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Posted: 18 years ago
#71
Oh beautiful sammy ... yup i loved the aarti scene ... love is sooo beautiful na ... insaan say kuch bhi karwa laita hai 😊

very nice ... 👏 waiting for next part ... hmm kaajjal pregnanat, that sound good.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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woww sammy!!! hats off to u.. really...
cant wait for the entry of bhoot dev.. heheheh..
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Posted: 18 years ago
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part 18 – DK – visit to radiocity

Dev and Kaajjal return to the city but instead of returning home he stops at the same boutique where he had first taken her and bought her a dress after the mud splashed on her own clothes.

she turns to Dev surprised "dev…hum yahaan kyon aaye hain, he smiles at her," you remember last time when we did…cmon lets get some clothese…we have been in these since yesterday". Bemused she follows him. the same manager comes out to greet them…he gives her a curious but polite look…everybody in town knows about the roller coaster DK saga..and their upcmong wedding. he addresses Kaajjal very respectfully. Dev gives a bruque nod, " we have come to pick some daily wear….". he switches off his mobile this time…he has wisened up considerably as Raju…mobiles are destructive…he takes her arm…and that makes her feel shy ….she would have to used to getting seen in public with Dev…as his wife.

The shop lady, was very respectful this time unlike previously…undoucbtedly aware of the new status quo. Dev leaned against the wall, a light smile playing on his lips….Kaju smiled back," aap nahin jaa rahen hain, to try some clothes…. he continues to smile, i want to see you try diff dresses". she blushes and with her eyes says "badmash" he winks back….

she returns shortly wearing a pale yellow dress, it is gorgeous with pale pink florl design and the finest fabric…she looks at him discretely in the mirror…his eyes say – chalega…but not quite…she shakes her head at the salesgirl….they go inside and come out again….it was a stunning parrot green with red…it has a naughty cut to the arms, which are left bare….she looks really hot…she look at him in the mirror…he takes a deep breathe…his eyes darken…she sees his expression….and her heart skips a beat…her eyes ask a question….he closes his eyes….and then opens it – too sexy…but not appropriate….she sighs…shaking her head again…he smiles…don't mind it in private….she shakes her head, no chance…her eyes have a glint in them ….she comes back quickly this time her favourite blue…he pauses….ponders…it was a light blue…with a subtle….design…classy yet////very good…but…..try again…she raises her rbows…you are too fussy he smiles….thats me…i am not easily pleased….

then she returns and he straightens his eyes roving down slowly…it was a deepe shade of blue turquoise almost…makes her eyes really soft, it was simple…no frills…yet the fabric, the cut , the colours and the blush in her cheeks integrate…he looks pleased…I ,love it….she smile at the sales girl….i will take it..the girl is pleased….now it was his turn

she drags him to the mens section," kaajjal….i am useless at clothes…mom always picks up mine…" she is surprised…" i thought you were too independent…." he smiles wryly, scratching his head," she is a designer and a professional with clothes…this is her private boutique…." she smiles and takes his arm," ab se mein aap ke kapde loongi…lets see…start with ties first….she used to love to fuss around her father…she tells Dev…he just watches her a slight smile on his lips rather bemused…as she talks to a dozen…pata hai Papa hates wearing ties…on my graduation day he had to wear a suit…buaji had to literally drag him to college….i saw he was carrying his tie in the pocket…i was aghast….he didn't want to wear it…so i took him to a side, scolded him…and he listened….but he had it off soon as i got my certificate….she tries a few ties on him…and discards them after a critical view he murmurs….i like it when you frown…she smiles…at him…wives like to fuss about their husbands…clothes….soona hai favourite pastime hai…he murmurs softly…i don't mind as long as you like taking them off too.. she goes beet red…he laughs softly she pushes him away," badmash…"…she decides on the ties, and then the shirts…he glances at his watch …Yaar Kaajjal this is so boring…its just a shirt ….
feels like i am modelling….right now…she smiles…rooko…lets the MD image right….you always wear the wrong jackets and right shirts….he raises his brows…you thought my clothes sense was not right….she laughs…sometimes…i felt like sorting it….out…and that gussa on that pert nose…felt like doing this…she lightly pinches his nose..he gasps…that's an outrage…he chases her slightly..the shop girls are slightly shocked to see their usually stern boss, behave like a kid…they exhcnage glances…Kaju…pats his arm…sab dekh rahen hai…cmon..lets get you a suit….she chooses a cream colored suit….and a pink shirt…..he looks at himself…apne kaddoos boss ko badal diya hain tum ne….he smiles and she blushes at the memory of her chat with the mannequin which he overhears …..he gives her his arm…shall we…

