DK FAN FICS BY BHOOTNIS - last part pg47

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Posted: 18 years ago
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hello to all the DK lovers!!!!!

(THIS IS THE CONTINUATION OF THE "FEW QUESTIONS ABOUT DK FUTURE" THREAD)

FOR THE RECORD OF OUR PREVIOUS PARTS, THE LINK TO THE THREAD IS:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kaajjal-sabbki-aankhon-mein-basi/540977/few-questions-about-dk-future

we four bhootnis (jyoti , kaju (the other one), nikki, and me) are continuing our next part of our lovely FANFIC in this post since the earlier one has completed more than 100pages and will have to be closed......

right now you all will only see continuations from jyoti, kaju (the other one), and me since nikki is attending to some personal issues.. but as soon as she gets a chance.. she will join us back!!!! we are missing u nikki!!! 😳

hope you all enjoy this... i will be posting the last continuation which was by our lovely jyoti in a couple of minutes!!!!

* * Viewbie's Note:

Friends please stick to the discussion and avoid chatting in this thread.

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Posted: 18 years ago
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ok this is jyoti's part...

"Just as kajal is about to give dev his good night kiss ,kajal's house door opens and both DK r shocked to see dhruv standing in front of kajal's door ...dhruv tells DK"hey man what r you'll doing there" ;dev gets irritated seeing him in kajal's house but kajal calms him down and asks dhruv"bhaiyya aap mere ghar mein kya kar rahein hai,aap toh ameesha bhabhi ko ghar chodne gaye the na" on which dhruv replies"yes chodne toh gaya tha lekin beech raaste mein hi ameesha ne gaadi rokhne ko kaha aur phir beena kuch bole hi gaadi se utar gayi aur hawaa mein gayaab ho gayi" ,kajal gets scared on hearing this and wonders if that bhuttaywala ghost is still there in ameesha's body but dev feels dhruv is telling lie and tells him that"u duffer,woh gayab thodi hui hogi,mayb use koi kaam yaad aa gaya hoga isliye chali gayi hogi and due to heavy fog,u just couldn't see her,and by the way ameesha ko chodo and tell me,what the hell r u doing in your behna's house" ..so then dhruv tells"well i hv just come here to give you'll this information that ameesha is gaayab"so then dev gets more irritated and tells him that"ok,fine we got the information,now no need to do chaai-paani in your behna's house,u may leave"...so then dhruv's expression is somewhat like this and he leaves from there;after dhruv left... kajal tells dev that"u shouldn't hv been soo harsh with dhruv;mayb he was scared with sudden ameesha bhabhi's disappearing act and thats why he wanted to share this information with us"on which dev holds kaju's waist and draws her towards him and tells that"don't worry,i know my duffer friend from childhood ,he is just exaggerating things,mayb ameesha bhabhi left due to some work,and now just forget about them and give me a good night kiss" ,so then kajal kisses dev's cheeks and tells her good night and just as she is about to leave,dev gets hold of her dupatta and again pulls her towards him and tells her mischievously"sirf gaal par kiss diya,hotoan par nahin" on which kajal replies "hoton par kiss ab sirf shaadi ke baad milega" ,just then buaji shouts from inside the house"oyee toote dhol,agar tum dono ka romance khatam ho gaya ho, toh jaldi se ander aa jao,raat bahut ho gayi hai";then kajal asks dev that"why don't u do the dinner with us only,as it is bahut raat ho gayi hai"so dev agrees to it and they both go inside the house;on the dinner table suddenly the light goes off ,dev,satya,kaju,buaji and hottie...everybody is wondering whats wrong and starts panicking as in the neighbourhood theres light everywhere;dev tells everybody to just chill and he will just check the fuse;so kajal takes him to the fuse room when suddenly they hear a voice which says"Huhaaaa mein hoon tum dono ki maut...mein hoon draculla Ammmm...eeee...shaaaa" (basically after ameesha gets down from dhruv's car,for some personal work,she accidentally instead of going to her friend's house,lands up in some purani haveli,where a draculla's soul is roaming for years ,so now it got into ameesha)...DK r shocked to see draculla ameesha and wonders how a dracula's soul went into her body;and just then draculla ameesha(DA)is about to attack both DK...when...

Ab kya kaju ...ameesha draculla ban gayi ...see this time u don't hv dhruv saving mission,but u can introduce him if u want ,now u will hv to save DK from that dangerous DA and if u want u can kill her this time..this is a golden opportunity
so common Kaju bhidu..continue with your HW all the best with the draculla queen"


so kaju my twiniii.. your turn now!!!! lets see how u save dev and kaajjal from this dracula!!! 😆 😆 😆
Edited by kaj05 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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kaj thanks a lot for making the post 😳 ,i m sure bhootnis will love our crazy FF 😛 ,and now its kaju's turn 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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If you all are are posting fantastic fan fics then why dont u change the thread name to DK fanfics by bhootnis. 😕
I am already addicted to each of ur fanfics. 😳
Gr8 Job Bhootnis. 👏👏

kaj add the link to ur previous thread in this thread so that we can have the record of all the fanfics. 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Anuu thanks for loving our FF 😳 😳..we feel priviledged 😆 😛 and kaj great post 👍🏼 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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yes jyoti!!! now we have to wait and see what kaju comes up with!! 😆 😆 😆

and anu!! thank u sooo much for your lovely compliments and lovely advice...
i added the link to the previous thread and changed the name to the one u suggested!! 😃 😃

thank u once again sweetie!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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aww jyoths and kaj no thanks plz. 😳 I really enjoy reading ur predictions and fanfics..have been a silent reader of ur fanfics..I promise to be regular from now on. 😳

P.S.I have added the viewbie's note 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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great anu!!!! we really appreciate all of this!!! 😃

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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow, its changed, koi baat nahin... and FYI... im going out today, lol, so i wont be able to do it till later, but i know i will be thinknig about what to write as im sat in the car, lol... sorry girls, but it will be done when im back 😉 and thank you anu for those sweet words, im blushing like this emoticon now-------->😳... lol, and also thank you for the viewbiw's note 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Oh my wonderful posts .. i am now addicted to these fanfics & predictions.. great work .. ..now i am imagining Dev kissing Kajjal 😍 😍 😍 .. we have not seen any of their kisses 😭 😭 😭 ... The director better show some soon 😳 or else 😡

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