DK FAN FICS BY BHOOTNIS - last part pg47 - Page 5

Originally posted by: jyoti06

don't worry kaj u know my suspence always puts your twinie in trouble😛...but right i dunno what to do with your suspense..and why does hottie screams😕..looks like i will hv to bring the draculla ameesha back😈

nooo yaar... hahaha... dracula ameesha died... think of something else naaa...😆

ok so finally i m continuing with my part 😃

Suddenly dev and kaajjal hears some glass breaking sounds and hottie yelling in the drawing room,so they both rush to see whats wrong,satya and buaji also rushes to the drawing hall;once they reach there they see hottie is behosh(unconscious)and window glasses r broken,so kaajjal quickly sprinkles some water on hottie so that she regains consciousness and then asks her what happened;then hottie says"please sabh log upar dekho"so as soon as they look upward they see dhruv is flying round and round in the air like an eagle bird 😕 😆 😆 ,hottie says that when she came she saw dhruv just broke the window and entered inside flying ,so she screamed and then just became unconscious;dev then asks dhruv(who is still flying)"abey gadhe tu upaar fly kyun kar raha hai,kisi panchi(bird) ki aatma ghus gayi hai kya"on which dhruv replies"no man,mere ander dracula ameesha ki aatma ghus gayi hai 😕 and she is making me fly in the entire town,please do something and get this dracula out of my body" 😆 on hearing this dev starts laughing loudly,but kajal asks dev to stop laughing and tells him that"dev please mere bhaiyya ko bacha lo"so then dev takes kajal in his arms,kisses her forehead and says that"maine tumhare is ullu bhai ko kitni baar bachaya but everytime he gets in trouble,now what can i do kaju darling" 😳 so kajal says"tumhe humari tabele ki kasam 😉 mere bhaiyya ko bacha lo"just then dhruv shouts from the air(he is just flying round and round in the hall)"please guys mein aur fly nahin kar sakhta,do something and take me down"then dev says"ok ok tu abhi chup kar,kajal ne tabele ki kasam di hai,toh nibhana to padega hi,let me do some aatma(soul) bhagao jaap" 😛 dev tells kajal to stand in the corner along with hottie,satya and buaji and he will sit in the middle of the hall and will start his jaap;dhruv is still flying 😃 ;so finally dev starts his jaap"dhruv gadhamai namah,dhruv werewolfmahamai namah,dhruv bodybuilderai namah,ameesha chudailai namah,ameesha bhuttawalaghostalai namah,ameesha dracullai namah" 😆 😆 (the jaap consists all avatars of ameesha and dhruv,sinse ameesha's aatma is in dhruv's body 😉 )so as soon as the jaap gets over a white smoke spreads across the entire hall and none of them can see each other;kajal screams"dev tum kaha ho"whereas dev also screams"meri barfi tum kaha ho" 😳 suddenly the smoke vanishes and some heavy object falls on the ground...its none other than dhruv-the dharti ka bojh 😃 (that smoke is basically ameesha's aatma's mukti,she finally came out of dhruv's body and went to heaven 😃 );kajal rushes towards dhruv and asks him"bhaiyya tum theek to ho na"so then dev says"yeh dharti ka bojh 😡 theek toh hoga hi,maine jaap jo kiya hai,ab woh draculla ameesha ki aatma humesha ke liye bhaag gayi" 👏 ..so then dhruv gets up and thanks dev and hugs him tightly 😕 😉 dev says "its ok tumhare shareer se badbu(bad smell)aati hai,sabun(soap)lagaya karo" 😆 then finally dhruv goes from there 😃 dev then holds kajal's hands and tells her that"abhi mujhe bhi chalna chahiye aur kal tum sabh log mere ghar aa rahein ho bec the panditji will come tomorrow to decide the wedding date" 😳 kajal blushes on hearing this 😳 and then dev gives her a goodnight kiss 😳 on her cheeks and goes away;then next day kajal and her family goes to dev's house to fix the wedding date;the panditji also arrives and says that"shaadi ka shubh mahurat ek saal baad hai" ;so then dev gets irritated and tells WTF 😆 ,NT asks dev to behave properly in front of panditji and requests the pandit to arrange for some early date;so then panditji thinks 🤔 and tells"ek upaay hai,shaadi kal hi karni padegi,kyunki kal bahut shubh din hai"so everybody panicks that how will they arrange so fast but dev says that "we will arrange it but the marriage should happen tomorrow" 😛 ,kajal also agrees to it and dev gives a mischievous smile to her 😉 just then the panditji says"lekin ek problem hai,shaadi kal usi jagah honi chahiye jaha dono ki engagement hui thi,phir yeh shaadi ko bahut shubh mana jaayega,aur yeh dono bacche humesha sukhi rahenge" 😉 on hearing this dev gets excited and says that"our engagement happened in the tabela,so this means our marriage will also happen in the tabela...yayyy" 😕 😆 ;NT asks satys if he has any problem with tabela marriage,but satya says that if dev and kajal doesn't hv any problem then he is ok with it;kajal is also satisfied with tabela marriage 😳 ...so then NT declares"kal dev aur kaajjal ki shaadi tabele mein hogi,aur aaj saare tabele ko sajakar rakh dena hoga" 😃 ...
Finally the marriage day comes 😃 dev-kaajjal and their family along with dhruv and hottie 😉 also reaches the tabela;panditji sits near the marriage fire and says"var-vadhu ko shaadi ke liye bulao"but as soon as DK r about to sit for their marriage an earthquake strikes for just 2sec but the entire tabela crashes down .......

