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Posted: 17 years ago
oh sorry anu for being late latif......got stuck at work....but finally read it and loved it......oh kajjal in pink sari and both going out for romantic dinner wow .....cant wait for next part....continue....lovely 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
Anu my Dear ... dont know where to start. still lost in what i read, and more so, still lost in dev's uneven heartbeats when he saw kaajjal in that pink sari, head bent on one side and hands busy with her earring. Wow, i think i can hear the sound of his heartbeat. Loved that scene the most .....

Wow, so dev called for baby sitting to celebrate the anniversary ... that was a great thought anu ... every once in a while husband and wife do need time alone which can strengthen their special bond further. I loved this idea and the fact that after sooo many days DK are finally having some quality time alone.

Hmmmm, so its dinner time now ... wonder what will follow, i am sure a romantic dance scene .... haina? but i know u r creative enough to bring in the best surprise.

Loved this part Anu, as always. great continuation.👏

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Posted: 17 years ago
Anu Anu Anu... 😛

Where should I start from? 😛
It was another wonderful narration 👏 as ever... It was a great idea of Dev's asking Tejwani Sir to babysit the twins 😛 And girl... Ur simply amazing of how you describe Kaajjal's beauty... 👏👏👏

And this was a romantic way of celebrating a wedding Anniversary nah?😳How I am getting more and more envy of Kaajjal as she got such a romantic loving and dashing husband like Dev Pratap Singh 😆

Now I am waiting for the rest of the Anniversary hun... I know a special person like you, would make their night even more special! 😳

Wonderful part once again Anu
👏

~Mona 😛
Edited by mona18 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
Oh Anu tht was such a sweeeeeet part yar..m soo happi tht u continued it.. i was eagerlii waitin to read da nex part...i realli enjoyed it..buh sry foe replyin a lil late..oh god a year has passed so fast..tht now Dk r celebrating their anniversary 😳 it was soo sweet of Mr.Tejwani and his wife to cum over n take care of naina n arjun 😛 n dev took kajjal for a dinner.. awww..they have a nice date after a long tyme ehh..
now lets c wah u cum up wid..m sure sumthin realli special so dis anniversary wud be da best n romantic one eva 😉

Cont Sooon
Lotsssssssssa luv:Hira 🤗
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: buddythind

oh sorry anu for being late latif......got stuck at work....but finally read it and loved it......oh kajjal in pink sari and both going out for romantic dinner wow .....cant wait for next part....continue....lovely 👏

Oh please don't apologise Sameera. I am late in replying to your reply. It's a very busy time of year yaar...it cannot be helped.

I am so glad you enjoyed reading this part and that you liked the idea of Kaajjal in her sari and their romantic dinner. 😳 Hope you enjoy reading all about their romantic dinner.

Anu

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: thesaint148

Anu my Dear ... dont know where to start. still lost in what i read, and more so, still lost in dev's uneven heartbeats when he saw kaajjal in that pink sari, head bent on one side and hands busy with her earring. Wow, i think i can hear the sound of his heartbeat. Loved that scene the most .....

Wow, so dev called for baby sitting to celebrate the anniversary ... that was a great thought anu ... every once in a while husband and wife do need time alone which can strengthen their special bond further. I loved this idea and the fact that after sooo many days DK are finally having some quality time alone.

Hmmmm, so its dinner time now ... wonder what will follow, i am sure a romantic dance scene .... haina? but i know u r creative enough to bring in the best surprise.

Loved this part Anu, as always. great continuation.👏

Aww thank you Kashish for your lovely words - I am truly touched by what you said. 😳 I am so pleased you liked that scene with Kaajjal and her earring. I really wanted to bring out some DK romance after all the family scenes that they have had these past few episodes. I just felt it was time for DK to share their love for one another alone for a while. 😳

I have planned a small romantic treat for their anniversary, but as you are the queen of romance it won't be half as wonderful as your DK scenes. 😳 I do hope you will like reading it though...and I hope it won't sound cliched. 😕

Thanks again Kashish for such a lovely response. I am ever so pleased you liked it. 😳

Anu

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: mona18

Anu Anu Anu... 😛

Where should I start from? 😛
It was another wonderful narration 👏 as ever... It was a great idea of Dev's asking Tejwani Sir to babysit the twins 😛 And girl... Ur simply amazing of how you describe Kaajjal's beauty... 👏👏👏

And this was a romantic way of celebrating a wedding Anniversary nah?😳How I am getting more and more envy of Kaajjal as she got such a romantic loving and dashing husband like Dev Pratap Singh 😆

Now I am waiting for the rest of the Anniversary hun... I know a special person like you, would make their night even more special! 😳

