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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sabaSpeaks

Again apologies for being late, I just cant come on IF on weekends 😔

Chapter 18
Good chapter , I totally loved the convo between Sudha and Prithvi , it was really warmth inducing.
very nicely written 👍🏼
Poor poor meera , she just cant get him out her mind 😆.. now she is one of us 😆
Tons of hugs for bringing JL , I so so so miss him 💔
and Prithvi is hit by bat and I am ready for next mithvi scene



No apologies needed dear!😲Thank u for liking it!😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sabaSpeaks

Chapter 19

Nice Tehsina, I loved the whole conversation 👏
and Prithvi trapping Meera without any difficultly at all 😆

He was manipulating her all the time and poor girl fell so innocently..aawweee



Thank u Saba!😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: meera.rajeev



Iam fine dear... After a weeks rest i went to college today... Where is the update????



U r 1 impatient girl!😆Typically Meera!😉Glad u r well now!😃Updating soon!😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Hopeenlight

Let the games begin!! And I mean it in more than one sense.. game of cricket and game of love and hate.. So excited for the next chapter! You're an awesome writer, Tehsina!! Thx!



THANK U ASHA!!!🤗Hope I cn kip u ppl's expectations on da next chapter,though...😕
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Posted: 12 years ago

Chapter 19-page 57...https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/86118984


Note:I know he'll kill me if he knows I wrote this..But I would like to say I would not have been able to write this chapter without my husband's help,whom I keep scolding,as he sits with his nose stuck to cricket matches almost all the time!I love cricket too,but some ideas were basically his,I'm tokn bout da match part only...!But once again if you don't like it,it's my fault..Since I wrote it:

CHAPTER-20.

A stunned and embarrassed Meera looked up to stare at Prithvi,who was equally dumb struck by the question!

"Dost!Is he your boyfriend whom you always talked about?!"Asked the impatient kid again!

BOYFRIEND?!!Thought a stunned Prithvi..SHE HAS A BOYFRIEND?!!

Uncontrollable and illogical rage,fury and jealousy burned up Prithvi's insides,as he thought of His fairy in some other guy's arms!

THIS IS NOT POSSIBLE!Prithvi thought furiously.SHE IS MINE!ONLY MINE!NO GUY HAS THE RIGHT TO TOUCH HER,BUT ME!!!He went on thinking furiously..

"I don't have a boyfriend,Jeevan Lal!"Meera burst out,looking at the kid with exasperation,and embarrassment at being put in such an awkward situation in front of Prithvi.

"But you had said-"

"I was just joking with you Jeevan Lal!"Meera said through clenched teeth,irritated beyond words,to be embarrassed like this infront of Prithvi..

Prithvi inhaled a long calming breath,on hearing her.A large boulder seemed to have lifted from his heart when he heard,what she had just said.

She doesn't have a boyfriend!Prithvi thought with relief.

"But then,who-"The kid was about to ask,as he looked at Prithvi with a puzzled frown..

"I'm Prithvi."Prithvi interrupted the kid,stopping him from asking more awkward questions.."Prithvi Khanna."He finished with a smile,extending his right hand towards the kid.

The awed kid,gave him a cute and friendly smile,and placed his small hand in Prithvi's large ones and shook it,staring up at him..

"And I'm Jeevan Lal!"The kid introduced himself continuing to smile.

At that time,both of them were unaware of the shock on Meera's face..

He is Prithvi KHANNA?!!Is he related to Rajeev Khanna uncle?!!Thought a dumbstruck Meera'But her thoughts were interrupted by Jeevan Lal.

"Oh!You are THAT Prithvi?!My Dost Meera was asking me about you..But I told her,I just saw your HUGE black car!You have an awesome car!Its like those which I saw heroes drive in movies!"Exclaimed the talkative Jeevan Lal.

Uff!This kid will bury me in shame right here,if I don't stop him right now!Thought an embarrassed and angry Meera,as she noticed Prithvi staring at her,with a naughty knowing smile.

"Jeevan Lal,this guy here and me are going to have a match now,and you'll be the umpire and judge,okay?"Meera said quickly in order to distract Jeevan Lal,before he blurted out more of her secrets to Prithvi.

"Match?!"asked a confused Jeevan Lal,looking from Meera to Prithvi'"But why?!"

"Because this guy thinks your Dost,doesn't know how to play cricket and your Dost believes in giving proof rather than saying how much she knows about playing cricket!"Meera finished,raising her eyebrows at Prithvi in challenge.."So shall we?!"

Prithvi could not stop the smile that came to his lips as Meera got ready to lock horns with him in cricket battle as she tied the dupatta of her blue kamiz round her waist,and picked up the cricket bat'

"Wait."He called out to her,as she started fixing the stumps..When she turned to him with a questioning look,he continued.

"We need to agree on some rules first'"Prithvi stopped to wait for her response,and when she quietly nodded her agreement,he smiled approvingly and continued..

"We'll have a super over..You know bat 1 over each..And see how much we score,in that single over,while the other 1 of us bowls..And since there's no wicket keeper,we cannot be stumped out or caught behind,but we can be bold out or run out..And I'm marking a border infront of those trees,as our boundary..Deal?"