they go to Radiocity…..Kaajjal hesitates remembering how she was asked to leave by Karan…her eyes cloud at the memory…he puts his hand over hers…don't worry kaajjal…am with you now…lets meet the old MD and chuck him out….and get you stuck in your office…theres wor to be done…as they enter…the office goes silent…Jennny is the first to recover…she runs across to Kaju and gives her a hug…Congrats Kaajjal…you too Sir…her eyes are mosut…the ice is broken…soon all her office friends congratulate her…Kaajjals eyes are moist…she feels overwhelmed…Dev…jokes with his staff to their shock …..but slowly….they respond..and keep throwing puzzled glances at Kaju….Nikki and Paris are not around thankfully….she heard from Jenny they had left…good riddance….

Dev…takes her first back to old office…Miss Kajjal Behl…here is your hot seat…he closes the door behind her and quickly takes her into his arms…she gasps …Dev…koi dekh lega…he looks at her " kaun…dekhega…this is my office and now you are mine…" she raises her chin, a amused glint in her eyes," who says so, Mr Dev Pratap Singh…a few dresses don't impress me"…he pulls her closer…his breathe fanning her face…his eyes dark with daredevilry…..her breathe comes up shortly…her eyes darken as his…Dev….he smiled…. "then what does,,,Mrs Kaajjal Dev Pratap Singh…How do i impress you"…….
they look at each other almost an eternity….she sighs…feelng her self getting fully lost…he smiles and lets her go…"for the sake…of office protocol you are safe now…" he mutters.. she lets out her breathe ….her heart was still pounding like crazy….

she sits down with a sigh…whew…Dev… was really something with his quick changing moods…she would have to be a champion…tennis player…that thought makes her laugh….she looks at gannu bhaiyya and takes his statue in her hand…hugs it to her and smiles dreamily…I love him so much gannu bhaiyya…mera rajkumar…nakrewala…nakchada hai, gussewala hai…par…accha hai..chaelga….the intercom rings…it was Dev…"i don't pay my employees to daydream during office hours miss behl…please bring Mr Bhasins file and come into my office…now" she sighs….and makes a face an pulls a tongue at his photo on her desk…Brute….Kaddoos…and runs out….Karan is there…instantly she sobers..Karan is livid but holding a smile his eyes glint at Kaajjal as she enters uneasily…Dev is sitting back relaxed…he smiles at Karan…I was thanking Karan bhaiyya for all his support and selfless work…but now i am there we musnt trouble Bhaiyya any further…Karan nodded amiably…anytime Dev…it was a pleasure…these files give all the accounts details…and the german project…see you later…

after he had left…Kaajjal started to open her mouth but dev comes over instantly and moves close, whispering in her ear, while pretending to read the file she gives him.. .....he has rigged this office with microphones….or videos..be on your guard…loudly….Kaajjal ji….kyaa thaat hai…aap ke dev paaji..ke…arre hum toh Raju ban gaya gentleman….he sits on the desk…kaajjal hides a smile….Raju….Karan kyaa raha tha tumse….Raju laughs…hehehe…uska mooh tamatar ki tarah laal…ho gaya…jab hum dev paaji ki style se…bole…karan…bhaiyya…aap ne hum hare liye bahut kuch kiya hain…lekin ab mein apna…kaam sambhal ne laayak ho gay hoon…..hehehe…laal pila…kaajjall..said solemnly "we shouldn't underestimate them…Raju….pata nahin unka agla chhal kyaa hai…"..they chat briefly about bhasin…then Dev…asks her to return to her own office….