Kaju ab kya 😲 😲 tabela toh poora earthquake mein gir gaya ,now u will once again hv to construct the tabela(DK and everyone else will construct the tabela 😆 )and then the marriage can take place 😃
so lets see how u go about it 😛
All the best Kaju for your tabela construction work 👍🏼 😃

And sorry guys for writing such a long part 😛 ,just got carried away 😛

Originally posted by: IndianPari

Hi ladies! You're doing wonderfully as usual! I'm sooo glad to finally see that Ameesha ki bachchi go up in flames!!! Its nice to finally have gotten rid of her! :)

Jyoti, looking forward to your continuation! :)

Love,
~Payal

payal, it had to be done... everytime my turn came, it ended with ameesha turning into something due to her being possessed... before it was dhruv and now ameesha... lol, if i didnt kill her, she would have been possessed by the.... anti-marriage ghost! lol...😕😕

🤣 dhruv gadhamai namah,dhruv werewolfmahamai namah,dhruv bodybuilderai namah,ameesha chudailai namah,ameesha bhuttawalaghostalai namah,ameesha dracullai namah.... 😆 ohh my GOD... i cant stop laughing.. dhruv flying all around .. like an eagle.. 🤣 and dev telling dhruv.. paanchi ki aatma gus gayi hai kya?? 🤣🤣🤣 gosh jyoths.. excellent!! really.. mindblowing 👏 👏 👏 u even brought dev and kajal to their shaadi.. and that also in your famous tabela.. 😃 😃 😃 lekin tum ne to meri twiniii ko phaasa diya yaar... hahaha.. now she will have to fix up the tabela again.. for their marriage to happen..
goood luck twiniii!!!!

Originally posted by: jyoti06

don't worry kaj u know my suspence always puts your twinie in trouble😛...but right i dunno what to do with your suspense..and why does hottie screams😕..looks like i will hv to bring the draculla ameesha back😈

MARUNGI if you bring back ameesha, LOL... she's dead.... i killed her, and she aint coming back... and yes, only i know what kinda twists you put me in... lol, so you should deserve the same thing 😛😆😆

Originally posted by: jyoti06

don't worry kaj u know my suspence always puts your twinie in trouble😛...but right i dunno what to do with your suspense..and why does hottie screams😕..looks like i will hv to bring the draculla ameesha back😈

MARUNGI if you bring back ameesha, LOL... she's dead.... i killed her, and she aint coming back... and yes, only i know what kinda twists you put me in... lol, so you should deserve the same thing 😛😆😆

Originally posted by: kaj05

🤣 dhruv gadhamai namah,dhruv werewolfmahamai namah,dhruv bodybuilderai namah,ameesha chudailai namah,ameesha bhuttawalaghostalai namah,ameesha dracullai namah.... 😆 ohh my GOD... i cant stop laughing.. dhruv flying all around .. like an eagle.. 🤣 and dev telling dhruv.. paanchi ki aatma gus gayi hai kya?? 🤣🤣🤣 gosh jyoths.. excellent!! really.. mindblowing 👏 👏 👏 u even brought dev and kajal to their shaadi.. and that also in your famous tabela.. 😃 😃 😃 lekin tum ne to meri twiniii ko phaasa diya yaar... hahaha.. now she will have to fix up the tabela again.. for their marriage to happen..
goood luck twiniii!!!!

i told you my turn will come back straight... lol, this time i wont make you wait 😛 lol, but i have to help my brother too... so a little patience... and i loved those shloks... lol, jyoti, they were HILARIOUS!!!! lol and as for the wedding, yeh shaadi to HOKAR hi rahengi... lol

Originally posted by: kaju.patel

i told you my turn will come back straight... lol, this time i wont make you wait 😛 lol, but i have to help my brother too... so a little patience... and i loved those shloks... lol, jyoti, they were HILARIOUS!!!! lol and as for the wedding, yeh shaadi to HOKAR hi rahengi... lol

uuu gooooo twiniii!!!! get them married alright!!! 😃

WAITTTTT!!!!!!!!! i forgot to ask, why did you send her soul to heaven? dimaag phir gaya hai kya? lol

WTF!!!!! i just finished reading it... jyoti, how the HELL do i rebuild the tabela in time for their marriage??? are you MAD!!!!!!!!! 🤢 im going to have to think now... so you wont get it as early as i imagined... lol, jyoti, yeh tumhari sazaa... lol... ab karo, intezaar lol