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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Ifakdha

Hey Rekha di this is so sad. You made me emotional by this story. Such a tragic movement for your mother 😭I just felt like crying reading your story.please don't remember it again and again and make yourself sad😭


Wishu, Lashy, Lavanya and Aparna dearies,

Sorry I didn't mean to upset you all, it's just that I had not thought of them in a very long time, but when I read James post, that event came back fresh instantly.

Yes I do think about them sometimes, but I have a younger sister and chotu brother now (he is married now, but I took care of him when he was baby, so he is like my son), so I am happy.

Thank you all for the concern for my mom, yes she gets tears even now, it has been 40 years.
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Sabdabhala



SO NOTHING ADDED BY LASHY REGARDING THE BLUE VEILED LADY I GUESS YOU HAVE NO OPTION BUT TO REST, O MY CURIOUS MIND 😆


Lavanya dear we all know she will not reveal that secret now, wait and watch we have to do.

One thing though, the chapter size was cut, so are we going to have two more chapters and epilogue?

What say Lashy??
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: karkuzhali


'I'm falling in love with your eyes,
But they don't know me yet'


home nurse:


'You know...' he wished her from his seat, before the doors opened - a faint smirk lining the corners of his mouth 'Not dark brown. AMBER is the shade of your eyes. Don't let anyone tell you otherwise'

[ From 'Tread Quietly upon the Tracks']


An oval-shaped ring set with a topaz that was fortunate to possess a rare yet vibrant shade of light brown. Akbar Khan instantly knew what it reminded him of.

Picking the ring up, he felt compelled to do something else - he held its stone in front of the soft light of a night lamp. The earthy glow that shone through made it appear more ethereal than any other gemstone he had seen.

Not only was this hazel-brown topaz unique, it drew its elegance from being clear-cut and subtle.

Clear-cut and subtle...

'I am not bizarre... but I am blind... actually, partially blind!'


[From HBAS.]



What an answer! 👏 ❤️
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: lashy

SO NOTHING ADDED BY LASHY REGARDING THE BLUE VEILED LADY I GUESS YOU HAVE NO OPTION BUT TO REST, O MY CURIOUS MIND 😆

Kaise bataaon re? 😒

ON RE READING THE CHAPTER I FOUND THE TEJRAJ MAHENDER SCENE TO BE SO WONDERFUL AND 👏 LAYERED.

Thank you so much, Lavanya

SO HE FINALLY DID COME BACK TO HIS COUSIN BEFORE THE DUEL.

Other than the Senapati and Tejraj, no one really knew what was going on in Mahendar's life... and being his cousin, his brother, his equal, who better to wish him luck?
Tejraj couldn't have kept himself hidden from Mahendar forever... and if nothing else, I would imagine... for one last farewell, he must have come visit - in case things didn't go according to Mahendar's plan... and that is exactly what happened...
I think that meeting was all about Tejraj feeling 'Oh! What could have been!' The same sentiments we echoed here... hence the line in the chapter -
'The hour HAS come indeed' He slowly shrugged a shoulder as if that would unload some of those regrets and resentments that were piling upon them

LASHY, THE SAHIB HEERA SCENE IN THE DUNGEONS AND THE HAPPENINGS THERE OF WAS KNOWN TO US.
WAS IT OBVIOUS TO TEJRAJ TOO THAT MAHENDER WOULD MEET HIS END? MAHENDER WAS QUITE STAND-OFF ISH WITH HIM. WAS HE PRIVY TO WHAT TEJRAJ HAD BEEN DOING AT THE ENEMY CAMP WHILE HE WAS MISSING??

Instinct sometimes can be a very cruel animal. It helps warns us when there's danger lurking. But it doesn't mean that we can save ourselves from the danger always...
Most of what happened between them was 'instinctive'

Mahendar might have not known of the extent to which Tejraj had gone to help the Parnagarhis to seek justice for Durga. However, he must have known that during his direst circumstances, Tejraj wasn't standing by him as support. (Actually, towards the end, even the Senapati seems to be giving up on him - it is mildly depicted in their last interaction!)
Yes, Mahendar was under watch and couldn't have visitors dropping in as and when they pleased... yet, Tejraj was not around as often as he should have been, despite being in the capital. And the growing differences between them was no secret. Mahendar must have guessed that Tejraj was deliberately staying away.