Wonderful part once again Anu
👏

~Mona 😛

Thanks Mona hun for liking the idea of Tejwani coming as babysitter so DK can go spend some quality time together. I was wanting to do some DK romance after a while, so this idea just popped into my head one day in lectures. 😆😳 I am really glad you enjoyed it...and yep, Kaajjal is too lucky having DPS by her side. Kaash we all find such a man in our lives. 😳

Well my next part is coming up...I hope you will like it. I don't know how it will sound when it is hear...just hope it will live up to your expectations. 😳

Anu

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: hira_786

Oh Anu tht was such a sweeeeeet part yar..m soo happi tht u continued it.. i was eagerlii waitin to read da nex part...i realli enjoyed it..buh sry foe replyin a lil late..oh god a year has passed so fast..tht now Dk r celebrating their anniversary 😳 it was soo sweet of Mr.Tejwani and his wife to cum over n take care of naina n arjun 😛 n dev took kajjal for a dinner.. awww..they have a nice date after a long tyme ehh..
now lets c wah u cum up wid..m sure sumthin realli special so dis anniversary wud be da best n romantic one eva 😉

Cont Sooon
Lotsssssssssa luv:Hira 🤗

Aww Hira hun don't apologise to me...I am the one who needs to apologise..firstly for taking so long in writing this bit and then secondly for not replying to your reply till now. I don't know how my time is all being used up these days. 😕

Anyways, thank you ever so much for your comment. 😳 So happy that you liked this part and that you liked the idea of DK going out to celebrate their 1st anniversary. 😳 I hope you will like the next part...I am worried now coz u all have such high expectations from me! 😕😆

Anu

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Posted: 17 years ago
Well friends, today is a special day...so I wanted to do something special...

Yes, today is Mona's b'day and I want to gift her this piece of my ff. 😳 I hope she will like it (I hope you all will 😳 ). I tried not to make it cliched, but somehow I think you will all guess what's coming, especially dear Kashish, who can write romance so much better than me. 😳 Still I hope it will be worth your time.

