ff DK’s New Life part 20 pg39 5th Jan - Page 25

Ah-ha!!! Wonderful jaanu!!! 👏 👏 👏 As Always ur work is truly a masterpiece!!! 👏 👏 👏

This is the part which I like: "They are definately your children," ...Its so easy to imagine this part Kaajjal saying it...And with that kind of tone...Its Hilarious...

As for Dev...He is a Rocking Papa!!! 😛 I could imagine him changing the diapers of the twins...Its so sweet to see that 😳 ...Just wish we could have seen it in the show itself! 😭

And of course the Powder Fiasco was very much hilarious...Thinking about it makes me crazy...As every min I think of Apu Sur as our DK in that manner! 😳 😳 😳 And of course the last part where they enter their own world... 😳 ....SWEET!!!! 😳

Wonderful Anu!!! 👏 Con.t soon! 😳

~Mona 😛

ok meri jaan it was wonderfull sneaked in to read it last night u see could not resist but it was lovely and was very refreshing seeing dev caring for the little one s nice and cute now what will happen when kajjal opened that closet 😳 and i was able to picture apu so so perfectly in that scene and surveen too offcourse...do continue love u as always amazing 👏

Originally posted by: hira_786

Wow Anu tht was fantastic 👏 👏 wonderful..jus loved it..aww its soo sweet of dev t look afta the twins and sent kajjal to town to get her hair done... n its soo tru na..even though dev tries to hide the truth from kajjal he just cant lie at all 😳 😆 its was soo cute how dev said naina was exactlii like kajjal..how sweet for dev to take care of both kids n clean the house 😳 hes a sweetheart 😃
great part Anu..i realli enjoyed readin the whole thing..it was mind-blowing..plzz continue soon..cant wait to read da nex part 😛

Lotttttsaaaaaaa Luv: Hira 🤗

Aww thanks so much Hira! 😳 Ever so glad you enjoyed reading it. I wanted to show some romance between DK, but I couldn't resist having some fun with Dev looking after the place - it's light-hearted stuff like this that I longed to see in Kaajjal. Thanks again for your comments - they mean so much to me. 😳

Anu

Originally posted by: nasartaurus

ANU...........zabardust yaar ,,,,,,,,,HATSOFF 👏
TREMENDOUS..........i really loved it alotttttttt!!!!!
along with babies such a passionate romance.......
its really very much a reality..........100% correct on our
DK..........APUSUR 😳
Kitty.................. 😳

Thank you dearest Kitty - I am always happy after reading your replies. 😳 Yep, I just always imagined Apu-Sur having sweet scenes like this that brought out the romance between them. 😳 I really wish we had gotten to see something like this - DK would have made excellent parents, nah?

Anu

Originally posted by: Hasnain

oh my, i am absolutely loved your fanfic. i loved it all along. i must say you are a really good writer.Great Job, and continue soon. 👏

Aww thank you so much for your kind words - they have really touched me. 😳 I am ever so happy that you like my ff so much - it's for people like you that I write it. 😳

Anu

Originally posted by: jyoti06

Yet another Fantabulous Narration Anu after a long wait 😳 Now I know why People say ki Intezaar ka phal Meetha hota hai 😉 😳

Aww Dev is the best Husband as well as the best father in the world 😳 ..First he cleans up all the utnsils to prepare Breakfast for his wife 😳 .How sweet was that 😳 ..and then he goes on to change the Diapers of his kids 😉 😆 😛 ...Woww thats the best part of this entire Narration 👏 👏 👏 I actually imagined Dev changing the diapers of his kids 😆 😆 😳 ..I wish we would seen all that in the serial itself 😭 😳

Also the entire Powder fiasco was hilarious 😳 ..Last but not the least Dev and Kaajjal getting yet again immersed in their world of passion and happiness sounded so pleasing 😳 😳

Outstandingly written Anu 👏 ..It looked like a perfect Family to me 😳 ..Dev is rocking as the great Papa 😛

So, so, soooo happy to hear that you liked this part Jyoti! 😳😃 I really wanted some romantic moments after all the comedy, but of course I had to show Dev looking after his kids, nah? 😳 Here's this man who has been emotionally independent all his life, and now suddenly he has these two little ones who belong to him - I wanted to show him realising that life is beautiful when you see yourself reflected in another. Really glad you enjoyed the comedy of the powder - it was just an idea that came to me one day when I was supposed to be studying! hehe. 😆 Thanks for your comment and I will be here soon with my next update, never fear!

Anu

Originally posted by: mona18

Ah-ha!!! Wonderful jaanu!!! 👏 👏 👏 As Always ur work is truly a masterpiece!!! 👏 👏 👏

This is the part which I like: "They are definately your children," ...Its so easy to imagine this part Kaajjal saying it...And with that kind of tone...Its Hilarious...

As for Dev...He is a Rocking Papa!!! 😛 I could imagine him changing the diapers of the twins...Its so sweet to see that 😳 ...Just wish we could have seen it in the show itself! 😭

And of course the Powder Fiasco was very much hilarious...Thinking about it makes me crazy...As every min I think of Apu Sur as our DK in that manner! 😳 😳 😳 And of course the last part where they enter their own world... 😳 ....SWEET!!!! 😳

Wonderful Anu!!! 👏 Con.t soon! 😳

~Mona 😛

Uff Mona, just look at fate, nah - last time you were saying your were late in replying, and now who's late this time?? 😭 Well you know the story behind it, so I know you'll forgive me (you better, warna...😡😆). Anyways jaan, I am so happy that you enjoyed it. Really you praise me too much hun! 😳 It is nothing close to a 'masterpiece', but if you liked it I know I did well. I too wish we had seen all this in the show. Could you imagine how sweet it would have been to see Apu holding a baby in his arms, and changing its diaper?? 😳 Well if I could make you imagine Apu-Sur and capture their DK romance then I am very happy indeed! 😃

Anu

Originally posted by: buddythind

ok meri jaan it was wonderfull sneaked in to read it last night u see could not resist but it was lovely and was very refreshing seeing dev caring for the little one s nice and cute now what will happen when kajjal opened that closet 😳 and i was able to picture apu so so perfectly in that scene and surveen too offcourse...do continue love u as always amazing 👏

Thank you Sameera! 😃😳 I am so sorry I only replied now - there's a v long story surrounding it which I will explain later. I am thrilled that you liked it, and I am so touched that you said you couldn't resist reading it. 😳 I could picture Apu and Sur so clearly in my head when writing I actually felt as if the scene was on TV. If only, nah? How cute would it have been to see DK as loving parents? 😳 At least we can dream about it.

Anu

Originally posted by: thesaint148

Anu My Dear .... now this is what i will call a perfect dad. looking after his kids and the house and letting kaajjal relax for a few hours. getting her hair done . wow.

Loved the entire thing, how we was washing dishes, how he took care of the children, despite everything going haywire and messy hhehehhehehehe. and the powder falling and baby screaming ... hahahhaha that was sooo good.

And then our kaajjal in a yellow sari, wah. in the middle of all this, u managed to bring that beautiful romance which is a signature of DK. well done for that 👏

That was simply marvellous Anu. This is for you 👏

Aww Kashish, every time you make me feel so humble. 😳 Thank you ever so much for your touching words - you have really made my day. I am ever so happy that you liked this scene with Dev taking care of his babies. I just could imagine how his fatherly instincts would creep up on him and overwhelm him. I wanted to show him realising the beauty of parenthood. I am also delighted that you liked the romance - I wanted to add a little touch in there, as it has been a while since DK had a proper romantic moment. 😳 I wanted to show how their love increases through looking after their children. 😳

Anu