaajjal please hosh mein aa jao,see here I m with two cups of Special Bournvita for some extra tann ki shakti 😆

Autumn:Don't worry Dev just lift her up to our special Cafe tabela and feed her all the bournvita while I m coming with the food for both of you 😉 😛

So now Autumn will continue with the Concluding part of this Karva Chauth celebration soon 😳 😳 ...Lets see what happens in the Cafe Tabela 😉 😛 😛

Edited by jyoti06 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
wahhh wahhh wahh!!
superb.. fantastic.. marvellous!!!! 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
OMG Jyothi that was awesome 👏 ..Tum Aur tumhara Tabela!!!.. Kya Kehna..Autum ji Aeeye Behara Bahut Booke Hai plz get them Khanna and let them enjoy the rest of the karwa chaut in the tabela without any interruptions 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
Ohhhhh Jyoti, that was tooooo good!!! 👏 Sooo Autumn ji bring the food in and let's start the special tabela Karwa chaut!!!
Great job!!! 👏

😳 Komal
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Posted: 17 years ago

Brilliant Mishti 👏

~~~~~ ***** Karva Chauth ***** ~~~~~

Dev lifts Kaajjal and takes her into their room. 'Kaajjal, please utho Kaajjal, tum theek ho na..." She stirs a bit. Dev takes some water and sprinkles a few drops on her face. Sha stirs slowly and glances at his face. She sighs and smiles and Dev lovingly looks back at her face concern still evident in his soft eyed tender look. He smiles at her and raises the glass of water for her to drink. He then lovingly trails his fingers on her hair, caressing their softness while all the time questioningly looks at her with concern, "Are you okay? Oh Kaajjal, tum ne vrat kyun rakha? Please doctor ne kahaa tha na, ki tum weak ho, to vrat ki kya..." She raises her fingers and stops him mid-sentence.." Dev, yeh mere Dev ke liye hain. Aur meri saanso mein tum samaaye ho. To meri saanso ke liye to itna to kar sakti hoon na!" And slowly she pulls his head to rest on her shoulder. She caresses his hair nad softly sighs her pleasure at their closeness. He stirs and pulls back as desires are beginning to overtake sanity and albeit with a lot of effort says, "Kaajjal, you must eat something. Let me get something for you. You don't move from here." She shyly looks at his stern eyes but she can see the duel that is going on in them He doesn't want to leave her but cares for her delicate condition and wants to. She smiles and softly touches his cheek. He takes in a sharp breath and forces himself to get up muttering a "I'll be back soon..." A promise ringing in his voice alongwith a a look of desire and she knows what the outsome will be.

He returns with the food in one thali and she is standing by the window praying to the moon and GB and thanking them for everything, "Mere Dev ko lambi umar dena Gannubhaiya. Aap mere pyaar ki raksha karenge, yeh main jaanti hoon. bas aise hi aapke kripa se mere pyaar ko sabki buri nazar se bacha ke rakhiyega." Dev hears her and puts the thali down and goes over to the window and slides his hands around her bare mid-riff. "Kaajjal, apne Gannubhaiya se mere liye ek aur cheez maang sakogi? Unse kehna, ki Dev chahta hain, ki woh hamesha Kaajjal ki saanso mein rahe, taki Kaajjal jab tak zinda rahein, tab tak Dev bhi zinda rahega...." She turns and hugs him tightly. "Hameshaa hameshaa ke liye Kaajjal..hameshaa ke liye"

They come apart with effort and Dev leads her to the small table and makes her sit. Admiring her ehtheral beauty. in the Red and Gold saree she looks so beautiful, so elegant, graceful. Now there is a womanly beauty around her. That aura comes only after marriage. He feeds her the first Niwaala ad she too feeds him from the same thaali. They are almost done and Dev gets a piece of mirchi and chokes. she holds a glass to his mouth patting his back and soothing his forehead. He relaxes but the desires overtake as the warmth of her hands and touch of her skin reaches him through the thin silk of his cream kurta. He grabs her hand and looks at er passion shining in his brown eyes. 'Kaajjal..." he whispers her name and she feels shy suddenly. 'Dev..." she looks away but he stands and cups her face in her hands, the breeze blows and whips her curls around her face. He sighs and she closes her eyes as she feels his hands in her silky tresses. His lips replace his hands and she gasps when they zero on to the honeyed sweetness of her soft trembling lips. Her hands of their own accord circle his neck as her legs give way. Her fingers splaying across, tearing at his mane, as her desires too speak their own language. With an effort he raises his head and looks into her drugged eyes.

He lifts her and carries her to the bed, gently lowering her joining her in the bliss of the sweet union. The moon shines brightly witnessing this dance that two souls who are united forever dance. The stars twinkle with a promise, the same promise that whispers unspoken words of two lovers, with the help of the gentle sighing breeze.

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Posted: 17 years ago
What a treat autumn ji...Uff!!! 😳 😳 😳

thank you..jyothi that was awesome!! 😆 😆 😆

God...the pictures are heaven... 😛

Btw I worte a sort of very stupid fan fic with DK and kids in it...It sooo stupid I dont even want to post it..Not after redaing autumn ji's.. 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Sharmii

What a treat autumn ji...Uff!!! 😳 😳 😳

thank you..jyothi that was awesome!! 😆 😆 😆

God...the pictures are heaven... 😛

Btw I worte a sort of very stupid fan fic with DK and kids in it...It sooo stupid I dont even want to post it..Not after redaing autumn ji's.. 😆

Awwwww Sharmii do post it!! Plzzzzz we all wanna read it!!!

😳Komal

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Posted: 17 years ago
Autumn ji that was fabulous!!! Sweet caring DPS! Love him!!!! Well done !!! Great Karwa chaut night!!! 👏
Loved it!!!!! 👏

😳 Komal
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: ploye

Awwwww Sharmii do post it!! Plzzzzz we all wanna read it!!!

😳Komal

Are you kidding Sharmii for calling your FF stupid. Get out girl and post it so that I can Lmao. Please sharmii do post it. I agree with komal completely. 😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
Ha....okay.thanks for boosting my confidence.You guys are gonna repent it very soon!! 😆 😆

I will post it soon once I have it all edited out...Its the first time I worte one and I still have no idea why I wrote.But I just got excited after yesterday's australia that I went on typing something....Then read it all again and told myself if my english teacher ever happens to read this she's gonna be sorry!! very sorry!! 😆 😆

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