Short story*~Tread quietly upon the tracks~* Complete - Page 10

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

Haikus.

She's yet to be named

He's yet to be named so far

First meet on platform.😉

Why we get the feel

That we've seen them already

Is it obsession?

Partial sight she has

He's six feet two, wears taveez

We knew them before?😕

What makes the diff'rence

This one is in black and white

That was in colours..😃

Can we guess their names?

She is Champa or Jodh Bai

He may be Jalal..😛

KK.

Originally posted by: binduprasad41

Originally posted by: Kalgi22

Bindu, our best wishes are always with you... and there's no addition from me.. all the things are said by most experienced people than me.. 😳 But I can say sparks do exists.. 😉 Some people feel at first sight and some people feel after some time. 😉 😆

Originally posted by: Kalgi22

Bindu, our best wishes are always with you.

>>> Aww ...Thank you so much ! 🤗

.. and there's no addition from me.. all the things are said by most experienced people than me.. 😳

>>> But still I love to know your views and experiences!

But I can say sparks do exists.. 😉 Some people feel at first sight and some people feel after some time. 😉 😆

>>> Ohok ! 😳 🤗

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

Haikus.

She's yet to be named

He's yet to be named so far

First meet on platform.😉

Why we get the feel

That we've seen them already

Is it obsession?

Partial sight she has

He's six feet two, wears taveez

We knew them before?😕

What makes the diff'rence

This one is in black and white

That was in colours..😃

Can we guess their names?

She is Champa or Jodh Bai

He may be Jalal..😛

KK.

Originally posted by: Vmanoh

Lashy - Reading the heading & the prologue did not give me any idea it would turn into a Naveena HBAS' 😃 .

Actually it is not mordern HBAS... why I say is because there is actually a mordern HBAS (HBAS was originally intended as a mordern story) and the entire premise like-for-like

This is more like an 'Another place... another time...' 😳

Since you mentioned a few times that you had the HBAS plot in the modern era initially, now you are able to give us a peak into what might have been. Thanks to Lavanya we are now getting this treat!

The mordern HBAS if it were here, would be different... because it's set in India.. through and through... also,... it's a darker story overall... this is lighter😃

You have this knack to bring human emotions to the forefront in a beautiful way. A reluctant but thankful
heroine trying to come to terms with her decision to go through an arranged marriage & an intriguing hero who is trying suppress his thoughts & seems like trying to reign in his heart! All this happens on a chance meeting while treading the tracks.

Yes... I am a big believer in chance meetings! 😆

Oh yes and it did bring back memories of our London Tube ride not too long ago at the beginning of our tour 3 months ago!

😆 no guesses for where I thought up this scene...
Part 1 has left us riding the London Tube hanging on to the straps. Waiting to read Part 2 😊

Awww will be ready soon! 🤗

Originally posted by: Kalgi22

Bindu, our best wishes are always with you... and there's no addition from me.. all the things are said by most experienced people than me.. 😳 But I can say sparks do exists.. 😉 Some people feel at first sight and some people feel after some time. 😉 😆

Originally posted by: roseraja1915

Our divine girl has a lot on her plate but she is willing to go with the flow of what fate has in store for her as dictated by the Indian way.😊

Yes...

But London has its own plan for her.👍🏼

It seems...

Leaving Abheer who is a bit too fond of his beers, oops, Martinis, to his friends, our girl is at the train station for a safe and quick trip back to the hotel and possibly a lifelong journey with her true soul mate.😳

Really?😲 You say? 😛

A good turn deserves another - Mr MB( Midnight Blue) might have come off as a bit brusque but he has a heart after all, when he realizes her handicap/ shortcoming.

Wonder where we heard that!

Her help in loaning her cellphone was reciprocated when he guided her as she boarded the train and ensured she had a good hold on the metal pole.

And thus began the one-minute affair of their gazes!

Awww yes...

Lashy Sahiba, only you can write such an intense scene to make us lose ourselves as did the pair.

☺️

Oh, why did the taveez and the henna have to smash our dreamy bubble?😭

Because they'll never move on to the next thing then!😲

Don't count on being let off after three stations, Miss Divine Girl and Mr MB ,not if our author has anything to say about it.😉

>>>🤣

Lashy Sahiba, Part 1 was just Lashy-licious. When it comes to romance, no one serves it better than you, dear author!👏 👏 👏

Oh dear... this is so sweet!

So very curious to know what is in Part 2.

Lashy Sahiba, how did you stumble upon the London Tube as the platform for their romance?😉

As I said... no guesses for guessing how

love you loads! 🤗