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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: lashy

Who could say this to whom?


'I'm falling in love with your eyes,
But they don't know me yet'

- Ed Sheeran


Of course, Khan Sahib to Heera

Originally posted by: karkuzhali


'I'm falling in love with your eyes,
But they don't know me yet'


home nurse:


'You know...' he wished her from his seat, before the doors opened - a faint smirk lining the corners of his mouth 'Not dark brown. AMBER is the shade of your eyes. Don't let anyone tell you otherwise'

[ From 'Tread Quietly upon the Tracks']


An oval-shaped ring set with a topaz that was fortunate to possess a rare yet vibrant shade of light brown. Akbar Khan instantly knew what it reminded him of.

Picking the ring up, he felt compelled to do something else - he held its stone in front of the soft light of a night lamp. The earthy glow that shone through made it appear more ethereal than any other gemstone he had seen.

Not only was this hazel-brown topaz unique, it drew its elegance from being clear-cut and subtle.

Clear-cut and subtle...

'I am not bizarre... but I am blind... actually, partially blind!'


[From HBAS.]




Same incident from both stories... Beautiful ❤️
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Posted: 6 years ago
AUNTY LOVELY SCENES FROM BOTH STORIES ON THE ED SHEERAN QUOTE 👏

I MEANT TO ASK YOU LASHY WAS THERE ANY REASON FOR THE LEAD IN BOTH STORIES BEING PARTIALLY BLIND' ?? OR IS IT THAT YOU HAD THOUGHT OF IT DURING HBAS AND SORT OF CONTINUED IT TO THE TS??

SELVI BEAUTIFUL STARFISH PICS 👏
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Posted: 6 years ago

Good afternoon/evening/morning lovely Sahibas and James Banna.🤗

Periyamma, Lashy Sahiba, Chellam, Bindup, Shruthi, Manu, Selvi, Lana, Vathsy,Lavanya, Mitu, Sandy Begum, Bond, Shagun, Rekha, Rashmi, Kruthik,Rupinder, Tanya, Jiya, Muskan, Wishu and 6Bs.🤗

Page 55 (12 pages)<<<😊

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Sabdabhala

AUNTY LOVELY SCENES FROM BOTH STORIES ON THE ED SHEERAN QUOTE 👏

I MEANT TO ASK YOU LASHY WAS THERE ANY REASON FOR THE LEAD IN BOTH STORIES BEING PARTIALLY BLIND' ?? OR IS IT THAT YOU HAD THOUGHT OF IT DURING HBAS AND SORT OF CONTINUED IT TO THE TS??


😲
But it IS the same leads, na? It IS the same people 'in a different time, in a different place' aka 21st c London.

While Akbar Mahmoud Khan cannot be the secret assassin who's pledged his life to a prince, or Harka Bai an heiress running for her life following the murder of her sister; everything else slowly reveals itself to possess quite a few similarities to HBAS. Just never spelt it in so many words, and its tone is lighter overall. A stranger falling in love with a woman who's partially-sighted is the very crux of HBAS. It cannot be very different here, can it?

She misses her best friend, her sister, who's dead.
Despite being partially blind, is independent (brave enough to travel the underground at 9 pm first time) and well-read.
He comes as the first distraction in her life that lets her feel 'emotion' even though she has others around her.
Amber is another shade of Hazel. 😉

Mr. Midnight Blue is a bit of a recluse. (Her shadow entering his personal space in the station)
Self-reliant (never forgotten even a pair of shades or a pen)
Strongly instinctive (he realises something is wrong about this Raichand company from a few misrepresented facts in a meeting and stops the business deal in time)

Even though he pays no heed to Miss Pretty Phone at first, the fact that she's partially-blind draws him to her - the moment he sees the stick, something tugs at his heart string and quietly helps her get into the train.

There's an instant (forbidden???) attraction between the two.

Feels extremely protective of her for whatever reason, though never makes a show of it (skips his station to sit with her because of the football fan episode, is irritated with fiancee for letting her travel alone)
He finally lets her go without giving her any details of himself because she belongs to another man and it is the right thing to do. Till, of course, later on, he feels she is in trouble with them.
Abheer - the man she's engaged to - is basically using her for her money.

In the half-an-hour's meeting with the stranger, she felt safer than she'd felt (even with her Godparents.)
She doesn't know his real name till later.

See the similarities now? 😉

Wait... I wrote this for your birthday - you didn't pick on all this, Lavanya? Nahiii




Edited by lashy - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
@ Rose - this was meant more as a 'fun' activity rather than a contest... I'd prefer not scoring for this one, if that is ok with you... 😳 because there could be more than one 'rights' for this one, na?

Before I get down to displaying my answers - anyone else wants to try this? Cookie? Chellam? Periyamma? 😳


Spot the objects

Ustaad was informed of an an assassination plot and managed to locate the spot.
However, the rowdy plotters got wind of the raid and fled in the nick of time - or so they have made it seem. But he knows they are lurking in the forests outside, having surrounding the building, ready for a stealth attack.

Can you help Ustaad seize his evidence and then, raise a distraction in the form of a fire, to counter the enemy singlehandedly?