he comes along…she whispers,,,how do you he hasn't rigged my office…agar usne hum he dekha toh…Dev smiles…i know which parts he has rigged…woh muhje bewaakoof samajtha hai….come i will show you….something…
he closes the door…and opens a cupboard near her desk..in it is a Tv she was surprised to see….he smiled…another of my secret Kaajjal Behl spying devices ….actualy i was so lovesick in those days…i rigged up your office…so that i could watch you secretly…she was shocked …Dev….she was beet red…yet so pleased…that he was also so desperate to be with her and went to thse lengths t be able to see her at work…something she wanted to do desperately…watch him whole day…but she only had her daydreams he was much better equipped…he ran a tape on the video…it showed Karan rig up Devs…office….she was pale…knowing it was one thing, but seeing it was another…..Karan was also heard telling someone at the other end…that he wanted only this office rigged…no no kaajjals…shes not important…Dev…looked at her and switched it off…"but as a precaution i had someone very trustworthy check this one out…it is safe…Karan is not a techy like Veer"…she whispered," Veer rigged it up..here" Dev…nodded "hes mad like me…about gadgets….Ameesha thinks he is a dull bloke…but he is very intelligent and a brilliant IT guy///..did you know he and Payal were great buddies at college in America, ……agar ameesha nahin aati unke beech mein toh aaj…Veer and Payal would have been married"…Kaajjal was shocked…at this revelation….he nodded heavily "it is long story….i will tell you sometime…Payal was devastated when Veer married Ameesha….then we stuck to each other….and slowly fell in love…anyways….thats all in the past."

Kaajjal was silent….her eyes moist…everytime…dev spoke of Paayal her heart would grow heavy….he had loved and lost someone precious…she knew how it felt…he sensed her feelings and drew her into his arms…don't worry Kaajjal…Paayal will always have a special place…but you are….the most important person in my life and my present….the past is gone….

in the vening they work late…Kaajjal yawns she didn't sleep much last nite…and then blushes as thinks of the events earlier in the day.

He knocks on the door and comes in" Miss Behl- In this office , we don't pay overtime you know" he tries to pretend to be the old Dev…she smiles…glint in her eye," Mussoorie wale….overtime ya paise ke liye kaam nahin Karte hain – sir." he comes around, takes her hand and pulls her into his arms…with a laugh and kisses her fully on the lips …before she could escape…"Dev…this is too much…koi definitely dekh lega"…he sighs " i missed you for 2 and half hours…an 30 seconds it took me to get there…you still smell like a rose…should we go back to MAdh house he murmurs against her cheek…her heart….almost agrees but

she pushes him away firmly.".No mr Dev pratap singh…momji…will not be impressed….ghar jaana hai humhe "he nods…"but first dinner… Mrs Kaajjal DevPratap Singh sirf aap aur hum…dono…" ….she looks stunned"…Dinner"…he looks at her enigmatically…."there is some unfinished business….."

he takes her to the same restaurant he was going to propose to her the first time…she is stunned again…Dev…this place…he smiles…and takes her arm…come ….it is a small surprise…..it was dimlylit like the previous time ….candlelights soft music playing…she blushes at the memory of that magical evening which ended drastically….she sighs wistfully…..

he goes and has a chat with the manager while she is waiting at the table bemused…he returns..so what will you have….he hold her hand…she is shy and looks around…self consciously..he smiles…"you are my wife…ab kaisa sharmaana" she shakes her head. slowly."…nahin mujhe sharam aati hai….."…he continues to hold her hand and nods at the waiter who takes their order….when he was gone….."

this is more my scene…last nite wasRajus…..Ameesha is undoubted gloating about it to Karan….but he will tread carefully……" she sighs…" lets talks about something else…they give me indigestion…" he smiles…" take hisaabgol…" her eyes widen"what did you say"

he grins " Pahua….gave me hisaabgol when i couldn't eat for two days out of fear of chillies…uski daadi…itne bade bade mirchi use kartihai khanne mein."

kaajjal laughed," did you enjoy living like an average person"

he smiles sombrely" it opened my eyes – didn't know how arrogant i was, demanding, self centred, i took everything for granted….i have ut in the papers to adopt Pahua…i want to send him for higher education to America"