"Deal!"She replied with a winning smile..And just when she was turning back to the stumps,Prithvi stopped her again..

"And Meera?The winner,gets what he or she wants,deal?!"Prithvi added the final blow softly'

"What?!"Meera asked in shock,her expression telling loud and clear,that she had not expected this.And Prithvi once again hid a smile,realizing he had trapped her for good'

"Scared?!!"He asked in a teasing soft voice'Meera jumped into the trap instantly,as Prithvi gave her the final indirect shove.

"Scared,of you?!"Meera scoffed out.."Never!I accept the deal!And I know I'll win!"She declared triumphantly'

A satisfied Prithvi started bowling as Meera got ready to bat...And their tiny 9 year old umpire looked on'.

On the first ball,Meera missed it all together,and the ball went past her..

"Wow!You are an awesome bowler Prithvi!You have to teach me your way!"Exclaimed out Jeevan Lal'

Such an impartial umpire!Thought Meera with irritation,rolling her eyes..

On the second ball of the over,Meera hit a four.

"Not bad,dost!"Called out Jeevan Lal as he ran to bring back the ball..

And I thought he is my friend!Fumed Meera.This man's bowling is awesome,and I hit a boundary,that's NOT BAD!!!

To add more to her anger,as if reading her thoughts,Prithvi gave her a naughty knowing smile as he got ready to bowl for the third time'

Stupid man!Thought Meera as she hit the ball,but when she was halfway down the wicket on taking her single run,she realized she had miscalculated,and Prithvi was almost at the wicket to push the bail off with the ball..!

"HELP!!!"Meera called out as she suddenly tripped, and was about to fall flat on her face,when Prithvi caught her ,at the last moment..And both of them fell on the ground,with Prithvi below and Meera on top of him..Her lips only inches away from his,and their eyes locked together as they lay breathing hard...



Chapter 21-page 61...https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/86338637

Edited by TehsinaJFJ - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow! cannot comment on the game of cricket but Mithvi's love games are sizzzlinggg!! Ooph!! Can't help but feel that Prithvi is going to win.. hehe! I am sure I know what he is going to ask... :))
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Posted: 12 years ago
Very intresting chapter Tehsina.

I don't know about cricket. But watched a match only.

I liked the challenge, the homour, the kid, and the fall.

Now I am eagerly waiting to see what is Prithvi going to do?
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Posted: 12 years ago
You... you... you there that has a knack of stopping at the mossst critical moments always, why the torture? Couldnt you have extended the chapter...grrr! 😆 😆 Great chapter, as alwayz! Jeeyo, dost!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: TehsinaJFJ

"Oh!You are THAT Prithvi?!My Dost Meera was asking me about you..But I told her,I just saw your HUGE black car!You have an awesome car!Its like those which I saw heroes drive in movies!"Exclaimed the talkative Jeevan Lal.

Uff!This kid will bury me in shame right here,if I don't stop him right now!Thought an embarrassed and angry Meera,as she noticed Prithvi staring at her,with a naughty knowing smile.

"Jeevan Lal,this guy here and me are going to have a match now,and you'll be the umpire and judge,okay?"Meera said quickly in order to distract Jeevan Lal,before he blurted out more of her secrets to Prithvi.



"And Meera?The winner,gets what he or she wants,deal?!"Prithvi added the final blow softly'

"What?!"Meera asked in shock,her expression telling loud and clear,that she had not expected this.And Prithvi once again hid a smile,realizing he had trapped her for good'

"Scared?!!"He asked in a teasing soft voice'Meera jumped into the trap instantly,as Prithvi gave her the final indirect shove.

"Scared,of you?!"Meera scoffed out.."Never!I accept the deal!And I know I'll win!"She declared triumphantly'

A satisfied Prithvi started bowling as Meera got ready to bat...And their tiny 9 year old umpire looked on'.

"HELP!!!"Meera called out as she suddenly tripped, and was about to fall flat on her face,when Prithvi caught her ,at the last moment..And both of them fell on the ground,with Prithvi below and Meera on top of him..Her lips only inches away from his,and their eyes locked together as they lay breathing hard'..


Haaiii - Prithvi's naughty smile ☺️
And JeevanLal is so damn cute - I loved that line Uff!This kid will bury me in shame right
here,if I don't stop him right now! 😃
And the winner gets to ask what he or she wants - why do I get the feeling that Prithvi will win or hmmm will he let Meera win or will Meera win cause she is such a toughie - oooh tell us!!! Fast!
And the last para brought back lovely swimming pool memories - thank you 🤗
Edited by Junoonian - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: TehsinaJFJ

Note:I know he'll kill me if he knows I wrote this..But I would like to say I would not have been able to write this chapter without my husband's help,whom I keep scolding,as he sits with his nose stuck to cricket matches almost all the time!I love cricket too,but some ideas were basically his,I'm tokn bout da match part only...!But once again if you don't like it,it's my fault..Since I wrote it:

CHAPTER-20.

A stunned and embarrassed Meera looked up to stare at Prithvi,who was equally dumb struck by the question!

Amazing 👏👏👏

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