Chapter 19 – The Anniversary Dinner

Kaajjal sat and looked around her, still amazed at the effort Dev had gone to in decorating the place just for her. The sweet fragrance of the flowers were filling her nostrils and reviving memories of her childhood, running freely across the meadows. As she breathed them in she remembered the day she went to pick the flowers in the wood, and Dev, realising they were poisonous, came running and grabbed them from her hands. She could still picture the anxiety in his eyes that day, still hear the panic in his voice when he scolded her for being so foolish. The memory brought a smile to her lips as she mused that from that moment on she had been certain of his love for her. Turning she looked across at him. The flickering light of the candles softened his face and shone in his deep eyes so beautifully she felt she could gaze at him for ever. When he looked at her he was surprised to see such a dreamy look in her eyes and smiling he snapped his fingers under her nose, waking her from her reverie.
"Kya hua?" he asked as she shook her head and lowered her eyes in embarrassment.
"Kuch nahin," she replied quietly. "Bas..."
She trailed off, unable to put into words the sense of immense joy he gave her. How could she explain to him that from the first days of their romance till now he had lit up her whole world. She had never known what it was to love another so intensely until him. It was a feeling that could not be described...just felt, and that was why when she looked up at him again her eyes reflected her inner emotions, though her lips faltered to bring them into words.
"Woh...main...I was thinking that....woh....Dev, I don't know what to say...sirf thanks."
"Thanks?" he asked with a quizzical frown. "Kis liye?"
"Is pal," she replied. "Every moment you have given to me. Dev, you have given me so much...aur ab yeh..."
She gestured with her hand to the terrace.
"Kaajjal it's nothing," he told her. "Bas...I wanted today to be special kyunki aaj hamara pehla anniversary hain."
Kaajjal smiled at him, a small blush sweeping across her cheeks.
"Waise," she added, glancing about again. "How come we are the only ones here? This is a resturant, nah?"
Dev folded his hands one on top of the other and looked down with a bashful smile.
"Woh...I have booked the whole restaurant in my name," he explained.
"Kya?" she exclaimed, her eyes widening in amazement. "Paar kyun Dev?"
He looked up at her and his eyes flashed with a glint of mischief.
"Kyunki," he said, reaching out and curling a hand about hers. "I wanted my wife all to myself."
He arched his brows at her with an impish grin, which made her blush and lower her eyes, laughing softly.
"Dev, tum bhi nah!" she said in her shy tone.
Dev smiled brightly at her, enjoying this shyness and delighted that even after all this time he could still make her blush. While she sat gazing around her he lifted the lid off the dishes in the centre of the table and began to serve her. The strong, tantalising aroma of spices recalled her attentions and turning she saw to her delight her favourite dish of saag, accompanied with roti and sweet scented rice. Her eyes lit up like fiary lights.
"Dev, yeh dish mera mann pasand," she cried. "And you had it made for me?"
"Haan Kaajjal main jante hoon," he replied with a smile. "I told you, I wanted today to be special for you."
Kaajjal smiled at him with so much love tears glistened in her eyes. Just then the waiter arrived at the table and asked if they would like any other dishes to be prepared.
"No I think we're fine thanks," Dev replied.
"Arre, what are you saying?" Kaajjal cried. "Waiter," she addressed the man, "Order some daal for my husband. He also has to have his favourite dish, nah?"
The waiter smiled and nodded his head at them.
"Kya jodi hai!" he exclaimed.
"Matlab?" Kaajjal asked with a quizzical frown.
Her head was turned towards the waiter so she did not see Dev waving his arms as a signal to the waiter not to say anything further. The waiter was either partially sighted or did not care to notice him, however, for he responded with,
"Madam ji, Saab sarre khanna khud ko prepare karte the."
Kaajjal's heart missed a beat and she looked round at Dev with astounded eyes. Dev had his head lowered and he did not look up at her as the waiter continued to speak.
"Aur ab you are ordering his favourite dish. Kamal! There is so much love between you!"
This was the waiter's parting shot as he left the couple sitting in stunned silence. Kaajjal knew that Dev was embarrassed at his secret being disclosed, but she was so full of joy that she could not contain it to herself. She had to say something to him.
"Dev," she said softly. "You made all this food yourself? Aur woh bhi mere liye?"
"Kaajjal," he replied with an awkward tone, glancing up at her. "Please, don't make an issue of this. It's nothing."
"Do you know how much it means to me?" she asked him, reaching out and wrapping both her hands round his.
"Please Kaajjal, it's the least I can do," he answered quietly. "I am your husband after all."
"Haan," she replied with a sweet smile. "And I love you. I love you very much Dev."
As she said this she brought his hand up to her lips and pressed them to it, a small tear trickling down her cheek as she became overwhelmed.
"Hey, don't cry!" Dev cried, disentangling his hand and placing it on the side of her face, his fingers meshing with the soft curls of her hair. "I hate seeing tears in your eyes Kaajjal. It always makes my heart ache."
"They are khushi ke assoon," she assured him.
They smiled at one another and the gentle light from the candles bathed them in a dim, romantic light that seemed to radiate with the love shining in their eyes. Their moment was only broken when the waiter reappeared with Dev's daal. After that they fell quiet for a time, savouring the food. As they were finishing the sweet tones of a romantic song began to reach their ears from the stereo system.
"Arre Dev, it's my favourite song!" Kaajjal cried excitedly, her eyes glowing with delight. "It's Main Agar Kahoon from Om Shanti Om!"
Seeing the light dance in her eyes as she began to sway back and forth to the music made Dev smile, and rising he held his hand out to her. She looked up at him in surprise, the smallest of frowns furrowing her brow.
"Dev...what are you doing?" she asked.
"Come and dance with me," he requested her.
"Dev...dance?" she laughed nervously. "Paar..."
"Paar kuch nahin Kaajjal," he told her, taking her hand. "Come and dance."
She was powerless to resist the plea in his tone and she allowed him to lead her into the small space in the middle of the terrace. He twirled her round and she found his strong arms about her waist, holding her tightly. Gazing up into his deep brown eyes she placed his hands on his shoulders. As they swayed back and forth to the music she found herself drowning in his eyes, as she had done many a time before, but tonight there was a special magic in those eyes. She couldn't tell whether it was the soft light of the candles reflected in his eyes or if the stars above their heads had spread some sparkling dust in them, but there was definately something that held her captivated. She searched his eyes, finding all the answers to her questions in them, and seeing his deep love for her too. He held her close and his hands resting against the skin of her waist were spreading a fire through her body. She marvelled at the way her every nerve end tingled and the racing of her heart. The music was washing over her, folding her in its magic waves and for those few minutes it was as if it were just her and Dev and no one else in the world.
Dev spun her round and she laughed in delight. Twice more he spun her, and the last time she stumbled and nearly fell, but before she hit the ground his arms had caught her and she found herself gazing up into his face, her eyes wide and startled, his dark and filled with passion. Both their hearts were racing and Kaajjal was actually trembling, though she couldn't tell if it were due to her near fall or the magic of Dev's touch. He brought her back onto her feet and they gazed at one another, the flickering candlelight in their eyes highlighting the passion lurking in the shadows of their irises.
Without saying a word he held his hand out to her and she slipped hers into it with a small smile, her eyes never leaving his. He led her from the terrace, down the steps and out into the moonlit street below. It was a beautiful night; the sky was a deep violet and a thousand bright stars glittered above their heads. Kaajjal could see those stars reflected in Dev's eyes as they walked through the deserted streets. Dev was gazing at her face, thinking how it resembled the moon: beautiful and filled with an enchanting light. Both were lost in one another and their love for each other. It was a perfect night and the song was still playing in their minds, it's words speaking to their hearts.
They had reached a small bridge over a stream and here they stopped.
"Kitne sunder hai aaj ki raat," Kaajjal said, gazing up at the sky with glowing eyes.
"Hmm," Dev agreed with a smile. "Lekin tum sab se sundar ho."
As he said this he brushed a lock of her hair gently behind her ear. When his fingers touched her skin she shivered in delight and lowered her eyes shyly. Dev was gazing at her, mesmerised by her sweet blush and shining eyes. Placing a finger under her chin he made her look up at him and he saw her love deep within her eyes. There was a small smile on her lips and he wanted to steal it and make it his own. He brought his lips close to hers, so close that they could feel the other's breath. Kaajjal was feeling mischievious, however, and before his lips could touch hers she darted off with a gleeful laugh.
"Arre Kaajjal, that's not fair!" he cried.
"Haha, sorry Dev!" she laughed. "Lekin...if you want to kiss me you have to catch me first."
Dev arched his eyebrows at her as she giggled, twirling round and spreading her arms out wide, throwing her head up to the sky, enjoying the feel of the cool night air against her skin. Dev didn't miss his chance. Sneaking up on her he caught her and lifted her into his arms. She shrieked in surprise and turned her wide, amazed eyes up to his. He was looking down at her, his face glowing with glee and triumph and when her eyes met his he arched his eyebrows at her again.
"Toh...I caught you nah?" he said with a wicked grin that made her heart skip a beat.
"Dev, you cheated," she told him. "I don't accept your victory."
"Oh really?" he replied. "But what are you going to do about it?"
"I'll scream," she said decisively.
"Accha, go ahead then," he invited her.
"Dev...don't provoke me," she warned.
"Me?" he asked innocently, his eyes showing his glee.
"Haan tum. I am telling you, if you try to kiss me then..."
"Then....?" he asked her.
His lips were inching ever closer to hers, but in her rant she never noticed, obliviously carrying on with her words.
"Then I will really scream," she declared. "I mean it, I..."
Her words died on his lips. She didn't scream, instead she wrapped her arms about his neck and lost herself in his kiss, forgetting everything except that one sweet moment.