Kaajjal was pleased…this was her old Dev…." that would be wonderful..he is alovely child…"

A musician came to their table and Dev nodded….a waiter put a velvet box in front of her …Kaajjal gasped…Dev..he opened it and put the ring on her finger…she was speechless…her eyes filled up…" i am doing it all backwards…but what the hell…it belongs to you"…." do you like it.." she shakes her head…overwhelmed…then the music starts…the musician plays a soulful number…..

from
(KKHH)

tum paas aaye , yun muskaraye
Tum ne jaane kyaa sapne…dikhaye…
ab toh mera dil Jaage na sota hai
kyaa karoon haaye KKHH

he takes her hand and she rises…her eyes lost in his…he takes her into his arms real close till their cheeks touch….and they dance slowly…to my fav song as time stops…
then he takes her hand and whirls her around…his eyes smiling…

the song is from Phir Bhi Dil Hai Hindustani

Tum Aaye To
Hawaaon Mein Ek Nasha Hai
Tum Aaye To
Fizaaon Mein Ek Rang Sa Hai
Ye Rang Saare
Hain Bas Tumhare
Aur Kya, Aur Kyar, Aur Kya
Aur Kya, Aur Kyar, Aur Kya

Tum Aaye To
Hawaaon Mein Ek Nasha Hai
Tum Aaye To
Fizaaon Mein Ek Rang Sa Hai
Ye Rang Saare
Hain Bas Tumhare
Aur Kya, Aur Kyar, Aur Kya
Aur Kya, Aur Kyar, Aur Kya

preview for part 19:called NT moms bombshell

Ameesha meets up with a furious Karan …they have a plan.B....DK have a surprise from NTmom when they get home….

see you on Friday guys…lets look forward to the real DK drama on Monday…Do you think Dev will realise his mistake this week….i hope so…

sammy
😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#74
Wowwwwww Sammy, mindblowing. So dramatic, romantic and now I think that spygiri together will soon follow. Superb 😳

I wish that in the real serial too they should have exploited this spygiri factor together 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
#75
Oh wowww Sammy really fabuous 👏 i really loved the way u write your each part with lots of mirch masala,humour and of course some romance with melodious songs in between 😛 😛 😛 and your priviews r really very interesing,thus making us eagerly wait for your next part 😳 😳 and i really hope dev realises his mistake this week and go on a kaajjal hunting mission 😃
Edited by jyoti06 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#76
Man......I dont understand what the writers are doing!!!


I really hope The make full us of kaajjal back in her lively mood and dev going after her and slowly reminding her of their love....

Dev has to start from scratch... 😳

But your too good!! 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#77
wow sammy.. toooo good yaar.... really.. keep it up.. cant wait for ur continuation!!!
great job!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#78


WOW...

Sammy, I have finally had the chance to catch up with the last 6/7 parts of your FF that I hadn't had a chance to read yet, and you've left me completely speechless!!!

This is MINDBLOWING!!! You portrayed every emotion of DK so very beautifully that I was able to experience each moment with them. You're an amazing writer, and I don't have the words enough to praise you!

You deserve a standing ovation! You're an amazing writer! Thank you SO much for sharing your wonderful talent with us! 👏

Please continue soooon!

Love,
~Payal
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Posted: 18 years ago
#79
beautiful sammy .... hehehhe i am still laughing at the isabghol thing and dev not eating for two days because of mirchi and pawa gave it to him .. 🤣

loved it yar .... give us more of this fun and excitement ....

love, kashish
Edited by thesaint148 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#80
thanks guys. 😛 😛 ...for all your support and encouragement......i am having a ball 😆 😆 😆 ...when writing this FF.... 😡 😡 cause am so mad at sony for depriving these DK moments i want to revive them all the time.... 😃 😛

yes, autumn -
my favourite is the aarti scene too...think of it women do it all the time to the husbands....but for a man to do it.....like SRK keeping kadwa chaut for kads in DDLJ...it is so sweet nah....

and i miss the radiocity DK nok jonk....which i am sure you guys do too...i hope to add more there...

so watch this space...FRiday to fri 😆
sammy 😊

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