Similarly, while Tejraj wouldn't know exactly what the Parnagarhis & Ustaadis were upto, he must have had an idea that they wouldn't sit still all the while. He'd heard of this enigma called Ustaad from his best friend (who was kidnapped, forced to spit up the truth without any of his closed ones harmed) and then met Ustaad in prison who wouldn't sit still there either.
He must have known of the man's capabilities, and seen the extent of his people's loyalty.
I would think Tejraj would have had an idea that they might be up to something - maybe from whispers he might have picked up while helping them with the whole 'scroll writing and distribution' episode that must have gone on at least a few times.
Of course, he wouldn't have asked about the duel directly (seeing how they are technically from opposite camps Mahendar vs Ustaad) and they wouldn't have said anything per se... but you know 'you know'😉


Lashy beautiful response to Lavanya's queries 🤗
You give us so much insight on the characters, their inner thoughts/feelings otherwise would not get in the actual chapter itself.

I really loved reading the Mahendar/Tejraj connection, interaction, relationship in this post.

Thank you 🤗
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Posted: 6 years ago
Rekha, here is a squeezing hug... 🤗
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: karkuzhali


'I'm falling in love with your eyes,
But they don't know me yet'


home nurse:


'You know...' he wished her from his seat, before the doors opened - a faint smirk lining the corners of his mouth 'Not dark brown. AMBER is the shade of your eyes. Don't let anyone tell you otherwise'

[ From 'Tread Quietly upon the Tracks']


An oval-shaped ring set with a topaz that was fortunate to possess a rare yet vibrant shade of light brown. Akbar Khan instantly knew what it reminded him of.

Picking the ring up, he felt compelled to do something else - he held its stone in front of the soft light of a night lamp. The earthy glow that shone through made it appear more ethereal than any other gemstone he had seen.

Not only was this hazel-brown topaz unique, it drew its elegance from being clear-cut and subtle.

Clear-cut and subtle...

'I am not bizarre... but I am blind... actually, partially blind!'

[From HBAS.]


This is so beautiful Aunty, I can never get tired of reading these lines from the chapters This is how it all began with those Hazel eyes!!
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Posted: 6 years ago
There is a new movie coming out next month, Alita - battle angel, it is a story of a young girl's journey who goes on to discover the truth of who she is and her fight to change the world.


Instantly Durga came to my mind. Would love to watch this movie!

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Also I am following the world cup cricket matches, India and New Zealand are playing, (5 ODI matches, India is leading 3-0), the fourth match score right now: India batting 55/8 in 20 overs. This is probably their worst score ever in the history of cricket I think 😲😭

Edited by Testmytest - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
Good morning kal di 🤗Is it true that HBAS is going to end with two more chapters? 😭😭
Edited by Ifakdha - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Ifakdha

Good morning kal di 🤗Is it true that HBAS is going to end with two more chapters? 😭😭

I also heard that rumour and I don't want to believe it. But the truth is that rumour spread by author herself... 😭 😭
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Posted: 6 years ago
Originally posted by karkuzhali


'I'm falling in love with your eyes,
But they don't know me yet'


home nurse:


'You know...' he wished her from his seat, before the doors opened - a faint smirk lining the corners of his mouth 'Not dark brown. AMBER is the shade of your eyes. Don't let anyone tell you otherwise'

[ From 'Tread Quietly upon the Tracks']


An oval-shaped ring set with a topaz that was fortunate to possess a rare yet vibrant shade of light brown. Akbar Khan instantly knew what it reminded him of.

Picking the ring up, he felt compelled to do something else - he held its stone in front of the soft light of a night lamp. The earthy glow that shone through made it appear more ethereal than any other gemstone he had seen.

Not only was this hazel-brown topaz unique, it drew its elegance from being clear-cut and subtle.

Clear-cut and subtle...

'I am not bizarre... but I am blind... actually, partially blind!'


[From HBAS.]



Wow... I was thinking about that from HBAS only...felt so nice to read that scene again...😳👏
But getting one from Tracks OS ... Brilliant...Periyamma...❤️👍🏼

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