Hope you all enjoyed it. 😳 Please do comment...I cannot tell you how much I enjoy reading your comments and how much they mean to me. 😳

Anu
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Posted: 17 years ago
Ok, now for the fun bit! 😃

Because today is Mona's b'day I wanted to do something a bit different with my ff, so here is a little present for her, from me and DK. 😳

Dev & Kaajjal are driving back from their romantic night out...

They are enjoying being in each other's company and being in love. 😳

Suddenly the phone rings...


Dev: Hello, DPS here. Kya hua? How dare you disturb me and my wife dammit!
Bhootnis: Please DPS, don't be angry with us. 😭 Darasal, aaj Mona ka birthday hai. She is 16 now, and we wanted you and Kaajjal to come to her party.



Dev: Ooooohhhhh!!! Accha, that's ok then. We will be there soon.

Dev hangs up and turns to a puzzled Kaajjal.


Kaajjal, yeh lo...we have been invited to Mona's birthday party.

Kaajjal is a tad confused...

Kya Dev???? Mona Singh??? Nahin!!! Kabhi Nahin!!! We are not going near that Jassi woman....she might try to steal you from me!!!


Dev: No, dammit Kaajjal! Not Mona Singh!!! This Mona is sweet and has never had a makeover. She is the Cadbury of the Kaajjal forum and my biggest fan. 😳

Kaajjal is reassured by this and agrees to go...but...


Dev, what am I going to wear??

DPS tells her to wear her prettiest outfit, so she goes to change...

An hour later the grand birthday bash is on...and here come the special guests...


Yes, Dev and Kaajjal have arrived and are looking stunning together. 😳 They are ready to get partying with the bhootnis...


Dev and Kaajjal are rocking the party!! Just look at them dancing for Mona. 😃 😳

And here, Mona, is a special gift that DK would like to give you on this happy occasion....



A picture to immortalise their love. 😳 DK - eternal jodi of all our hearts. 😳

Happy Birthday Mona!! 🥳

and Congratulations on the exam results!!!
😃 👏

love
Anu
Edited by nimmo20 - 17 years ago

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