DK FAN FICS BY BHOOTNIS - last part pg47 - Page 3

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: roopa_s

Oh my wonderful posts .. i am now addicted to these fanfics & predictions.. great work .. ..now i am imagining Dev kissing Kajjal ๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜ .. we have not seen any of their kisses ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ญ ... The director better show some soon ๐Ÿ˜ณ or else ๐Ÿ˜ก



awww, how sweet roopa, thanks huni, and yeah, all us bhootnis want the same thing... lol, we're all so DK hungry ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweet_shagun

Incredible guys ๐Ÿ‘ .........Indeed ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ Loved reading it guys... am speechless

Luv,

Shagun ๐Ÿ˜ณ



awww, thanks shagun... this is what haad our paagalpan can go to ๐Ÿ˜• you're ever so sweet
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: IndianPari



I was made aware that you bhootnis have shifted your residence...I still need to go back to page 121 of the old post and read from there onwards, but I look forward to whats to come! :) Keep it up!

Love,
~Payal



arey payal, where the HELL have you been? lol.. i havent heard from you in AGES ๐Ÿ˜• lekin i havent been on here properly in ages either, so i cant blame you... lol... and WOW thats a lot of reading to do... most of it is just bakwaas probabaly, so no sweat ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: abc_abc

well done with the FF guyzz loved it ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ...... cant wait to read more ๐Ÿ˜‰



awww, thanks mano, sweetie... well i FINALLY done my bit, lol, so do let me know ๐Ÿ˜‰
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Posted: 18 years ago
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areeeeeeeeeeeeeeey baaap re!! that was just awesome kaju!!! ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† really enjoyed reading your part yaar.. i cracked up soo many times.. but just loved it...

no wi have to put on my thinking caps and save DK from the fire!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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kaju kya likha hai tumnee ๐Ÿ‘ too good ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ..i liked the idea of using AUM ๐Ÿ˜› and then kaju doing her kung-fu and why everytime they use WTF ๐Ÿ˜† ..but what a tragic death for draculla ameesha ๐Ÿ˜• ๐Ÿ˜† ,may her soul rest in piece ๐Ÿ˜ƒ and now kaj will v to get DK out from that firey room ๐Ÿ˜‰ good luck kaj ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ ๐Ÿ˜‰
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Posted: 18 years ago
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๐Ÿ˜† thank u jyoths.. im still thinking of how to get them outta there.. hahaha.. but its coming to me... ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: kaj05

areeeeeeeeeeeeeeey baaap re!! that was just awesome kaju!!! ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† really enjoyed reading your part yaar.. i cracked up soo many times.. but just loved it...

no wi have to put on my thinking caps and save DK from the fire!!!!



lol, soch lo,, soch lo, take your time, just as long as my turn dont come any time soon again, you guys get it sorted by the next day, and then it takes me like a WEEK to do my next part ๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: jyoti06

kaju kya likha hai tumnee ๐Ÿ‘ too good ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ..i liked the idea of using AUM ๐Ÿ˜› and then kaju doing her kung-fu and why everytime they use WTF ๐Ÿ˜† ..but what a tragic death for draculla ameesha ๐Ÿ˜• ๐Ÿ˜† ,may her soul rest in piece ๐Ÿ˜ƒ and now kaj will v to get DK out from that firey room ๐Ÿ˜‰ good luck kaj ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ ๐Ÿ˜‰



lol, i wanted to add some humour to the death of ameesha... lekin then i needed a twist, so humour ended when the fuse room thingy caught on fire... and of course she had to use aum, hum hindu hai, saare jahan se achcha, hindustan humara ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜† ameesha was a hindu drac, so a hindu symbol ๐Ÿ˜‰ and why do you want her soul to rest in peace? i hope it has to walk through fires, and walk on a road of throns.. just as long as she never bugs DK again... lol chalo twinnii, mujhe dekhna hai ke tum kya karongi๐Ÿ˜‰
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Posted: 18 years ago
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ok so now im gonna continue with my part....

the whole room is on fire.. dev and kajal and in the middle of the fire and kajal holds on to dev and tells him.. dev.. ab hum kya kare?? dev is looking around when he finally spots a carpet on the floor.. he tells kajal.. hug me.. kajal tells him.. dev?? dev tells her.. jaaldi kajal.. humhare paas time nahin hai.. we have got wrap ourselves in this carpet so we ran roll out of this fire...and then kajal hugs him and they sit on top of the carpet and dev starts rolling over with kajal on top of him until they are completely wrapped in the carpet and he keeps on rolling their way out of the fire and kajal hugs dev tightly and dev tells her.. maat daro kajal.. we are save now.. and she looks at him.. and they are lost in eachother's eyes...... satya, buaji, and hottie come to check on dev and kajal when they see the fire... buaji yells for kajal and dev when she spots them away from the fire and goes to them.... satya tells hottie.. paani ka pipe le kar aao.. jaaaldi!!!.. hottie goes to bring it and they put off the fire... satya and hottie also go to where dev and kajal are... satya tells them.. tum dono theek to ho na?? dev and kajal nod their head saying yes... kajal then notices dev's hand.. and sees his hand is burnt.. she yells.. devvv... and he says.. kuch nahin hai kajal.. dont worry.. theek ho jayega... satya tells him.. nahin nahin beta.. tumara haat to bahaut jaal gaya hai.. kajal.. tum dev ko first aid laga do.. and kajal tells dev.. aao dev.. and they go to kajal's room... there.. kajal puts the cream on dev's hands.. dev is just lost looking at kajal.. mesmerized by her beauty.. when kajal looks at him and says.. aise kya dekh rahe ho?? dev tells her.. main to apni hone wali biwi ko dekh raha hoon.. kajal smiles and blushes....and dev continues saying.. shaadi se pehle hi mera itna khayal rakti hai... shaadi ke baad kya...and he stops and smiles mischeviously... and kajal says.. dev tum bi na.. and blushes and smiles... then .. dev tells her.. yaad hai kajal.. lodi ke din.. jab tumne meri jaan bachai thi... us din bi aise hi tum ne mere liye first aid kiya tha...kajal tells dev.. main kaise bhool sakti hoon.. jab hum dono saat nahin the.. unhi yaadon ke sahare jee rahi thi.. dev then pulls kajal towards him and hugs her tight saying .. I LOVE U KAJAL... and kajal tells him.. I LOVE U TOO DEV... when all of a sudden.. they hear a glass breaking sound and hottie yelling.... they rush out to see what has happened... and are completely shocked to see that......

๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† hahaha.. jyoths... your turn darling... yaar.. everything was going perfect.. thoda to tumhe phaasa ne ka tha naa... now let's see what your creative mind makes them see that gets them completely shocked... ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†
Edited by kaj05 - 18 years ago

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