Let's see if you can help him spot these
1) The grand sealed scroll.
2) A cloak as an added layer of protection.
3) A barrel of water to keep himself doused and thus safe from the fire.
4) A strong step-stool to aim the fire-bombs.
5) Any extra weapons/blades in case he runs out of ammunition.
6) Bottles of alcohol.
7) Rags to help make a fire bomb.
8) A candle to start the fire
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Kuki715



Of course, Khan Sahib to Heera

'You know...' he wished her from his seat, before the doors opened - a faint smirk lining the corners of his mouth 'Not dark brown. AMBER is the shade of your eyes. Don't let anyone tell you otherwise'

[ From 'Tread Quietly upon the Tracks']

An oval-shaped ring set with a topaz that was fortunate to possess a rare yet vibrant shade of light brown. Akbar Khan instantly knew what it reminded him of.

Picking the ring up, he felt compelled to do something else - he held its stone in front of the soft light of a night lamp. The earthy glow that shone through made it appear more ethereal than any other gemstone he had seen.

Not only was this hazel-brown topaz unique, it drew its elegance from being clear-cut and subtle.

Clear-cut and subtle...

'I am not bizarre... but I am blind... actually, partially blind!'

[From HBAS.]
Same incident from both stories... Beautiful ❤️


Kuki,
Did you read my posts comparing the two stories in the TS thread? They are on P 26, 29 and thirty..
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: karkuzhali



She's here to save you, Khan Sahib... and now you're here to show her what she means to you! In the arena... 😎



Gone was the protective roof over Parnagarh, with the departure of the Mansabdar

Leaving her lands and people vulnerable and exposed to the elements bizarre.

Sadly, the lands and people knew not of the dark dismal cloud gathering elsewhere

Gaining momentum as it rippled closer, to bring true everyone's worst nightmare!

And along with that tempest would come the dangers of many-a-predator,

Including the lowest of the lot that'd feast on the flesh of the weak, the vulture.

>>>😭
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'The Begum of Ustaad!'

They said it with hatred then.. and now they say it with pride. Time truly is the best and in some cases, the only healer!


Unless, some terrible developments had unfolded at the capital.

Unless, Khan Sahib had been unable to set things right!

Unless, his circumstances were worse than what she'd imagined!

'No... my Sahib... WHERE are you, my love? What's going on?'

If only she knew what was to happen😭


'Please stop them, Mirza bhaijaan...'

Rose! Awww... I imagine you standing behind the lines watching your Mirza Sahib (the real one - not the Prince Eric version) doing his duty so diligently.. figuratively holding up the fort, while protecting the Ladyship he serves!

'A man whose very loyalty is in question, cannot serve as the head of Shehzaade's spies, aren't you aware?'

😭

But rattled as she was, she had to keep the pieces of herself together. For, she owed the men of Ustaad a strong front - seeing how the shocking news had dragged them close to breaking point. 'What do you want then?' She swiftly stepped forward to prop up the crumbling fort, before anyone else around her would react rashly 'What do you want from us?'


'My love... I will do everything in my power to make it work... but... if... if I can't... if I am unable to return...'

😭

'All hope is not lost, Heera' it seemed to tell her 'and it will not be lost... for, your husband is still alive... not a hair on his head would be harmed - he is no less than a brother to the Shehzaade... so, stop imagining the worst... instead, stand up and stand tall Heera... your life has a purpose... heading for the capital will buy time... it'll keep him and your people safe for now... if seeking justice against Khalil for your sister's death is indeed a crime, then YOU are the true criminal here... so, this is your chance to go save Khan Sahib... go... save his life...'

Oh wow! She does just that...I'd forgotten this sentence existed... 😊

The 1000-strong regiment! 🤢

Edited by lashy - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Testmytest


Good morning Aunty and everyone 🤗

This is the absolute truth. Knowledge is power, there is not limit or age bar to learn anything. We do learn something new everyday, I believe in that 100% because I experience it!

We learn from our spouses, children, teachers/gurus, friends, colleagues, acquaintances, family, siblings, patents...Appreciate what has been given to you, learn and if possible pass on that knowledge to another!!

So true 👍🏼👏
Read about the twin story... Here, a big hug for you
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Posted: 6 years ago



'Jiji, your betrayal has been avenged! The deaths of our people too! By my Sahib!'

Neatening the Sindoor on her forehead, she adjusted her veil and tried to sit tall like the noblewoman she was. She had to - to balance that crown of pride resting on her forehead - the crown that'd been snatched away, having found its way back to its rightful owner today.

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Testmytest

There is a new movie coming out next month, Alita - battle angel, it is a story of a young girl's journey who goes on to discover the truth of who she is and her fight to change the world.



Instantly Durga came to my mind. Would love to watch this movie!

-------->Niceee

Also I am following the world cup cricket matches, India and New Zealand are playing, (5 ODI matches, India is leading 3-0), the fourth match score right now: India batting 55/8 in 20 overs. This is probably their worst score ever in the history of cricket I think 😲😭

😲😲😲
Just checked their total score was only 92😲

And it's not worst... Once they made 50-55 in total 😆

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